This is something i would like to share on upcoming . A twist that i thought would make the story interesting. Just a simple plot. U can share ur thoughts on this. Tagged few. Those tagged pls take ur time. Understand life is busy. Others can join.
A plot - twist in the tale (fateh tejo jasmin abhiraj)
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Fateh was furious with jasmin harming tejo . He decided to take matters into his own hand. Jasfa face off ending with jasmin pushing fateh. He got irritated. Pushed her real hard . She fell and hit her head against a small rock at the road side. She was bleeding real bad Fateh panicked and took her to the hospital. Jasmin recovered but full memory loss. Can't recall anything at all. Doctors say will take time. Sandhus and virks danced with joy . Fateh was relieved. Tejo is safe now
Doctors and nurses confused . Rupi stated." She was a mental torture. May she be remained in a memory loss region for life". Ran to the nearest mithai shop bought ten kilos of ladoo, jelebi , gulab jamun, rasgulla and barfi. Distributed to all in the hospital. Staffs and patients. Jumping with joy . " My daughter lost her memory. I am so happy" leaving many puzzled. " What type of father is this?? He couldn't control his joy till sandhus and virks had tough time controlling him What an overjoyed father? Rupi went crazy with the news of his evil daughter forgetting him that doctors had to give him a sedative to calm him and put him to sleep.
Tejo was not aware of jasmin's condition. The truth was hidden from her. She was busy helping angad with Riya's custody. Finally won the case. Angad's ex girlfriend popped up out of sudden. Tejo played a cupid to unite them. Angad's exit with riya and his ex. Tejo and him will remain good friends forever. A happy ending to angad.
Tejo found out about jasmin and was upset. She still loved her selfish sister. Fateh took the opportunity to confess his love to her. Tejo still loved him but didn't say anything. Her ego was hurt after what she was put through. She left in silence to another city. Fateh goes searching for her.
Jasmin discharged from the hospital. Rupi doesn't want to keep her and says he will leave the hse and go far away like tejo . Sandhus were afraid. Sati requested gurpreet to talk to kushveer if he could help out. Kushveer had contacts in NGOs and jasmin was placed in welfare home. Taken good care. She didn't know she had a family living nearby who was glad to see her not being under the same roof.
Meanwhile fateh manages to find tejo but she refused to return. He tried wooing her in hilarious ways . Some fatejo nok jok. He lived opposite her apartment. From window to window . He opens his window daily to see her working in her place singing mere samne wali khidki mey ik chand ka tukda rehta hain, Kishore retro hit. At one time he tried to sneak into her apartment through the pipelines to her window but unfortunately gets stuck . Finally she had to call for rescue mission . Then trash him . He doesn't stop. She cycles to the market , he follows behind on a cycle as well singing tum sey acha kaun hain , rafi retro hit.
Wherever she goes he follows. One fine day, he thought of writing i love u in a piece of paper and then wrapped it like a paper rocket flung it to her window but it slips and fell to the fat aunty living one flr down tejo's apartment. Aunty thought he likes her. She was a spinster. So she started stalking him instead. Tejo had to rescue him.
At one time his washing machine didn't work. Decided to wash clothes at the river bank nearby as tejo usually strolls there in the evenings for fresh air. An opportunity to meet her. Sat near the river washing clothes looking at tejo walking towards him chatting with her neighbor who usually joins her for the evening stroll with her little puppy . As she passed by , he sang loudly kya sey kya hogeya , bewafa tere pyar mey, rafi retro hit . She ignored him . Walked away quietly.
Then he removed his shirt showing off his hot muscular body still eyeing her giving all sorts of dirty looks . Then his nightmare started. A few khusra (gays) were strolling around the river side saw him and chased him around. Interested in him. He screamed for help. Tejo had to rescue him by telling them he was a serial rapist. Beware he rape gays and murders them. They ran away spontaneously.
For two days he didn't open his window to look at her. Very angry with her defaming statement. Then on the third day he tried to see what was she doing. But her window was closed. He asked the neighbour who claimed that she got a job in a university nearby. He applied in the same place as football coach. He does his job and part time sneaking on tejo. He was determined to win her back. And he won't stop until she says i love u too and returns with him. He was determined not to give up .
A jealousy track here . A cameo role of few male students and a professor who were interested in her. He does hilarious things to keep them away. Burning in jealousy. She purposely burn him more by being extra sweet with them and going out for dates with the professor . He stalked them . And out of rage , beats the sh** out of that guy. And the drama goes on till she accept the professor's marriage proposal to burn him more. He still didn't give up. fateh facing tough time getting tejo back.
