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Posted: 17 years ago

Dipika turned back her attention to Renuka……

Vishal: Tumne pichle hafton me kuch ajeeb sa dekha… Apne ghar me, bahar papa ke saath… Kuch bhi ho, jo tumhe yoheen laga ho….

Renuka: (Thinking for sometime 🤔 ) Pichle hafte??? Nahi to… Main to pichle do hafte se ghar nahi aayi, mere exams the… Lekin uske pehle weekend hi aayi thi….

Dipika: Kuch bhi ho… You know it might have seem trifle to you but may be very important…

Renuka: Hmmm… (As a thought passed her mind) Ek baat hai…

Vishal and Dipika got enthusiastic….

Vishal: Kya?!?! 😛

Renuka: Jab teen hafte pehle me ghar aayi to papa ek aadmi se baat kar rahe the. Jab main ghar ke andar gayi to papa ne us aadmi se kaha ki Monday bank me aake mile… Maine kuch bhi nahi poocha lekin papa ne khud bataya, ki unke bank ka client tha… Ye mujhe ajeeb laga kyunki papa kabhi apne bank ke client ko ghar me bulate nahi aur ghar ke phone me baat bhi nahi karte the… Agar koi phone karta to maine papa ko bolte hue suna hai ki bank ke kaam bank me hi hote hain, ghar me nahi….

Vishal: (Getting interested in that man now) Kya tumne kabhi us aadmi ko dekha hai? ❓

Renuka: Ji nahi.. Lekin uske do din baad jab main wapas apne college jaa rahi thi, to maine unhe saamne waale restaurant me dekha...

Vishal and Dipika looked at each other stunned... 😲 Watching the house maybe???? Seems they had got the culprit… It surely seems like the mystery man whose identity they were yet searching….

Vishal: (Turning back) Renuka tumne bahut acchha kiya hai….

Renuka: (Again crying) Aap mere papa ke kaatil ko pakad lenge naa????

Vishal was surprised to hear such a request, 😒 which he hadn't heard from anyone till now, in his whole career… All he had heard was people claiming to be innocent, not to have done anything… But they turn out to be culprit…. He hated lies and people who said that!!!!! 😡

Vishal: (With determination) Main promise karta hoon, ki aapke papa ke kaatil ko main zaroor pakadoonga….

Saying that he squeezed her hand on the table and got up to leave… 😳

Dipika smiling at Lalitha and Renuka followed him outside… Vishal was waiting for her….

Vishal: Dipika ji lagta hai we have our culprit.. But still uski identity remains a mystery…

Vishal said this punching his his balled left fist in his right palm…. He was frustrated… Never had he been in a situation where the culprit was idenitified but his identity remained blank…….. 😡

Vishal and Dipika walked back to their cabin…..

Dipika: Haan clearly seems a case of renvenge… Vo aadmi jo apne bete ke ilaaj ke liye loan maange aaya tha, usne Sundar par rishvat ka ilzaam lagaya, which is proved by Sharmila's verdict… 😳

Vishal: Haan.. Aur lagta hai ki jab tak Sundar ko dene paise jama kar sake, us aadmi ka beta mar gaya… Aur usne ussse badla lene ke liye uske ghar par nazar rakhi aur mauka milne par uspar vaar kar diya…. 🤢

They entered the cabin to find Neha still trying to open the laptop….

Neha: (Looking up, shook her head) Kuch bhi kaam nahi kar raha.. Shayad admin se break in hi karna hoga… 🤔

Dipika: Lekin Neha ab break in karna bhi mushkil hoga.. Kyunki itne trial me system alert ho gaya hoga… So ab to we can't break in… Uske time expiry tak wait karna hoga ab… 😕

Everyone looked on frustrated with nothing to do… A faceless criminal was lounging out there, and here they were doing nothing!!!! Just nothing!!!!! 😡
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Posted: 17 years ago
i think when they sign in they will find some really interesting info............
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maisoon

i think when they sign in they will find some really interesting info............

Of course they would... Warna kaise criminal ko pakadenge kaise😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Breaking the silence…….

Dipika: Neha, Ajay, Boxer mere saath chalo…

All three of them wondering what it was left the cabin with Dipika… 🤔 Vishal seated in his seat, again started working on the password, something would crop up… He was a never give up sort of guy….

Dipika led the three back to the interrogation room…..

Lalitha and Renuka were seated there still, with Renuka still been cajoled by her mom….

Dipika: (To Renuka) Renuka tum humara office dekhna chahogi? Neha tumhe dikha degi....

Renuka looked up at her with a not so sure expression… 😳

Lalitha too was surprised, but sensed Dipika wanted to talk her privately…

Lalitha: Beta aap inke saath jaao, phir hum saath ghar chalenge…..

Renuka looked forlornly at her mom not reacting….. 😕

Ajay and Boxer also sensed what Dipika wanted, so decided to play along…. 👏

Ajay: Neha????? (Coming up to her) Renuka ye kya tumhe dikhayegi… Khud chashma peheni hai… Usse pooch ki kya use khud theek se chalna aata hai, bina gire… Main tumhe dikhaoonga office… Chalo chalo…😆

Boxer: (Catching on the fun) Haan haan.. Maamu the guide…. 😛

Expressing a banner sign with his hands…

Renuka giggled a little on seeing Ajay and Boxer's expression….. She got up slowly and Neha leading her said…

Neha: (With a mock anger) Ajay… Mujhe theek se chalna nahi aata??? Khud kabhi… 😃

Their voices disappeared down the lobby towards the pantry….

