My friend TiffanyVaychilingum wants a Parth Jennifer and Tejasswi Naagin story from me about 2 naagin sisters.She wants another actor opposite Tejasswi unlike my Naagin SS Love over lies where the same actor played the love interest of both the Naagin sisters.So I decided to write an alternative version of Love over lies.The story will be same,but most of the Raghuveer Prarthana scenes will be different from the original version.
A man was at an exhibition.
He was looking at the paintings of female serpents.A girl passed by.She collided with him and when she slipped he held her.She was lost in him.
He took his hands off her.
He:I am sorry.
Girl:I... a...am so....rry.Be...be....cause I should have.... walk......walk..ed ca...care....fu....fu...lly....And than...k you fo...for ho....lding me.Otherwise I would have fallen down.....
He felt weird.
He:You ...
Girl:I ha....ha...ve...sta....mmer..ing pro...prob...lem....
He felt sad for her.
He:It's ok.It's not a big defect.You are able to convey and that's more important.
She smiled.
She:Otherrrrr...tha...than my sis...ter...it's you only you who...di..did not tea....tease...me..
He smiled.
He:What's your name?
She:Pra..Pra..tha....
He:What?
Prarthana: Pra..Prar....Prarthana...
He:Nice name.
She smiled.
Prarthana:You...rrr...name?
He:Raghuveer.
She smiled.
Raghuveer:I came here for the exhibition as I am doing research on serpents...naagins.This exhibition is very useful.
She was surprised.
Prarthana:Me...to..too...
Raghuveer was surprised:Wow!So we both are on the same line.Nice to meet you.
He extended his hand.She held his hand happily and they had a hand shake.
A man was was driving his car in the evening.He was Manas Gujral.He saw a girl walking on the street alone.Some boys walked around lustfully.
He was shocked.
Manas:Ganga!
Manas stopped the car and went near them.
Manas:What are you guys going here?
Ganga:Manas Sir...these boys are troubling me.
Manas stared at them angrily.
Manas:Are you guys not ashamed to trouble a girl like this?
One of them:Why do you care?Who is she to you?
He was silent for a moment.
Then he said:She is my fiancee.
Ganga stared at him in disbelief.
Manas:Don't dare to trouble my fiancee.Otherwise I will not spare any of you.
They just walked away.
Ganga:Sir...why did you lie that I am your fiancee?I am only your dadi's home nurse.
Manas:I am sorry for lying.But if I say that you are only my dadi's home nurse they will question me why i care for a home nurse.That's why I lied.
She was silent.
Manas:Sit in my jeep.I will drop you.
Ganga:No thanks Sir.I will go by myself.
Manas:If you go alone,again those guys may trouble you.So i will drop you.
Ganga:Ok.
She got inside his jeep.
After some time,she said:Sir..please stop here.My house is near by.
Manas:Ok.
He stopped the jeep.She got out of the jeep.
Ganga:Thank you Sir.
Manas:Bye!
Ganga:Bye!
At home while lying on the chair, Ganga remembered Manas calling her his fiancee and blushed.
She thought:He did not mean those words.Still why I feel so happy when he called me as his fiancee?
The next day Ganga went to Manas's house.
Ganga gave medicine to his dadi.
Ganga:What is this dadi?Why did'nt you have medicine?
Manas's mother Mohini:Ganga,she takes medicine only if you give her.She does'nt listen to us.
Ganga:Dadi,I won't be here always.So you should have medicine when others give you.Right?
Dadi:No,I will not.You be here always.
Ganga:How can I be here always?
Mohini:There is an idea.
Mohini held her closer and said:You marry Manas and stay here as our daughter in law.
Ganga smiled unknowingly.
Ganga:I will arrange food for dadi.
Ganga walked out blushing.While walking she collided with Manas and lost her balance.Manas held her by her waist before she could touch the floor.
They got lost in each other's eyes.
Is lamhe ko rok doon
Ya main khud ko is mein jhonk doon
Kya karun.. kya karun.. kya karun..
Is lamhe main kuchh bhi jaanu na..
