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Originally posted by: Jiggy7

Part-3 


Meetwa- Ghar chod ke jaana solution nahi hota hai Meet.. Hum baat karte hai na.. Shaadi mai problems communication se he to solve hota hai..

Haan is baar maine jo kia wo bahut galat tha.. Tumhe bahut humiliation sehna pada sabke saamne.. Main apne gusse ko control nahi kar paaya aur yahan tak tumhe ghar se nikal jaane ko kaha.. Lekin wo tab dad ko jail mai dekhke kuch samajh nahi paa raha tha, apne aap pe mera control nahi tha Meet.. Jab tumne bola ki wo confession waali pendrive tumne police ko di to mujhe bahut bura laga Meet.. 

Actually jo bhi tha, meri galti thi.. Main halat aur insaan parakh nahi paaya aur saara gussa saara frustration tumpe nikal raha tha.. Pls maaf kardo..

Meety- Sahi kaha tha tune mai is ghar ki punching bag hu.. Jab bhi is ghar mai kisiko kuch hota hai meri galti he to hoti hai chaahe mai wahan rahu ya nahi.. 

Meetwa- Nahi Meet tum galat samajh rahi ho.. 

Meety- Mai sab kuch sahi sahi samajh chuki hu..

Jab Duggu ko Jiju mele mai leke gaye aur wahan aag lag gayi, tab kisiko pata bhi nahi tha mai wahan thi lekin jaise he sabne mera naam suna galti meri ho gayi aur mujhe ghar se nikaalne ki naubat aa gayi!

Jab gundo ne tujhpe hamla kia wo drugs se related tha lekin mujhe thappad maarke teri zindegi se nikalne ko kaha gaya!

Papaji ne jhoot bola, video ke saath chedkhaani ki apne aap ko gunehgaar dikhaane ke liye lekin unke halat ke peeche mujhe zimmedaar maana gaya aur mujhe ghar se nikal ne kosis ki gayi! 

Jab Duggu ghar chodke gaya tha, tab Masoom di ne sabse pehle ilzaam mujhpe lagaya jabki galti unki thi!

Jab baat Shanty ki aayi mujhe saboot laane bola gaya lekin abhi tu jaake bas bolega ki Shanty galat hai to sab maanenge teri baat, koi uspe sawal nahi uthaayega!

Meetwa- Meet Meet mai tumhaari saari baate samajhta hu aur sabki galti maanta bhi hu.. Lekin..

Meety- Nahi meri baat khatam nahi hui hai abhi, sun na padega tujhe!

Jab Ravi ne bola ki maine usse maara hai, sabne maan lia ki galti meri hai.. 

Chaahe gharwaala ho ya baharwaala galti hamesa Meet bahu ki hogi!

Tej bhaiya ne phaisla lia Ram Lakhan ko godh lene ka, mera uss matter mai koi haath bhi nahi tha, mujhe to pata bhi nahi tha aisa kuch ho raha, lekin Sunaina bhabi ki saari gaali aur shrap mujhe sehna pada aur majje ki baat pata hai unki baate sach bhi ho gayi kyunki jis rishte ke wajah se mai is ghar mai rehti hu wo rishta he kamjor hai..

Meetwa- I am sorry Meet.. Mujhe pata hai mere aur mere pariwaar ki wajah se tumhe bahut kuch sehna pada.. Lekin I promise aage se aisa nahi hoga.. 

Meety- Tujhe lagta hai mujhe tere kasme waade inpe bharosa karna chahiye? Tu to businessman hai na.. Ek baar tujhe laga ki Deep bhaiya galat hai to tune kisipe bhi bharosa nahi kia uske baad.. 

Ib bata tu baar baar kasme waade deta hai mujhe, baar baar galti karta hai aur mera saath chod deta hai.. Tanne lagta hai matlab meri jagah khade hoke bata mujhe tujhpe bharosa karna chahiye phirse?

