Love over lies (Alternative version)Part 1
My friend TiffanyVaychilingum wants a Parth Jennifer and Tejasswi Naagin story from me about 2 naagin sisters.She wants another actor opposite Tejasswi unlike my Naagin SS Love over lies where the same actor played the love interest of both the Naagin sisters.So I decided to write an alternative version of Love over lies.The story will be same,but most of the Raghuveer Prarthana scenes will be different from the original version.
A man was at an exhibition.
He was looking at the paintings of female serpents.A girl passed by.She collided with him and when she slipped he held her.She was lost in him.
He took his hands off her.
He:I am sorry.
Girl:I... a...am so....rry.Be...be....cause I should have.... walk......walk..ed ca...care....fu....fu...lly....And than...k you fo...for ho....lding me.Otherwise I would have fallen down.....
He felt weird.
He:You ...
Girl:I ha....ha...ve...sta....mmer..ing pro...prob...lem....
He felt sad for her.
He:It's ok.It's not a big defect.You are able to convey and that's more important.
She smiled.
She:Otherrrrr...tha...than my sis...ter...it's you only you who...di..did not tea....tease...me..
He smiled.
He:What's your name?
She:Pra..Pra..tha....
He:What?
Prarthana: Pra..Prar....Prarthana...
He:Nice name.
She smiled.
Prarthana:You...rrr...name?
He:Raghuveer.
She smiled.
Raghuveer:I came here for the exhibition as I am doing research on serpents...naagins.This exhibition is very useful.
She was surprised.
Prarthana:Me...to..too...
Raghuveer was surprised:Wow!So we both are on the same line.Nice to meet you.
He extended his hand.She held his hand happily and they had a hand shake.
A man was was driving his car in the evening.He was Manas Gujral.He saw a girl walking on the street alone.Some boys walked around lustfully.
He was shocked.
Manas:Ganga!
Manas stopped the car and went near them.
Manas:What are you guys going here?
Ganga:Manas Sir...these boys are troubling me.
Manas stared at them angrily.
Manas:Are you guys not ashamed to trouble a girl like this?
One of them:Why do you care?Who is she to you?
He was silent for a moment.
Then he said:She is my fiancee.
Ganga stared at him in disbelief.
Manas:Don't dare to trouble my fiancee.Otherwise I will not spare any of you.
They just walked away.
Ganga:Sir...why did you lie that I am your fiancee?I am only your dadi's home nurse.
Manas:I am sorry for lying.But if I say that you are only my dadi's home nurse they will question me why i care for a home nurse.That's why I lied.
She was silent.
Manas:Sit in my jeep.I will drop you.
Ganga:No thanks Sir.I will go by myself.
Manas:If you go alone,again those guys may trouble you.So i will drop you.
Ganga:Ok.
She got inside his jeep.
After some time,she said:Sir..please stop here.My house is near by.
Manas:Ok.
He stopped the jeep.She got out of the jeep.
Ganga:Thank you Sir.
Manas:Bye!
Ganga:Bye!
At home while lying on the chair, Ganga remembered Manas calling her his fiancee and blushed.
She thought:He did not mean those words.Still why I feel so happy when he called me as his fiancee?
The next day Ganga went to Manas's house.
Ganga gave medicine to his dadi.
Ganga:What is this dadi?Why did'nt you have medicine?
Manas's mother Mohini:Ganga,she takes medicine only if you give her.She does'nt listen to us.
Ganga:Dadi,I won't be here always.So you should have medicine when others give you.Right?
Dadi:No,I will not.You be here always.
Ganga:How can I be here always?
Mohini:There is an idea.
Mohini held her closer and said:You marry Manas and stay here as our daughter in law.
Ganga smiled unknowingly.
Ganga:I will arrange food for dadi.
Ganga walked out blushing.While walking she collided with Manas and lost her balance.Manas held her by her waist before she could touch the floor.
They got lost in each other's eyes.
Is lamhe ko rok doon
Ya main khud ko is mein jhonk doon
Kya karun.. kya karun.. kya karun..
Is lamhe main kuchh bhi jaanu na..
[Naina naina laage
Naina naina laage
Naina naina laage
Naina naina laage]
Tose naina jab se mile
Tose naina jab se mile
Ban gaye silsile...
