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I was smiling throughout.
The parallels. Sighing happily & with so much content. ❤️
I loved it. The innocence with which the act was performed as children, and the love with which it was carried out as adults, both are so sweet and heartwarming.
Agla kab aayega?!
We love good ShiVi parallels in the house <3
Agla jab mera aur Sri ka dimaag chale tab? 😃
Originally posted by: rihaaani
meghs what a dute drabble this is😭😭😭😭😭😭 phoolkumari and her bhootnath🥺
Dute😂😂
Thanks subbu🥺❤️
Originally posted by: sillysatchel
We love good ShiVi parallels in the house <3
Agla jab mera aur Sri ka dimaag chale tab? 😃
Looking sideways and avoiding eye contact
.✧• Drabble 3 •✧.
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bored:- feeling tired and perhaps slightly annoyed because something is not interesting or because you do not have anything to do
12 year old Shiva was definitely bored. He had gotten a new gift for his birthday, but what was he supposed do with it if he dosen't have anyone to play with?
Dev was too boring, and Krish was, well, Krish, the most annoying younger brother in the history of annoying brothers. Well there was a certain chipkali he could ask, but he was mad at her.
Since the day Rahul, son of the new head constable walked in their class with his shiny new school bag and new pencil box and toy sharpener, Raavi had forgotten him. And he was angry, very, VERY angry.
How dare she always talk and play with that rat faced Rahul and have no time for him anymore. She was HIS best friend, not that chilgoza Rahul's. There was NO way he is going to let her play with his bright new marbles set, he might share the bubble wrap to burst together if he felt like it.
Shiva decided that he will just go snoop on her, or better, get an opportunity to scare her if she was in her room. He wasn't going there because he missed her, he obviously was going because he wanted an opportunity to play a prank on her.
Obviously.
So Shiva packed his marbles set and pocketed them as he ran towards her house. As soon as he climbed the tree adjacent to her window, he saw her standing in front of her mirror tying her hair in a braid. Raavi immediately noticed him and greeted him with an excited smile, "Shiva tu aa gaya? Chal, mai ready ho gayi hu, hum dono Rahul ke ghar jaate hai. Usne mujhe invite kiya hai apna toy train se khelne ke liye."
Shiva was now very angry. Not only did he not get a chance to prank her, she started with her Rahul-puran again! Angrily, jumping into her room through the window, he retorted, "Tujhe jaana hai toh tu jaa, mai kyun jaau?"
Raavi was taken aback at his angry tone, she didn't understand why he was suddenly so angry. Not that he wasn't generally a khadoos, but she hadn't done anything in 2 minutes to piss him off.
"Kya hua, Shiva? Tu gussa kyun hai?" She asked innocently.
"Mai, mai kyun gussa hounga?" Shiva chuckled dryly, "Tujhe jo marzi aaye kar, mai jaa raha hoon ghar."
Saying so, he turned to leave when he felt her hand on his, "Ruk, Shiva!" Raavi said, holding his wrist, "Pehle yeh toh bata, tu aaya kyun tha, aur aaya hi hai to aise bhaag kyun raha hai?"
"Woh," Shiva faltered, looking for an excuse, "Ghar mein kal ka birthday party ka bacha hua cake tha, toh socha chipkali ko bula lu, khaake dinosaur ban jayegi."
"Woh to thik hai, waise bhi aaungi," She waved off his excuse, not catching the dinosaur comment, "Par yeh tera naak jo gusse se laal ho gaya hai, uska koi reason dega ya mujhe hi guess karna hoga?" Raavi asked, pointing at his nose and making a circle around his face with her index finger.
"Tujhe usse kya," He swatted her hand away, "Tu jaa na, apne Rahul ke saath khel, Shiva replied with a grumpy face, "Aaj kal woh hi to tera best friend ban geya hai, meri kya zaroorat tujhe."
Raavi internally giggled at her moody bhoothnath. Of course, that lafandar Rahul was the one to piss him off. "Rahul bohot cool hai!" She said intentionally, to stoke his anger.
"Cool naa ghanta! Rahul bloody fool hai!" Shiva pointed at the ground and stomped his foot.
"Haww," Raavi dramatically said, to irritate him more, "Tune gaali di Shiva! Ab toh Darshan Kaka ko bolna hi padega, teri harkat sudharne ke liye. Very bad!"