Meetwa- Nahi karna chahiye.. Agar mai tumhaari jagah hota to nahi karta tumhaare pati pe bharosa, wo us laayak kabhi tha nahi sayad lekin banna chahta hai.. 

Ab tum mujhe ye bataao ki kya karna chahiye tumhaare pati ko baar baar tumhe chot pahunchata hai, tumhaare vishwas ki maan nahi rakh paata hai, kya karna chahiye usse taaki tum uski zindegi mai, uske ghar mai raho, uspe aur uske saath apne rishte pe phirse bharosa karo?

Meety- Mujhe tujhse faltu ki baate karne mai koi interest nahi hai.. Raat bahut ho gayi hai aur kal subah jaldi nikalna hai mujhe.. Dam ghut ta hai mera is ghar mai aur is ghar ke logo ke saath!

Meety starts to put the comforter on herself and prepares to sleep.. 

Meetwa- Mai tumhe jaane nahi dunga Meet, chaahe uske liye mujhe kuch bhi karna pade, kisi bhi hadh tak girna pade.. Meri baate tumhe sayad jhuti lage Meet lekin sach yahi hai ki mai tumse bahut pyaar karta hu aur agar aisi situation aayi ki tum ye ghar chodke jaa rahi ho to mai bhi tumhaare saath chalunga! 

Meety- Sun mera dimaag aur mat garam kar.. Bahut bakwas ho gayi aur mujhe is baare mai phirse koi discussion nahi karna hai tere saath.. 

Aur ke bola tune mai bataun tujhe ki aisa kya karega tu ki phirse mai tujhpe bharosa karu.. Ek kaam karte hai mai kal subah nahi chaar din baad jaaungi is ghar se.. Tab tak tu apna ek waada nibha le aur mere papa ke asli kaatil ko dhundke dikhaa!

Meetwa- Meet 4 din mai.. Thank you mujhe ek aur chance dene ke liye lekin itne kam waqt mai kaise mai..

Meety- Kyun maine 4 din mai tere papa ko begunah saabit kia na to tu 4 din mai mere papa ke kaatil ko kyun nahi dhund sakta!? Is rishte mai saara kaam karne ka theka maine le rakha hai ke?

Meetwa- Thik hai 4 din he sahi.. 4 din mai tumhaare papa ka asli kaatil tumhaare saamne hoga aur ye waada mai har haal mai nibhaunga.. 

Ab so jaao.. Good night and I love you..

And he was greeted with silence from the other side.. 

owk this was nice and this might actually happen in the show ...I wish aisa ho jae...

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Posted: 1 years ago

wow rightly said dialogue gin gin ke galti dikhao so meety wants meetwa to find the real culprit in 4 days 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Very good Jiggy. Acchi tarah se sabak milna chahiye iss ladke ko. 👍🏼

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Posted: 1 years ago

Read all the three parts in one go. Loved it. This is what we needed right now from Meet Hooda. 

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Originally posted by: Jiggy7

Part-3 


Meetwa- Ghar chod ke jaana solution nahi hota hai Meet.. Hum baat karte hai na.. Shaadi mai problems communication se he to solve hota hai..

Haan is baar maine jo kia wo bahut galat tha.. Tumhe bahut humiliation sehna pada sabke saamne.. Main apne gusse ko control nahi kar paaya aur yahan tak tumhe ghar se nikal jaane ko kaha.. Lekin wo tab dad ko jail mai dekhke kuch samajh nahi paa raha tha, apne aap pe mera control nahi tha Meet.. Jab tumne bola ki wo confession waali pendrive tumne police ko di to mujhe bahut bura laga Meet.. 

Actually jo bhi tha, meri galti thi.. Main halat aur insaan parakh nahi paaya aur saara gussa saara frustration tumpe nikal raha tha.. Pls maaf kardo..

Meety- Sahi kaha tha tune mai is ghar ki punching bag hu.. Jab bhi is ghar mai kisiko kuch hota hai meri galti he to hoti hai chaahe mai wahan rahu ya nahi.. 

