Scenes we Lost/ Fanfic Ideas

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Posted: 6 months ago

Everyone post scenes here that we didn’t get but wanted to see! Also post fanfic ideas here!


Mine:

A track with a stalker of Akshu (Abhi would rock it)

Akshu and Harsh improved relationship

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Posted: 6 months ago

I had a written a chapter in my ff where birla's will be celebrating women's day and harsh and abhi cooking together smiley13 i really wished those to happen kabhi hua nahi smiley12

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Posted: 6 months ago

That would be so cute! Kind of similar to season 2 :)

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Posted: 6 months ago

Originally posted by: Mira.Rajput24

That would be so cute! Kind of similar to season 2 :)

i have not watched season  2. But i really wished pb and ab will have arguments where ab will be cooking slowly as if he is doing operation and pb is cooking everything very fast as it's PR promotion smiley37 their banters over why other person is not upto the mark smiley36 will post that chapter if i find it smiley36

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Posted: 6 months ago

Also would have been nice to see some more focus on Akshu’s PTSD from everything that has happened like they showed with Manjari and fire.

I know there’s a lot of dislike for her but she has been through so much whether it was death blames or harassment by Khera (also would have been nice to get closure of Khera track)

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Posted: 6 months ago

A track of a new family introduced who would be Abhinav's parents and a twin brother smiley19...


A track where AkshNav celebrates Akshara's pregnancy and handles Nikkeji with so much of love that he would never feel insecure. 


A track of Muskan and Rohan where they date for few months. 

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Posted: 6 months ago

Here you go. I have never fixed spellings and grammar. I always wanted to see akshu fixing birla bonding and Manaksh working as a team. But thanks to makers it never happened in the show. My ffs will not have novel touch as i hate reading books it's like a script with dialogues.smiley36 


Akshu wakes up early.. she goes to kitchen and sees manjari making tea for everyone.. 

Maid: happy auronton wala diwas didi.. 

Manjari: kya diwas.. 


Maid: woh bahir didi sab bol rahe the.. aaj kuch aurton ka din hai.. women's day.. 

She smiles sheepishly...

Manjari: khai ka women's  day.. log bolthe zaroor hai empowerment kaor. Ye karo woh karo.. kaam toh hame hi karna padhega na.. ye sirf kehne ke liye hai.. 


Maid: theek keh rahi ho didi.. ab dekho mere mard ne mujhe bhi chutti nahi di.. 

Manjari: aur nahi toh kya.. 


Akshu: women's day... 


Harsh and abhi comes down to the dining table at 11.00 am.  

Harsh: manjari khana parson mujhe der ho raha hai please .

Abhi: maa mujhe bhi.. 


Manjari comes all the way from kitchen  followed by akshu.. she stands infront of them..


Manjari: aap akshu se puchiye.. subah se kuch kaam karne nahi diya mujhe.. 

Bolthi hai women's day hai.. 


Hb and ab looks at akshu.. 


Hb: akshu.. ye sab kya hai.. 

Akshu: papa.. maine hospital main phone lagake sab patah laga liya hai.. naa aaj aapka koi meeting hai na abhi ki koi surgery.. aur agar emergency ho bhi jaye maine neil ko bheja hai handle karne ko aur baki sare doctors hai hi.. 


Abhi: kya irada hai tumhara.. 


Akshu closes her eyes.. hides behind manjari.. 

Akshu: aaj aap dono khana pakayenge.. 


Hb: arre hum kaise.. mujhe toh gas jalani bhi nahi aathi.. 


Akshu: woh abhi jalakar de dega dont worry papa.  


Hb: woh mujhe na jala de.. mutters to himself   


Abhi: akshu yaar.  Mujhse nahi hoga ye sab.. 

Akshu: maa ke liye please.. woh ithna sab karthi hai tumhare liye aur tum unhe ek din ke liye khana banakar nahi de sakthe . 


Ab looks at manjari.. 

Abhi: theek hai bana doonga.. aise emotional atyachar karne ki zaroorath nahi hai.. 


Akshu: aur aap papa.. please.. she wynks at him.. 


Hb smiles 

Hb: theek hai.. lekin isko bolo ki mujhse jhagde na kare andar.  


Akshu looks at abhi.. 

Abhi: inse bolo ki main jo kehtha hun chup chap sune andar.. mujhe toke na.. 


Akshu looks at abhi.. 

Hb : theek hai tum tumhari karo main apni kartha hun.. 


Akshu smiles.. 

Abhi and harsh goes inside their room changes their cloths as with suite it looks awkward to cook



Abhi goes inside kitchen opens his phone and sees recipie of bhindi masala.. 


Harsh goes inside and opens his phone and find how make roti.. 


Abhi goes and sees that he has to cut vegetable for his dish.. 


He holds knife prays lord like how he does during operations. 


Akshu manjari and harsh laughs covering their mouth.. 


When abhi opens his eyes he catches akshu laughing... 

Abhi: kya hua aise hass kyun rahi ho.. 

Akshu: arre kuch nahi kuch joke yad agayam. 


Abhi: tum mujhpar has rahi ho na.. mujhe nahi karna.. 


Akshu: abhi.. ye bolo ki tumhe maa se pyar hi nahi hai.. 


