Kalma ts ::" bas tum mere ho .."

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 Kalma ts ::-" bas mere ho tum " 



Aurangabad the fresh form of change town ....ye it's town only as if we see some 15-16 years ago it's doesn't have any facility of saving water or have proper education centre or schools ..and the most importantly not having any proper jobs policies or vaccancy other than farming or business but now it's change ..it change for its good ..now it has some super class building with marvellous interiors or many jobs opportunities for people..better education facilities ..

In this town only a famous family because of them and their members this change is possible the rane family ...the most rich family in Aurangabad in only one term money they didn't have any heart richness they still have that think which is the most backward thinking of people ...the rausaheb the head of that family who in these years work for people wellfare and are now participate in cm election also ... Though they bring alot of positive change in city but their house still follows that baseless rituals and still believe in superstitious talks ...his wife somehow a strict and mainuplative lady the head of the family business in jewellery and pathni sarees..her three children sarthak the big one , Aparna the middle child and vivek the youngest ..

All three are different from one another ...sarthak choose law as his profession being born in a business class family he still choose that profession so that his talent didn't get waste ...his wife though she is good hearted woman but seeing her in laws behaviour she becomes like her mother in law only being in a profession of teaching and as a head professor she started to behave as a rude and a strict person..the middle one Aparna the most manipulative lady like her mother ahilya .. though she is a married woman but not caring about her well managed family and children she poked her nose in her parental family matters ...and the last one vivek though he seems like a silent man but many secrets of family black money and cases are under his breath .. his wife pallavi always there to pinch him up to get their children the head of the family in new generation...

In hall 

After doing pooja ahilya as the head women gives aarti to all of them but stops to a young women who is having lower eyes with a timid look on her face ...

Aausaheb::" anupriya ... tumhari bahu ko kuch sikhaya nahi tumne ki aarti kein waqt patni ko pati kein bina nahi aana chahiye ..yaa isssein ye bhi humein hi sikhana hoga ..."

Anupriya rolled her eyes at her mother in law drama but taking a strict look ..

Anupriya::" kalyani ...malhar kaha hai ...tum jaanti hoona ye samay aarti ka hai ..aur iss ghar main aarti sabhi sadysa kein saath ki jaati hai .."

Kalyani ::"(in a polite voice ) aai ..vo malharji kal raat der sein soye the unkien aaj sir main dard hai isliye maine unhein pareshan nahi kiya ...aur phir aaj dophar main unki important meeting bhi hai ..." 

Aausaheb smirked and by adjusting her pallu she gives the thaal to the mahantji present there ...

Aausaheb::" ye baat tum pehle bhi to ekh sakti thi na ..abb hogaya naa subah subah naya bakheda shuru ..kitni baar kaha hai iss ghar kein kuch niyam aur kayde kanoon hai ...abb hamara hi ghar hai jo bahoon ko itna bolne deta hai ..varna bahara jaakar dekho poorein gaon main kissiki itni mazal jo itna bol sakein ...hmmm..sabka bhala kiya humne jindagi bhar lekin humarein naseeb main to saari hi aisi hi bahoein nikli thi ." 

After that nobody interfere in their matter and all left for their work .. Anupriya hold kalyani hand and bring her to the kitchen hurriedly

Anurpiya ::" kalyani ..kitni baar kaha hai ki agr kuch baat hoon to mujhe bata diya karo abb dekho sun li naa nayi baatien ..Malhar ko sir mein Dard hai chai di thi na ussein subah .."

Kalyani ::" ji aai aur saath main unhein dawa bhi de di thi .." 

Anurpiya ::" theekin dhyaan rakhana uska aur hoo sakein ..to kuch mat bolna iss ghar main jitna bologi ussein dugna sunogi ..mujhein college kein liye late ho raha hai main chalti hoon .." 

Kalyani having a hurt look nodded her head...coming to her room she sees her husband sleeping peacefully on bed not disturbing him she runs to the washroom and opens the tap ...her eyes who are welling up from a long time started to spill uncountable hot tears ..this is not new she knew very well from the first day that in her in law house no one likes her ..even her husband..he doesn't even have mil second to look at her .. talking with each other far away ... Getting drenched in cold water her back started to get hurt and sobbing by closing her mouth she stops the water ... Throwing her saree on floor she sees her back belt marks and her all bad memories started to run in her mind ...

