The bare back pt 3 continued : fatejo os

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Posted: 6 days ago

Holding the glasses of lassi 

Dada happily announced to the first step of victory

 toast to

Grandsom fateh  and his beloved wife tejo

The masterninds revealed

Fatehs grand parents were behind the wonderful journey of his lust 

A flash back 3 days ago:

Dada and dadi were having their evening tea as usual at 5pm in the garden enjoying the fresh breeze

They were annoyed and upset with their grandkids fate

 First simran then fateh

Dadi was terribly hurt

What wrong have we done for such punishments?

What will happen after we die?

Dada frowned as well leaning against his chair putting down the cup of tea on the small white glass tea table

What can we do ?

Dadi continued

Fateh is in a bad shape. He is seeing jasmin everywhere. 

We cant let him be like that , need to do something about it

Dada nodded in agreement 

They were thinking hard of a solution sitting there for approximately half hour and finally dadi said shes got an idea thanks to all those indian tv serials she watch regularly ,

Dada excitedly

What is it tell me quick

Dadi a little worried 

Not sure if it will work or not but i can guarantee it might

A little complicated because of fatehs obsession for jasmin

Not sure if it will work but we can try

Dada was puzzled and restless

Arey bolo bhi 

Dadi then explained that fatehs delusional world of jasmin can be destroyed if the same delusioms he starts having for tejo

Dada frowned

What are u talking about ? To replace with tejo ?

That guy is crazy for jasmin like hell

Dadi interrupted 

Thats why and what if that same craziness he feels for tejo ?

Dada was still confused

How are we going to bring the turnaround in him instantly ? 

That he craves for tejo instead

Dadi smiles spilling out her master plan and dada was listening patiently

Fateh is young , jawani ka josh and we make full use of that advantage. To fall in love wilth tejo will take ages god knows when and we dont have much time. We are old now, at lesst we could die peacefully thinking we united our grand kids, 

She continued sayimg 

Create a lust in him for tejo take the short cut route

Their friendship has been destroyed in the flames of the mandap and tejo is facing fatehs wrath of humiliation for no reason

Dada knew something triggered her to say that. Married all these years they share such a lovely strong bond and connections

Even dadi understood his expressions well

Heavenly made jodi naturally god gifted connections

Dadi asked him with a wide smile

What lured fateh towards jasmin

Dada replied instantly smiling as well

Her beauty nothing else

Dadi continued laughing

Beauty without brains 

Dada sighed 

Only if he had fallen for tejo instead

Beautiful polite respectful and with brains

Dadi smiled 

Still n4ever too late

Dada said lets give it a try

The next morning they made their way

 to a boutique to purchase her a red backless salwar kaneez giving excuses to family members of visiting a close dear friend

Dada said he will handle kushbeer and gurpreet if the need comes just in case they interefered, otherwise its a secret,

So mission to lure fateh towards tejo has already takem place


Tejo was reluctant to accept that salwar kameez looking at the backless design

Dadi persuaded with some emotional atyachar if you ever loved me as your dadi you will wear it. Take it as my last wish before i die and all that . Full powerful emotional atyachar with some crocodile tears to add as a garam masala for the fateh ki lust ki briyani that she was preparing, full desi tadka

Dada was grinning

Is budhiya key agey filmstar bhi fail

Finally tejo give in after all the love she got from that fabulous actress of 21st century and thought perhaps this is the way i could thank her and God forbid  if anything happens to this beloved grandma she will not be able to forgive herself

The first step of the plan work 

Now the second step

Sent fateh to the room when she will be dressing so she will get some help and munda saada jawani ki josh mey phislega and hosh kho bethey ga biwi ka bare back dekh ker

Supet brilliant  dadi , thanks to indian tv serials

Two coconuts on the floor

Shubh karya for fateh lust journey 

Execution of plan taken place the next morning itself  

Background music  of the famous english serial mission impossible

Dadi hiding outside peeping through the glass window seeing tejo coming out of the shower

Quickly signalled thumbs up from the  staircase to dada seated in the living room

Khushbeer and fateh were about to take a leave for fatehs practice with his new trainer when dada stopped them saying

Fateh i misplaced my reading  glasses pls check if  its in your room

Fateh ran up to his room 

Dadi hid waited till he goes in and tejo was strughling with the strings

Dadi said i knew it sweeti pie terey bas ki baat nehin. Tu fikar na kar soniye mera pota gabru jawan is coming  to help you and you knock out the senses in him

She was praying

Wahey guru pls do some miracle

And it worked

Maa da laadla bigad geya


While they were enjoying sipping that fresh mango flavoured lassi they laughed on the thought of fateh purchasing not one or two but twenty backless suits