Tose naina jab se mile
Tose naina jab se mile
Ban gaye silsile
Tose naina jab se mile(Mickey Virus).
Ganga moved away from him shyly.
They both smiled at each other.
She walked away.
Raghuveer was relaxing near a swimming pool while many people were there swimming and relaxing.He was surprised to see Prarthana there.She was walking like a lost soul.She slipped and fell into the pool.The shocked Raghuveer jumped into the pool and held Prarthana in his arms.Prarthana had closed her eyes due to fear.
Slowly she opened her eyes as somebody had caught her.
Prarthana was surprised to see him.
Prarthana:Ra..Ra..Raghu!Why a...are you here?
Raghuveer:You fell into the pool.How can I simply watch it?I got scared.
He cupped her face in his hands and asked:Are you alright?
Prarthana looked at him emotionally.
Prarthana asked him in her mind:You care fo...for me thi...thi..this much?
Prarthana:I..I...am al..al...right.I know swi..swi..mming.So you did'nt have to jum..jump in..into the poo...pool.
Raghuveer:Oh,I thought you did'nt know swimming.By the way why are you here?
Prarthana:I came to thi...thi..this hotel for a jo...jo..job interview.But I was rejected be...be..because of stammering.So I am up...up..set.
Raghuveer:Don't worry.They don't deserve you.One day you will get what you deserve.
She smiled.
Raghuveer:Come with me to the hotel room and change your wet clothes before going home.Otherwise you will catch fever.
Prarthana was silent.
Raghuveer:Don't worry.You can trust me.
Prarthana smiled:I trust you.
He smiled.
Raghuveer took Prarthana to the hotel room.
Both wore the spare clothes they had brought.
Raghuveer:By the way in this dress you look cute.
She blushed.
Raghuveer:By the way how is your research on Naagins going on?
Prarthana:It's not for P.HD.It's my per..personal re...re...search for fun.What about you?
Raghuveer:It's going fine.I need to collect more information on Naagin.
She just smiled.
Prarthana thought:For the first time a ma...man showed care to me.No wonder that I am fall....fall...ing for him.How can I not love the only person who cares for me?
Raghuveer looked at Prarthana's certificates lying she kept under the fan to be dry.
Raghuveer:Prarthana,you are qualified.Why don't you join my office?I mean...would you like to be my PA?
Prarthana could not believe her ears.
Prarthana:Wh...what?
Raghuveer:Join my office Prarthana.I assure you a good salary.
Prarthana was excited:Sure.
He smiled.
Prarthana thought:How can I lose the opportunity to be with Raghuveer?
Prarthana ran towards her sister.
Prarthana:Di...I am in love.
Her sister looked at her happily.She was none other than Ganga.
Ganga:Really?I am also in love.
Prarthana was surprised:You too?
Ganga:I love the son of the house where I work.And you?
Prarthana told her everything.
Ganga:I am glad that finally you got true love in your life.
Prarthana smiled.
Suddenly Ganga became dull.
Ganga:But will our lovers accept us if they know our truth?
Prarthana became dull.
Prarthana:Truth?
Ganga:The truth that we are actually Naagins.
Both Ganga and Prarthana turned into naagins.
Prarthana:My ma..man is doing research on naa...naa..naagins.So he won't have problem.Guess he likes Naa...gins.
Ganga:Human beings may like naagins.But no human being will like to marry a Naagin.
Prarthana became upset.
Ganga:The family where I work is very nice.They have no problem with middle class girls.Infact they indirectly hinted that they want me as their daughter in law.But if they come to know that I am a Naagin,forget about making their daughter in law.They will kick me out.
Prarthana:But I can't lose the only per..person who cares for me di.So I will hide my iden..identity from him.You also do that di.Don't lose your love.
Ganga:Yes.But how long can we hide our identity?One day,the truth will come out.Right?
Prarthana:But till then I want to be wi...wi..with the per...pers..person I love.
They both hugged each other and cried.
Prarthana:What's our fault if we are born as shape shifting serpents?
Ganga:We never wanted to be naagins.But we are born ichadari naagins.We are helpless.It's our fate.
They both wept.
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