Part 5
The children's Park scene of Manik, Ragini, & Prem was cute. The song sequence is very nice. The bathroom scene of Manik & Ragini was funny. In
In part 6, it was nice to see Ragini saving the situation while Prem was speeding his vehicle. Glad that Manik promised Ragini that he wouldn't speed again.
Thanks a lot.in the last comment by mistake you wrote prem instead of manik.
Originally posted by: kavitha_r
Part 5 & 5The children Park scene of Manik, Ragini, & Prem was cute.The song sequence is very nice. The bathroom scene of Manik & Ragini was funny.In Part 6, it was nice to see Ragini saving the situation while Prem was speeding his vehicle. Glad that Prem promising Ragini that he won't speed again.
Thanks a lot friends 4 supporting me in this short journey.
plz give a detailed comment on the last part.
plz write ur favourite scenes,favourite character n why u liked that character.
Ragini went to a mall.There she bumped into someone.
She was shocked to see that person.It was Kavya.
Ragini:Kavya!
Kavya saw Ragini's mangalsuthra and sindoor.
Kavya:You are married?
Ragini:Yes.I got my best friend Manik as my husband.I don't have to snatch your Laksh from you.So don't accuse me again.
Kavya became dull.
Kavya:You are very nice Ragini.That's why despite of the pain we gave you,you are happy now in your life.But God punished me.
Ragini:What happened?
Kavya:I told Laksh that you tried to kill me.But he did not believe me.
Flash back....
Laksh:How could you think that I will believe that Ragini is a criminal?She is an Angel.She can't even think of hurting anyone.
Kavya became upset.
Kavya:Laksh,I am saying the truth.
Laksh:How shameless you are to lie like this!Enough Kavya.Your family will believe your lies as they hate Ragini.But I will not believe you.
Kavya became upset.
Present...
Ragini was shocked.
Kavya:Please forgive me Ragini.
Ragini:I have forgiven you Kavya as you are my sister.
Kavya was relieved.
Kavya:Then you please come home once.
Ragini:No Kavya.I can't.I have forgiven you all.But i can't forget what you all did to me.So I don't want to visit you all.
Kavya became upset.
To their shock Laksh also reached there.
Laksh was also stunned to see them.
Laksh:Ragini!
Ragini:Namaste Laksh.
Laksh:You are alright?I enquired about your whereabouts.But I could not find you.I am glad that finally I found you.This cruel woman destroyed your life.
Ragini:No Laksh.Kavya has not destroyed my life.Since Kavya kicked me out only I met my soulmate..my Manik.I am married to him.
Laksh got stunned.
Slowly he smiled painfully.
Laksh:I am happy that you found your soulmate Ragini.
Ragini smiled.
Ragini:Ok.I need to leave now.Bye.
Laksh-Kavya:Bye.
Ragini went away.
Kavya looked at Laksh:Laksh,please give me one more chance.
Laksh:After all this,do you expect me to love you?Never.I can never forgive you.
Kavya:Laksh!
Laksh:I hate you and I don't want to see you again.
He walked away leaving Kavya in pain.
Ragini was walking on the road.Some dirty goons surrounded her.
"Hey beauty...spend time with us".
Ragini pushed them and walked forward.But they pulled her close.
"How can you leave us and go beauty?"
Ragini got scared. Manik who came that way by car saw this with a shock and got out of the car.He came near them.Ragini was relieved seeing him.He started punching them.They too punched him.Ragini rang up police.The police came and took the goons with them.
Manik:Chill Ragini.You are safe now.
Suddenly she embraced him.Manik was stunned.Slowly he embraced her back.
Tenu itna main pyaar karaan
Ek pal vich sau baar karaan
Tu jaave je mainu chhad ke
She was crying:I got scared Manik.When they were hurting you I could feel your pain.I don't know why.I really felt hurt.
Maut da intezaar karaan
Ke tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
She cupped his face in her hands:I got scared whether i will lose you.
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake
Seeing her tears his eyes became teary and turned back to hide his tears.Ragini embraced him from behind.
Ragini:I don't want to lose you Manik.
Ke tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake
Manik could not control his tears.
Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan tu
hai toh hai isme zindagi
Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan tu
hai toh hai isme zindagi
Ab mujhko jaana hai kahaan ke
tu hi safar hai aakhiri
He looked at her.
Ke tere bina jeena mumkin nahin
Na dena kabhi mujhko tu faasley
They shared an emotional eye lock.
Main tujhko kitna chahti hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake
Suddenly Ragini saw injuries on his hand.She caressed his wound softly.
Manik:Aah..
Ragini:You feel pain?I am sorry Manik.
Tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake
She opened her bag and took an ointment.She applied it on his wounds.
Aankhon ki hai yeh khwahishein
Ki chehre se teri na hatein
Manik:More than me you seemed to feel pain about my wounds.Why Ragini?
Ragini looked at him silently.
Neendon mein meri bas tere
Khwabon ne li hai karwatein
Suddenly he saw scratches on her hand.
Manik:Those dirty guys hurt you.How dare they?
He took the ointment and applied it there.
Ki teri ore mujhko leke chalein
Ye duniya bhar ke sab raaste
Ragini:You also have more pain than me though i am the who got hurt.Why Manik?
Manik looked at her silently.
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake
Ragini:Why are you not saying anything Manik?
They shared an emotional eye lock.
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake
He moved towards her and pulled her closer passionately.
Ragini’s heart beat fast.
Manik:.With you I feel heavenly happiness.I did not understand why my heart beat faster whenever you are near me.I did not understand why I was not able to see anything else when you were near me.But now I realize why.Because I love you Ragini.
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake
She became emotional.She smiled emotionally.
Ragini:I also love you Manik.
Manik smiled happily.
Ke tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake
Manik:You are the most beautiful thing happened to me.Your place in my heart is so special that I cannot explain it.
Ragini smiled:Now you are my life Manik.I cannot live without you.
Manik caressed her face emotional:Even I cannot imagine my life without you even for a second.
Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan tu
hai toh hai isme zindagi
Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan tu
hai toh hai isme zindagi
Ab mujhko jaana hai kahaan ke
tu hi safar hai aakhiri
They shared an emotional eye lock and embraced each other.
Tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake(Aircraft).
Years passed by...
Now Manik and Ragini's life is blissful.They have not only Prem,but also their little daughter Niyati.
Prem is a 9 year old boy now who is the dearest brother of Niyati.Niyati is a naughty girl who imitates Ragini's every facial expressions which makes Manik and Prem laugh.
(Credit to the original editor)
Manik,Ragini,Prem and Niyati lived happily.
The End
Surprisingly Kavya met Ragini.
Nice to see Kavya apologizing to Ragini and asking her to visit them.
Kavya telling Ragini that she forgave them but cannot forget what they did to her was natural as there are some unforgettable incidences.
Nice to see Laksh happy for Ragini settling in her life.
Sad that Laksh broke all ties with Kavya and left.
Manik saving Ragini from the goons is passionate.
I loved Manik and Ragini, tending the wounds of each other.
Manigini love confession was romantic.
My fav couple: I loved all couples.
I love all scenes
I like the character of Manik and Ragini.
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