Fan Fic - The Outsider - Page 69

Hey MT! I am so happy u finished. I am less happy about the fact that I
have 3 tests tomorrow (two for which I cannot even study properly😭
) and a ton of HW as well. So I'll come back and edit this comment.

But great ending! 😃

Sasha,

Thanks for the huge comments!😃 It gives me a special high to read detailed comments and I do keep reading them over and over again (Ego-Trip to Mars, sponsored by my friends on IF!😉😆) And btw, Studies first darling, everything later on! (I sound like MT aunty speaking now!)

Somali,

A huge hug to you too, dear! Glad that you liked this story as much as you liked The Accident! And don't worry, it is not only rains that activate my grey-cells, its mostly the fact that I have absolutely nothing to do that energizes me to write😉 So enjoy Calcutta's rain as much as you enjoyed this FF! Thanks a lot for all the comments that you have put in for this story!

Jigna, Ffern, Janu, Divan, Ridhi, Mad, Nema, Bugs and Shaz;

I hope that you guys have read the last part and now know why UD did not leave anything in Bani's name. Not because he had any divine premonition about his bilogical son and adopted daughter getting together, but simply cause he knew Bani was too Nuts to manage any money and that it was better left to Mr. Money-bags care to see such affairs! Plus, I wanted to show my Jai as a St. Jai Walia...Can't help that ever!😉😆 Thanks to all of you for taking out time and energy to read and comment on this FF!😃

Sheena,

A compliment from you means a lot! I haven't read any of your works till now, except for the exceprt from one of your FF, which had me craving for more and now that I have finished writing this Classic Epic of mine😉😆 I think I am going to treat myself to reading the FF on the forum, staring with yours and Sangita's and also looking forward to reading Armana's, if she manages to write it in this year Thanks a lot for following the FF so faithfully over the last 5 months!😃

Kamy, Shreerama, Cheez, Rinku and Ash,

Thank you guys! It was a lot of fun writing The Outsider, primarily cause it was a lightheartd story and I love writing humor, but mostly, cause of the reception that this story got on the forum! Thanks to all of you for joining me alongside our beloved JB on The Outsider!😊

Khushboo and Watsomamu,

Will be getting back to you on PM's!😃

Priyanka,

I loved the poem that you have posted! How on Earth do you guys manage to remember and source such lovely poems, from?😕 Everytime I need a song, I only hit the google button! I really like the selection of the poem that you have posted and yes, it expresses the relationship between my Jai and Bani perfectly!😊 Glad that you liked reading The Outsider as much as I loved writing it!

I tried to give myself a peck on both my cheeks and as you said, it was impossible! But I did try😉😆

To All of You;

A heartfelt thanks for the tremendous response on the FF! And also for prodding me to write another one, which I assure you I am not going to write for a very long time😆 I have listed a lot of FF on the forum to be read and am now going to spend all my time reading and enjoying them!

But honesty,I am really touched by the fact that so many of you kept writing to me regarding the FF and urged me to complete it! I would have never bothered to write it again, after the break, if not for your constant PM's and posts on the thread!😊

Lots of Love,

MT

PS: I will reply to the other posts shortly!

Cool girl, bktr, scifichick and siumi,

Firstly, thank you girls (Please tell me are there any other fancier words as alternative for Thank you😕) for reading, appreciating and adding your valued comments to The Outsider!

All the one-liners, situations and jokes you have mentioned are some of my favourite too. And here I would like to tell you that not all the jokes and one-liners in the story are original, but I do take credit for the part, that I very cunningly and cleverly plagarized and incorporated in my story😉😆

Jokes apart, I think I really loved writing Tony and Pook's character the most...besides, the verbal duel between Jai and Bani! And what I wouldn't give to see RK and PD act this out...Sigh, that's just a dream though😳

Siumi, I had to incorporate the 8 kisses yaar! After all, Bani and Jai share an equal relationship in the story, they fight and make up equally and hence, the kisses too had to be on the same level😳

Though poor Jai did end up breaking his back while romancing her...😕😆 See, I did make JW look slightly foolish in the end!😉 Just a little bit, though!