"Thik hai, toh phir tujhe jo marzi aaye kar, mai chala!" Shiva said, walking towards the window, somehow angrier and..... hurt? That was nee to him-
"Tu na gadheda ka gadheda hi rahega Shiva." Raavi laughed, pulling him back by the arm, "Ek chipkali ka best friend ek bandar hi ho sakta hai, koi chachundar nahi!"
Shiva's face immediately brightened at that, "Sachhi?!" He asked, with a child-like innocence as his anger melted away.
"Muchhi!" Raavi chirped, flipping her hair back and giving him that 1000 watt smile, as Shiva looked at her, wondering something. "Ek second, tujhe kaise pata maine Rahul ka nickname chachundar rakha hai?"
"Maine dekha tha, tu kaise khaali classroom mein jaake blackboard pe bada bada karke likh raha tha." She shrugged her shoulders, and Shiva suddenly realised something.
"Acchaaaaa! Tabhi mai sochi, kisi teacher ne pakda kyu nahi. Tu ne hi usko mitaya, hai na?" He asked, and Raavi nodded her head proudly. "Kyun?"
"Tu agar teacher se maar khaata, toh mujhe accha nahi lagta. Bas."
Shiva smiled at his chipkali, ever to the rescue, "Accha theek hai, tune mujhe bachaya teacher ke maar se, isliye itne din se jo tu mujhe ignore kar rahi thi, dono cancel cancel, theek hai?" He said, making a deal with her, stretching his hand out to her, "Chal ab promise kar tu waapas aisa nahi karegi. Deal?"
Raavi pretended to think for 2 minutes, before shaking his hand enthusiastically, Deal!"
And then proceeded to go play with the 24 marbles that Shiva had got on his birthday from his dad. That day, when he returned home, he didn’t notice that one of his marbles from the set was left in Raavi's room, which she kept safely in her drawer with the intention of returning later on, but always forgot to.
And it didn't matter that they were unaware what the future held for them, because he certainly did lose a piece of his heart for her to safekeep and heal him when he needed it most.
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"Aaj kal tujhe paas bulata hu, toh 2 minute, 3 minute, 4 minute bolti hai hai, aur aati kabhi nahi!" Shiva angrily said, hurt that she didn't feel like spending any time with him anymore.
She didn't feel like his Raavi. The one who once roamed the streets of Somnath announcing her love for Shiva to every passerby, the one who swayed to a sensuous song in the hopes that he'll melt, the one who fluttered at his soft touches and closeness.
The only thing she was close to was that phone, that bees hazaar ka phuntru.
Raavi heard his complaints seriously, which were valid to an extent, and she understood that. All she wanted was some time to set up her influencer image, and everything would be sorted after that. But, the moment she realised that Shiva was moody because he didn't get time to shower his love on her like he used, she burst out laughing.
Her bhoothnath was cranky for attention.
Shiva looked at her, appalled that she would laugh when he's talking about something serious, but his anger melted almost instantly, seeing her laugh heartily after so long. It was now one of those beautiful tinkling laughs which can melt even the most grumpy person on this planet, and Shiva Pandya was the guy that had already lost his heart to her.
He kept looking at her, mesmerised, while Raavi continued laughing. Finally, he snapped back to his senses and tried to restore his sakht launda image, even though he had melted internally, like an ice cream on a hot summer day.
Where he was the ice cream, and she was the sunshine.
"Ae chipkali, tera upar ka maala toh khaali hamesha se tha, ab lag raha hai neeche ka maala bhi khali ho gaya hai!" Shiva said irritated, but not angry anymore. "Ab bhaukegi bhi ya phir aise hi khi-khi-khi karti rahegi?"
Raavi finally controlled her laughter with great difficulty, holding her hand in ftont of her face to hide those occasional bursts of smile. Once she had calmed down, she stepped closer to him and poked Shiva in his chest playfully, "Accha, toh janaab ko apni biwi se attention chahiye tha?" She teased him, making him go pink.
"Aapko ye baat karne mein itni dikkat kyun ho rahi thi, pati ji?" She teased some more, causing Shiva to stammer.
"Woh.....woh mai, mera matlab woh ki.... Matlab..."