Munda kuch ziada phislgeya


That night tejo slept on the coach in their bedroom still angry with fateh

He was watching her sleeping 

Was tired after the six hours shopping in the mall

Looking out for the ones which has more centimetres wider back less in width and lenght so he coukd see the beautiful skin and perhaps be able to feel it as well

He was devising his own evil plans on how to get close to that bare back

That was the second night in a row that he did not for once think about jasmin

He was feeling good and relieved from all pains

Finally yawned looked at tejo and smiled mischiefly

Oi biwi kal tujhey betaunga jab teri phirsey dor bandu ga

Bach key kahan jaigi

Tu dupatta sey cover kar jo mar ji kar dekh kar hi rahunga

And closed his heavy eye lids


Little did he know there were two more sherlock homes next door with their plotting mission

Dada and dadi were making more plans 




To be continued

Edited by Aniash - 6 days ago
Posted: 6 days ago

I enjoy reading parts of this story! 

Posted: 6 days ago

Wow dada and dadi love them they are fabulous 

Posted: 6 days ago

OMG!! This is so much fun!smiley36smiley27

I loved it! Eagerly waiting for the next part now!smiley36

Posted: 6 days ago

Oh dear, this is such a fun read! Perfect dose of humor and romance sprinkled. This week’s episodes were so boring, I skipped them all but reading your stories brings some much required comic relief. Looking forward to reading the next installment, yeh dada dadi apna pura jeevan ka gyan use kar rahe hai, can’t imagine what they did in their younger days! smiley43


Btw, here’s a small request- since this series is evolving and will have more parts, can you post them all under one post as a TS/SS. That way, all the parts will be under roof and an index can be maintained. Otherwise, people will have a hard time looking for all the previous parts on the forum.

Posted: 6 days ago

Super hilarioussmiley32smiley32smiley32

Loved it all the waysmiley4

Jasmine brainless beautysmiley37smiley37and Tejo beauty with brainsmiley14

Dada and dadiji are geniussmiley20

Dadi toh smart actress nikalismiley10emotional karke Tejo ko dress pehene k liye raji kiya and Dada ne fateh ko bhej diya

Their plan worked out apna gabru jawan Fateh to fisal gayasmiley37now he is dreaming about his wife's beautiful back and thinking ways to reach it.smiley37smiley37munda kick out ho gaya smiley37smiley37smiley3725 backless dress purchased smiley36

But Tejo shifted on sofasmiley6poor boismiley19sapne hi reh gaye

What will fateh do now and how Dada dadi will help him

They are love guru 

Between did CV read your funshot ? They showed bare back of tejo sadly nothing happened like your ossmiley6

Good you posted this at least we will get good fatejo scene here with humor and romance ka tadka 

Thanks for posting this. Waiting for next parts

Where are the other parts please make index and post all parts link there

Posted: 6 days ago
Originally posted by Marathi_Mulgi


Super hilarioussmiley32smiley32smiley32

Loved it all the waysmiley4

Jasmine brainless beautysmiley37smiley37and Tejo beauty with brainsmiley14

Dada and dadiji are geniussmiley20

Dadi toh smart actress nikalismiley10emotional karke Tejo ko dress pehene k liye raji kiya and Dada ne fateh ko bhej diya

Their plan worked out apna gabru jawan Fateh to fisal gayasmiley37now he is dreaming about his wife's beautiful back and thinking ways to reach it.smiley37smiley37munda kick out ho gaya smiley37smiley37smiley3725 backless dress purchased smiley36

But Tejo shifted on sofasmiley6poor boismiley19sapne hi reh gaye

What will fateh do now and how Dada dadi will help him

They are love guru 

Between did CV read your funshot ? They showed bare back of tejo sadly nothing happened like your ossmiley6

Good you posted this at least we will get good fatejo scene here with humor and romance ka tadka 

Thanks for posting this. Waiting for next parts

Where are the other parts please make index and post all parts link there


Marathi mulgi and villete


Only 4 series so far

U just search the titles

Fatejo bare back 

Fatejo bare back 2 

Fatejo bare back 3

Fatejo bare back 4


I wont be producing many series

These series just on how they are gettng closer  but not  their love journey that can get it on screen soon


Story is frustrating thats why i came up with the series only for time being 

Edited by Aniash - 6 days ago
Posted: 5 days ago
Originally posted by Aniash



Marathi mulgi and villete


Only 4 series so far

U just search the titles

Fatejo bare back 

Fatejo bare back 2 

Fatejo bare back 3

Fatejo bare back 4


I wont be producing many series

These series just on how they are gettng closer  but not  their love journey that can get it on screen soon


Story is frustrating thats why i came up with the series only for time being 

Thanks for writing them they are fun relief when episode are not good.

But will suggest to make index of all your fatejo writing


Udariyaan 


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