So guys I have always been writing stories where shaleen proposes or confesses his feelings so iss time Thoda role reversal hojai . Let’s see how sana proposes
That's really a good thought Pinku 🤗
Will be waiting 😄
Grateful for the love you keep showering on my work
Wow...that'll be a really wonderful concept once again. I'm on for it...will be eagerly waiting to read this one too.
Part 1 a
Part 1 . This is the proposal I have already written in now or never . And our story begins from here .
Proposal ka flashback de deti hoon . Aur pura ss ka link toh upar hai hi for anyone who missed it .
shaleen had to go to Delhi for some meetings . So he was at his place .
He decides it’s now or never and he is going to tell Sana .
The whole day Delhi had some power cut issues and shaa had got very little battery.
Shaleen : yeh phone mein battery nahi hai.
aaj chahe Jo hogai . Aaj toh bolke rahunga .
Thoda breathing kar leta hoon .
Aur push-ups bhi kiye .
Pata nahi ajke baad baat hogi ya nahi . But aaj toh yeh Bol hi dunga chahe joh ho.
He remembers his mom .
Apki honewali bahu se confess karne ja raha . Ashirwad do ke wooh ha Bol de
He calls her . It’s 2 am . She was sleeping.
After multiple rings , she picked up seeing his name . (I m trying to take parts of his real proposal )
Sana : shaa kya hua ?? Adhi raat ko call kyu. Kiya ?? Sab thik hai ?
Shaleen : sana kya kar Rahi tu ?
Sana : shaa raat ko 2 baje yeh pochne ke
liye phone kiya ? So Rahi Thi aur kya ?
Shaleen :Tere room mein mirror hai ?
Sana: Ofcourse mirror hai .
Shaleen : ok mirror ke paas ja .
Sana : shaa are you mad.?? you know I am scared of dark . Mein nahi Jane wali . Tu kya kar raha hai itne raat ko ?
Shaleen : please ja please . Ek dim light on karke ja . Badi on kar but please ja
Finally after bohot sare persuasion she goes and stands there .
Sana : shaa is it a prank ?? Dekh i m telling you it’s very scary for me .
Shaleen : tumhe kya dikh raha hai sana ?
Sana : tumne pi hue hai ?? Phir se bekar sawal ? Ofcourse I can see myself .
Shaleen : no you are seeing the girl I love in that mirror.
There it was a long pin dropping silence …….
Call got disconnected as battery was out .He sneaked in to his parents room and got his father phone and called up.
Shaleen : jawab nahi Diya
Sana : kya jawab du ??
Shaleen : is sawal ka jawab yeh toh nahi ho sakta . ha ya na ho sakta hai
Sana didn’t say anything for a while .
Shaleen : meine jo bolna tha Bol Diya . Itne Saal chup raha but ab nahi . Tera jawab Jo bhi I will wait for it . N remember jawab Jo bhi ho I am always there for you . Bye Sana .
Without hearing he cut the call.
Sana here was restless as she never thought he will ever say anything like this . She was calming her raised heartbeats .
Almost a month has passed after his proposal neither Sana nor shaleen could have a word about it to each other .
Part 1b
Shaleen was on a con call with bezaad, Sahil ,suyash.
Bezhaad : are tune ek dam se Bol Diya toh ghabra gai hogi .
Shaleen : pata nahi but meine bol Diya use accept karna na karna uska faisla .
Sahil : dubara baat ki üsse ?
Shaleen : nahi . Shayad wooh kabhi na baat Kare mujhse. ISI ka dare tha but thik hai . Usne phone nahi kata toh mujhe laga positive hai but phir bat nahi ho payı .
Suyash : are Koch nahi hoga esa tu stres na le . Thoda time de .
Shaleen : Han ok . Chal bye guys call time .
He disconnected the call but other 3 were in conference.
Suyash : kya lagta hai guys? Did we get it wrong this time ?
Bezhaad : no I don’t think so . But yeh pata lagana padega ke wat has gone wrong with Sana .
Here Sana didn’t ever forget a word he said but was stuck with her tiring schedules . She was absorbing his proposal when work pressures increased a lot with multiple travels and her feelings took a back seat .
Also all this while she was getting updates on Moran chemistry and edits , interviews and everything.
At the sets of ziddi dil.
Interview was happening with shaleen with all his firsts .
First show :
Shaleen: Arjun
First co star :
Shaleen : Sana
Baki ke questions you can watch in the video.
https://www.instagram.com/tv/CaKQLq8gxqO/
The moment the interview gets over . He remembers their last conversation.
Shaleen : kuch toh jawab de do Sana . Ab Meri patience aur confidence dono hil rahe hai .
