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Posted: 18 years ago
*To Ishu, Happy late Birthday. Sorry I didn't update yesterday, but didnt feel good. My belly hurted.

Last Part 17

*Leap
Pari/Sameer r 23 JB's twins
Varun is 24 RanRans
Mahi 20 RanRans
Sohum 21 Pushkars
Vedika 20 Pushkars
Kushi 23 Sahil Rasshis (Taken by RanRan)
Parth 23 Pia Taruns (Taken by JB)
Veer 18 RanRans
Krishna 18 JB's

*Mitali, Aisha, Hinna, Maddi, n Niralis family r in USA. Their happy with there kids married to the others kids. Mitali had 2 son who married Aishas 2 daus. Her dau married Aishas son. Hinnas son n dau married Niralis dau n son. Maddi had two sons n two daus., Mitali got a son, Aisha got a son, Nirali n Hinna got daus. Maddis two sons married Hinna n Niralis daus. n her daus. married Mitali n Aishas kids. The 5 friends r still close n call Jai n the family
Anu n Rohit r in London with Nattu n Laxmi where there kids have gotten married

*Now to the Walia family
Every1 is at the table.
Pari- Daddy can I have $100 dallors for jeans
Bani- Wat, r u crazy?
Pari- No
Sameer- Ur not getting it, I mean he didnt give it 2 mme yesterday
Jai- Who cares, here u go Pari
Bani- Jaiiiiiiiiiiiii
Jai- Wat?
Bani- Ur spoilin her
Jai- I dont care
Bani- U better care
Sameer- This isnt fair
Jai- U got it from ur mom
Sameer- So u always do everythin for her n Krishna
Jai- There my daus n btw my sayin still goes
Sameer- Wat?
Jai- All the girls of this family n stay here after marriage n u all will go away
Sameer- Funny
Pari- Yheaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Sameer- Dads only love ther daus
Mahi- No, dad does everythin 4 Varun n not me
Veer- Its kk, his care less about me 2
Ranveer- Well his better
Rano- Ranveerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Kushi- Well I must say dad isnt that bad
Mahi- Yea, cause he loves u like almost the same as Varun
Parth (just realized the name Ishu n Nirali)- Dad lookin at Jai thats ture
Jai- Wat?
Parth- Mom takes our saids, but u dont
Jai- There my little kids
Varun- Kk, I say its over, lets eat
Jai- No, wheres Krishu
Varun- Where u think?
Jai- Sleepin
Varun- Yes

*There a girl is seen. In mini skirt, corset, n sunglasses on her head. Her hair is in a pony-tail.
Girl- Not really
Every1 looks
Jai- Krishu
Krishu- Hey, daddy, waz-up
Jai- Wat?
Krishu- Wat, wat?
Jai- Krishu no hi, how r u, I love u?
Krishu- Hi, how r u, I love u
Jai- I love u too.
Krishu- Good lets eat
Adi- I told u Bani
Bani- Wat
Adi- When Krishu was born there guys will b after her
Jai- Wat, wat guy, where, y
Krishu- Chilll daddy
Jai- Noooooooooooo
Krishu- Adi uncle is liein
Varun- Really, who was that, that ur hands were around yesterday in school
Krishu- A friend n do u check-up on me
Varun- No, I came 2 meet my teachers
Jai- Wat guy, I will kill him
Krishu- Daddy
Jai- No
Krishu- His a friend, in her mind, not really
Jai- Wat u say
Krishu- Nothin, goin 2 school

*School
A guy is inside n a girl goes uo 2 him
Guy- Hey baby
Girl- Love u jaan
Guy- Love u more (Maddi, Hinna, Ishu, Nirali our line)
Girl- Funny
The guy kiss the girl n she shown… its Krishu
Krishu- Neil its school
Neil- U care
Krishu- No, finally its enddin
Neil- Two days more left
Krishu- Finally
Neil- Wat u doin over the summer
Krishu- Hawaii
Neil- Brat
Krishu- Wat u say
Neil- Nothin
Krishu- Better have not
Neil- Kk

Veer sees them 2gether
Veer- Wat was that, that u told Jai masa
Krishu- U, please dont tell daddy
Veer- Wat u give me?
Krishu- Play it that way, but I will tell them about u n wat u did on Friday
Veer- U have no proff
Krishu gets out her cell n show Veer something
Veer- Fine, little sis