Meetwa- Nahi Meet tum galat samajh rahi ho.. 

Meety- Mai sab kuch sahi sahi samajh chuki hu..

Jab Duggu ko Jiju mele mai leke gaye aur wahan aag lag gayi, tab kisiko pata bhi nahi tha mai wahan thi lekin jaise he sabne mera naam suna galti meri ho gayi aur mujhe ghar se nikaalne ki naubat aa gayi!

Jab gundo ne tujhpe hamla kia wo drugs se related tha lekin mujhe thappad maarke teri zindegi se nikalne ko kaha gaya!

Papaji ne jhoot bola, video ke saath chedkhaani ki apne aap ko gunehgaar dikhaane ke liye lekin unke halat ke peeche mujhe zimmedaar maana gaya aur mujhe ghar se nikal ne kosis ki gayi! 

Jab Duggu ghar chodke gaya tha, tab Masoom di ne sabse pehle ilzaam mujhpe lagaya jabki galti unki thi!

Jab baat Shanty ki aayi mujhe saboot laane bola gaya lekin abhi tu jaake bas bolega ki Shanty galat hai to sab maanenge teri baat, koi uspe sawal nahi uthaayega!

Meetwa- Meet Meet mai tumhaari saari baate samajhta hu aur sabki galti maanta bhi hu.. Lekin..

Meety- Nahi meri baat khatam nahi hui hai abhi, sun na padega tujhe!

Jab Ravi ne bola ki maine usse maara hai, sabne maan lia ki galti meri hai.. 

Chaahe gharwaala ho ya baharwaala galti hamesa Meet bahu ki hogi!

Tej bhaiya ne phaisla lia Ram Lakhan ko godh lene ka, mera uss matter mai koi haath bhi nahi tha, mujhe to pata bhi nahi tha aisa kuch ho raha, lekin Sunaina bhabi ki saari gaali aur shrap mujhe sehna pada aur majje ki baat pata hai unki baate sach bhi ho gayi kyunki jis rishte ke wajah se mai is ghar mai rehti hu wo rishta he kamjor hai..

Meetwa- I am sorry Meet.. Mujhe pata hai mere aur mere pariwaar ki wajah se tumhe bahut kuch sehna pada.. Lekin I promise aage se aisa nahi hoga.. 

Meety- Tujhe lagta hai mujhe tere kasme waade inpe bharosa karna chahiye? Tu to businessman hai na.. Ek baar tujhe laga ki Deep bhaiya galat hai to tune kisipe bhi bharosa nahi kia uske baad.. 

Ib bata tu baar baar kasme waade deta hai mujhe, baar baar galti karta hai aur mera saath chod deta hai.. Tanne lagta hai matlab meri jagah khade hoke bata mujhe tujhpe bharosa karna chahiye phirse?

Meetwa- Nahi karna chahiye.. Agar mai tumhaari jagah hota to nahi karta tumhaare pati pe bharosa, wo us laayak kabhi tha nahi sayad lekin banna chahta hai.. 

Ab tum mujhe ye bataao ki kya karna chahiye tumhaare pati ko baar baar tumhe chot pahunchata hai, tumhaare vishwas ki maan nahi rakh paata hai, kya karna chahiye usse taaki tum uski zindegi mai, uske ghar mai raho, uspe aur uske saath apne rishte pe phirse bharosa karo?

Meety- Mujhe tujhse faltu ki baate karne mai koi interest nahi hai.. Raat bahut ho gayi hai aur kal subah jaldi nikalna hai mujhe.. Dam ghut ta hai mera is ghar mai aur is ghar ke logo ke saath!

Meety starts to put the comforter on herself and prepares to sleep.. 

Meetwa- Mai tumhe jaane nahi dunga Meet, chaahe uske liye mujhe kuch bhi karna pade, kisi bhi hadh tak girna pade.. Meri baate tumhe sayad jhuti lage Meet lekin sach yahi hai ki mai tumse bahut pyaar karta hu aur agar aisi situation aayi ki tum ye ghar chodke jaa rahi ho to mai bhi tumhaare saath chalunga! 

