MG FF - Indebted Part 45 May 19 Pg 152 New Thread Link Pg 1, 153 - Page 6

Posted: 1 years ago

Chapter-3 

Nice update..

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Posted: 1 years ago

Chapter 3

Emotional update.... Greatly written

sad what happened with Maan's family

Maan lost his parents 

at least he he had his dadima with him but she was unable to handle taking care of the kids

liked the advice Raj gave to Maan

so that's why Maan is indebted to Geet's family

while Mohinder agreed to take care of Maan, he ensured that Maan was inferior

hate that Ranoo told Maan he has an orphan

Maan assured them that he would serve the family

feeling for Maan

Geet was indeed spoilt

dismayed that Mohinder gave Geet's responsibility to Maan

upset that they always made Maan feel that he was obligated to them

they are indeed selfish

can understand why Geet is like that and why she treated Maan like that

her parents never berated her for her actions


update soon

Posted: 1 years ago

Finally finally Maan & Geet meet. She’s finding some fun in flirting with a handsome stranger. Did Maan not recognise his wife???? I thought he knew her unlike her who’s unaware of her husband.. but it looked like he didn’t recognise her.. how come?? Keeping it aside it was a dreamy meeting.. disaster queen meets Mr perfect 😍 I had been waiting for so long for their first meet. one thing I don’t agree is Geet feeling she’s unhappy in her life. I mean factually the husband never wanted all the things that are happening in both their lives, she asked for it. She didn’t even try to know him & is already complaining of her life. She shd be grateful if nothing! 

Edit : sorry posted in wrong thread… so many of ur ffs and I confused this to Enchanted.. 


Edited by babelicious - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago

Chapter 4 - Growing Up - Click Here


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Posted: 1 years ago

Lovely update 

Waiting for next update...

Posted: 1 years ago

 Maan remember his dad word's his focus was his studies he studying in best school where brij Meera and Geet also studying mohinder keeping his promise 

 Geet getting attached and possessive about Maan and he too with love and care doing his responsibility in school all knows he stayed in brij house and take care of Geet but he don't feel insulted he accepted this as pride so no one think low about him he is famous in his school as topper sports in every activities 

    Geet is bossing nature Maan happily let her boss him but he is friendly with brij and Meera 

 Rano to start liking him and Maan was happy seeing love for him he lovingly helping her in kitchen 

Posted: 1 years ago

thanks for updating


Chapter 4

Lovely update….nicely written  

Maan was give such a huge responsibility of taking care of Geet

Geet's parents used Maan and were indeed selfish

great that Maan achieved success at school

glad that he was friends with Brij and Meera

sad that Maan had to take all Geet's tantrums

dismayed with how Geet treated Maan

upset that Maan had to give her more importance so that she would not throw tantrums

I blame her parents for this 

Gosh Maan even had to comb her hair and make her wear shoes

I hate her parents for this

he had to entertain Geet and leave his homework aside

Geet was indeed a spoilt girl and this was her parent's doing

well Maan was confident and was proud that he took care of Geet and lived with the Handas

Maan was always taking care of Geet which her parents should have done

seems like Geet was possessive of Maan

so he also helped Ranoo in the kitchen

he was awed when she caressed his cheeks lovingly and wanted to bond with him

Ranoo also took advantage of Maan

but he was happy getting her love


update soon

Posted: 1 years ago

Maan has been ordered not to keep in touch? By Geet's parents or someone else?



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