*Pari in the mall with Mahi since there school has ended.
Pari- I will b back in a min
Mahi- Take longer since, Naman (Sorry Janki usin my sisters boy-friends name) is comin
Pari- how u know?
Mahi- Ur my sister
Pari- Thanks, go meet Shabd
Mahi- Kk

Sameer, Parth, Sohum, Kushi n Vedika comes
Sameer- My sweet sister, u know dad will find-out soon
Pari- U better not tell, or I will tell daddy about Vidya, lookin at Parth about Mamta, Sohum about Aanya, Kushi about Rahul n Ved about Sagar
Every1- We hate u
Pari- But it love me

*Couples
Pari-Naman
Sameer-Vidya
Parth-Mamta
Krishna-Neil
Varun-Kaajal (letting u know)
Mahi-Shabd
Veer-Julie (to let u all know)

Every1 is now home
Jai- How was ur day?
Pari- Great lookin at Sameer
Sameer- Perfect
Jai- How?
Pushkar- When they all say that, something has happened
Sohum- No
Pushkar- Kk, I got it
Vedika- Wat, u get?
Pushkar- Vedika
Ved- Yes, I m getting scared
Pushkar puts her hand on his head- U did wat?
Ved Daddy, pullin her hand away- Nothin
Pushkar- U did cause, u took ur hand away
Pari in her mind- Please Ved
Pushkar- Put ur hand on my head
Ved- No, I m sorry guys, but have 2, Daddy me have a boyfriend
Every1- Wat?
Pushkar- Wat, y, who?
Ved- Hs a good boy, his name is Sagar, I really like him
Pretty- Pushkar ur, little girl
Pushkar- I need 2 sit-down
Jai- Relax
Pushkar- U can, its not Pari or Krishu
Both the girls choked on water
Jai- Wat in the world, u better not
Pari- We don't
Jai- Really
Pari- Yes
Jai- I will c u 2 later
Mahi in her mind- Di, u r a goner, little sis u dont so ur safe, hopefully
Ranveer- Wait Mahin Kushi we 2 dont right
Mahi- No daddy
Rano- U said that in a odd way, u do
Mahi- No, mommy
Rano- Really place that hand on my head
Mahi- I cant
Rano- Y?
Mahi- Cause I do n now I m rennin
Every1- Wat?
Rano- Oh, man, Kushi u, tell me now
Kushi- Mom, I…
Rano- No
Kushi- Sorry
Ranveer- No, both of them
Mahi- Fine I do his name is Shabd, Kushi Dis is Rahul, n not only us
Pari in her mind- U better not, Mahi
Ranveer- Who else?
Mahi- If the girls r caught then, so r the boys
Ranveer- Boys?
Mahi- Yes, Pushkar uncle Sohums girlfriends name in Aanya
Sohum- I will kill u
Pushkar- Both of them
Mahi- Also, Veers is Julie, n Varuns is Kaajal
Ranveer- U all, nooooooooooo, Rano
Rano- Oh god
Jai- Wait, all them who left this country, their kids r married, u all have a boyfriend or girlfriend, my kids r left, u all better not
Pari- We dont
Jai- Good

*In a mouth
All of them get married, but Jais kids a safe. Even if Jai wanted the girls to stay, they cause, the boy also left. Now only ones left r JB, RanRan, Adi, Dadi, Pushkar, Pretty, n JB's 4 kids.

Jai- Their all gone
Bani- Its kk
Jai- No, then it will b ours
Ranveer- I miss them
Rano- Me 2
Bani- Lets go somewhere

In a caf all the kids r their
Pari- Guys thanks 4 not telling on us
Mahi- I wanted 2, but didn't
Sammer- Thanks
Parth- Yes
Mahi- Only ones who, it would have been affect r u 3, not Krishna
Veer in his mind- Sure
Sameer- I need to go
Pari- Me 2
Parth- Me 3
Krishu- Me also
Kushi- Y?
Sameer- Vidya waitin
Pari-Ya, so is Naman
Parth- Also Mamta
Krishu- Friends n some party, in her mind, not really
Veer in his mind- Right, wait y m I keeping it from every1, I m married who care if she tell every1, that I was drank that night, no I care, daddy will still kill me

They all turn around n c JB, RanRan, Adi, Dadi, n PP
Jai- U all wat?
Pari- Daddy, I
Jai- No, Bani
Sameer- Mom
Bani- Sameer, u have a girlfriend n u 2 Parth, awwwwwwwww
Jai- Not my girls, please
Bani- Jai, sorry they do, well Pari does
Jai- My first born dau
Rano- Y is it hard 4 u guys?
Jai- We r the father
Rano- We r the ones who had them in us 4 9 mouths
Jai- Who cares
Rano- U better
Jai- My children, besides Krishu
Veer- U know wat, tell them that I was drunk that night, but me telling
Krishu- U better not
Jai- Not wat