Dami, Aimee, Zaynah, soodr and Kiran;

Thank you for reading and commenting on the FF! Glad that you enjoyed the FF!😃

Swathi;

Will get back to you on PM very soon!😊

Ms. Narang & Ms. Majumdar;

Thank you ladies. You do honor me, so!😃 Pri, I am looking forward to reading the Epilouge of your FF, which is one of the best I have read so far on the Forum!😃 Your JW is the original guy, with stripped Chaddis and all!😉😆

Rooj;

Thanks dear! Hope you found the whole UD leaving nothing for Bani and everything to Jai thing to be logical. Frankly, I was in a rut on that one😕 And it was a last minute addition, only to make Jai look not so foolish in front of Bani when he goes to get her back😳😆 Kya karoon, Jai ke liye mera heart bahut soft pad jaata hai, even if he is a ficitonal hero of my story!😉

To Everyone;

I wanted to apologize to all those who found the gay jokes and references in bad taste (Though no one wrote in the posts or sent me stinkers on PM, but still!) As I mentioned before, I don't have any hang-ups or issues against people who opt for a different kind of sexuality. I only used Tarun as a tool of producing some slapstick humor in the story, nothing more and nothing less! And yes, I did enjoy creating and writing the relationship between Pooks and Vakil Babu a lot😆 I had written about Tarun's character in The Outsider when in KS he was shown to have that OCD thing, I was so irritated with him, that I decided to show my ire in this manner! Glad that it worked, nothing personal against Mr. Sablok of KS though!😉

Lots of Love,

MT

Just finished reading the parts I missed...Di...You're a wonderful writer, really... 😛 The ending was fabulous... 😃 Really sweet... 😳 Keep up the good work as always... 👏 And can't wait for your next FF... 😉
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Rekha Di. it was a perfect ending!!!!!

i loved how bani gave jai 8 kisses representing their 8 years!!!!

i loved how jai was trying to outsmart bani by trying to take his relationship to the next base! 😉

i thought that the ending was soooooooo cute!!!!


i hope that the live happily together!!

please start a new fanfic soon!!!

thanks
sunju

Sheena,

A compliment from you means a lot! I haven't read any of your works till now, except for the exceprt from one of your FF, which had me craving for more and now that I have finished writing this Classic Epic of mine😉😆 I think I am going to treat myself to reading the FF on the forum, staring with yours and Sangita's and also looking forward to reading Armana's, if she manages to write it in this year Thanks a lot for following the FF so faithfully over the last 5 months!😃

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Rekha,

That is very sweet of you, but in my humble opinion, my writing skills are highly overrated in front of yours, Sangita's and Armana's! I have occasional flashes of comedy, but no where near yours!! I used to love reading PG Wodehouse's Jeeves stories! Brian Adams, and occasional Vonnegut thrown in for good measure are the next few on my favorite list...but your writing does remind me of them...

I too have found Google/books to be a veritable source of information regarding humor, one liners, quirky retorts, insults, poems and quotes!! 😉 Not to mention wikipedia...but the usage and context are brilliant in yours...

It was all my pleasure reading the FF! Thanks once again.👏

MT,


Nice FF! Well thought out and very well written indeed ! 😊

Jai and Bani 's love (their portrayel by RK and PD ) has become a cult for the likes of us.
And tho Ms Kapoor and her gang are trying mighty hard you with your lovely stories(and many others on this forum) and RK and PD are making sure we dont fall out!!😉


Btw I thk these two characters out do the classic romance between Darcy and Lizzy.Cant imagine anyone other than RK and PD as Jai and Bani!

Dearest Rekha,

You can bash me as much as you want 😆 ! Sorry, I am once again late...all I can seem to come up for an excuse is "time", but that sounds so pathetic!

What an amazing end to a beautiful ff, I hope to see you writing more ( also hope that you will update in the same year too 😆 😉 )!

I loved your portrayal of the love between JB, absaloutley amazing! First class!

J'ai aim ce FF! La manire que vous l'avez crite tait just..wow !

Write a new one soon..will be waiting!
Bisou
Sweetu ❤️