Khalish- An Abhira SS-Chapter 1-page 6 - Page 3

Amazing ,power packed Prologue.loved the poetry and everything..You are so talented..Thanks for tagging me and looking forward to reading more.

Originally posted by: ChhalkiSyaahi

My gosh! 

I love you for this surprise Blue.🤗

This is so fantastic, so wonderful. 

Abhimanyu is so brilliantly sketched that it is a pleasure to be with him on this journey.

The prologue took my breath away. Abhimanyu has emerged from a bloodbath.

I would love to see how he makes Goenka's life a living hell.

Do continue this, please.

Love

Guglu. ❤ 

Please explain to me how is this a surprise for you?

This story truly is his journey. 

@ Bold- Me too🤣

Guglu thanks for the reply and for listening to all the nonsense I generally spout. 

Originally posted by: Manju1066

Loved it 🥰 pls continue soon 💖thanks for tagging me 🤗

Thanks for the reply Manju!

Originally posted by: Nyxigniflex

Oh my God! Blues...

Such an amazing start... I literally can't wait for the next part.

Firstly, I absolutely loved the poetry at the start..... Looks like it perfectly sum up the characters.

And what a beautiful chapter....simply loved the world you created. Romeo and juliet with a twist.

Please, tag me when you write the next chapter...

This Romeo has a spine and when he roars he shakes the hearts of his enemies. This is the twisted world that I have welcomed you all into now. Thank you so much for your reply!

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

Please explain to me how is this a surprise for you?

This story truly is his journey. 

@ Bold- Me too🤣

Guglu thanks for the reply and for listening to all the nonsense I generally spout. 

You don't spout nonsense. I love hearing your views and whatever other things that you say.❤️

It was a beautiful surprise. 😆

Originally posted by: Nikki_love

Exciting brilliant plot. Hard to believe Akshara would betray him. 🤞She has not. 

Pls continue

After all that nagging this is the only reply get. You better buck up next update! 

Originally posted by: aishapl013

This is so Beautiful 

I'm in love with such stories. The Goenkas never give a good enough reason to love them either.

Excited to see Abhimanyu n Akshu's story unfolding.

Pls continue soon, would love to read further 🤗

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Amnu I can’t believe your writing a new story.. I hope it’s going to be a long one… now coming back to the story.. can I just say WOW… I love the character sketch and the backdrop… the peace loving Abhimanyu turned violent by his love and now exiled till his grandfather dies… but he’s not done with his revenge… very interesting…

And we have Akshara who’s in medical school… did she really betray Abhi or is it a bit misunderstanding that her family took advantage of.. can’t wait to read Akshara’s side of the story and how they will meet again. 

I can't believe I am writing a story too Sammy, that makes two of us!

Abhimanyu is not done at all but he does not know that his grandfather is a bigger player than him!

Akshara will unfold soon! 

Thanks for reply Sammy! I love you! 

Originally posted by: lturlapati

Amazing ,power packed Prologue.loved the poetry and everything..You are so talented..Thanks for tagging me and looking forward to reading more.

Thanks for the reply!

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

This Romeo has a spine and when he roars he shakes the hearts of his enemies. This is the twisted world that I have welcomed you all into now. Thank you so much for your reply!

For me romeo and juliet reference is about feuding families. I never really liked romeo and juliet as characters...

Any ways please update soon I can't wait...

I love angsty Abhi.