what went wrong with pallu and mandy scenes !!!

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this track had great potential but writer failed drastically

lets just analyze this track down fall ..


1.main problem was pallu dumbness more than mandy it was shown pallu so desperate to help mandy even though he has whole lot of ppl in the family .


2.help would have limited to house not tea shop/restaurant it looked horrible ..

3.mandy openly challenging raghu that he will snatch pallu in one go

if they had shown mandy as nice guy it was better slowly turned him grey would be highlight

4.pallu constantly showing her extra caring attitude towards mandy

5. raghu stood num not even trying to find out he stood there crying this was biggest flop idea.

6.physicality of manvi --mandy hugging pallu etc...

she doesnt even shoo him for once ..yet again dumbess

7.final nail kheer kandh --mandy physical contact was biggest flop of all time and raghu watching it was the most disgusting thought process ..

after waking up pallu attitude of raghu not being there

what was writer thinking ??

aai had to guide her seriously not once she though something was offend felt sad hearing raghu was upset


which wife would do so

wife puts hubby first then rest

here pallu kept everyone first never cared hubby

8.end game forgetting award function ..

still pallu was caring about mandy and aai had to say that they will take care and she needs to go .

9. instead of saying sorry she went with justifying herself being sorry for mandy

what about raghu he got insulted in public .

pallu broke amma and raghu trust so badly it cant be redeem

10,her dialoguebazzi and her action are poles apart ..

she forgets her phone she forgets herself for mandy seva Service

were is the lady who used a pen camera to bring down sunny truth

were is the lady who went to jail along with raghu

11.pallu stood statue when sanki locked her up

were is the lady who gave him back when sanki was insulting raghu in the foot washing kandh


12.forgot to mention pallu was about to feed mandy if raghu was not at the correct time


what were makers thinking

mandy tho grey tha pallu ko dark kyoun banadi ..


pallu scene with raghu looked so fake we saw first time there was no magic left

raghu was perfect but pallu lost it thanks to writer who ruined it..


the intimacy in raghvi is lost in this horrible track


they not only wasted ashok sir talent but shivangi too



if mandy was silent obsessed person will no creepiness and no physicality things would be better uproar of fans would have never happened ..



i dont know how well pallu redeem is planned or not ya fir raat gayi backwas for pallu


raghu redemption was best in the show hoping pallu to get such redeem to do if not it wont click

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: rs-shailu29

this track had great potential but writer failed drastically

lets just analyze this track down fall ..


1.main problem was pallu dumbness more than mandy it was shown pallu so desperate to help mandy even though he has whole lot of ppl in the family .


2.help would have limited to house not tea shop/restaurant it looked horrible ..

3.mandy openly challenging raghu that he will snatch pallu in one go

if they had shown mandy as nice guy it was better slowly turned him grey would be highlight

4.pallu constantly showing her extra caring attitude towards mandy

5. raghu stood num not even trying to find out he stood there crying this was biggest flop idea.

6.physicality of manvi --mandy hugging pallu etc...

she doesnt even shoo him for once ..yet again dumbess

7.final nail kheer kandh --mandy physical contact was biggest flop of all time and raghu watching it was the most disgusting thought process ..

after waking up pallu attitude of raghu not being there

what was writer thinking ??

aai had to guide her seriously not once she though something was offend felt sad hearing raghu was upset


which wife would do so

wife puts hubby first then rest

here pallu kept everyone first never cared hubby

8.end game forgetting award function ..

still pallu was caring about mandy and aai had to say that they will take care and she needs to go .

9. instead of saying sorry she went with justifying herself being sorry for mandy

what about raghu he got insulted in public .

pallu broke amma and raghu trust so badly it cant be redeem

10,her dialoguebazzi and her action are poles apart ..

she forgets her phone she forgets herself for mandy seva Service

were is the lady who used a pen camera to bring down sunny truth

were is the lady who went to jail along with raghu

11.pallu stood statue when sanki locked her up

were is the lady who gave him back when sanki was insulting raghu in the foot washing kandh


12.forgot to mention pallu was about to feed mandy if raghu was not at the correct time


what were makers thinking

mandy tho grey tha pallu ko dark kyoun banadi ..


pallu scene with raghu looked so fake we saw first time there was no magic left

raghu was perfect but pallu lost it thanks to writer who ruined it..


the intimacy in raghvi is lost in this horrible track


they not only wasted ashok sir talent but shivangi too



if mandy was silent obsessed person will no creepiness and no physicality things would be better uproar of fans would have never happened ..



i dont know how well pallu redeem is planned or not ya fir raat gayi backwas for pallu


raghu redemption was best in the show hoping pallu to get such redeem to do if not it wont click


Yup .. I agree


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yes, absolutely agreed with all your points. It actually makes me wonder people in the creative/writing/execution team actually thought that this would work & showcased this disaster?? The worst thing that happened was the audience totally disconnected with Pallavi's actions and words. Let's see how much they can salvage, but going by the BTS updates, things are moving at jet speed I guess!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: rs-shailu29

this track had great potential but writer failed drastically

lets just analyze this track down fall ..