[Naina naina laage
Naina naina laage
Naina naina laage
Naina naina laage]
Tose naina jab se mile
Tose naina jab se mile
Ban gaye silsile...
Tose naina jab se mile
Tose naina jab se mile
Ban gaye silsile
Tose naina jab se mile(Mickey Virus).
Ganga moved away from him shyly.
They both smiled at each other.
She walked away.
Raghuveer was relaxing near a swimming pool while many people were there swimming and relaxing.He was surprised to see Prarthana there.She was walking like a lost soul.She slipped and fell into the pool.The shocked Raghuveer jumped into the pool and held Prarthana in his arms.Prarthana had closed her eyes due to fear.
Slowly she opened her eyes as somebody had caught her.
Prarthana was surprised to see him.
Prarthana:Ra..Ra..Raghu!Why a...are you here?
Raghuveer:You fell into the pool.How can I simply watch it?I got scared.
He cupped her face in his hands and asked:Are you alright?
Prarthana looked at him emotionally.
Prarthana asked him in her mind:You care fo...for me thi...thi..this much?
Prarthana:I..I...am al..al...right.I know swi..swi..mming.So you did'nt have to jum..jump in..into the poo...pool.
Raghuveer:Oh,I thought you did'nt know swimming.By the way why are you here?
Prarthana:I came to thi...thi..this hotel for a jo...jo..job interview.But I was rejected be...be..because of stammering.So I am up...up..set.
Raghuveer:Don't worry.They don't deserve you.One day you will get what you deserve.
She smiled.
Raghuveer:Come with me to the hotel room and change your wet clothes before going home.Otherwise you will catch fever.
Prarthana was silent.
Raghuveer:Don't worry.You can trust me.
Prarthana smiled:I trust you.
He smiled.
Raghuveer took Prarthana to the hotel room.
Both wore the spare clothes they had brought.
Raghuveer:By the way in this dress you look cute.
She blushed.
Raghuveer:By the way how is your research on Naagins going on?
Prarthana:It's not for P.HD.It's my per..personal re...re...search for fun.What about you?
Raghuveer:It's going fine.I need to collect more information on Naagin.
She just smiled.
Prarthana thought:For the first time a ma...man showed care to me.No wonder that I am fall....fall...ing for him.How can I not love the only person who cares for me?
Raghuveer looked at Prarthana's certificates lying she kept under the fan to be dry.
Raghuveer:Prarthana,you are qualified.Why don't you join my office?I mean...would you like to be my PA?
Prarthana could not believe her ears.
Prarthana:Wh...what?
Raghuveer:Join my office Prarthana.I assure you a good salary.
Prarthana was excited:Sure.
He smiled.
Prarthana thought:How can I lose the opportunity to be with Raghuveer?
Prarthana ran towards her sister.
Prarthana:Di...I am in love.
Her sister looked at her happily.She was none other than Ganga.
Ganga:Really?I am also in love.
Prarthana was surprised:You too?
Ganga:I love the son of the house where I work.And you?
Prarthana told her everything.
Ganga:I am glad that finally you got true love in your life.
Prarthana smiled.
Suddenly Ganga became dull.
Ganga:But will our lovers accept us if they know our truth?
Prarthana became dull.
Prarthana:Truth?
Ganga:The truth that we are actually Naagins.
Both Ganga and Prarthana turned into naagins.
Prarthana:My ma..man is doing research on naa...naa..naagins.So he won't have problem.Guess he likes Naa...gins.
Ganga:Human beings may like naagins.But no human being will like to marry a Naagin.
Prarthana became upset.
Ganga:The family where I work is very nice.They have no problem with middle class girls.Infact they indirectly hinted that they want me as their daughter in law.But if they come to know that I am a Naagin,forget about making their daughter in law.They will kick me out.
Prarthana:But I can't lose the only per..person who cares for me di.So I will hide my iden..identity from him.You also do that di.Don't lose your love.
Ganga:Yes.But how long can we hide our identity?One day,the truth will come out.Right?
Prarthana:But till then I want to be wi...wi..with the per...pers..person I love.
They both hugged each other and cried.
Prarthana:What's our fault if we are born as shape shifting serpents?