Diljot: hey shaleen coffeee aa gai .
Shaleen : finally my coffee .
Diljot : aaj individual interview ??
Shaleen : ha it was about all my firsts .
Diljot : wooh what were questions ?
Shaleen: usual first show first co actor .
Diljot: your first co star was Sheetal na ? Arjun ..
Shaleen : nope it was Sana . She had to quit because of her health warna bohot beautiful love story was planned for us . I just miss working with her .
Diljot : are haan ariya ariya abhi fans bhule nahi hai . Eşi kaunsi chemistry dikha di thi .
Shaleen : pata nai. It all just happened very naturally . She is an amazing person and a wonderful actor . And within just few days we became best of friends. Though hum Bilkul opposite the but still we were inseparable . Arjun was one of its experience .
Everyone could see his eyes lit while taking about her . His expressions changed .
Simple : oh yes . She is indeed one amazing person .
Diljot : you know her ?
Simple : ha old friends .
Due to links connect , the video reached Sana too .
She could see his face and his eyes when he said her name
Part 1b
Wonderful update 😄 Pinku 🤗🤗
Just loved it 🤗
Well I really loved the Sana side which was comparatively bit smaller but I wanted to read Sana deep feelings too
Her reaction was momentary & justified but her inner churning I wished should have been a bit more 🙂
Shaa is really getting bit desperate and Sana is busy so she doesn't get time to ponder over her feelings & heart which is obvious
Waiting for more
Thanks for the Tag 🏷️
Keep writing ✍️
Part 2
Few days they all gathered at shaleen place to have a games .
So it was Kunal , Kaveri , Diljot , Aditya , Bezhaad, Sahil and Sana.
Everyone reached early and shaleen pack up got delayed so he said he will reach in a while .
Sana home :
Uske proposal ke baad pehli baar we are meeting . Shaa I am going to confess my feelings to you this time . I m not gng to hold myself . Bas tum mil jao . Aaj toh Uska fav colour black pehungi mein .
Sana was all set to confess her feelings today . When she entered the house . All were having a fun time .
Simple : so guys official intro yeh hai Sana . She is an old friend of mine and a very very close friend to shaleen . Uski toh special hai. Aur Sana meet Kunal , Diljot , kaweri, Aditya .
Bezhaad : aur mein bhi hoon.
Sana : bezahaaddd .
She ran to him and hugged him .
Bezhaad: how are you ?
Sana : superb . Waise how come busy bee is here ??
Bezhaad : oye busy bee is you and your shaa . Whenever I get time I m here .
Sahil : hi Sana .
Sana : hi Sahil how are you?
She was looking around ..
Sana : shaa nahi hai ?
Diljot : are uska shoot Thoda lamba hogaya . So he will be there in a while .
All were chatting about old and new experiences and memories .
Kunal got a msg from the team and simultaneously all ziddi dil members.
Kunal : oh duck
Kaveri : mar gai yaar ..
Diljot : lag gai vaat.
Simple : daammm
Bezhaad : kya hogaya kaunsa bomb fut Gaya ?
Kunal : shoot mein kuch problem hai . Kuch commitments deliver karni for 100 episodes. So I have leave literally like in an hour .
Aditya : mujhe bhi jaldi pochona padega . Tere saath hi nikalta hoon mein bhi .
Diljot : shaleen toh Gaya . Uska toh lagta hai aaj night shift hojayega
Kunal : ek toh uss location ke pass kuch hai nahi . I hope food and coffee mil jay .
Sana who got worried hearing this .. she quickly went in the kitchen . ( she was aware of stuff there ) and prepared a jar of cold coffee for him and packed some food.
At the same time ,Shaleen video called everyone .
Shaleen : hi guys tum logo news toh mil hi gai . I m sorry yaar tum logo ko Bulake I couldn’t come .
He could see everyone but Sana as she was in the kitchen . His eyes was looking for her.
Kunal : no problem bro . Mein aur Aditya toh nikal rahe hai thodi dair mein
Aditya : tere liye kuch leke aye kya ? Khana wagera ?
But shaleen couldn’t reply as his network got down .
Sana came with a bag .
Sana : Aditya tum set pe yeh shaa ko de dena . Uski coffee and Kuch khana hai .
Sahil and Bezhaad gave each other the known look .
Aditya: ya sure . Hum bhi soch rahe the kuch leke jaye .
Sana : bye guys mera subah jaldi shoot hai I m leaving .
Bezhaad couldn’t miss her wet eyes .
Bezhaad : Sana tum thik toh ho ?? Shaa se nahi mil paye iss liye sad ho ?
Sana changed her expressions immediately.
Sana : ofcourse not mein badme mil lungi . Mera wooh shoot hai aur shaa bhi nahi ane wala toh socha I vl leave.
