Revenge to Love

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Riya Mukharjee

Lives in Mumbai with her brothers Sameer and Chotu. She is 27 years old. Has a past. She is beautiful and bold. Self confident and Independent woman. Loves her kids Ayan and Arya very much. She is the owner of AA fashion company. Most famous fashion company of India.

Arjun Rawte 

Lives in Pune with his younger brother and his brother's wife . He is 28 years old. He is a handsome and self confident man. Owner of AS Industries. Has a past. Love his niece Ahana the most. 

Sameer Mukharjee

He lives in Mumbai with his Wife and siblings. He is 29 years old. He is Riya's uncle's son. He works in Riya's company as legal advice. Loves Ayesha very much and married her 2 years ago. Knows about Riya's past. Love Ayan and Arya as his own son and daughter.

Ayesha Mukharjee

She lives in Mumbai. She is 27 years old. She is Riya's best friend. She is head designer in Riya's company. Knows about Riya's past. Happily married to Sameer for 2 years. Love Ayan and Arya as her own kids.

Chandrakant Mukherjee (Chotu) 

He lives in Mumbai with his Wife and siblings. He works in Riya's company as Account head. He is 28 years old. He is also Riya's uncle's son. Knows about Riya's past. Loves Priya  alot. Happily married for 3 years. Loves Ayan and Arya as his own kids. 

Priya Mukharjee. 

She lives in Mumbai with her Husband. She is 27 years old. She is Riya's best friend. She knows about Riya's past. She works in Riya's company as second head designer. Loves Chotu very much. Married for 3 years. She is three months pregnant. Loves Ayan and Arya as her own kids.

Ayan Mukherjee

He lives in Mumbai with his Mumma Riya and twin brother of Arya. Loves both of them very much. He is 5 years old. Loves to do masti with his Mamas. Little afraid of his Mumma's anger. He is the Apple of everyone's eye.

Arya Mukherjee

She lives in Mumbai with her Mumma Riya and Twin brother Ayan. She is 5 years old. Very close to her mamis more than her Mumma. She is the apple of everyone's eye. Little afraid of her Mumma's anger.

Shreekant Rawte (Shree)

He lives in Pune with his wife, daughter and elder brother. He is 25 years old. He works in AS industries as CEO. Loves his wife Lisa very much. Married for 4 years. Has a daughter Ahana. Doesn't know about Arjun's past.

Lisa Rawte 

Lives in Pune with her husband and daughter and brother in law. She is a housewife and a loving mother. Loves her husband Shree very much. Doesn't know about Arjun's past but has a doubt that Arjun is hiding something from them. 

Ahana Rawte

She lives in Pune with her parents and bade papa. She is 3 years old. She loves her parents very much. She is very close to her bade Papa. She is the apple of everyone's eye.


Chapter 1 : Page 1

Chapter 2 : page 2 

Chapter 3 : page 3

Chapter 4 : page 3

Chapter 5 : page 4

Chapter 6 : page 5

Chapter 7 : page 5

Chapter 8 : page 6

Chapter 9 : page 6

Chapter 10 : page 8

Chapter 11 : page 8

Chapter 12 : page 10 

Chapter 13 : page 11

Chapter 14 : page 12

Chapter 15 : page 13

Chapter 16 : page 14

Chapter 17 : page 16

Chapter 18 : page 17

Chapter 19 : page 19

Chapter 20 : page 20

Epilogue 1 : page 22

Epilogue 2 : page 23

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Nice start

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Nice Character Sketch dear eagerly waiting for updates

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Chapter 1


A man is seen doing gym in his house. He was just wearing his grey gym pants. He was doing push ups. Sweat was falling from his silky hairs. Just then his phone rang. He picked up the call.


Man : Hello. (Pause) ok I'm coming in an hour and ask them to wait.


The Man cuts the call and goes to get ready for the Office. In 20 min he was ready in a three piece black suit and white shirt. He was looking damn hot and handsome. He comes into the hall. Just then a female voice came from the kitchen.


Lady : Arjun bhaiya aapka breakfast ready hai karke jayeye.


The man is none other than Arjun Rawte.


Arjun : Nahi Lisa aaj nahi kar sakta. Late ho raha hai.


Lisa comes from the kitchen.


Lisa : Mujhe pata hi tha isliye yeh lijiye maine pack kar diya hai. Ghadi main kar lena.