"Kya Shiva!" Raavi nudged him with both her hands, "Itna kyu sharmaana, ye pehli baar toh nahi hai?"
"Haan toh!" Shiva raised his chin in the air looking away in pride, "Biwi hai tu meri, mai kya thode se demands bhi nahi kar sakta?"
Raavi immediately hugged her moody, attention-needing bandar tightly, throwing her hands around his torso, "Uff! Kitne nakhre hai tere, aur tu mujhe drama queen bolta hai. Tu hoga sabse bada dramebaaz!"
Shiva sighed and wrapped his arms around her. He couldn't deny it, she fit him like a missing puzzle piece. He loved having her close to him, in his arms, with him, for all of eternity.
"Tu chinta mat kar Shiva, sab sahi ho jayega, hmm?" Raavi said softly, snuggling into him and the warmth his arms provided. "Krish se mai baat karungi, woh toh mera ek lauta devar hai na, zaroor meri baat maanega woh! Shaayad mai usse mere live mein feature karne ka bribe dedu!" She giggled, jokingly.
The smile on Shiva's face diminished, as he held her by the shoulders and broke the hug, making her stand in front of him. Raavi didn't like it, she just wanted to snuggle more into his arms.
"Chipkali, ek baat bata." Shiva said softly, "Tu jab meri aankhon mein dekhti hai, toh kya dikhta hai?"
Raavi gazed into his obsidian orbs, and knew she saw her everything in him; her family, her home, her partner in crime, her best friend.
"Mera aks." She whispered, wrapping her arms around his neck. "Mujhe tujhme mera aks nazar aata hai."
Shiva kissed her forehead gently, gazing into her honey-brown eyes. "Mujhe bhi tujhme mera aks nazar aata hai."
He placed one hand around her waist, and pulled her closer, his other hand cupping her cheek, tucking loose strands of hair that tickled her face, away. "Kailash ke free darshan kyu kara rahi hai. Tera Shiva teri aankhon mein vaas karta hai, wahi rehne de mujhe. Humare iss choti si duniya ko, humare pyaar ko, koi teesra dekhe, ye mujhe accha nahi lagta, chipkali."
Raavi heard every word he said, and she agreed. Maybe showcasing everything in social media wasn't necessary, and she possibly could have got carried away on the excitement. But she understood his point now, she wouldn't want others to know every detail either, had it been the other way round.
"Sorry." Raavi averted her gaze and looked at her feet, and Shiva placed his finger under her chin, tilting her head up, and nodding 'no' , "Aage se koi details, kisi ke liye bhi nahi. Only weekend vlogging. Deal?"
She looked up at him so innocently, wrapping her arms around his torso again letting herself so close to him, that Shiva would have kept anything at her feet if she asked. Raavi seemed very interested in vlogging, and if that makes her happy, so be it, as long as she understands to separate her personal and professional life.
"Deal. Sorry tujhpe chillane ke liye." Shiva clutched her tightly, kissing her nose, and involuntarily whispered, "I love you chipkali."
She looked up at him, raising an eyebrow which made him blush.
"I love you too, bhoothnath." Raavi giggled, and pecked his lips softly.
And just like always, it ended up being just them, in their little world, away from the rest of the universe.
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Since Megs got a big round zero for aesthetics, I'm posting this
PS : I'm kind and posted an index with links to the chapters on PAGE 1. So I better get some comments about how I'm nice and Megs is not ( • _ < )
Itna hi hai toh khud post kar le na har baar *angry pouty face*
Chal lemme go tag people now.
Baarish!
Why don't you become the writer for this show?! How well have you written this?! I loved the fb and how they handled this situation. It's very valid and both are right in their own POVs. And I loved how they talked it out to resolve it! Thanks for writing this beautiful peace! Miss your work! But know you're busy, so please write such drabbles when you get a chance! ❤️
This was wonderful. ❤️
Pouting Shiva for Raavi's attention. Kuch cheezein kabhi nahi badalti. 😆
I always love & cherish the fb x present story tracks.. idk why.. but the goody feelings & the connection such story gives is so delightful 
Sri You are such an awesome writer , your threads in twitter have always my heart, so as your fics
You & tukda are both rocking in this ficlet. Love barsaoing from BAADAL 
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