Flashback

Kalyani is a sweet and innocent girl from childhood only but she like in present a silent mutator in everything..she is not like that at that time ..she is all cheerful girl ..she lives with her maa baba in Pune ..her father is a bank manager who worked in a well reputed bank and her mother also worked as a legal adviser in a big company she lived happily with her parents .. a small girl taking a law book in her small arm runs to her parents

Kalyani ::" aai baba dekho main aise hi bade hokar ...jaise vo newspaper main aunty haina ..hamari new d.m. vaise hi banoogi ..ek achi aur strict wali dm..haina aai baba .." 

Her parents smiled at her innocent talk and taking her in his lap her father caress her hair 

Atul ::" jaroor meri gudiya jaroor badein hokar ek achi aur sacchi dm banegi par uskein liye tumhein bohot saara padhna padega haina .." 

Her father tickled her and the house filled with her cheerful laughter ..

But suddenly one day her father and mother who leaves her for two days at her mama mami place as they have some important work in Mumbai and they cannot take her there ..get into an accident and died at the spot only .. leaving her childhood in darkness ..her mama mami are greedy person...as her parents died they got hold to her parents property and treat her as their maid ... though they didn't have any child so anybody in society didn't get any doubt on them .they enrolled her in well reputated school and make her complete her study but to scare her so she will not reveal her secret in front of anyone they sometime locks her in dark room or not give her any food ..and one day when her rishta came from the rane family they beat her with belt as she is requesting them to let her complete her education properly as after great difficulty she get herself admission in that college...but after a limit she agress and they stops her beating ..her marks are healing slowly but the pain in her heart and body didn't leave ..she still cries remembering that days ..

In present

She wrapped herself in a new saree and pins her pallu at back she thanked that God as in this house the dil should cover themselves properly so she easily hide her Marks from all of them ..as to take the ticket and sympathy from people ..rausaheb accepts the offer of her mami who takes her rishta to them as they get to know that they are searching a beautiful daughter in law for their grandson ..his grandfather got agreed so the people think that being a rich family they still accepts the lower family daughter in laws ..his all family object him ..but still he admants on his decision...she thank God as they all have only spicy tongue at least they didn't beat her or her husband forced her to have physical relationship with him ..but she after seeing herself in mirror shivers thinking the last words of her Mami ..

Mami::" tujhein uss Ghar ka warris jaldi Dena hoga uss Ghar ko samjhi ..Jo Teri Dadi saas haina uss Ghar ki maalkin agr ussein tune jaldi unka waris nhi Diya ..to ye Matt bhoolna vo tujhein jaldi uss Ghar sein Bahar Kar dengi ..aur phir jab wahan sein niklegi to yahan maat Ana jaakein kissi sadak pein bheek magane Beth Jana samjhi .." 

She cries thinking her relationship with her husband being in a six month marriage they still didn't talk with each other getting physical is far away ..she know he didn't like her but the words of him on their wedding night still haunts her 

Malhar ::" kalyani main ek acp Hoon ..main tumhein kabhi mere saath rehne kein liye ya kissi bhi cheez kein liye force nhi karoonga ..tum bhi jaanti aur main bhi ..ki ye Shaadi ek am Shaadi ki tarah nhi hai Meri Shaadi samapada sein Tay ki gayi thi lekin end waqt pein azoba nein sab badal Diya ... tumhare iss Ghar main kisisein kaise sambhand honge ya Kya jhagde honge issein mujhein koi matlab nhi ..mere liye Mera farz sabkuch hai issein jyaada kuch nhi ..aur haan hamarein beech kabhi sabki tarah Normal hoga ye tum kabhi mat sochna .." he left from there leaving her shocked in tears ..

After that night they didn't talk much fullfilling her duties as a. Ideal wife and Dil is only her responsibility... Still after that aausaheb leave no stone to taunt her or his aatya also makes her life she always compared her with sampada ..as she is the daughter of her best friend so all family members before only like her and wants to make her as malhar wife ..they even fixed their Marriage but due to his grandfather decision all things got changed ..taking a deep breath she started to wake up her husband ..

Massaging his forehead malhar sits with the help of headboard and drinks a glass of water ..

