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The pandya family were all set to leave for bhumi puja. Finally the four brothers fulfilled their late fathers dream


The pandya’s were opening a new branch and that obviously called for celebration.


Ayy Chipkali , alag se invitation dunga kya tujhe chalne ke liye? Chal bike pe bait” shiva said


Ae markundi gay kyu jayegi Tere saath huh?” Suman questioned


Tere saath toh meri dishu jayegi” she added with a taunting smile


Shiva was left tongue tied again. He could never gather the courage to speak against his mother, but before he even tried to do so Disha sat behind him in the bike


“Maa , Raavi abh bhi Shiva ki patni hai. Toh uski haq hai shiva ke saath aane ka Gaumbi added


It’s okay Gaumbi , aap log jao. Mujhe kaam hai” saying which Raavi turns to head back inside


Raavi puja hai. Tu kaise nahi ayegi?” Dhara said


Mere hone ya na hone se waise bhi koi faraq nahi padega di” she said while eying suman and disha


Yeh hui na baat, tu aah hi maat. Koi aise musibaat ko leke shubh kaam karne jayega kya? “ suman spat more of her venom


Maa-“ shiva tried to intervene


Tu kuch nahi bolega. Peticote chaap kahinka. Ab sab Niklo jaldi , mohrat ka time hogaya hai.”


Everybody leaves reluctantly


Raavi walks towards the nothing in specific , trying to calm her soul and mind

Kya Yahi meri hehsiyat bangayi hai ab?

Kyun mujhe ek aise insaan se pyaar karwaya jo mera hi nahi hai” she said while wiping her tears


8pm


Everybody were tensed in Pandya Niwas

Raavi was nowhere to be seen and it had been more than 5-6 hours since they left for the puja


Kahan gayi hogi woh?” Shiva screamed while pacing infront of the door


Woh ajegi wapas shiva, Humesha toh wapas ajati hai” suman said


Pura Somnath dundhala mein. Kahin nahi hai meri Raavi. Yeh sab apke Wajah se hua. Na aap uski bezzati karti aur nahi woh aise mujhe chod ke chali gayi hoti” he said while breaking into sobs


Shiva , Raavi mil jayegi. Yahin kahin gayi hogi woh” added disha while holding his arm


Shiva was beyond disgusted at this woman He was married for fukcs sake


Ayy dur hatt mujhse. Jab Dekho tab chipakti rehti hai. Mere zindagi aur dil mein ek hi chipkali ke liye Jagah hai aur woh meri biwi hai Raavi Shiva Pandya.”


“Come on shiva , Tum dono ki taalaq hone wali hai” she added


“Teri awaaz mere kaano ko chubti hai chup ho ja. Meri biwi aur mere beech mein jo bhi hoga woh hum dono nipat lenge. Tujhe dakhal andaz karne ki zaroorat nahi hai samjhi” Shiva roared at her causing Disha to flinch


She stepped back


Main kal milti hoon aap sab se” she said


Wapas aane ki zaroorat nahi hai” Rishita added


Aur haan , mujhe meri Raavi bhabhi bohot Pasand hai. Unki jagah aap koshish karke bhi nahi le sakti ho” Krish said with a sarcastic smile


Main ek aur baar jake dekh ke aata hoon”


“Shiva main bhi chalta hoon tere saath”


Nahi dev , mein akele hi dundh lunga usse” Saying which he runs near his bike


Kahan chali gayi tu chipkali, dekh na Tera bhootnaat tujhe kitna yaad kar Raha hai” he said while wiping his tears


After riding for about 15-20 mins he reached the outskirts of Somnath

Near a small river he saw someone sit all curled up in a ball


Raavi?” He called out


Mera wala gundaa!!!” She said as lifted her head up in a jolt


He ran hearing her voice and took her in a hug


Raavi , tu teekh hai na?” He asked while still holding her


Mera bhootnaat agaya” she said while giggling


She was drunk , it hit him. But how ?

Raavi hates alcohol, what if someone did this to her ? All sorts of questions crept up to his mind


Raavi tune sharab pi hai?!” He asked


Zara sa jhoom loon mein , arrey tare nare na” she started singing and twirling


Baad mein jhoom lena abhi mujhe batao ki yeh sharab kyu pi” he said while holding her arm


Mera saar ghumo ghumo ho Raha hai shivaa” she said cutely


Raavi-“


Nahiii , mein Raavi nahi Teri chipkali hoon. Tu mujhe chipkali Bulata hai Raavi nahi” she cribbed


Acha teekh hai meri chipkali , ab baith ja idhar”


“Tu mujhe kyu chod Raha hai”She asked with tears threatening to leave


“Main Kahan chod Raha hoon tujhe”


Phir tune mujhe talaaq kyun diya? Kya main tujhe Aachi nahi lagti? Woh disha tujhe aachi lagti hai kya?“ she chocked while saying the last sentence


Aisi baat nahi hai Raavi”


Toh phir kaisi baat hai! Mujhe kyun tujhse pyaar hua jab tujhe main nahi pasand hoon.” She sobbed more


Shock was an understatement. She ? Loved? Him? He knew she was jealous when she saw disha sticking to him. But never did he expect that she would fall in love with him


“Bol na , kyu tujhe mein pasand nahi? Main tujhe achi nahi dikthi kya?” She asked with more tears following


Shhhh , meri chipkali aise ro nahi sakti” he said while wiping the tears with his thumb