Neil cs Krishu, but not her parents n every1 (to much in love).
Neil- Hey, jaan
Krishu- Oh, no
Jai- Jaan who?
Neil goes up to Krishu n kisses her on the lips, Jai is ready 2 punch the day-lights out of him. Every1 shocked
Neil- I love u baby
Krishu- Oh, no
Neil- Wat u dont?
Krishu- I dont, I mean, oh, help, please
Neil- Wat?
Krishu- Neil meet my parents u fool
Neil- Parents, who n he turn around to c them
Jai- Hi
Neil- Sorry
Jai- Better b

In the week mouth they get married. Every1 returns back. They leave happily every after.

The End


Guys sorry 4 delay. I was really busy. This has to b the end. I wont have that much time. School ends, but if this work out, will get a job. Plus, then will have school in July 4 more classes that I m takin, its from 9-3 n work, after that. Will try to start a new one in sometime.
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Posted: 18 years ago
mitu
me is really really really really really really
mad at u..
for ending this ff..
not cool at all..
but anyways.. me love u..
more..hehe
when i read that line..
i just knew that was coming..
for some odd reasons..
hehe
just loved it
by the way..
who are my kids married to..
me is confused..
and second.. that was really fast..
they all are married..
me was like wow..
that was really quick..

u took ur sis.. boyfriends name
so not cool..
does she come on IF..
if she does than u r going to be in
huge trouble
jk jk

love u *capital letters*


cheers
PS: now me is really sad.. as ishu ended hers and now u also ended ur ff..
i really hope hinu and maddi.. doesnt coz maddi promised that she is going to write a huge update on my bday..
so she atleast has to wait till march..hehe

love u
Mitu1228 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

mitu
me is really really really really really really
mad at u..
for ending this ff..
not cool at all..
but anyways.. me love u..
more..hehe
when i read that line..
i just knew that was coming..
for some odd reasons..
hehe
just loved it
by the way..
who are my kids married to..
me is confused..
and second.. that was really fast..
they all are married..
me was like wow..
that was really quick..

u took ur sis.. boyfriends name
so not cool..
does she come on IF..
if she does than u r going to be in
huge trouble
jk jk

love u *capital letters*


cheers
PS: now me is really sad.. as ishu ended hers and now u also ended ur ff..
i really hope hinu and maddi.. doesnt coz maddi promised that she is going to write a huge update on my bday..
so she atleast has to wait till march..hehe

love u


My love, I m so sorry. Dont worry, will make another one now. Ur married Hinnu n another Maddis. My mom is makin fun of me. Love u. Oh, Janki dont have. Good. However cuz does, consin u not tell.
Edited by cute1228 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: cute1228


My love, I m so sorry. Dont worry, will make another one now. Ur married Hinnu n another Maddis. My mom is makin fun of me. Love u. Oh, Janki dont have. Good. However cuz does, consin u not tell.

hey my love.. its ok.. as i know u r really busy this summer, maaf kiya.. hehe..
ok so my sweet lil nerdu and maddi are my samdhan..hehe that is how u spell that right.. hehe.. why is ur mom making fun of u.. love u too jaan.. good that janki doesnt have one.. or u be running right.. now in ur house hehe i am sure ur cuz wont..hehe

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Posted: 18 years ago
I'm very very very very mad at u Mitu, how could u 😡 😡 😡 You just ended it like that That next FF better be coming up soon!! by the way, nice ending!! lol, me and Niru got our kids married to each other!! WOOHOO!!! 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Mitaalliiiii

I love you!

This FF rockz! Awww u ended? whyyy???

but i loved the ending though!

Very funny/cute/adorable/funny/awsome/fab!/ okay u no wat im talkin about! It was an AWSOME FANFIC!

ehhehehe yup datz or laguage!

Lov ya more!!!!

Can't wait to read another FF from you!! *hint* *hint*😆

Love Ya (More than you love me!)

Maddi!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
great storyline 👏

jst sad that itz ended but it was reli good 👏

- dammy
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Posted: 18 years ago
How dare u end it!!!! Thats it!!! im gonna end mine!!! lolz, jkin, nice mit, ur spellin skills r gettin better!! jkin...nice ff!!

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