Kalyani ::" vo malharji abb aapka dard kaisa hai .. 12 baj gayein hai aur phir 2 baje aapki meeting hai iskein liye aapko jagana pada .."

Malhar hummed in response and thanking her he left gpr washroom to get  freshen up this is their routine and relationship also ...only much words like this exchange between them daily .. folding the blanket properly she changed the bedsheet and goes from there to prepare his lunch ..

While going in the kitchen she listened some voices from sarthak and anupriya.. though listening someone talk is not good thing she knows but after listening her name she stops there to get to know it properly..

Sarthak::" phir bhi anupriya..tumhein kalyani sein subah aise baat nahi karni chahiye..uski Kya galti thi Jo aausaheb aur tumne milkein ussein subah subah itna suna Diya .." 

Anupriya::" haan aap bhi apni maa ki tarah bass mujhein hi sunaiye ..jaise ve koi mauka nhi chodhti mujhein sunane ka aap bhi maat choriye ..vo pallavi to aausaheb kein kaan bharkar apna kaam nikalwa let hai aaj subah bhi ussi nein unkein kaan bharein the Deri ko lekar ..lekin vo kissi ko nhi dikhega buri to main hi Hoon acha bhala malhar ki Shaadi sampada sein ho jaati are hr ki post par hai well reputated company hai .. humarein malhar kein barabar ki hai lekin nhi ..ek baar phir iss Ghar main apni bhalai kein liye mere bete ki hi Bali Chad gayi liyaein aisi patni usskein liye jissein vo jaanta Tak nahi naa hi uskein Barbara ki hai .."

Sarthak::" anupriya abb bohot ho raha hai ..bass abb .." 

Anupriya::" mujhpein mat chillayein..Varna agr aapki maa nein sunn liya NAA to aajayegi phir mujhein sunane ..Kya galti hai Meri main koi aise hi Ghar ki nhi aagayi thi ..mere papa ki izzat this iss shehar main rutbaa tha .. yahan kein best professor the ..Meri Shaadi main koi kami nahi chodi sabkuch Diya ..lekin phir bhi aausaheb ko bass mujhein sunane ka mauka chahiye ..are socha tha Kam sein kam main bahu apne pasand ki laaungi lekin vo bhi ..appa nein mujhsein cheek liya ..abb Kalyani kein gharwalon nein ussein kuch nhi Diya ismein main Kya karoon jisska Tana Bhi very mujhein hi deti hai ..sabka sahi hai apne mazze lein agr Maine apni job chor di hoti to pata nhi aur Kya Kya jhelna padta .." 

Anurpiya left from there angrily..kalyani hurriedly hide herself behind the door and after her going she left for the kitchen..having tears in her eyes she makes his dinner ..she knows that she didn't do any job but after lot of Daring she asked her mother in law about completing her study ...

Anupriya::" bass ye baat mere aagein keh di ..aur kissi kein aagein kehkar aur bakheda mat khada karna ..agr tumne apni padhai poori Kar li hoti to Kam sein kam tum yaahan lad jhagar Kar job Kar leti ya main tumhein karne ki parwangi dilwa deti ..lekin padhai poori karkein job karna ..aree iss Ghar kein log sirf aagein badhne ka naatak karte hai ..ye sab bhi auro ki tarah mard ko aagein Bahar kamyabi milta hi dekh saktien hai ..aurton ko sirf Ghar ka chulha hi sambhalne ki izzat hai iss Ghar main .." 

She makes his tiffin and goes to gives him suddenly after seeing the front scene she closed her eyes and let her tears flow .. sampada who in terms of sympathy lived in their house as a guest but still seeing her actions with her husband she understands very well that she still rules his heart ..as even after marriage she comes close to her husband today also now she is holding his hand and talking something with him having an hurt look on her face ..she gives the tiffin to ramu kaka to give to him 

On other side sampada is trying to take malhar with her in some party and malhar having an pissed look on his face trying to leave his hand from her 

Malhar ::" samapda bass ..mujhein late ho raha hai aur naa hi mere pass tumhari phaltu party kein liye samay ..aur ye Jo tumharein tarike haina ye band Karo bhoolo mat meri ek patni hai aur main shaadishuda Hoon ..

Sampada::" ohh that behanji ..

Malhar raised his voice 

Malhar::" sampada..sambhalkar kalyani Meri patni hai .."

