Aake teri baahon mein AdMat TS

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Aake teri baahon mein...when I am in your arms...Part 1

 I dedicate this TS to 123456janu who requested me for an AdMat story.I thank my dearest friend Palchin2995 who suggested me to write the AdMat story on the kannada movie Hatamari Hennu Kiladi Gandu which is the remake of the tamil movie En Purushanthaan Enakku Mattumthaan.I have not see these 2 movies.But Palchin gave me it's plot.Though this TS is an inspiration from Hatamari Hennu Kiladi Gandu I have changed this movie's story in my TS.



One girl came out of her car and walked on the road.Suddenly a thief snatched her bag and ran.She screamed.

Girl:Hey...stop...

Suddenly a boy who noticed it ran behind the thief and caught him.He beat him and took the bag from him.

He:Are you not ashamed to steal?Work and make money.

The girl got impressed by him.

The boy gave the bag to the girl.

Girl:Thank you.

He smiled.

The thief ran away.

Boy:Hey...

Girl:Let him go.I got my bag back.That is enough.

The boy smiled.

Girl:Hi...I am Nehmat.

Boy:I am Advait.

Nehmat:Because of you I did not lose my money.So I will give you money.How much do you want?

Advait:No thanks.I did not help you to get money.

Nehmat:I know that.But since you helped me,I feel like helpig you.

Advait:If you really want to help me,please come to my tailoring shop and get your clothes stitched.I assure you that I won't disappoint you.

She smiled nodding her head.

He gave her his card.

Advait:This is the address of my tailoring shop.

She smiled.

Advait:Bye!

Nehmat:Bye!



Nehmat went to Advait's tailoring shop.He was stitching there along with 2 women.

Advait was surprised to see her.

Advait:You?

Nehmat:I thought you had expected me here as you only invited me here.

Advait:But I doubted whether a rich girl like you will come.

Nehmat smiled:All human beings are same.There is nothing like rich or poor.

Advait and the women over there smiled.

Advait:This is my mother Rama and my sister Naaz.

Nehmat smiled at them.Rama and Naaz smiled.

Nehmat:Namastey!

Rama and Naaz greeted her back.

Advait told them how he met Nehmat.



Nehmat gave them order to stitch her dresses.

After some days Advait gave her the dresses he stitched.

Advait:Hope you will like the dresses.I am not that good at girl's dresses.But still I tried my best.

Nehmat:Thank you.

Nehmat gave him money.

Nehmat:This time you deserve the money I gave you.Because this is the result of your hard work.

He smiled.

Advait:Thank you.



Nehmat wore the dresses one by one and looked at the mirror.

Nehmat:Wow!Beautiful!



Nehmat met Advait in his tailoring shop.Advait was stunned to see it.

Advait:What happened?You did'nt like the dresses?

Nehmat:I loved them.

He smiled happily.

Nehmat:My friends also loved the dresses.They want to meet you.

Advait:Why do they want to meet me?

Nehmat:Because they also want you to stitch clothes for them.

Advait became very happy.

Advait:Really?

Nehmat:Yes.Actually today evening we friends are having a small get together party.You are also invited.

Advait was stunned.

Advait:But I am not in your friend's gang.Then why am I invited?

Nehmat:Because they want to meet you.

Advait:Ok.I will come.

She smiled.



Advait reached the party hall.Nehmat introduced him to her friends.They also gave him orders for dresses.He was very happy.

They played songs.All were dancing.Advait was standing there simply.Nehmat went near him.

Nehmat:Come...dance with me.

Advait was shy.

Advait:How can I dance with you?

Nehmat:Don't be nervous.Think that you are also one among us.We are friends now.Right?

Advait felt nice when Nehmat addressed him as her friend.

Nehmat held his hand and led him to the dance floor.

They enjoyed dancing together.



Slowly slowly Advait and Nehmat became close friends.

They spent their free time on chatting with each other.



Advait and Nehmat met at a coffee shop.

Nehmat:Advait...you need to grow.You deserve much better than this.You should open a textile shop with the clothes you and your family stitch.

Advait:That's my dream too.But I don't have sufficient money to open a textile shop.

Nehmat:I will give you money.

Advait:No Nehmat.I can't take your money.

Nehmat:I know that you have self respect.So you can't take free money.But you consider me as your friend.Right?How can taking money from the friend be against your self respect?

He became dull.

Nehmat:If you really value our friendship please accept my money.

Advait became emotional.

Nehmat:If you refuse it,I will think that you don't consider me as your friend.

He became upset.

He held her hand and said:I will accept it.

She smiled.



Nehmat helped Advait financially and Advait opened a textile shop.Advait became emotional seeing his textile shop as his dream came true.


Before the inauguration of the shop Advait went to the temple with Nehmat to seek God's blessings.

Advait-Nehmat prayed.

Advait thanked God and looked at Nehmat.

Advait:It's only because of you I achieved this much.I don't know how to express my gratitude.

She smiled.

Nehmat:I don't need your gratitude.I just need your company.

He smiled.They shared a sweet eye lock.



Advait and Nehmat went near his textile shop.

Advait:Nehmat,I want you to do the inauguration as you are my luck.

