ShiVi OS: Bole Choodiyaan

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Posted: 2 years ago


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Posted: 2 years ago

LOVE YOU FOR THIS 🥺❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Aliya, this is so good. You brought in the shirt too and they had a childhood memory surrounding the bangles.. wow- Raavi refuses to part with her bangles and her resolve at the end

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Posted: 2 years ago

Aaliya!!🤗🤗


Thank you so much for writing this! You are so quick with the writing prompt!


And now to the story, Kya bolu?! It definitely surpassed my expectations of potential bangle scene in the show. Her excitement at receiving, wearing, and not sharing chudiyan was ❤️❤️. And Shiva added Chaar Chand by wearing that black shirt. Aww their little bedroom scene took me back to the candle scene from Haveli. Lol at Raavi claiming to have scene him were the shirt before and Gaumbi revealing how careful Shiva was with the gift.


And then you beautifully weaved it with a flashback. The way chotu Shiva saves her then and carries her in his back because she's sleepy makes my heart flutter. Seems like he always had a crush on her and he was also somewhat aware of it.  Loved his dialogue about choosing the perfect gift and taking care of things received as she vows to make their marriage successful!


Beautiful this was ❤️❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Loved it 


Shiva was adorable making sure that shirt doesn't get dirty


Raavi not sharing bangles. 


Krish as usual putting tadka in a os and making it even better. 


Loved it ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Beautiful os 😍😍😍 loved it ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

This is soo beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

Raavi giving it back to the aunty😎

Shiva gifting her bangles😍

The childhood connection ❤️

Plzz write more, I loved loved it.😍

Why can't the CVs explorer the depth of their story? I hope something like this happens in the show.🥺

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Posted: 2 years ago

Aliyaaaa 🤗🤗

I can't explain how mushy and terrific is this! ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

woah!! this is beautiful. loved it❤️🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago

Aalu... This was sooo good ❤️ Everything tied in together so beautifully- The gifts, the care and happiness for the gifts, and the flashback scene making the gift that much more special. Fantastic job ❤️

And they managed to confuse Dhara- she will eat Gaumbi's head all noghth trying to fogure out when she got that shirt 🤣