Meanwhile jasmin was depressed . She was all alone. She made friends with some girls in the welfare home. All of them had boyfriends except for her. She wanted someone to love her as well. So she decided to see a pandit to check on her kundali.
One fine day she was enjoying pani puri alone at a road stall and a fake baba (a fraud) came to her and said u will marry a wonderful man whose name will start with letter A and ends with J. He will be tall dark and handsome. Very charming personality and keeps u happy. Pls give 100 rupees, my prediction will come true. Jasmin was excited and gave him the money. Then he said. U will meet him soon in a short while . Just stick around. Jasmin obeyed happily. She was gonna get her true love soon.
Minutes later, abhiraj comes to a garage nearby to get his bike repaired sees jasmin but ignored her. Jasmin was still enjoying her pani puri.Then suddenly his friend pop up from nowhere saying,
" Abhiraj , how are u ?" To which abhiraj hugged his friend happily. Jasmin heard . Abhiraj. Beginning with A ending with J. Oh my god ! That's my love. She eyed abhiraj . Wow good looking . Fits in the category of tall dark and handsome. He's the one.
After he left, she asked the garage guy for his details and the next morning was at sandhus door proposing abhiraj for marriage leaving them shocked.
I want to marry ur son abhiraj sandhu.
Dolly fainted sati started vomitting. Biji had major heartattack. Three ambulances were called upon. Abhiraj running to his room. Locking the door. Sitting at his bed . Shivering from head to toe. His sister wants to marry him. Arey yeh kaunsa kalyug hain bhai. Then background song comes in, mohindar kapoor retro hit
ram chandra kahe geye siya sey
Aisa kalyug aye ga
Hans chugega dana ben ka
Kauva moti khaiga.
Ramji told sita maiya in kalyug everything will go hay wire.
Abhiraj ran to the temple telling to lord ram's statue. Bechalo Bhagwan. Mujhey aisey kalyug sey bechalo.
Biji recovered thankfully. She won't die till she catches the first flight to Canada'. The oldie still stand strong till her dreams are fulfilled
Rupi warned Sandhus not to tell jasmin that abhiraj was her brother. He doesn't want her back in the hse. Virks found out but didn't inform fateh. He was busy with tejo. Let him settle his own issues. Amrik was getting worried. Even his name started with A . Gurpreet never allowed him to leave the hse.
Jasmin made abhiraj's life hell. He was irritated. How to tell her i am her brother. Rupi uncle said not to tell. Oh god. When will her memory return. He started throwing coconuts daily at ramji's temple praying . Prabhu mujhey meri behen sey bechalo.
How jasmin tackles him
Follows him everywhere singing romantic songs , showering with heart shape balloons. He scolds her . Tells her to leave. Sometimes he runs away when she becomes unbearable.
One day , she sneaked into his room and he was taking shower. He came out of the washroom and was chased around the room with her trying to pull away his towel. Sandhus were out to friends place for a social gathering.
"Chod dey bhagwan key liye chod dey. Tujhey rakhi ki kasam , bhaiya duj ki kasam "
Jasmin was adamant.
" Bhaiya nehin Saiyan , janemaan, pass ao na".
Before he was raped , he managed to jump out of his room window almost killing himself but luckily no fractures. Just bruises
Jasmin was getting out of control and abhiraj was devastated. Whole moga sighed. First after brother in law now brother. This woman won't spare anyone.
Jasmin crossed all limits when she paid goons to kidnap him and forced him to get married to her. He was rescued by sandhus on time.
They had to find a solution. They thought hard. Then dilraj, the little smart fellow came up with an idea . Bribe a pandit to tell jasmin whichever girl marries abhiraj will die in six months after marriage. The kundali ka grehen.
Dolly was chosen to do the act. She started crying in front of jasmin when she met her at the welfare.
U know why abhiraj runs away from u all the time.
Jasmin was sad .
Why
Dolly pretending to cry loudly
Any girl marries him will die in six mths
If u don't believe ask our family pandit.
Jasmin was shocked and asked to meet the pandit . He was bribed to tell lie.
Jasmin backed off . Abhiraj saved.
But another one in trouble now.
Amrik.
Jasmin says to herself
Who cares starts with A ends with J .
Starting with A alone is good enough na. So i will marry a well to do handsome guy with A letter.
So now amrik's turn.
Two parallel tracks . One of fatejo,the other jasmin and side characters.
After angad's exit
How do u guys find this plot.
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