Group Fanfic 'Pyar Huva Tumse' e.15 P 65 - Page 38

Is Raj writing the episode? Please hurry Raj.

Originally posted by: simran20

Is Raj writing the episode? Please hurry Raj.

yes raj hurry.

Originally posted by: ramas

yes raj hurry.

come on raj we dont bite lol

congratz for reaching 50 pages in this fanfic, everyone!!! 😃 🥳 [:D/]

Originally posted by: punjabi_kuri36

congratz for reaching 50 pages in this fanfic, everyone!!! 😃 🥳 [:D/]

Congo guys😊

Hey raj, where r u? Scared of us?😈😆

Originally posted by: punjabi_kuri36

congratz for reaching 50 pages in this fanfic, everyone!!! 😃 🥳 [:D/]

congrates to all of us. huraaay🥳

Originally posted by: mamis

Congo guys😊

Hey raj, where r u? Scared of us?😈😆

kruthi raj will be posting today or tom hopefully.

EPISODE#11..

Raj was shocked hearing Saloni's words, he was just quite staring in her eyes, She was also looking in his face and can feel the situation he was in, but she was also helpless, as she was deeply in love with Nahar. Raj was thinking something, there was deafening silence between them, no one wanted to say first. Finally Raj regained his calm smile was back on his face. He said to saloni,''To be honest with you, I didn't expect that you will refuse me.'' Saloni, ''But Raj, I am in love with Nahar ever since I met him.'' Raj said smiling,'' Can I ask you something Saloni? Yes, Raj you can ask anything, replied Saloni with smile on her face. Raj,'' Saloni, may be you will be hurt.'' No, Raj, you are my friend, ask me. Raj :- Saloni, I have everything by the grace of god, I am from well to do family, may be not rich like Nahar, when I met you, I was impressed with your simplicity, graceful manners, honesty and faith. The more we met I was drawing closer to you. I thought you will accept my proposal, Saloni, Nahar is richer than me and he has all the comforts of life, a person can dream of, that's the reason you don't want to accept me?

Saloni was looking at Raj in disbelief she didn't expect these kind of questions. Tears started rolling down from her eyes. She replied:" Raj you have hurt my feelings, didn't expect this from you". Raj:- Wait, Saloni, I am not done yet, you have also hurt my feelings, he removed something from his pocket, she saw a small bottle. You know what is this Saloni? Poison. If you won't accept my proposal, I am going to drink this and you will be blamed for it, because I have put the note in my pocket, jismein tumhare naam hai.'' Saloni was shocked, didn't know what to do and how to handle the situation as they were in restaurant. People were looking at them.

In the same restaurant Ashi was sitting with Farhan unaware of what is going on between them. They both were having cappuchino, he was looking at her lovingly. he says,'' Ashi tumhari aankhen kitni sunder hain, bilkul angoor ke jaise,😛 your lips are like slices of peach,😛 tumhare gaal jaise kashmiri apple ki tarah, 😊your skin is glowing like p…Ashi,'' are you a nut farhan, pagal ho, meri tareef kar rahe ho yaa fruit shop mein aaye ho,😆 what you are thinking I am an mobile fruit shop?😆 Ullu, gadhe kahin ke.''😡 Some teenagers burst into laughter hearing their conversation, Farhan was feeling embarrassed, 😳but Ashi was smiling and having great fun, 😊enjoying every bit of it. Nahar came to Farhan rescue, arre Ashi, farhan is telling truth, ismein bura hi kya hai, achaa hai fruit ki baatein ki hain, vegetables ki nahi…LOL.

Now it was Ashi's turn to be embarrassed, they both were smiling.Nahar, ''imagine if he had compare with you, doodhi, kaddhu, lauki, cauliflower, baingan, …😆😆''bas karo ab shouted Ashi and she threw the glass of cold water on Nahar and Farhan. 😃They all were laughing now along with those teenagers. Nahar said excuse me and he moved towards comfort room, suddenly he saw Saloni and Raj sitting in a corner, he went closer to them and looking for a place to sit near them. He got a vacant place behind the pillar where both Saloni and Raj coildn't see him, but Nahar can.