Arjun takes the tiffin from her. 


Arjun : Acha main ab chalta hu. Ahana kaha hai.


Just then a sweet voice is heard in the hall.


Ahana : Bade Papa. (running towards Arjun).


Arjun took her in his arms and kissed her both the cheeks. She does the same. Lisa was adoring their bond.


Arjun : Acha ab bade papa ko all the best bolo. Aaj unki bahut important meeting hai.


Ahana : All the best. Aap aaj ghar jaldi aana.


Arjun : Ok princess. (to Lisa) Shree kaha hai??


Lisa : Wo aaj office jaldi chala gaya bol raha tha kuch Mumbai project ka kaam hai.


Arjun : Acha thik hai main chalta hu.


He keeps Ahana down and goes to the office.


Other side in Mumbai.


A lady is seen talking on her phone while coming down stairs, about an important meeting which is going to be held in 2 days. 


Lady : So maine jo jo bola hai vo saare conditions contract papers main include kar do. 


Just then a small boy comes and bumps into her and is about to fall. But she held it in her arms. Boy has closed his eyes in fear of falling down. She makes it stand properly. He opens his eyes. Lady cut the call.


Boy : (in mind) Ab pakka daat padegi.


But to his shock the lady does not scold him.


Lady : (in a sweet voice)Ayan bacha maine aapko kitni baar bola hai ki dhyan se chala karo. (Bending down to his height)


Ayan : Sorry Mumma aage se dhyan rakhunga. (In mind) kya baat hai aaj daata nahi mumma ne??


Yes the lady is none other than 

Riya Mukharjee.


Riya : acha chalo breakfast karte hai.


Ayan : Haan mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai.


Riya : Waise Arya kaha hai?


Voice : Mumma 


Arya comes running to her mom and hugs her tightly. 


Riya : (breaking the hug) Aa gaya mera bacha chalo breakfast karte hai.


A+A : haa chalo.


They went towards the dining table and sat on the chairs. Sameer and Chotu were having breakfast and Priya was packing tiffins for the kids and Ayesha was packing tiffins for the rest of them. 


Ayesha : Priya bacho ka toh tiffin pack ho gaya hai toh tu breakfast kar le aur tujhe subh ki davai bhi tho leni hai.


Riya : (to kids.) Aaj main tum dono ko apne haath se khilati hu. Aur aaj se main tum logo ko school chodu gi.


All were shocked because Riya does not behave like this. But the kids were happy that their mother was giving them attention.

She one by one fed both of them and kids to feed her with their small hands. Samsha and Chotu, Priya were just admiring them. 


Riya : Chalo breakfast toh ho gaya. Chalo jaldi apna bag leke aao room mein se.


A+A : Ok mumma.


Kids went to their room to take their bags. Other goes to Riya.


Ayesha : Riya kya hua hai tujhe, kuch badli badli si lag rahi hai.


Riya : Mujhe kya hoga bhabhi. Main toh pehle jaisi hu.


Sameer : Riya tujhe pata haina ki tu hum se jhut nahi bol sakti toh kyu try kar rahi hai. 


Riya : Main koi jhoot nahi bol rahi.


Priya : Riya.


Riya : Acha batao gi par abhi nahi office mein.


Chotu : Thik hai par batana padega.


Riya : Haan bata dungi. Ab mein jau?


Till then kids also came. They hug their mama's and mami's and left for school with their mom. In sometime they also leave for the office.


In half an hour later they were infront of the school.


Riya : So bacho aaj aap log office aa jana hum log fir saat mein ghar jaye ge. 


Ayan : Nahi mumma office mein bahut bore hota hai.


Riya : Are nahi hoga jaise hi aap aao ge na 10 min mein hum ghar ke liye nikal jaye ge. Fir fatafat hum log aap ka homework khatam kare ge fir khub saari masti thik hai.


A+A : Thik hai mammu we love you.


Saying so they both kiss her cheeks from both the side. She also kiss them on their cheeks and said by. Kids get out of the car and went to school. She also left for office.


That's it for today. Please tell me how it is. Do vote and comment.


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Nice start dear arjun aur riya dono apni apni life mein busy hai zaroor dono ka koi past hai riya aaj change behave kyu kar rahi hai fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt

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Awesome update

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