Maneet FF - Mere Brother ki Dulhan... - Page 5

Posted: 2 years ago

           Part - 41


 


That evening...


Maan comes to the OH to see Geet...


Brij sees Maan entering the Oh...


He follows him...


As usual Maan Geet ke kamre mein hi jaatha...


Brij gets very angry...


Ye Geet ke kamre mein kya karne jaa raha hai?


Maan andar jaakke darwaza band kartha...


Brij runs to stop him...


But Meera who had been following him stops him...


Meera: Brij, ye tum kya kar rahe ho?


Brij: Meera, woh...Maan Singh yahan aaya hai


Meera: haan, meinne bhi dekha hai ussko


Brij: woh Geet ke kamre mein chala gaya


Meera: toh?


Brij: Meera, Geet meri behen hai


Meera: ye usska ghar hai, woh jahan bhi jaasaktha


Brij: kya?


Meera: haan, tum bhool gaye ho kya? hum yahan ke mehmaan hai


Brij: ye ghar usska hoga par Geet abhi bhi meri behen hai


Meera: aur Geet usski honewali biwi bhi hai


Brij: par ab tak shadhi nahi hui haina?


Meera: tum kyun itna chintha katrthe ho? Geet Maan ko bahut pyaar karthi hai


Brij: woh toh pagal ho gayi hai


Meera: nahi, mujhe lagtha hai ki tum pagal ho gaye ho


Brij: kya?


Meera: tumne dekha nahi Geet ke aakhon mein Maan ke liye pyaar?


Brij: ye sab bakwaas hai


Meera: toh hummara pyaar bhi bakwaas hai kya?


Brij: hum ek dusre ko 20 saal se jaanthe hai


Meera: 20 saal ho ya 20 din? Pyaar toh pyaar hi hotha haina


Brij: tum kehna kya chahathi ho?


Meera: Geet bahut kush hai yahan, tum usski kushi ko mat cheeno


Brij: tum kuch nahi jaanthi, hatto


Geet ke kamre ke bahar itna tamasha ho raha hai aur andar Maneet apne duniya mein kho gaye hai...


Geet: Maan, aap aagaye


Geet welcomes Maan with a jadu ki jappi...


Maan is surprised...


Maan: Geet, tum toh aaj bahtu kush dikhthi ho, hamesha mujhe bagaathe rehthi ho, aaj kya hua?


Geet: aaj mein bahut bahut kush hoon


Maan: woh toh mein bhi dekh saktha hoon, tummare bhai ke aane se itni kushi hui haian?


Geet: haan, aur mere sapna bhi sach ho raha hai, haina?


Maan: kaisa sapna?


Geet: Maan, aap bhool gaye ho kya?


Maan: Geet, mein tummare sapne ko kaise bhool saktha?


Maan gets closer...


Geet: hare, Maan, mazak mat karo


Maan: Geet, ye tera sapna hai, koi mazak kaise ho saktha?


Geet: ye nahi, woh Rajkumarwala sapna


Maan laughs out loud...


Ye sunkke Brij ka khoon ubal raha hoga...


Maan: Geet, aaise sapne toh kahaaniyan mein hi sach hothe hai


Geet: nahi nahi, mujhe toh apna Rajkumar milgaya hai


Maan: toh mein Rajkumar lagtha hoon?


Maan gets even closer...



Geet: abhi nahi

 

Maan: kya?


Geet: pehle jaakke godhe lekhe aao


Maan: Geet, ye Delhi hai, yahan ka traffic mein godha darkke bhaag jayega


Geet: mein kuch nahi jaanthi, aap kal safed godhe mein aakke mujhe lekhe jaana, warna mein ye shadhi nahi karoongi


Maan: mujhse shadhi nahi karogi?


Geet: nahi


Maan: toh teek hai, mujhe bhi tumse shadhi nahi karni


Geet: kya? Maan singh kkurana ek godhe ke liye apne shadhi ko rokhega?



 

Maan: aaj tum godha maangthi ho, kal kya patha ki tum kya maangoge? Agar shadhi ke din tum asli rajkumar maangthi toh mein kahan se lekhe aaoon?


Geet: mera Rajkumar mere paas hi hai


Geet goes and hugs him...


Maan: Geet, godha bhi mjilgaya. Woh bhi safed godha, ye dekho, Maan shows a picture in his mobile


Geet is very excited...: sachi? Aap bahut achche ho


Geet kisse his cheeks...


Maan: bas itna hi?


Maan looks at her in disappointment...


Geet: haan, picture ke liye itna hi milega, kal aap uss godhe mein aakke mujhe lekhe jao, aur phir aapko kaun rokh saktha?


Maan: achcha. toh tum issiliye godha maangthi ho?