Raj to saloni:- toh kya vichaar kiya hai Saloni? Yes or no?..
Saloni:- Raj, please don't do this, try to understand.
Raj:- Saloni tum mujhse pyaar karti ho yah nahi?
Saloni:- Haan, Raj I do love you, but…
Nahar was hearing this and getting wild and angry, thought of going to beat Raj and kill him and also fight with Saloni. 😡
Saloni:- Raj, you are my best friend, I do love you, I do respect you a lot as a friend, nothing more than that. Please don't break my trust and faith, I have on you.Nahar is my love and i cannot live without him. This gazal i have wrote for him..

zindagi ka har ek pal hai bas tere liye.....
mere dil ki yeh halchal hai bas tere liye
mere dharkan ki ek ek nabz hai ye bole
dharkan se dil ka yeh safar hai bas tere liye
waqt aur haalaat mein lamhon ki barish main
mera aaj aur kal hai bas tere liye
aankhon se dil ki baate woh ersaal karta hai
khamosh labhon se bhi woh izhar karta hai
pyaar ka ye diwana pan hai bas tere liye
tanhaai ho mehfil ho bus tere saath ho
meri khushiyon ki baraat bus tere pass ho
meri rooh mein hai tera ghar bas tere liye
zindagi ka har ek pal hai bas tere liye

Nahar was surprised and could not believe on his ears, tears were in his eyes, but he was feeling guilty for doubting Saloni.

Raj:- Saloni, tell me what you want me to do for you? Give me one year time, I will put more efforts and money and be rich like Nahar, I know you don't want to leave Nahar because of his wealth. Am I right? Tumhein sirf paisa chaahiye hai naa, isliye tumne Nahar ko trap kiya hai. If you don't say yes now, I am going to drink this poison, he opened the cap of bottle and brought closer to his mouth, seeing this Saloni hit him on his hand and the bottle fell. Nahar was really angry now on Raj.
Saloni:- Raj, aaj tum mujh per ilzaam per ilzaam lagaate jaa rahe ho, kya samjhte ho apne aapko? I didn't even know that Nahar belongs to a royal family, I fell in love with at first sight, yehi mera kasoor hai, mujhe uski daulat nahi chaahiye, you are saying I am after his wealth because I belong to a middle class family, why you rich people think in same way? Gareeb insaan agar ameer se pyaar kare toh who sirf paise ke liya? Aur jab ameer insaan gareeb se pyaar ka naatak karta hain tab aap log chup kyun hote hain? Maine toh tumhein dost maana tha, aur tumne yeh sila diya mujhe, I respected you a lot Raj, because in you I saw a true friend who can stand by my side always protecting me, sharing my sorrows and joys, I never had a true and faithful friend with whom I can share my life, I saw those qualities in you and wanted to be with you, but you really shattered my faith, trust and dream, I will never again ask anyone to be my friend, sufferings and pains follows me where ever I go,

dard hi meri zindagi hai, dard hi meri manzil, mere dard ko sunkar dard bhi rone lagta hai aur main apne aansoon ko dekhkar muskraati hoon, tears are mine, they come to my eyes to share my loneliness and gives me company and they are my true friends.Zindagi ne mujhe sirf dard hi diya hai, harpal, har jagah.Kaash yeh dharti phat jaaye, kaash mujhe maut aa jaaye, aaj main bahut chota mahsoos kar rahi hoon khud ko, jo maine pyaar karke gunaah kiya hai. Raj was quite and listening to her and Nahar was in tears, thinking about Saloni, the pain she is going through, the humiliation she is going through and he was feeling guilty for his thoughts, his behavior. Today he realized how much Saloni loved him.