Sana pov: meine shaa ko jawab nahi Diya ab Meri Barin wait karne ki .
And she went saying good byes .
Bezhad to Sahil : yeh aj kuch toh bölne ayi thi
Bezhaad and Sahil who knew about shaa proposal .
Sahil : mujhe esa kyun laga me yeh aaj shaleen se kuch important baat karne ayi . Shayad confess karne ? Uski Nazre baş Shaleen ko dhond rahi thi aur video call mein dekha shaleen bhi use dhoondh raha tha .
Bezhaad : ha I couldn’t miss that look . Aur dekha kaisa coffee n khana pack kar Diya . Uski chinta abhi bhi waise hi kartı hai .
Sahil : ek kaam kare inki help le?
Ziddi dil team were leaving.
Bezhaad : guys tum logo ki help chahiye if you have 15 mins .
Everyone agreed ..
Bezhaad : hum shaleen and Sana ko bohot achche se jante hai . Bohot time se . Infact simple tujhe bhi Thoda idea hoga about them.
Simple : ha I know about the bond.
Bezhad : We want them to be together and we need your help .
Kunal : hum kya Madad Kare ? Tell us . We are always in to play Cupid .
Sahil : we are trusting you very personal information pl bahar na jay . Shaleen ne apni feelings confess ki Thi sana ko but usne koi jawab nahi Diya Abhi tak .
Diljot : yeh toh bada chupa rustam nikla yaar .
Bezhaad : and Shayad she came here to confess her feelings today. But luck is not in their favour. Kaise bhi karke inhe milana hoga .
Everyone started thinking about what could be done .
simple : idea . We have a party of 100epis tomorrow . Aur wahan mein sana ko invite karti hoon . I m sure milenge toh baat karenge .
Aditya : are you sure ? Wooh eşi baat publicly karega ? Shaleen ko Jahan tak samaj ata hai wooh eşe baat nahi karega . Apni personal life under wraps rakhna pasand hai usee.
Kunal : aur agar sana confess karle iss baar toh shaleen ne toh Bol hi Diya haina .
Kaveri : itna Asan nahi hai Kunal . Warna Sana itna time nahi leti . Koi reason hoga na.
Sahil : yeh dono ziddi bhi bohot hai . Aur Sana ka kaam bohot badh Gaya hai so may be this just got delayed .
Simple : guys kyun na ziddi dil ka track use Kare .
Aneesh aya toh Karan insecure hua monami ke liye . Agar shaleen ke saath koi ho toh Sana bhi insecure hokar confess kar sakti hai .
Diljot : idea toh bohot achcha hai but sambhalke execute karna padega na . Shaleen ko pata Chala humne esa kuch kiya toh lanka lag jayegi .
Bezhaad : wooh mein aur Sahil manage kar lenge . But uske saath pair kisko Kare ?
Aditya : Kaveri ?
Kaveri : mein na baba na mujhe real life mein Karan Shergill torture nahi sehna . we have just become good friends aur mein esa risk nahi Lena chahti . He might not like me stepping in his personal life .
Aditya : but tu best option hai Kaveri Moran fans be romantic edits Kaam ayenge . dekh professionally Jodi promote bhi hojayegi aur hamare janabji ko unki real life monami bhi mil jayegi .
Kaveri : par wooh Bhadak Gaya toh ?
I respect him as a co actor a friend but I don’t want to step on a wrong foot .
Diljot : Kaveri Aditya Sahi Bol raha hai . Waise bhi uss din sab pairs ko interviews , dance and formal informal moments honge. It will look real .
Kunal : kar le Kaveri you can do it.
Kaveri : thik hai I vl do it .
Bezhaad : ok so basically uss din shaleen ke saath rehna . Aur you are social media active so Moran videos , photos , edits will help .
Everyone done .
Aditya : Chalo sab chalte hai , see you on the set. Bye Bezhaad , bye Sahil .
Sana who reached home was broken as she couldn’t talk to shaleen about her feelings .
Sana : kya meine dair kar di. Kya mein peche chut gai . Shaa ko confess karne ka ek chance nahi mil raha . Kya mujhe usi waqt ha Bol dena chahiye tha ? But ese out of blue propose karega phone pe toh kaise yakin hoga . Phone karti hoon
She tried calling him but due to network issues call couldn’t get through.
Sana : is it a sign I m late ? Have I lost him ?
Sana received invite from simple to attend the zdmn party . And she confirmed it .
Sana : shaa ne confess karke ek baar dubara nahi pucha.shayad he moved on too . party mein shaleen se Milke üsse bataungi that I love him too . Mein usee ese Jane nahi dungi
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