AnuRaj wedding has ended in divorce thanks to Vannu cheating Anupama by having an EMA with Kavya. I feel that the story could have been written better.
01. Toshu believes that his father cannot cheat his mother and Vannu has lied to him that he used to have an EMA with Kavya. Rakhi Ji exposes VanYa's (Vannu and Kavya's EMA) and does the right thing by breaking Kinjal and Toshu's engagement.
02. Samar believes that Vannu is cheating Anupama and fights with VanYa (Vannu and Kavya) many times for his mother whom he worshipped so much.
03. It was only after his engagement was broken that Toshu sees the dark reality of Vannu. That was the 1st and last time we have seen Toshu being positive. Afterwards he completely turned negative.
After AnuRaj divorce, the story could have been written better with the below points.
01. Toshu could have stayed positive through out the show and supported Anupama. Toshu could have got a good job for himself instead of marrying Kinjal. After getting settled in the job, Toshu could have funded Anupama's education. If the writers could have shown Toshu explaining the importance of education in today's world in the serial, that would have been better. If Toshu thinks he cannot afford to fund Anupama's education, he could have requested Anuj politely to fund Anupama's education, Anuj could have done that and Toshu could have taken tuitions for Anupama in order to make her understand the subject. And after completing her education, Toshu could have encouraged her to get a job in her own chosen field. Toshu could have helped Anupama prepare a good resume and help her in her job search.
02. Samar, if he was so passionate about dance, Toshu could have helped Samar set up Anupama Dance Academy and encouraged Samar to teach dance to the children in the academy, there by allowing Anupama to explore other career options which could give her a good salary.
03. Toshu could have helped Pakhi as well in her college education.
And after that Toshu could have asked Anuj about his feelings for Anupama. He could have made both of them sit and given them some privacy so that they could express their feelings for 1 another. All 3 of Anupama's children could have cut of all ties with their father. With the consents of both Anuj and Anupama, the children of Anupama could have got Anuj and Anupama married gifting their mother to Anuj.
And post Anuj and Anupama wedding, Anuj could have adopted all the children of Anupama without him having to adopt CA aka Aadhya.
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