Abhiya AT #339 ~ Aapki Nazron Ne Samjha Pyaar Ke Kaabil Mujhe - Page 5

जी हमें मंज़ूर है

आपका ये फैसला

केह रही है हर नज़र

बंदा परवर शुक्रिया

आपकी मंज़िल हूँ मैं

मेरी मंज़िल आप हैं

क्यों मैं तूफाँ से डरूँ

मेरा साहिल आप हैं

कोई तूफानों से कह दे

मिल गया साहिल मुझे

दिल की ऐ धड़कन ठेहर जा

मिल गयी मंजिल मुझे

पड़ गई दिल पर मेरे

आपकी परछाईयाँ

हर तरफ बजने लगीं

सैकड़ों शहनाईयां

दो जहां की आज खुशियाँ

हो गईं हासिल मुझे 

आपकी नज़रों ने समझा

प्यार के काबिल मुझे

दिल की ऐ धड़कन ठेहर जा

मिल गयी मंजिल मुझे 

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Originally posted by: whats.up.danger

ring probably decided to go back to gollum 

I think we if give sid more motivation. Again a brother pining for revenge from another is simply not complex enough. I mean come on its 200 years lets mix it up. Lets add more things. For atarters i never understood why raichands kicked sid outZ what did he do to deserve that? 

Great than we make that too. Abhay keep piya close so sid can ummm. Okay he makes it look to abhay like he is after piya so he is focused on her while he is actually trying to get that ring because that ring can ummm why is ring important. What can the ring do? 

I wish I knew what the ring could do  make a vampire more powerful I guess?  They left so much out with Sid maybe he killed some important vampire person and Raichands don’t want to associate with him in case they get in trouble for keeping him around? 

I imagine the two could fight more, remember that one OS you wanted to write? Where Piya tries to protect Abhay from another vampire? Something like that maybe? 

Originally posted by: simply.meghana

I wish I knew what the ring could do  make a vampire more powerful I guess?  They left so much out with Sid maybe he killed some important vampire person and Raichands don’t want to associate with him in case they get in trouble for keeping him around? 

I imagine the two could fight more, remember that one OS you wanted to write? Where Piya tries to protect Abhay from another vampire? Something like that maybe? 

i want to add something more than just power increment. I find it little too basic. Lets think What can create chaos. And then maybe we can associate with ring about it. 

true na. They sarted many backstories and then left them in the middle for stupid weddings. 

yess. I rememver that but that i was planning more like comic relief thing 

Originally posted by: whats.up.danger

i want to add something more than just power increment. I find it little too basic. Lets think What can create chaos. And then maybe we can associate with ring about it. 

true na. They sarted many backstories and then left them in the middle for stupid weddings. 

yess. I rememver that but that i was planning more like comic relief thing 

yeah that is true  trying to think 

I was thinking that as comic relief too but didn’t know if you were  we really are on the same wavelength 

Originally posted by: simply.meghana

yeah that is true  trying to think 

I was thinking that as comic relief too but didn’t know if you were  we really are on the same wavelength 

yes same. Mybe we can make ring weakness or something. Like it can suck the powers of vampire. Or make vampires forget evrything. Maybe raichands are thinking sid wants to use it to seek revenge on abhay but after 200 yrs he is simply too tired and wants to forget everything about raichands.  Keep thinking still. Am not fully satisfied still  

Are perfect.  We can work on it too then together 

Prophecy! What if the ring contains prophecy of some sort. Something about vampire world.  Keep thinking still. Am just putting al in one bucket

Edited by whats.up.danger - 7 months ago