RaghVi TS : Amnesia - (Completed) - Page 2

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: chat_3

Aww not a sad ending. I like the parallel flow of present and flashback in the story seamlessly. πŸ‘πŸΌ

Thanks for your valuable comment! Glad you liked it😊. And about the ending, let's see πŸ˜‰πŸ’™

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Me000w

Welcome to the forum πŸ€—

Such a poignant, beautiful piece πŸ‘

Glad you liked it! I didn't expect that it would be liked so muchπŸ˜„πŸ’™

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Trista101

Thanks for the feedback! I have not thought of continuing this OS yet heheπŸ˜…. But lets seeπŸ˜πŸ’™

no yar plz it's a request make it ts nd end on a happy note 

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Posted: 2 years ago

Tanvi congratulations on your first os.

this is a cliffhanger and do consider to continue this please

this os was really good--especially how Pallavi had found someone special to share her life with

one doubt--why didn't Raghav go back to his own house if he found Farhad, Amma and Kirti

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Tanvi congratulations on your first os.

this is a cliffhanger and do consider to continue this please

this os was really good--especially how Pallavi had found someone special to share her life with

one doubt--why didn't Raghav go back to his own house if he found Farhad, Amma and Kirti

Thanks a lot! I was thinking of leaving this OS here but now, I'm doubting my decisions heheπŸ˜….

Since I am thinking of continuing it, why not clear your doubts in the next update?πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ’™πŸ’™

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Posted: 2 years ago

Welcome to the forum Tanvi! πŸ€—

Par aapne to pehle OS mein hi dil tod diya πŸ₯Ί Koi nahi, I love poignant pieces like this β€οΈ Very touching!

Do write more πŸ€—

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Bee222

Welcome to the forum Tanvi! πŸ€—

Par aapne to pehle OS mein hi dil tod diya πŸ₯Ί Koi nahi, I love poignant pieces like this β€οΈ Very touching!

Do write more πŸ€—

Thanks for the welcome! Even I am a fan of poignant pieces lmaoπŸ˜‚

Will do!πŸ˜†β€οΈ

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Posted: 2 years ago

Loved this one. Really want to know what happens next. And also how and why he got into an accident in the first place. If he was a rich one, how come his family didn't find him for 6 months. And how did Farhad find them finally.. And why is Farhad calling her Vahini..so many questions..so please don't stop here πŸ™‚

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Trista101

Thanks a lot! I was thinking of leaving this OS here but now, I'm doubting my decisions heheπŸ˜….

Since I am thinking of continuing it, why not clear your doubts in the next update?πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ’™πŸ’™

Thanks a lot TanviπŸ€—

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Posted: 2 years ago

this is beautiful wow

i totally loved this

poor pallavi how heartbroken she will be

please do continue

bye sumi