Nehmat was surprised.

She did the inauguration.

Rama and Naaz smiled along with Advait.

Nehmat looked at the dresses.

Nehmat:Nice collection of dresses.I will be your first customer.

Advait:Yes.That's what I want.

She smiled.

She bought many dresses from there.




Months passed.Advait's business started flourishing.

Advait was talking on the phone.Nehmat was lost in him.

She thought:Advait looks so charming.

She blushed.

She thought:But why am I staring at Advait and admiring his looks?




Nehmat and Advait were thinking of their moments with each other.

Nehmat blushed:I love Advait.

Advait:Do I love Nehmat or my affection for her is only respect and gratitude?

Advait was in a dilemma.




Nehmat started dreaming of sweet romantic moments with Advait.

Nehmat was in Advait's arms and they were lost in each other.

Aake Teri Baahon Mein
Har Shaam Lage Sinduri
Aake Teri Baahon Mein
Har Shaam Lage Sinduri
Mere Mann Ko Mahakaaya
Mere Mann Ko Mahakaaya
Tere Mann Ki Kasturi
Aake Teri Baahon Mein
Har Shaam Lage Sinduri

Nehmat-Advait got married joyfully.

Kaale Baadal
Mahaki Havaaye
Udata Aachal
Lat Ghugharaale
Kaale Baadal
Prem Sudha Naino Se Barase
Pee Lene Ko Jeevan Tarase
Baho Mein Dhas Lene De
Preet Ke Chumban Dene De
Baho Mein Dhas Lene De
Preet Ke Chumban Dene De
In Adharo Se

Advait and Nehmat spent a lovely time together in the garden.

Chhalak Na Jaaye
In Adharo Se
Chhalak Na Jaaye
Yauvan Ras Anguri
Aake Teri Baahon Mein
Har Shaam Lage Sinduri
Aake Teri Baahon Mein
Har Shaam Lage Sinduri

Sunderta Ka Bahata Saagar
Tere Liye Hain Roop Ke Baadal
Hoo Sunderta Ka Bahata Saagar
Tere Liye Hain Roop Ke Baadal
Indradhanush Ke Rang Churaaun
Teri Zulmi Maang Sajaun

Nehmat became upset seeing the tragic scene in the movie they were watching together.Advait tried to console her.

Do Phoolo Ke Khilane Ka
Waqt Yahi Hain Milane Ka
Do Phoolo Ke Khilane Ka
Waqt Yahi Hain Milane Ka
Aja Milake Aaj Mita De
Aja Milake Aaj Mita De
Thodi Si Ye Doori

Advait and Nehmat took a selfie together sweetly.

Aake Teri Baahon Mein
Har Shaam Lage Sinduri
Ho Aake Teri Baahon Mein
Har Shaam Lage Sinduri
Mere Mann Ko Mahakaaya
Mere Mann Ko Mahakaaya
Tere Mann Ki Kasturi
Aake Teri Baahon Mein
Har Shaam Lage Sinduri
Aake Teri Baahon Mein
Har Shaam Lage Sinduri.(Vansh).



Nehmat's parents Fateh and Tejo went near her.

Tejo:Nehmat...there is a good marriage proposal for you.

Nehmat was shocked.

Nehmat:Marriage?Why so soon?

Fateh:It's not so soon Nehmat.You are an established business woman now.Why should we delay your marriage?It's the right time to get married.The boy will come to meet you next week.

Nehmat became upset.

Nehmat thought:How can I marry someone else when I love Advait?But I don't know whether Advait loves me or not.I should reveal my love to Advait before it becomes too late.




Nehmat and Advait met each other.

Nehmat:I want to tell you something.

Advait:Even I want to tell you something.

Nehmat:You tell me.

Advait:First you tell.

Nehmat:No.You say.

Advait:My marriage got fixed.The next sunday is my engagement.

Nehmat was shocked.

Nehmat:How did your marriage get fixed suddenly?

Advait:It was a nice marriage proposal.I met the girl.Her name is Mallika.She is nice.I liked her.So I decided to marry her.

Nehmat was shattered.

Nehmat hid her pain and smiled.

Nehmat:Congrats Advait.

Advait:Thank you.What were you going to tell me?

Nehmat:I also got a good marriage proposal.My marriage may get fixed soon.

Advait:What a coincidence!I am so happy for you.

Nehmat smiled painfully.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Its soo nice. We can only wish since the Advait on screen is not good like this one. Please write more.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Beautiful part dear

Just loved it 🤗 

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🤗

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Thanks for the pm


Part 1

Lovely update... well written 

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Please update next part soon 

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Part 1 


Beautiful Start

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Posted: 1 years ago

Nice story

but you take out advait kapoor swag with making him tailoring work and rama n naaz accompanying him😆

hope both will confess their feelings

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Ha ha...Yes.in the show they butchered Advait.But in my story he is just the opposite. 



Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

Nice story

but you take out advait kapoor swag with making him tailoring work and rama n naaz accompanying him😆

hope both will confess their feelings

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Posted: 1 years ago

Advait is a tailor. He helped Nehmat get her bag back from a thief.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Nehmat helped Advait a lot in growing his business.