Abhi: tum na acchi tarah se janthi ho meri kamzori kya hai..  

Akshu : woh toh hai.. 


Hb and manjari laughs by hearing theri convo.


He starts cutting his vegetables.. 

Suddenly he sees hb who is sneezing constantly.. 


Abhi: aap ko dust allergy hai na.. ye ata lekar kya kar rahe the aap.. 


Hb: tune hi toh kaha tha tere kaam par adchan na dalun.. toh socha roti bana dun.. 

Aaachooo.. 


Abhi: kya aap bhi.. ek kaam kariye aap sabzi kaatiye... woh toh apse hoga na.. 


Harsh nods.. 


Harsh goes and stands infront of the cutter he picks one bhendi cut into thin slices as if its for chips..


Hb: abhi.. tune bhendi ki sabzi ke liye kaata hai ya chips ke liye? Ithne pathle.. he rotates that chops to see if there is any portion left which is eatable..  


Akshara starts laughing hard. 


Abhi: toh kya hua.. bhendi toh bhendi hai na.. 


Hb: lekin ye khayenge kaise.. tune teri doctori ka sara experiments shayad iss bechare par hi kardiya.. 


Abhi: rakhiye aap usse aur chup chap khana banayiye.. 

Hb : mujhe kya.. he drops that chips and it took approximately  5 seconds to reach floor. 


Akshari laughs again.. 


Abhi sees them laughing and smiles.. 


Hb starts cooking and he wanted to fry something he drops that from afar into the oil due to which oil spills 


Ab: kya kar rahe hai kya ye aapka pr campaign hai jo idhar ka nikal kar udhar chipka diya.. 


Harsh makes faces.. harsh looks at manjari.. he signs her to ask what's all this..


Manjari knows he is asking whether he is his son or jallad's son. 


Manjari points a finger at him and shows a craddle to say its his son only 😂


Ab: ye lijiye.. isse aise nikaliye.. aur isme dheere se daliye... yad rakhiye dheere se.. aapka pr ka camapaign nahi hai jo jaldhi na karne se apki reputation kharab hojayegi.. 


Hb tries once but he does the same mistake.  


Abhi: maine kaha na dheere se.. he holds his hand and gently drops it with him.. 

Akshu and manjari sees them and they have satisfactory smile on their face to see them doing something together.. 


Abhi starts kneeding the dough.. he is damn slow as he thinks its surgery and he has to do it carefully.. 


Akshu: abhi khana aaj hi chahiye hame.. 

He looks at the clock its already 1. 

Manjari: hamne subah se kuch nahi khaya woh dono bhi bhooke honge.. unhe kuch khilaye? 


Akshu: main kuch karthi hun.. she goes and takes some breads and apply butter on that.. 

Abhi: akshu this is cheating hum khana paka rahe hai na.. aisa math karo.. ye kaun khayega phir.. 


Akshu: arre sabko bhook lagi hogi na.. badhmein kha lenge jab tum aate par jo surgery kar rahe ho woh khatham ho jayega thab.. 


Hb laughs covering his mouth.. 


She applies jam... 


Hb and AB: chi.. bread par butter and jam ek sath kaun lagatha hai.. 


Akshu: main.. agar khana hai toh khao.. warna ye bhi nahi milega.. jiss tarah se tum dono ke halath hai.. 


She looks at harsh who is still trying to figure where to find which item.  

She looks at abhi who is kneeding dough from 1 hours to hide his finger prints 🤣


Akshu: khana toh 3 baje hi milega.. 


Abhi harsh gulps their saliva as they are really hungry.. 


Akshu makes one and gives it to manjari.. 


Manjari: kaafi acchi hai akshu.. 


Akshu: hai na.. 


Abhi: theek hai toh hame bhi toh khilao bhook lagi hai.. .

Hb nods.  


She makes another 2 bread butter jam for them.. 

And keeps it on table.. 


Akshu: maa chaliye.. main aapko kuch dikhathi hun.. 

Manjari: kya hai beta.. 


She drags her inside and starts peeping them from the door. 

Abhi starts eating as his hands are clean but harsh's hand is smeared with random powders and his hands smells like them. 


He looks at abhi who is busy in eating and akshu and manjari left him alone with this jallad ka puttar. 


He continues his work as washing hands will still not let him eat.


Abhi notices that.. he finishes his.. 


Abhi: rukiye.. iss taraf mudiye.. 

Harsh turns towards him.. 


Abhi feeds him the bread butter jam.. 

Harsh remembers how abhi used to deny sharing anything with him but today he was okay to feed him.. 


Akshu and manjari smiles.. manjari had tears in her eyes..


She looks at akshu.. and thanks her. 


Hb's eyes are numb now.. 

Abhi: kya hua.. aap ro rahe hai.. 

Hb: main kyun rounga.. kuch kachra chala gaya hoga.. 


Abhi blows some air to help him and hb looks at akshu who is standing behind abhi and thanks her . 

She smiles at him.. 

Edited by firewings_diya - 6 months ago
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Posted: 6 months ago

I wish they showed Dr. Rohan more!

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Posted: 6 months ago

So SO SO SO CUTE!!! Loved the relationship they all had with each other! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!

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Posted: 6 months ago

Thanks smiley1 glad that you liked it smiley1