Story could have been written better after AnuRaj divorce

Originally posted by: prachetas2211

AnuRaj wedding has ended in divorce thanks to Vannu cheating Anupama by having an EMA with Kavya. I feel that the story could have been written better.

01. Toshu believes that his father cannot cheat his mother and Vannu has lied to him that he used to have an EMA with Kavya. Rakhi Ji exposes VanYa's (Vannu and Kavya's EMA) and does the right thing by breaking Kinjal and Toshu's engagement.

02. Samar believes that Vannu is cheating Anupama and fights with VanYa (Vannu and Kavya) many times for his mother whom he worshipped so much.

03. It was only after his engagement was broken that Toshu sees the dark reality of Vannu. That was the 1st and last time we have seen Toshu being positive. Afterwards he completely turned negative.

After AnuRaj divorce, the story could have been written better with the below points.

01. Toshu could have stayed positive through out the show and supported Anupama. Toshu could have got a good job for himself instead of marrying Kinjal. After getting settled in the job, Toshu could have funded Anupama's education. If the writers could have shown Toshu explaining the importance of education in today's world in the serial, that would have been better. If Toshu thinks he cannot afford to fund Anupama's education, he could have requested Anuj politely to fund Anupama's education, Anuj could have done that and Toshu could have taken tuitions for Anupama in order to make her understand the subject. And after completing her education, Toshu could have encouraged her to get a job in her own chosen field. Toshu could have helped Anupama prepare a good resume and help her in her job search.

02. Samar, if he was so passionate about dance, Toshu could have helped Samar set up Anupama Dance Academy and encouraged Samar to teach dance to the children in the academy, there by allowing Anupama to explore other career options which could give her a good salary.

03. Toshu could have helped Pakhi as well in her college education.

And after that Toshu could have asked Anuj about his feelings for Anupama. He could have made both of them sit and given them some privacy so that they could express their feelings for 1 another. All 3 of Anupama's children could have cut of all ties with their father. With the consents of both Anuj and Anupama, the children of Anupama could have got Anuj and Anupama married gifting their mother to Anuj.

And post Anuj and Anupama wedding, Anuj could have adopted all the children of Anupama without him having to adopt CA aka Aadhya.

toshu could have become abhinav sharma by doing all this

Thats what u are trying to say ??

Toshu should be hero ??

Originally posted by: prachetas2211

Abhinav aka Abhi is Marathi version of Toshu right? Correct me if I am wrong.

If Toshu only had to do everything positive and spoonfeed everyone including Maa, then show’s name should also be changed to Paritosh from Anupamaa!

First of all itna spoonfeeding chahiye hi kyon, sab apna apna karo, but Anupama always needs a man be it beta, dost, pati, dusre ka pati, padosi ka pati sab sab sab!

Could have been ka toh aisa hain. First they should stop this bechara/bechari business. Neither is Anupama bechari, Shahs definitely not bechare.

Anupama's reason for divorce was flawed, infact with the one sentence " kagaj ke tukde par", even the divorce was flawed. So, with a Rocky foundation, you cannot have anything built that will stand the test of time.

If they wanted to tell the story of Anupama, tell one, on merit, on a true inspirational basis.

1. Anupama slaps the divorce papers on Vanraj's and Shah's face. Exposes Leela-Hansmukh's abuse over years by not yielding to any requests and infact cuts ties with them. Rejects anything given as inheritance that would keep her connected to Shahs.

2. Goes back with her mother and brother who actually welcomed her and valued her. She shows the same gratitude, rather than attitude, helps her mother's tiffin business.

3. She could have enrolled in evening college and actually studied in return instead of bhashanbaazi.

4. Using the learnings, she could have set-up a supply chain model to improve business and profitability for Kanta and Bhavesh's business.

5. She could have started a small enterprise using the government schemes engaging local help.

6. They could have shown challenges she would have faced in building the enterprise. Risks she may have taken, doubts associated with first timers, even failure and how these failures taught her life lessons.

7. At this point, when she was established, she could perhaps have found love in the form of Anuj or anyone else where there would be two independent individuals found love. If the guy is a divorcee with children, better still. This could have explored how dynamics change.

Enough for 2000 episodes along with mahasangams etc.

Originally posted by: prachetas2211

This guy played Ishan Kashyap in Sasuraal Gendha Phool right?

this guy played abhinav sharma the lead of yrkkh gen 3

ishan bhi yehi hai u r right

he is the greenest flag accha admi as abhinav in yeh rishta kya kehlata hai 3

https://youtu.be/jYKZkvsPihQ?si=ta4TPc2PHwYUWVxL

After anupama and vanraj divorce writer could have focus more and more anupama journey instead portraying vanraj as hero or as lion ki uski dahad se sub darr jaayenge vanraj ko proper mirror dikhaya and anupama achieving success slowly slowly in life aur itni jaldi anupama ki doosri shaadi nahi Karni thi