MG FF - Indebted Part 45 May 19 Pg 152 New Thread Link Pg 1, 153 - Page 8

Nice update 

Waiting for next update. 

What a conniving little brat she’s turning out to be… she’s quite older now to understand what shes doing. Poor Maan my heart breaks for him seeing his humiliation.. atleast the bright side is his popularity in school & Geet can’t digest him ignoring her so humiliating him even more. Ur 2 points- point 1 already has my heart in my stomach 🥺 I’m dreading wat more is there to read .. Pls pls update soon this one got me so hooked.. emotional stories usually do to me 😩

thanks for updating

Chapter 5

Interesting update… brilliantly written  

Dismayed with Geet's attitude

she enjoys having Maan at her beck and call

great that Maan is popular at school 

liked that he earned at school all on his own

good that he ignored the taunts that he was Geet's caretaker

hate how Geet shouted at Maan

one moment she wants not to check on her and then is upset that he did not

sad how she shouts at Maan 

of cos Maan assures her

at least Brij knows what Geet is doing and is angry about it

Gosh she even make shim carry her backpack

I do not understand why Maan stops from berating Geet

Geet has no respect for Maan

hate how Ranoo target Maan and yet did not shout Geet

feeling for Maan

Mohinder and Ranoo were not good parents

Maan had a tough life with the Handas

upset that she would make Maan dress up weirdly and walk in the house like that

she relishes in humiliating him and her parents allow this

I cannot understand how they find Geet's behavior cute 

they made Geet like this 

glad that Brij and Meera are there for Maan

update soon

Geet has become a total brat since she can get away with it.

Rano never kept Geet in check. Just encouraged  the bad behavior.

She is young but already showing signs of jealousy.

I get the storyline. But hard to see geet acting so rude. But more so parents like hers allowing such nonsense and not bothering about their other two kids too. Treating Maan like crap just because of geet. So not right. 

Wonder how long Maan has to take such crap from Her and her parents. glad brij and Meera are good

Wow, one more story , feeling excited for reading further chapters..

Great going .

Wonder what geet did in her past that maan is like a robot now.

Let's wait for their meet after so many years. 

Nice update..

Geet is acting rude with maan and became possessive..

Waiting for next update..

Lovely update 

Loved it 

Omg geet s showing so much attitude towards maan   she s feeling very possessive for maan .. even maan s willing to do anything for geet and he s pampering her ... briji and meera support maan and befriend with him .. some time maan s feeling humiliated but he s hiding his pain and trying feel to happie ..

Continue soon

Waiting