Dipika seeing them go, turned back to Lalitha and sat down in a chair beside her…

Dipika: (Placing a hand on Lalitha's hand) Laitha… Pichli baar jab aap aayi thi, to mujhe aisa kyun laga ki aap humse kuch chupa rahi hain…

Lalitha looked at Dipika shocked… Whatever it was she hadn't expected this… She didn't react in this shock…. 😲

Dipika: (Continuing) Dekhiye…. Aap ke kuch kehne se Sundar ke kaatil ka pata chal sakta hai... Or even if you want to talk your heart out, we are here to listen... Hum police waale society se crime ko nikaalne ke liye ladte hain… Hum public ke dost bhi hain… Aapko ko khush aur surakshit rakhne ke liye we do our best… Iske liye sabse jaake personally unse baat to nahi kar sakte, lekin jo koi bhi yahaan aata hai I want them to be justified, to get justice… Is something troubling you????? ⭐️

Lalitha kept looking at Dipika for a long time… She was a woman, so she had sensed something was troubling her…

The dam broke out and Laitha cried wistfully… Dipika knew this would come… It was not actually a day or two's sorrows…It seemed like years of despair…
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After some time Laitha calmed down to sob… Dipika offered her water and she spoke up…

Lalitha: Mere aur Sundar ka love marriage tha… He was such nice person that time… Lekin uska sirf ek hi ambition tha paisa kamaana, lekin usme itni bhi himmat nahi thi ki koi galat kaam kare… We were living happily when five years ago mujhe pata chala ki he takes commissions… Meri to aasmaan hi gir gayi… Mere papa military me the, to main imaandaari aur sacchayi ko bahut maanti thi… Pata hai ki aaj kal ki duniya me aisa rehnaa mushkil hai… Lekin mera manana hai ki mushkil hai, naa mumkin nahi… Sundar ke ek customer ne ghar phone kar diya, loan ke baare me baat karne…. Maine phone uthaaya... Main uski patni thi to samajhe ki mujhe pata hai Sundar rishvat leta hai aue mujhse hi recommendation kar ne lage... Mujhe bahut gussa aaya... Maine Sundar se college me pyaar isliye hi kiya tha, because he was very honest and loving to everyone… Jis buniyaad par mera vishwaas aur pyaar unpar tha vo hil gaya… To zindagi kahaan rahegi??? We fought… Lekin iska dyaan rakha hi Renuka par iska asar naa pade... Humne divorce ke liye bhi mutual conclusion se hi maan liya, Renuka ke future ko dyaan me rakhte hue... Use pata hai ki hum bichad gaye, because of difference in thoughts.... Hum dono hi usse bahut pyaar karte the… I wanted her to be with me, but my job restricted me… Isliye mujhe uske papa ke saath use chodna pada… Court also ordered that…

Dipika had let Lalitha do all the talking… She knew that when something broke with force, it should never be stopped else the force would uproot them itself…..

Lalitha: (Continuing) Kya main Sundar ki body le jaa sakti hoon??? ❓

Dipika looked up stunned… 😲 She didn't expect Lalitha to ask for the body… She had thought she had to battle with her to take the body…. Seeing Dipika's stunned expression Lalitha said…….
😒
Lalitha: (Wiping her tears) Jaise bhi ho… Sundar ek acchee pati the… Ek acche pita bhi… Acchhe insaan nahi bane doosron ke liye, jo unki in khoobiyon ko peeche kar deta hai. Renuka apne papa ko bahut maanti hai… Main nahi chahathi ki uske man me ab uske papa ke mauth ke baad kuch galat abibpraay aaye… Aaj bhi duniya ek aurat ko ek aadmi ke saath hi judi hui chahathi hai, ek pita se, ek pati se… Vo agar mar bhi kyun na gaya ho…

"Aaj bhi duniya ek aurat ko ek aadmi ke saath hi judi hui chahathi hai, ek pita se, ek pati se…" Dipika took in these words… How true they were??? 👍🏼 Did she little know that these wordings would change her life totally in the very very near future….. 😔
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Posted: 17 years ago
Aaj bhi duniya ek aurat ko ek aadmi ke saath hi judi hui chahathi hai, ek pita se, ek pati se…"

krithika this statement is very true for women. hope in near future it would not be like that for women.
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was great kritika 👏 👏 👏 i respected sundar he is a good father but now i respect lalita even more 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti




"Aaj bhi duniya ek aurat ko ek aadmi ke saath hi judi hui chahathi hai, ek pita se, ek pati se…" Dipika took in these words… How true they were??? 👍🏼 Did she little know that these wordings would change her life totally in the very very near future….. 😔

kya kya?? plzzzz very very near future main batana.........waiting................

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sam78

Aaj bhi duniya ek aurat ko ek aadmi ke saath hi judi hui chahathi hai, ek pita se, ek pati se…"

krithika this statement is very true for women. hope in near future it would not be like that for women.

Thanks Sam... Yes... That is our society's state now... But there are changes happening.... Hope it does in the future😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks Sneha... Tumhare comments bahut hi short and sweet hain... Cho cho cho chweet😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maisoon

kya kya?? plzzzz very very near future main batana.........waiting................

Waiting to aap logon ko karni hogi... Keep waiting😉 😆

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