Ganga:We never wanted to be naagins.But we are born ichadari naagins.We are helpless.It's our fate.
They both wept.
Edited by jasminerahul - 1 years agoBeautiful part dear
Just loved it🤗
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Continue soon 👍
Thanks for the pm
Part 1
Excellent update... well written
Not only does Ganga like Manas, even his family wants to get her married to him.
The girls have a secret. Will the men still like them if they knew?
Will the sisters decide to keep things secret and continue?
The first chapter is superb dear I love it. So Prarthana and Ganga are naagin this is getting interesting. Please continue soon.
Thank u very much MrsNgozo,coderlady,taahir,khwaishfan,glitter_goldie.
Ganga:I am glad that finally you got true love in your life.
Prarthana smiled.
Suddenly Ganga became dull.
Ganga:But will our lovers accept us if they know our truth?
Prarthana became dull.
Prarthana:Truth?
Ganga:The truth that we are actually Naagins.
Both Ganga and Prarthana turned into naagins.
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Prarthana:My ma..man is doing research on naa...naa..naagins.So he won't have problem.Guess he likes Naa...gins.
Ganga:Human beings may like naagins.But no human being will like to marry a Naagin.
Prarthana became upset.
Ganga:The family where I work is very nice.They have no problem with middle class girls.Infact they indirectly hinted that they want me as their daughter in law.But if they come to know that I am a Naagin,forget about making their daughter in law.They will kick me out.
Prarthana:But I can't lose the only per..person who cares for me di.So I will hide my iden..identity from him.You also do that di.Don't lose your love.
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Ganga:Yes.But how long can we hide our identity?One day,the truth will come out.Right?
Prarthana:But till then I want to be wi...wi..with the per...pers..person I love.
They both hugged each other and cried.
Prarthana:What's our fault if we are born as shape shifting serpents?
Ganga:We never wanted to be naagins.But we are born ichadari naagins.We are helpless.It's our fate.
They both wept.
Lalit and Mohini's wedding anniversary party was going on.
Ganga who was upset about being a naagin as an obstacle in her love life was careless while walking with the tray of sweets in her hand.So the tray fell down.Manas stared at Ganga.
Ganga:Sorry!
Manas:It's ok.
She bent down to take them from the floor.She slipped again and Manas held her.She looked at him emotionally.
O sudh-budh khoyi hai khoyi maine Haan jaan ganwaai, ganwaai maine
Haan tujhko basaya hai dhadkan mein
Saanware..
O sudh-budh khoyi hai khoyi maine
Haan jaan ganwaai, ganwaai maine
Haan tujhko basaya hai dhadkan mein
Saanware...
Ganga bent down.Manas too bent down and helped her to pick up everything from the floor.
Ganga:Sir,I will do it by myself.
Manas:It's ok Ganga.I am not ashamed to do it.
Ganga thought:Manas Sir is so nice.
After some time..
Manas:Where is Ganga?I have to propose to her.I want to tell her that I want to marry her.
Suddenly he saw Ganga talking to someone on the phone.
Manas became dull.
Manas:Who is she talking to?Does she have any boyfriend?
Ganga cut the call.Manas went near her.
Manas:Who was that Ganga?
Ganga:It was my sister.I have only my sister Sir.
Manas was relieved.
Prarthana joined Raghuveer's office as his PA.
Raghuveer:Prarthana,start your first day with a sweet.
Prarthana:Do you dis...dis...tri...tri...bute sweets to new...new...comers?
Raghuveer:Not really.But you are my friend too.So a special sweet for you.
Prarthana smiled as Raghuveer gave her special consideration as a friend.
Prarthana:Wow!I love swee...swee...sweets.
She extended her palm towards him.
Prarthana:Give me.
Raghuveer kept a sweet on her palm.She was very happy.
Manas saw Ganga going out after completing her work.
Manas:Today nothing can stop me from proposing Ganga.
He went near her.
Manas:Ganga,I want to tell you something.
Ganga:What's the matter Sir?Is it very important?
Manas:Yes.It's very important.
Ganga:Say Sir.
