Broken Soul- Meet TS Last Part- Page 3

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Posted: 1 years ago

I am writing this coz mujhe umeed nahi hai ki they will end the track according to my satisfaction! I imagined Ashgun doing this and trust me they look beautiful.. πŸ₯Ί

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part-1


Meety is able to get Raj uncle back to Ahlawat mansion by proving that the video is morphed..

MeetΒ² room:

Meety is sitting absent mindedly in the room while Meetwa comes there and

Meetwa- Meet Meet thank you dad ko wapas laane ke liye.. Tumhe pata nahi aaj mai kitna khus hu.. Mom, mom itne dino ke baad has rahi hai aur Masoom di aaj khud sabke liye khana banana chahti hai.. Hamari family wapas puri ho gayi Meet.. Aur ye sab tumhaari wajah se hua.. Thank you so much Meet..

Tum nahi hoti to pata nahi mai kya karta.. Mai hamesa se jaanta tha ki dad bekasur hai lekin jab maine dad ko hawalat mai dekha na Meet meri himmat tutne lagi.. Mere dad meri takat hai Meet unka haath jab choot jaata hai bahut dar lagta hai Meet..

Ab sab theek ho gaya Meet.. Dad wapas aa gaye Meet.. Ab hum sab saath mai rahenge khusi khusi.. Mai bata nahi sakta ki..

He sees her tired eyes and sad face..

Kya hua? Thak gayi ho bahut? Chehra kyu utra hua hai tumhara? Mai bhi kitna pagal hu.. Tumhe rest karna hoga na.. Hamare dad police station mai the 3 dino se aur tum soyi bhi nahi.. Tabse unko bahar nikalne ki kosis kar rahi thi.. Chalo aaram karo.. Mai tumhaara khaana room mai le aata hu.. 

Meety- Manne nahi chahiye..

Meetwa- Thoda sa to khaana padega na Meet.. Yahin baitho mai leke aata hu, apne haatho se khilaunga tumhe..

Meety- Apne haatho ko aaram de.. Kal jarurat padegi.. 

Meetwa- Kyu kal kya karna hai? Actually pehle meri baat suno.. I know thoda mushkil hoga tumhaare job ke wajah se lekin mai chahta hu ki hum sab puri family kal picnic pe jaaye.. Itne din ho gaye ghar mai kuch bhi theek nahi chal raha tha.. To kya tum try kar sakti ho chutti lene ki kal? Agar possible nahi hoga to mai postpone kar dunga plan.. 

Meety- Kal mai apne ghar jaa rahi hu..

Meetwa- Kuch hua hai kya Meet? Anubha aunty aur daadi theek hai na? Hum abhi chalte hai na..

Meety- Meri daadi aur mummy bilkul theek hai.. Mera saaman packed hai aur mai kal subah hote he jaana chahti hu.. Agar time ho tere paas to saaman uthaake neeche pahuncha dena.. Ab mai sone jaa rahi hu.. Disturb mat karna.. 

Meetwa- Gussa ho mujhpe.. Hona bhi chahiye.. Bahut jyaada bol gaya gusse mai.. Aur galti itni badi thi ki kis muh se sry bolu samajh nahi aa raha!

Lekin mai tumhe kuch batana chahta hu Meet.. Dad jail gaye usme tumhaari koi galti nahi hai.. Abhay mama ne..

Meety- Mujhe pata hai.. Isha ussi din Shanty ko bebkoof banake mujhe batadi thi!

Meetwa- Tumhe pata tha.. Mujhe kyu nahi bataya Meet? Mai jaake unka muh tod deta! Bahut dhoke de diye unhone hume Meet.. Pehla Isha aur ab dad ke saath! Isha ko to batana chahiye tha atleast!

Meety- Isha ne laga hoga tu saboot maangega isiliye sayad mujhe batai..

Meetwa- Mera majak udaa rahi ho? I deserve it actually.. Baar baar galti karta hu aur ek bhi baar sikhta nahi hu kuch..

But trust me Meet aage se koi galti nahi hogi mujhse.. Is baar tumhaara ye Meet kuch bhi galat nahi hone dega kisike saath bhi!

Edited by Jiggy7 - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

meety always says that usne kisi ki gusse wali  baton ko dil se nahin lagaya but truth is that the harsh words leaves wounds in our heart which never heals we can hide them but they will come back please write more parts soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

Loved it! πŸ˜­πŸ’• We need Meety to express her disappointment and be sarcastic about Meetwa's so called love and trust that changes according his mood... πŸ™„

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Posted: 1 years ago

Wow finally something to give relief. Please don’t make her forgive him easily this time..he needs to understand that his words are meaningless when his actions are opposite. 

