Khalish- An Abhira SS-Chapter 1-page 6 - Page 2

Oh my God! Blues...

Such an amazing start... I literally can't wait for the next part.

Firstly, I absolutely loved the poetry at the start..... Looks like it perfectly sum up the characters.

And what a beautiful chapter....simply loved the world you created. Romeo and juliet with a twist.

Please, tag me when you write the next chapter...

Exciting brilliant plot. Hard to believe Akshara would betray him. 🤞She has not. 

Pls continue

This is so Beautiful 

I'm in love with such stories. The Goenkas never give a good enough reason to love them either.

Excited to see Abhimanyu n Akshu's story unfolding.

Pls continue soon, would love to read further 🤗

Nice prologue. Waiting for update

Abh gives those aarnav sigh raizaada vibes 

Amnu I can’t believe your writing a new story.. I hope it’s going to be a long one… now coming back to the story.. can I just say WOW… I love the character sketch and the backdrop… the peace loving Abhimanyu turned violent by his love and now exiled till his grandfather dies… but he’s not done with his revenge… very interesting…

And we have Akshara who’s in medical school… did she really betray Abhi or is it a bit misunderstanding that her family took advantage of.. can’t wait to read Akshara’s side of the story and how they will meet again. 

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Amnu🤗

Woah broo I'm dead 

This prologue is mind blowing 😳

The background and characters🔥... I'm hooked already 

Abhimanyu's love for Akshara has become his weakness but it's a blessing in disguise coz bloodshed is something Abhimanyu never believed in.... He is last hope for peace for his grandfather. 

Can't wait to read this story 

Zenu🤗

Please be alive.

His love for her is a weakness in this moment, watch it become his strength in future.

His grandfather is a man who has a lot of balls in the air and eventually Abhimanyu has to do the catching!

Thanks for commenting. I love you 😘

Originally posted by: daffodil153

This prologue to me sounded like a mix of Indra and Aravinda Sametha😂😂

Please continue! I’m a sucker for these angst storues!

South Indian movies bare definitely an info for the background.

Well that is good thing as my title literally means angst.

Thanks for the reply!

Originally posted by: sheet_leher

You're giving us a storyyyy🤗🤗

I'm dead 

Noooo, I have to live to read this :P 

The prologue is 🔥 and I can't wait to read what's next. 

Akshara's pov, what happened, how they fell in love and how they find their way back to each other... Omg, there's so much 🥺🥺 

Kinda glad Abhi has a solid reason to hate the Goenkas, I don't like them either 

Thaaank you for tagging me. And I can't wait for the first chapter 💕💕

Avni🤗

Yes I got talk into this one damn it!  There is so much going on with these two sometimes I get jumbled up with the timeline too 

I think hate for Goenkas is very common on this forum. Atleast here Abhi whipped them up😎

Thanks for the wonderful reply.

Originally posted by: illiana.yale.35

Yes yes yes yes yes PRAISE THE LORD I'm so happyyyyy. You better update this phast phast meri jaan I cannot wait more, I'm a sucker for angst

Praise the Lord, how the hell did I get talked into this! 

You will learn soon that I do not do phast phast, but I can promise the weekend. 

Thanks for the reply. It means a lot.