Raj, I was yearning for love whole of my life, Nahar gave me that, I don't want his palace, his wealth, luxuries, I just want love, ready to sacrifice anything for Nahar, I have accepted him as my life partner forever, if I dint marry Nahar, I will stay single forever, that's a promise to you, today you have hurt my pride, my self-respect.''
Nahar came out and stood in front of them, seeing Nahar, Saloni and Raj was surprised. He was looking at Raj angrily. He took Saloni's hand and hold her close.
Nahar:- Saloni, you are right, I am also taking a oath, that you will be my life partner, no one else. Agar hum saath nahi hue toh kabhi shaadi nahi karenge.
Suddenly Raj started clapping and laughing, everybody was surprised, looking at him, Saloni and Nahar was amused, he was still laughing, Ashi and Farhan came there too, looking at him.
Ashi:- Raj, what happen? why you are laughing? Ru gone mad?
Raj:- ''Saloni, tum jeet gayi aur Nahar you are a really lucky guy that you have Saloni in your life, Saloni tumne jo kaha, maine uska bura nahi maana, because I know what I was doing.
Saloni and Nahar:- Raj, what are you saying? We don't understand a word of it.''
Raj:-ok, I will tell you, I am a friend of Shali and Brijesh, they told me about your love story. After hearing from them I met with your dad, convinced him to give me just one chance to change his opinion about Saloni, ever since I met her, I knew she is a right choice for you. I was waiting for that time to prove that what your dad was thinking was wrong Nahar. Raj removed from his pocket a mobile phone and showed to Nahar and Saloni. Raj:- this phone was on when I was talking with saloni and your dad was hearing our conversations, main agar yeh sab nahi kahta tumse toh tum apne dil ki sachaai aur apna dard kabhi nahi bol paati, yeh bahut zaroori tha, main jaanta hoon ki tumne sirf Nahar se prem kiya hai uski daulat se nahi, jo mujhe Nahar ke dad ko sunaani thi, whatever Saloni said to me he heard it loud and clear, Saloni didnt know about this, neither you Nahar. But when you came in front of us and your words that you both love each other and Saloni's words moved your father, he disconnected the phone saying, Raj, thank you very much son, I will be proud to have Saloni as my daughter in law.

Saloni and Nahar cudn't believed their ears. They were so happy and Ashi and Farhan joined with them.
Raj was smiling but his eyes were moist, he came to saloni and said:- Saloni, I am sorry because I hurt your feelings, I had no other option , mujhe thoda rude hona pada, tumhari bhalai ke liye. I am still your same friend, agar dost itna bhi naa kar sake to laanat hi aisi dosti pe. I can understand your pain and your sorrows. Please forgive me dear.''
Saloni was crying and so also Nahar, she said,'' Raj you really gave me shock of the life time when you were about to drink poison.'' Raj:- Saloni, that was not poison, it was just a syrup.. hahaha…Saloni:- Raj, thank you very much for helping me without even telling that you are doing all this just for me.
Nahar:- Raj, I am sorry brother, I also misunderstood you.''
Raj:- No, its ok Nahar, we can be good friends, since I know Brijesh. Honestly Nahar I cannot see someone suffering, that's the reason I took this risk, if your dad had not agreed, we could have been in bigger problem, but i have faith in God and knew he will help us, sacha pyaar jo kiya hai tum dono ne, toh milan kaise nahi hoga?..

Saloni:- Raj, please me forgive again, maine bhi pata nahi tumhein naa jaane kya kuch kah diya. Lekin ek waada karo, humein kabhi bhoolna nahi.aur is tarah se mujhe sataana nahi.''Raj and Nahar had friendly hug and so also Raj n Saloni.
Raj:- Nahar, one thing remember....

''Uss dil se pyaar karo jo tumhein dard de,
par uss dil ko kabhi dard na do, jo tumhein pyaar kare,
kyunki tum duniya ke liye koi ek ho,
par kissi ke tum saari duniya ho.
you are everything to Saloni... 😊



Next:-
Nahar is going home to meet his dad and Saloni to her house. How Nahar's dad will welcome him? Nahar's reactions? Brijesh's reactions?..
The next storywriter will tell you…
Thanks
Friends this was my first attempt, I know there are many mistakes, please ignore them.
RAJ.

Awesome episode Raj 👏 👏 👏 I'm so glad u decided to participate in this ff too. Very well written... such a sweet episode 😛

Originally posted by: mamis

Awesome episode Raj 👏 👏 👏 I'm so glad u decided to participate in this ff too. Very well written... such a sweet episode 😛

thanks kruthi..