He kept caressing her face until she stopped crying


Dekh meri Taraf” he said gently while lifting her head up


Mein tujhse dur iss liye ja Raha tha kyunki mujhe laga ki tu iss shaadi mein bandhi hui hai aur yeh ki shayad tujhe mujhse better ladk-“ his words were cut as he felt her smash her lips on his


His eyes closed on their own accord as his hands tightened their hold on her body. Shiva hadn’t reacted yet. He let her remove all her frustration , letting her bite and chew his lips. When she felt the need for air she pulled back and wiped the little drop of blood from his lip


Tu kaun hota hai yeh sab sochne ke liye huh? Aur uss disha se itna chipak kyun Raha tha tu ?” She complained with fresh tears falling


Tera naal firse chaalu hogaya. Aur main usse chipak nahi Raha tha, woh mujhse chipak rahi thi” he said


Tu mera hai” she whined


Mein Sirf aur Sirf Tera hoon” he assured


Mujhe woh disha pasand nahi” she said while hugging him


Mujhe bhi woh khaas achi nahi lagti” he said while wrapping his hands around her waist


Par Uske Baal ache hai” he said which earned him a smack on his chest


Main uske baal katke Rakh dungi” she added


They stayed in the same position until he heard her snore


Aise kaise so gayi yeh?” He laughed


Iss halaat mein usse ghar toh nahi leke ja sakta mein. “ he thought


Shiva called up the family and told them that he found Raavi and that they would be coming home tomorrow. Nobody dared to ask him the reason behind it


He lifted her in his arms and went near a tree and placed her head on his lap.


I’m sorry chipkali, tujhe kitna sataya haina Maine” he said while caressing her hair


Within no time he drifted to sleep


The sun blooms on the horizon, golden petals stretching ever outwards into the rich blue. It is the brilliant flower of the sky that warms our days. It is the invitation to a new day, that sunrise so ordinary extraordinary.


Raavi squinted her eyes as she felt the sun rays fall on her eyes


Aah” she held her head waking up shiva


Mera sarr” she complained


Muh dhole” Shiva said


Tu ? Hum yahan kab aaye? Aur mera Saar itna Dard kyun kar Raha hai?” She spoke like an express train


Tujhe kal ke baare mein kuch bhi yaad nahi hai kya?” He asked


mere sawaal ka jawab sawaal se mat de”

Kuch nahi, chal ghar chalte hai” he said while acting to be angry


Isse kya hua?” She thought


The ride back home was silent. Raavi tried her best to think of how she reached Shiva


Main mandir gaayi, phir woh juice piya aur phir uske baad mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahi Araha hai?” She thought over and over again


They reached home in 20 mins

Dhara runs and hugs her

Aise Bina bataye koi jata hai kya?“ she scolded


Bhabhi apne mere baare mein bhi nahi Socha” Krish added


I’m sorry”


Chalo andar aajo” Gaumbi said


Tum dono jake thode der aaram karo


Shiva silently goes inside with a smirk

Ab ayega maza” he thought


Shiva mein akhri baar puch rahi hoon , kya hua tha kal raat aur tujhe mein kahan mili?”


Main aur disha coffee peene Bahar Gaye the aur tab mujhe tu dikhi” he lied


Yeh bhootnaat uss Dayan ke saat coffee peene gaya tha” she thought with a sad and shocked look


“Mujhe Neend aarahi hai” she quickly said and went to lay on the bed


Mujhe bhi” he said while suppressing his laughter


Raavi thought of a list of curse words for that disha


The intoxication still not wearing off , she fell asleep. Flashes of shiva finding her , their conversation and the kiss came to her mind and she got up in a jolt and scrunched her eyes


Shiva knew she finally remembered what happened


To be sure she eyed his lips and saw the mark she left


“Yeh tere honht pe woh Nishaan kya hai?” She asked acting to be nonchalant


Ek chipkali ne kaata” he said


Her eyes shot up


Woh main- main”


“Chipkali se bakri kab bangayi tu ?” He asked


Forgetting about all embarrassment she crawls up to him and hugs him with all her might , though he was taken aback for a second he wrapped his arms around her


I love you” she whispered


I love you too chipkali” he said while pecking her lips


Before he could pull back she deepens the kiss, Shiva kisses back with equal passion

His hand cradles her cheek as her hand makes way to his hair. Shiva swipes his tongue over her lip as she opens her mouth

Their tongues fight for dominance and Raavi let shiva take the lead. They pulled back due to lack of oxygen


Humari galat femi Nashe ke wajah se shuru hui aur khatam bhi” shiva added while kissing her temple and pulling her in for another hug


Nashe ne Bana di Jodi” raavi said while giggling at her own joke


Ghadedi” he muttered

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Hey beautiful people

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I loved it Taani!!! Shivi were so cute in this, and he actually talked back to Suman.... ❤️

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Loved it Taani ❤️❤️
accha hua Raavi nahi gayi 😁

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💕🥰Beautiful OS….love this line “Humari galat femi Nashe ke wajah se shuru hui aur khatam bhi”👏

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I loved it❤️

Especially how Shiva spoke to Suman and Disha I want that in the show

This is sooo beautiful🤗

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Raavi nhi gayi🥺🤧❤️

Shiva kya bola...dil khush kr diya

It's just perfect! Loved it❤️

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Originally posted by: Kfof

Loved it Tani❤❤

I was just going to tag you baby
Kaisi hai ?❤️

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Originally posted by: hapakalanoodles

I was just going to tag you baby
Kaisi hai ?❤️

Heyaa, I am all good.💚

Tu kaisi hai?❤

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🤣 nashe ne bana di jodi....ke baad gadhedi🤣

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