1.main problem was pallu dumbness more than mandy it was shown pallu so desperate to help mandy even though he has whole lot of ppl in the family .


2.help would have limited to house not tea shop/restaurant it looked horrible ..

3.mandy openly challenging raghu that he will snatch pallu in one go

if they had shown mandy as nice guy it was better slowly turned him grey would be highlight

4.pallu constantly showing her extra caring attitude towards mandy

5. raghu stood num not even trying to find out he stood there crying this was biggest flop idea.

6.physicality of manvi --mandy hugging pallu etc...

she doesnt even shoo him for once ..yet again dumbess

7.final nail kheer kandh --mandy physical contact was biggest flop of all time and raghu watching it was the most disgusting thought process ..

after waking up pallu attitude of raghu not being there

what was writer thinking ??

aai had to guide her seriously not once she though something was offend felt sad hearing raghu was upset


which wife would do so

wife puts hubby first then rest

here pallu kept everyone first never cared hubby

8.end game forgetting award function ..

still pallu was caring about mandy and aai had to say that they will take care and she needs to go .

9. instead of saying sorry she went with justifying herself being sorry for mandy

what about raghu he got insulted in public .

pallu broke amma and raghu trust so badly it cant be redeem

10,her dialoguebazzi and her action are poles apart ..

she forgets her phone she forgets herself for mandy seva Service

were is the lady who used a pen camera to bring down sunny truth

were is the lady who went to jail along with raghu

11.pallu stood statue when sanki locked her up

were is the lady who gave him back when sanki was insulting raghu in the foot washing kandh


12.forgot to mention pallu was about to feed mandy if raghu was not at the correct time


what were makers thinking

mandy tho grey tha pallu ko dark kyoun banadi ..


pallu scene with raghu looked so fake we saw first time there was no magic left

raghu was perfect but pallu lost it thanks to writer who ruined it..


the intimacy in raghvi is lost in this horrible track


they not only wasted ashok sir talent but shivangi too



if mandy was silent obsessed person will no creepiness and no physicality things would be better uproar of fans would have never happened ..



i dont know how well pallu redeem is planned or not ya fir raat gayi backwas for pallu


raghu redemption was best in the show hoping pallu to get such redeem to do if not it wont click


I don think there ll be a redemption track. Coz as it is fans r upset they ll start showing raghvi love scenes they won't watse time on these scens.


And it s better as without realisation there s no use of redemption.

Her realisation s enough n she ll be hurt beyond to undergo any redemption. So it's ok.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: rs-shailu29

this track had great potential but writer failed drastically

lets just analyze this track down fall ..


1.main problem was pallu dumbness more than mandy it was shown pallu so desperate to help mandy even though he has whole lot of ppl in the family .


2.help would have limited to house not tea shop/restaurant it looked horrible ..

3.mandy openly challenging raghu that he will snatch pallu in one go

if they had shown mandy as nice guy it was better slowly turned him grey would be highlight

4.pallu constantly showing her extra caring attitude towards mandy

5. raghu stood num not even trying to find out he stood there crying this was biggest flop idea.

6.physicality of manvi --mandy hugging pallu etc...

she doesnt even shoo him for once ..yet again dumbess

7.final nail kheer kandh --mandy physical contact was biggest flop of all time and raghu watching it was the most disgusting thought process ..

after waking up pallu attitude of raghu not being there

what was writer thinking ??

aai had to guide her seriously not once she though something was offend felt sad hearing raghu was upset


which wife would do so

wife puts hubby first then rest

here pallu kept everyone first never cared hubby

8.end game forgetting award function ..

still pallu was caring about mandy and aai had to say that they will take care and she needs to go .

9. instead of saying sorry she went with justifying herself being sorry for mandy

what about raghu he got insulted in public .

pallu broke amma and raghu trust so badly it cant be redeem

10,her dialoguebazzi and her action are poles apart ..

she forgets her phone she forgets herself for mandy seva Service

were is the lady who used a pen camera to bring down sunny truth

were is the lady who went to jail along with raghu

11.pallu stood statue when sanki locked her up

were is the lady who gave him back when sanki was insulting raghu in the foot washing kandh


12.forgot to mention pallu was about to feed mandy if raghu was not at the correct time


what were makers thinking

mandy tho grey tha pallu ko dark kyoun banadi ..


pallu scene with raghu looked so fake we saw first time there was no magic left

raghu was perfect but pallu lost it thanks to writer who ruined it..


the intimacy in raghvi is lost in this horrible track


they not only wasted ashok sir talent but shivangi too



if mandy was silent obsessed person will no creepiness and no physicality things would be better uproar of fans would have never happened ..



i dont know how well pallu redeem is planned or not ya fir raat gayi backwas for pallu


raghu redemption was best in the show hoping pallu to get such redeem to do if not it wont click


Point 1, 3 and 5 affected more

She saying in todays episode i ignored you but not feeling guilty about it i did not like it somehow...