Sampada while making fake hurt face act like she is crying 

Sampada::" haan malhar abb tum Bhi mujhpar chilaoon ..aur yehi dekhna baaki rah Gaya hai ..pehle hi Meri shaadi too chuki hai ..Mera mangetar ..malhar mujhein chorkar Chala gaya jab ussein ye pata chala ki Meri Shaadi tumsein hone wali thi ..sabko lagata hai ki tumne mujhein chora hai to mujhmein hi koi kami hogi ..sab Meri hi Galti hai ..mujhein maar hi Jana chahiye.."

Malhar closing his eyes cool himself 

Malhar ::" acha bass ..tum roo mat ..agr meeting jaldi khAtam hogayi to main tumhein pick karlonga aur main chaloonga tumhare saath ..abb pls mujhein late ho raha hai .." 

Sampada nooded her head smilingly internally ..

On other side 

Aparna who ask Kalyani to bring her tea spits there on the floor and gets up angrily..

Aparna ::" pata nahi kaisi bahu laayein hai ..appa ko pata nahi Kya dikh Gaya tummein ..are Meri sampada ko thukara Diya aur tumhein iss Ghar ki bahu banakein sabsein badi galti ki hai unhone ..ek chai Tak banani nahi aati .." 

Kalyani::" lekin aatyaa .." 

Aparna::" jabana chalati ho mujhsein..hmm.." 

Suddenly aausaheb called kalyani in her room and she left for her room ..and sampada gives the news of going with malhar to aparna .. rolling her braids she smirkingly says 

Aparna ::" are waah..khoob achein sein Tayyar hona ..malhar ko rijhane ka ek mauka Matt chorna ..tum jaanti hona ..iss Ghar ka warris Yani malhar kein bacchein ki hi naam ye saari property jaayegi aur aausaheb ussi ka intezar kar rahi hai ..agr ISS property ki maalkin bankein raaj karna chahti Hoon to tumhi iss Ghar ka warris aausaheb ko de Doon .." 

Sampada::" aur ye kaam to main achein sein Kar sakti Hoon ..mardo ko rijhana to mujhein achein sein AATA hai .." 

They laughed while aparna smiles creepily thinking herself as a queen of this bungalow...

In aausaheb room 

Aausaheb is sitting on her chair and kalyani is standing there 

Aausaheb::" tum to jaanti hi ho.. tumhari Shaadi ko 6 mahine hone walein hai aur abb Tak to humein khushkhabari mil hi jaani chahiye thi ..par tumhara aur malhar ka rishta dekhkar aisa lagta hai ki 6 mahine to Kya humein hamarein pote ki shakal agle 6 saal bhi nhi dikhegi ..yaad rakho kalyani ek pati ko uskein kamarein main Khush uski patni hi rakhti hai ..aur agr agle 1 mahine tumne humein khushkhabari nahi sunayi to tumhari Mami kein tumhein batya hi hoga hum Kya Kar sakte hai ...ek mard ki pakar aurat kein haath main hoti hai ..agr usein Khush rakhogi aut humarein Ghar ki saari parampara manogi ..to iss Ghar pein raaj karogi aur agr aisa nahi hua ..to tum samjahdar Hoon..hamari mala ka time ho raha hai tum jaa sakti Hoon .." 

Kalyani goes from there shiveringly and locked her room..taking a book from her cupboard she cries holding it to her chest ..

Kalyani :" mere sapne to pehle hi mujhsein door ho gayein ..abb ye baccha ..hum to ek dusrein ko jaante Tak nahi ..baccha to bohot door ki baat hai .. malharji mujhein kabhi apni patni nhi swikar karenge ..abb main Kya karoon bappa .." 

                                                                                     

So how is the chapter should I continue it ...

And if you want me to continue pls give some ideas for it ...πŸ€—




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Posted: 2 years ago

Wow vanshu this story is totally different jo anupriya Kalyani side rehti thi aaj wo hi kalyani ko na pasand karti hai 

Malhar aur kalyani ka rishta ek pati patni jaise nhi hai even wo dono ek dusre ko sahi se dek ta bhi nhi hai to bacha to both dur ki baat hai 

I really don't like anupriya but Sarthak na Kalyani ki side li poor kalyani

Ya sampada ki to kabhi nhi sudere gi itna hi hai to shaadi kyu nhi ki aur kam padtha hai to ya aprna bhi hai 

Aur aao saheb ko varis chaye hi ab kya kare ki bichari kalyani?

