Amrita Pritam drabble: New beginnings

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Posted: 3 years ago
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New beginning


Hello everyone.

So I decided to write my first Amrita Pritam story here. Hope you like it.


As she began going towards the maingate of the house to welcome the New tenant her heartbeat accelerated. In the pit of herbelly she could feel something intriguing. These were her first steps.

But towards what? That was the question in Amrita's mind.

" You " she exclaimed as her eyes widened seeing the man in front of her. The nerve of this going , now he is following her . She never crossed path with such a ruthless man before him. How many times she prayed to the God to never meet him again. But time and time again their paths cross. It'sfeels like it's the destiny.

" Nakli doctor? " he asked amused and confused at the same time. Never in his life anyone had left him more amused than this woman. But look at the game of universe she always manage to stumble upon him all those time he would be in his strict "business mode" . In her face he could read an innocence which is rare in this world. Even in fear she try to be brave . Their is a warmth and kindness in her and he" hate" those things .



After an amusing welcome Pritam started to examine the house while Amrita try her best to calm her erratically beating heart . Surprisingly , baby is calm even in her this state dare to say calmer than ever. No matter how much she try she can't help but feel nervous. She looked upwards and see that goon examining the house.

Is he planning to jump off the terrace or break the door? A voice in her head asked. She shook her head and saw him looking at her with an unreadable expression. As their eyes met the realisation dawned upon her. As much she prayed for anything, this man is here to stay.


As their eyes met Pritam knew his whole "existence is in danger" because of this woman. Looking into her innocent doe eyes was the biggest mistake and he already feel like drowning.



This feels like a beginning. ......of something new.........


Thank you.

Hope you like it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it!!! 🤗

You've captured the emotions well 👏

Keep writing!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Loved it!!! 🤗

You've captured the emotions well 👏

Keep writing!

Thank you so much

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you so much

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Originally posted by: RaarA

Thank you so much

You are welcome!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Can you continue it? loved the way you’ve written it❤️

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It was so beautiful!!

Loved it!!

And keep writing

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Continue please🥺


Loved it and will love more of you could continue

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SRKian

Can you continue it? loved the way you’ve written it❤️

Thank you.

I will write more stories

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

It was so beautiful!!

Loved it!!

And keep writing

Thank you so much

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