Thanks for your valuable comment! Glad you liked itπ. And about the ending, let's see ππAww not a sad ending. I like the parallel flow of present and flashback in the story seamlessly. ππΌ
Thanks for your valuable comment! Glad you liked itπ. And about the ending, let's see ππAww not a sad ending. I like the parallel flow of present and flashback in the story seamlessly. ππΌ
Glad you liked it! I didn't expect that it would be liked so muchππ
no yar plz it's a request make it ts nd end on a happy noteOriginally posted by: Trista101
Thanks for the feedback! I have not thought of continuing this OS yet heheπ . But lets seeππ
Tanvi congratulations on your first os.
this is a cliffhanger and do consider to continue this please
this os was really good--especially how Pallavi had found someone special to share her life with
one doubt--why didn't Raghav go back to his own house if he found Farhad, Amma and Kirti
Thanks a lot! I was thinking of leaving this OS here but now, I'm doubting my decisions heheπ .Originally posted by: ReemShah
Tanvi congratulations on your first os.
this is a cliffhanger and do consider to continue this please
this os was really good--especially how Pallavi had found someone special to share her life with
one doubt--why didn't Raghav go back to his own house if he found Farhad, Amma and Kirti
Since I am thinking of continuing it, why not clear your doubts in the next update?ππππ
Welcome to the forum Tanvi! π€
Par aapne to pehle OS mein hi dil tod diya π₯Ί Koi nahi, I love poignant pieces like this β€οΈ Very touching!
Do write more π€
Thanks for the welcome! Even I am a fan of poignant pieces lmaoπWelcome to the forum Tanvi! π€
Par aapne to pehle OS mein hi dil tod diya π₯Ί Koi nahi, I love poignant pieces like this β€οΈ Very touching!
Do write more π€
Will do!πβ€οΈ
Loved this one. Really want to know what happens next. And also how and why he got into an accident in the first place. If he was a rich one, how come his family didn't find him for 6 months. And how did Farhad find them finally.. And why is Farhad calling her Vahini..so many questions..so please don't stop here π
Originally posted by: Trista101
Thanks a lot! I was thinking of leaving this OS here but now, I'm doubting my decisions heheπ .
Since I am thinking of continuing it, why not clear your doubts in the next update?ππππ
Thanks a lot Tanviπ€
this is beautiful wow
i totally loved this
poor pallavi how heartbroken she will be
please do continue
bye sumi
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