Manas:I have many female friends.But none of them captured my heart and I never wished to marry anyone.But after seeing you...after seeing your care and love towards my family I started dreaming of marriage.I started seeing you as my life partner.
Tose naina jab se mile
Tose naina jab se mile
Ban gaye silsile
Ganga was stunned.
Manas:Will you marry me?
Ganga became emotional.
[Naina naina laage
Naina naina laage
Naina naina laage
Naina naina laage]
She thought:I wished for this moment.But since I am a Naagin,I can't accept his proposal.What a fate!
Ganga:Sorry Sir.I can't marry you.
Manas was shocked.
Manas:Why Ganga?Do I have any defect?If I have made any mistakes,please tell me openly.I will correct my mistakes.But please don't reject me.
Ganga became upset.
Ganga:What are you saying Sir?You have no defect.But we belong to 2 different classes.You are high class.You deserve a high class girl,not me.
Manas:I don't care about the class.
Ganga tried hard to hide her tears by turning back.
Ganga wiped her tears and said:But we are not a match Sir.Be practical.Sorry.
He became sad.
Ganga walked away painfully.
Ganga cried before Prarthana.
Prarthana:You should have accepted his pro..pro..proposal di.
Ganga:How can I?But I can't bear this pain.Why this happened with me Shivji?Why with both of us?
Prarthana felt sad.
They both did Thandav painfully before Shiv Idol.
Manas rang up Ganga:Ganga...come here soon.It's urgent.
Ganga got tensed.
Ganga:Are you alright Sir?
Manas:You come where I say.I will tell you everything.
Manas cut the call.
Ganga was tensed.
Ganga:What happened to Manas Sir?
Ganga reached the place (open area)where Manas asked her to come.
Ganga saw Manas there.
Ganga:Are you alright Sir?
Manas:How can I be alright when my lady love rejects me?
Ganga became upset.
Manas:I know that you also love me Ganga.I have seen love in your eyes for me.But you are rejecting me due to stupid reasons.
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Ganga became upset.
Manas:If you don't accept me I will end my life.Because I don't want to live without you Ganga.
Ganga was shocked:Manas Sir!What kind of madness is this?
Manas:Madness for you.I am mad for you.So if you are not with me,there is no point in living.
Khud ko kho kar tujhko paya
Is tarah se mujhko jeena aaya
O....
Khud ko kho kar tujhko paya
Is tarah se mujhko jeena aaya
He walked backward.Ganga was shocked as there was a cliff behind him.He slipped and fell off the cliff.
Ganga screamed:Manas Sirrrrrrrrrrrrrr!
She went near that area.She saw Manas hanging down catching a plant.Ganga put her hand down.
Ganga:Catch my hand.
Manas:First you tell me whether you love me or not.Otherwise why should I be saved?
Ganga became restless.
Ganga:I love you Sir.Please hold my hand.
Manas smiled emotionally.He held her hand.
Teri lagan mein sab hai ganwaya
Is tarah se mujhko jeena aaya
Teri hansi meri khushi
Meri khushi tu hi...
With full force she pulled him up.She embraced him emotionally.
Ganga:Please don't repeat it Sir.I can't bear this.
Manas:I will not do it as you are with me.
She smiled.
Tose naina jab se mile
Tose naina jab se mile
Ban gaye silsile
Ganga took Manas to a Shiv temple.
Ganga:I want our relationship to start here with Lord Shiv's blessing.
He smiled.
[Naina naina laage
Naina naina laage
Naina naina laage
Naina naina laage](Mickey Virus).
They both prayed there.
Ganga prayed:Shivji...please bless us.
Manas met someone.
Manas:I proposed to Ganga and she accepted my marriage proposal.First she rejected me.But I did a risky drama to make her accept me.I tried to jump off the cliff in my own way.
That person was shocked.
"What?Are you mad?What if you had really fallen down?"
Manas:That would not have happened.Because I knew that a Naagin has the strength to save me alone and being a Naagin saving me was easy for Ganga.Anyways I have trapped Ganga in my fake love.
The other person:Good.But make sure that Ganga never comes to know that you are a serpent hunter.
Manas:Never!She will never know that.
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