Meety- Sun mera dimaag aur mat garam kar.. Bahut bakwas ho gayi aur mujhe is baare mai phirse koi discussion nahi karna hai tere saath.. 

Aur ke bola tune mai bataun tujhe ki aisa kya karega tu ki phirse mai tujhpe bharosa karu.. Ek kaam karte hai mai kal subah nahi chaar din baad jaaungi is ghar se.. Tab tak tu apna ek waada nibha le aur mere papa ke asli kaatil ko dhundke dikhaa!

Meetwa- Meet 4 din mai.. Thank you mujhe ek aur chance dene ke liye lekin itne kam waqt mai kaise mai..

Meety- Kyun maine 4 din mai tere papa ko begunah saabit kia na to tu 4 din mai mere papa ke kaatil ko kyun nahi dhund sakta!? Is rishte mai saara kaam karne ka theka maine le rakha hai ke?

Meetwa- Thik hai 4 din he sahi.. 4 din mai tumhaare papa ka asli kaatil tumhaare saamne hoga aur ye waada mai har haal mai nibhaunga.. 

Ab so jaao.. Good night and I love you..

And he was greeted with silence from the other side.. 

I love this so much! Perfect gave me so much peace. I will assume this is what is going to happen in the show. 
selfish me wants a 4th part to know what meetwa did 🙈 will you? 😉

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Posted: 1 years ago

I loved it Jiggy and hope they show similar MH in coming episodes. I loved her dialogues like “hm dono shadi se nakhush the but every time I was supposed to prove myself”. I understand MA’s brain isn’t working  seeing his dad in jail but few days ago he promised to trust her. He could be angry that why she gave the pendrive for lab test if she had promised but at the same time he should listen to her (trust as per his promise) and think if not her then who forwarded that pendrive to Hawa Singh. Never mind Meet Ahlawat is Bhondu Ram. 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Too good Jiggy.. it wwas wonderful to read and imagine. It is high time. High time Alhawats work towards gaining Meety's  trust. 

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Originally posted by: Chatterbox1

I love this so much! Perfect gave me so much peace. I will assume this is what is going to happen in the show. 
selfish me wants a 4th part to know what meetwa did 🙈 will you? 😉

I won't mind if he doesn't find the killer and realizes the efforts that go in to realize the effort Meety has put in to find Raj innocent. 

So realize it is ao easy to talk the talk and so difficult to walk the walk. 

That will drive him to stand with Meety against Raj and Babita to find the real killer. He can equally push Raj to get the truth put of him. I so want Meety to make Raj realize that at the end of the day he choose blood relation over his "daughter"

Hopefully thodi akal aaye Meetwa ko..

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I won't mind if he doesn't find the killer and realizes the efforts that go in to realize the effort Meety has put in to find Raj innocent. 

So realize it is ao easy to talk the talk and so difficult to walk the walk. 

That will drive him to stand with Meety against Raj and Babita to find the real killer. He can equally push Raj to get the truth put of him. I so want Meety to make Raj realize that at the end of the day he choose blood relation over his "daughter"

Hopefully thodi akal aaye Meetwa ko..

This would be so nice but I don’t know I have currently no hope that the makers plan to show this ☹️ They are whitewashing people. I cannot stand Babita’s crap and meetwa’s mom love over logic anymore. Makers will get meety to forgive them with a sorry and worst will be to show meety still trying to win them over. They are not showing any real pain or effort from meetwa side and Babita what has she done for the family to always keep talking about it. When did she treat meety as real family to demand things from her. She always called her “woh ladki” huh, she is the worst written character. 
If they show anything similar to Jiggy’s version then I might watch again otherwise written updates to just know the end 😂 

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Posted: 1 years ago

Wow wow wow..superb Jiggy...tussi great ho ji..❤️❤️