Drabbles — The Marriage Chronicles | part9 on pg 10 - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Khidki


Hey!

I recognize you. :)

Glad to bump into you again.

Migrate?



That's so sweet of you krishi

There is a FF section in which after migration you can post your stories and features as a tag also.



Let me show an example

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/989


This is mine prerish FF

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

Hi, ❤️

I had read the most of your stories in Ishqbaaz Forum.😊

Loved reading both parts. ❤️Hope to read more strories from you on Ram & Priya. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Khidki


Haaaa.. dimpled.smile I recognize that and also RabbitOnSkates!

That's great .. 😃

I was active on the ATs.. and regularly followed the fanfics.. 😳

Nice to meet you here 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Please write more,there is very less content on balh 2 forum.....I really want to read more such drabbles and os ,ffs on our dear#priyam or #ramya....and you wrote wonderfully well❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

Read both the parts together🤗

Loved how you had the sarcasm & wits ingrained for both our Ram & Priya here


It was a good scene with her taking care of him by hijacking his pills & taking him out for a walk & Ram also agreeing for it😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

Hello!

Lovely drabbles @Khidki. Keep writing. Your drabbles brought a smile and made my day. Thank you.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

3 - Healthy Habit(s)


Ram stared at the wide bowl full of oats. He held the spoon and stirred it. Breakfast was the time when his appetite was at it’s peak. He had no shame in admitting that he woke up early because he looked forward to breakfast. However, things were different now.


“It’s edible,” Priya muttered sitting on the chair beside him.


She had a bowl just like his before her. She quickly took the spoon and began consuming the oats.


“Ek paratha… just one?” He pleaded looking at her.


Priya shook her head and dismissed his request.


“Yaar, how can someone have a good day after starting it with this. Main nahi kha sakta ye..” He folded his arms sitting back on his chair.


“Okay. Mat khaiye. Main Sarla aunty ko bol dungi wo karela ka juice aur lauki ka juice pack karwaa dengi.”


“Yaar, main behosh ho jaaunga.”


Priya paused and looked at him with narrowed eyes.


“Acha… acha. Okay. Khaa lunga. Don’t start lecturing.” He said, sitting upright taking back the spoon in his hand.


“Students se zyaada toh mujhe lecture deti hain" He muttered taking a bite.


“Kuch kaha aapne?”


“Nahi. Kyon? Tumne kuch suna kya?” He asked pretending to be clueless.


“Nahi.” She muttered.


“You know I was thinking...." He began when Nandini‘s voice made him stop abruptly and look the other way. His world paused for a bit as he noticed his step mother was talking to none other than Vedika.


“Give me a few minutes, I will be ready then we can go.” Nandini spoke and quickly looked at them and walked away.


“Hi, Vedika!” Priya greeted


Ram turned to look at Priya momentarily. He turned to Vedila and greeted her with a 'Hi'.


“Come sit. What would you like to have?” Priya spoke.


“I already had breakfast before leaving home. You guys carry on please.” She said, glancing at Ram awkwardly.


“Tea, coffee, or juice?”


“Nothing, Priya.”


Priya nodded and glanced at Ram. The two seemed to be sharing sharing an awkward moment.


“Aap log baat kariye Maine…” Priya was ready to excuse them.


“Arey, breakfast toh Pura Karo.” Ram said looking looking her. His hand holding hers.


She stared at him wondering why he held her hand.


“Baitho naa, please..” He said, pulling back his hand.


“You’re having oats,” Vedika pointed out surprised.


“Haan Priya ne meri nayi diet plan ki hai,” He smiled and began eating the oats.


Priya looked on amazed as he ate quietly. She was used to noticing how in Vedika's presence Ram turned into a lovesick puppy. It just didn’t settle well with her. It made her feel unwanted and disrespected.


But for the first time she felt that he was changing. Trying to give her that respect. It was not easy for him, but he was trying. He didn't talk or even look at Vedika properly.


Soon Nandini reappeared and along with Vedika she was on her way out.


“Aapne Vedu …nahi kaha,” she pointed out.


“Hmm,” he said.


Once done with breakfast, Priya picked up his empty plate in one hand just like she picked hers.


“Main… Main rakh deta hoon.” Saying that he he the plate and walked towards the kitchen.


Priya followed him, talking to herself in her mind, “Shayad line cross kar di. Mujhe nahi bolna chaiye thaa. Bura lag kaya?"


He kept the plate in the sink and walked past her. She turned to find him looking at her.


“Tumne kaha thaa naa… there’s no point holding onto past. So… try toh kar sakta hoon.” Having said that he tried to smile. “Bye!”


“Bye,” Priya replied.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

Omg it's Lovely!! ❤️❤️ Esp the ending.. that bit of "tumne kaha tha na there's no point holding onto the past . So try toh kar sakta hun!" ❤️ I can totally hear these dialogues in their voices haha. 😳


My heart is already beating fast imagining these scenarios between PriRa How beautiful are these two! ❤️❤️


Amazing amazing writing yaa! 👏👏 plz keep continuing with this series ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

Wow wow he is trying that itself makes it endearing 💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

this was absolutely

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