In my opnion it started with Dr. Ramya asking her seat next to Mandar and she did it actually....same day they had confession and Raghav is hurt too but she just forgot


D house has multiple doors how can VD lock all of those


Or Pallvi was all strong to fight with / for Raghav then why suddenly she is bound by only VD Kasam and after back to back drama..


Illogical also should have some logic


In IF article, Siku talking about Dilemma and Shivangi saying that they tried different story was worst


Because dilema kab hoga jab Pallavi would have spent some time with Mandar , she has nothing to remember , cherish actually tau kaisa dilema...at least eisa kuch dikhya nahi ki dilemma ho


"Woh sat din"aur "Hum dil de chuke sanam" are beautiful dilema examples but here there was nothing as Love between Pallavi and Manadar....


She mentioned that with Mandar it was never a love tau kaisa dilema


Covering up its more irritating

Edited by Arati007 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivi.forever


I don think there ll be a redemption track. Coz as it is fans r upset they ll start showing raghvi love scenes they won't watse time on these scens.


And it s better as without realisation there s no use of redemption.

Her realisation s enough n she ll be hurt beyond to undergo any redemption. So it's ok.

i know pallu wont redeem still hoping how they gona justify her errors

hope they show us ..

she might realize when aai truth is out

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arati007


Point 1, 3 and 5 affected more

She saying in todays episode i ignored you but not feeling guilty about it i did not like it somehow...


In my opnion it started with Dr. Ramya asking her seat next to Mandar and she did it actually....same day they had confession and Raghav is hurt too but she just forgot


D house has multiple doors how can VD lock all of those


Or Pallvi was all strong to fight with / for Raghav then why suddenly she is bound by only VD Kasam and after back to back drama..


Illogical also should have some logic


In IF article, Siku talking about Dilemma and Shivangi saying that they tried different story was worst


Because dilema kab hoga jab Pallavi would have spent some time with Mandar , she has nothing to remember , cherish actually tau kaisa dilema...at least eisa kuch dikhya nahi ki dilemma ho


"Woh sat din"aur "Hum dil de chuke sanam" are beautiful dilema examples but here there was nothing as Love between Pallavi and Manadar....


She mentioned that with Mandar it was never a love tau kaisa dilema


Covering up its more irritating


exactly u penned it perfectly 🤗

i didnt see dilemma in fact pallu just went ahead neglecting raghu

Edited by rs-shailu29 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: rs-shailu29


exactly u penned it perfectly 🤗

i didnt see dilemma in fact pallu just went ahead neglecting raghu


Thanks Shailusmiley31


Neglecting, not realizing and not feeling guilty about it


And makers covering it in SM article....


Today too she was upset while folding saris what the heck.. he asking am I correct..

ok she feel Mandar appearing at award function is wahem of RR


but then she missing function and feeling bad should come from gestures not just words emotions too


Makers need good direction team, better dilogs writers......


Kuch saris wahi rah gayi....yar 2 -4 din gayi thi ya permanently...if i visit someone will take only few cloths and it was a tiney bag...


Eitna fast ho gaya kuch samazneka mauka nahi mila should have been her dilog was given to RR...


dilogs tau thik do yar....kuch dhang ke

Edited by Arati007 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arati007


Thanks Shailusmiley31


Neglecting, not realizing and not feeling guilty about it


And makers covering it in SM article....


Today too she was upset while folding saris what the heck.. he asking am I correct..

ok she feel Mandar appearing at award function is wahem of RR


but then she missing function and feeling bad should come from gestures not just words emotions too


Makers need good direction team, better dilogs writers......


Kuch saris wahi rah gayi....yar 2 -4 din gayi thi ya permanently...if i visit someone will take only few cloths and it was a tiney bag...


Eitna fast ho gaya kuch samazneka mauka nahi mila should have been her dilog was given to RR...


dilogs tau thik do yar....kuch dhang ke

exactly she always expects from raghu but she forgets that he to expects from her

raghu too sweet with her and she takes it for granted

script went wrong

dialogues are good but it doesnt suite pallu actions 🤪

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shakti1604

Yes, absolutely agreed with all your points. It actually makes me wonder people in the creative/writing/execution team actually thought that this would work & showcased this disaster?? The worst thing that happened was the audience totally disconnected with Pallavi's actions and words. Let's see how much they can salvage, but going by the BTS updates, things are moving at jet speed I guess!!


Yap and now Mandar may not be accepted with open heart by viewers too... unless his back story is revealed it will be difficult which needs to be strong.... because RR is Rich,Strong,Powerful Rowdy Don so needs equally strong opponent..and not just a kitchen drama

Edited by Arati007 - 4 years ago

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