Eagerly waiting for next part, please write soon and let meety give back left, right and centre. Family too please πŸ€—

Posted: 1 years ago

Eagerly look forward to reading more. 

Great job with this! 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Wow Jiggy... I am so happy for this... please please continue and Meety should be like hathodi with her words. Sabko achhe se dena... so fed up of those hollow promises and ye Meet iss Meet talks. 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part-2


Meety- Galat to ab bhi ho raha mere saath.. Sab galat kar rahe.. Tu, papaji, pura parivaar, mai khud apne saath galat kar rahi hu is ghar mai ek min bhi rook ke lekin raat ko jaaungi to daadi aur maa pareshan ho jaayegi, isiliye kal subah jaaungi..

Meetwa- Kya bol rahi ho Meet? Kisine tumse kuch kaha kya phirse? Masoom di ya mom ne? Mai abhi unse baat karke aaunga Meet aur unko clearly bata dunga ki wo tumhaare saath aise behave nahi kar sakte!

Meety- Mujhe kisike kuch bolne se pharak nahi padta.. Jab is parivaar mai jispe bharosa karke aayi thi, wahi jhut bolne lage to aur kisise kya he umeed karu!

Meetwa- I know Meet aaj tak mai tumhaari expectations meet nahi kar paaya.. Ek pati ke hisaab se jab tumhe samajhna chahiye tha, support karna chahiye tha tab nahi kia maine and uske liye jitni baar sry bolu kaafi nahi hai.. Lekin phir bhi bolunga ek aur chance deke dekho mujhe.. Is baar disappoint nahi karunga tumhe..

Meety- Tujhse koi umeed nahi thi mujhe.. Pata tha jab tak tere hisaab se sab kuch chalega ya phir jo tujhe thik lagta hai wahi hoga tab tak saath dega tu mera, bharosa mera papaji ne toda hai.. 

Unhe apne papa jitna pyaar aur samman dia, unhone ek baar bhi nahi socha mujhe kaisa lagega ye jaanke ki wo mere papa ke kaatil ko chupaa rahe.. Kaisa lagega mujhe jab wo sabke saamne ye bol rahe the ki jis insaan ki mai puja karti hu ussi ne mere bhagwan ko maar dia.. Unhone sirf apne pariwaar ke baare mai socha, mere ya mere pariwaar ke baare mai nahi..

Meetwa- Nahi Meet aisa nahi hai, dad tumse bahut pyaar karte hai, jitna Masoom di aur Isha se karte hai utna tumse karte hai.. 

Tumhe nahi pata Meet jab mai unse milne gaya tha parso police station ke andar tab unhone do logo ke baare mai sabse jyaada pucha- mom aur tumhaare baare mai.. 

Mai nahi dekh paa raha tha tumhaari kosis, taklif aur dard lekin dad ko pata chal gaya tha Meet ki unki beti theek nahi hai, unka pariwaar uske saath galat kar raha hai, waada lia tha unhone mujhse ki mai khayal rakhunga tumhaara.. 

Agar koi galat hai, to wo mai hu.. Agar koi apna farz nahi nibhaa paaya to wo mai hu.. Main hu tumhaara dosi.. Jo bhi hua pichle dino uske wajah se apna aur dad ka rishta kharab mat hone do Meet.. Wo tumse bahut pyaar karte hai aur mai ye bhi jaanta hu tum kitna pyaar karti ho unse..

Meety- Maine kab mana kiya ki wo mujhse ya mai unse pyaar nahi karti hu.. Lekin jinko maine apne bade dilo waala uncle maana tha wo waise nahi hai jaisa maine pehle socha tha..

Aur waise bhi tu maane ya na maane unka phaisla galat hai mere liye, mere papa ke liye, meri mummy aur daadi ke liye..

Meetwa- Meet tum samajh..

Meety- Mujhe jo samajhna tha mai samajh chuki hu pichle dino mai aur jo sahi hai mere hisaab se mai wahi karungi tujhe pasand aaye ya naa aaye! Pehle mujhe pharak padta tha ki mere uthaaye kadmo ka tujhpe kya asar hoga, ab nahi padta! 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

meety always says that usne kisi ki gusse wali  baton ko dil se nahin lagaya but truth is that the harsh words leaves wounds in our heart which never heals we can hide them but they will come back please write more parts soon

Exactly! That's the problem I have with her.. She has no self preservation!

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: watevever

Loved it! πŸ˜­πŸ’• We need Meety to express her disappointment and be sarcastic about Meetwa's so called love and trust that changes according his mood... πŸ™„

OG Meety kitna mast sunati thi sabko.. πŸ₯Ί