It was awesome plzz continue this and update soon ❀️❀️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Superb Vanshu.. It was just brilliant πŸ‘

Such a different take.. 

So Rane family is rich and does a lot for the town and shows itself as a forward thinking family but in truth the elders of the famuly are very backward in their thoughts. 

AS and RS are snakes..

Vivek a guy who likes to make miney by hook or crook.

Anu is a career woman who is stressed because of AS and she is putting stress on Kalyani.. 

She is annoyed with Kalyani not being a career woman. She feels her son didn't get an equal match as lifepartner. 

Kam se kam Sarthak seems a sane person. 



Kalyani poor girl has been suffering since childhood. 

Once she was treated like a princess by her parents but adter they passed on, sge has suffered... πŸ˜­

Mama aur Mami ne use belt se maara..😑 That's so horrible... πŸ˜­

Malhar thank god is not an abusive husband but they have very formal relationship and no proper communication as husband and wife... 

But atleast he knows he is married and doesn't like sampada touching him. 


Lekin kallu bechari feels so left out in the house.. 


Aparna and Sampada.. nasty women. 


AS ko waaris chahiye from Kalyani.. Kaise hoga...looking at the formal relationship..


Please continue the story.. It's very different and nice. 


Thank you for writing Vanshu.. πŸ˜Š

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Posted: 2 years ago

Kya baat hai vanshu babe..

You are back with another dhamakedar story..

The plot looks so interesting..


There are many people who talks about women empowerment but in reality they don’t let grow women of their own family..


I really liked it..


Kalma marriage has some issue ..

And AS ko waaris chahiye hai…



Ye kaise hoga…

I want to know…

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Posted: 2 years ago

Finally aaj main reactivate ho payi.


Baaki the concept is too good Vanshu πŸ’–πŸ‘πŸ’–πŸ‘


You have raised a very important issue. In marriage, instead of love, the relationship is treated as a transaction of equal financial and educational status. There are even matrimonial sites like IITIIM matrimony, elite matrimony and I loved how realistic Anupriya's character is. Mothers of sons often seek a bride with high pay package for their sons and never think about character and nature.


Abhi ke hisaab se to Kallu is in a very weak and vulnerable state but I'm sure you'll write her transformation in a beautiful way, Malhar is also not clear and doesn't feel anything for his wife but jab aap writer ho to romance cannot be far away and AS is well AS. I'm loving the shades in Anupriya's character best.

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Posted: 2 years ago

This is brilliant vanshu 

Continue karo 

Mere pyaare kallu 

I want to see how their relationship progress and how As ka wish poore hogi 

Kaun karengi sampu ya kallu πŸ€£

I mean different perspective he 

Alag sa story he 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Alfiya I am tagging you from other account also 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Alfiya I am tagging you from other account also 

Haha I saw Beautiful update ❀😍 excited but madam update old stories and finsh before starting a new story and making us crazy for moreπŸ˜‚

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Posted: 2 years ago

Ohhh vanshu.... This is such an emotional and heart wrenching update.... Dont know how you find these ideas 


Kalma married but are not happy with their relationship πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™ 

Everyone in the family seems to be very strict except anupriya πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š  

Omg..... Her mama and mami are so cruel.... BeltπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­ 

I feel pity for her.... She lost her parents and wants to be achi and strich wali dm😍😍😍πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί 

6months of relationship and still no talks😢😢😯😯 

Kalyani kitna kuch sahegi☹️☹️☹️☹️

Malhar and sampada..... Goddd mujhe inki jodi kbhi pasand nhi thi..... 

Aparna Or sampu..... Koi muhurt nikalwao ki kb ye dono thikane par aayengiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜… 

You know I hate it the most.... Jb in-law Or kuch nhi bas apne heir ki demand krte hai..... This is the first thing I hate the most in the worldπŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’ 

I think malhat will take a stand for her..... Hope kuch bura na ho malhar ke saath 😢😢😢 


And haa definitely continue krna..... Samjhla

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Posted: 2 years ago

Update this too why do y always leaving your stories incomplete 😭😭