Maan looks at her and winks...


Geet blushes...


Brij knocks the door...


Maan: hare Geet, tum toh teek kehthi ho, humme na, uss godhe mein beitkke kahin dhoor chale jaan achahiye, jahan sirf tum ho aur mein hoon, aur koi nahi disturb karein


Geet: haan haan, kal ki baat kal karenge, ab hatto, mein dekhthi hoon ki kaun hai?


Maan catches hold of her and doesn't leave her...


Geet: Maan chodo mujhe


Brij knocks the door harder...


Brij: Geeet


Geet: veerji?


Geet pushes Maan and opens the door...


Maan stares him and leaves...


Brij: Geet, ye yahan kyun aaya tha?


Geet ko patha nahi kya kahe...


Geet: woh...woh toh bas yuhi aaye the


Meera: Brij, chalo, hum chalthe hai, ye kaise ulta seedha sawaal karthe ho?


Brij: Geet, jawab do


Meera: Brij, ab tum chalthe ho ya nahi


Meera tries to take him away...


Geet: woh... veerji mere sapne toh sach honewale hai


Brij: Geet, ye haqeeqat hai, sapna nahi, tum kab apne sapne ki duniya se bahar aaogi? Sach ko dekho Geet, ye Maan uss Dev ka bhai hai



 

Geet: veerji, yahi mere Rajkumar hai, mere sapnon ka Rajkumar



 

Brij: Geet, asli zindagi mein koi Rajkumar safed godhe mein nahi aayega aur tujhe utakke nahi jayega


Geet: nahi veerji, kal dekhiye mere sapnon ka Rajkumar safed godhe mein aakke mujhe zaroor utaakke lejayega, Maan toh ussi kabar dene aaye the, godha bhi milgaya


Meera: hayeee, kitna Romantic? Geet tum bahut lucky ho, tummare Maan tummare liye godhe lekhe aayenge, par tummare bhai ne toh mujhe phaithal 10 10 KM lekhe gayae tha, woh bhi koi jungle ke rasthe mein, mein toh shadhi ke waqt behosh ho gayi thi


Brij: Meera, tumme toh kush hona chahiye ki meinne tujhe uss Dev se bachaya tha


Meera: aur bechari Geet pasgayi


Geet: hare, chodo usskke baat, agar Dev nahi hotha toh shayad mujhe Maan bhi nahi milthe, haina?


Meera: Geet, tum bahut achchi ho, issiliye tumme sab kuch achcha hi hoga


Meera hugs Geet...


Brij leaves as no one is listening to him...


 

Posted: 2 years ago

                    ' Part - 42


 


 Next day...all the ceremonies begin...


Haldhi shuru hothi...


Maan has refused to attend haldhi...he doesn't like all this...


He would only come to the mandap...


Geet ko ye baat patha chaltha...


No haldhi?


Geet is disappointed...


Ab Geet Maan ko aaise apne mann marzi nahi karne degi, she is now his wife, haina?


Let me show my power...


Ab mujhe bhi apna haq ko isstamaal karna padega, haina babaji?


Ye MSK hai toh mein Bhi Geet MSK hoon, haina?


Geet haldhi lekhe seedhe Maan se milne usska kamre mein jaathi...


Maan has just come out of his shower...


Geet opens the door ...it's not locked...


Maan had left it open for his Mishty...


waise bhi Geet ke alawa kissi ka himmat hotha hai aaise Maan ke kamre ke andar gussne ka?


Maan ghar pe hotha toh koi Maan ke kamre ki taraf dekhtha bhi nahi...


Geet Maan ke peeche jaakke kadhi hothi...


Maan looks at her in the mirror and smiles...


Maan: tum yahan kaise?


Geet: kyun mein nahi aasakthi hoon kya?


Geet haldhi ko apne peeche chupakke rakthi...


Maan: kal toh bhaag gayi, aaj kya hua?


Geet Maan ke samne aathi...


Maan looks at her...she is looking gorgeous...


Actually she is glowing because of the happy occasion...


Geet Maan ke chehre pe haldhi lagathi...


Maan smiles...Maan ne kushi kushi haldhi lagali, waise issi ka intrezaar tha...


Geet is surprised...


She thought Maan would get angry...


But Maan is looking very happy...


Maan: dekha? Kaise tum kudh mere paas aagayi


Geet: kya?


Maan: haan Geet. Mujhe patha tha ki jab tumme patha chalega ki meinne haldhi mein shamil hone ke liye manna kardhi toh tum zaroor mere paas aaoge


Geet: toh aaisi baat hai?


Geet backs off...


Maan Geet ke haath se haldhi lekhe Geet ko lagatha...


Geet sharmathi...


Maan: Geet, ye kya hai?


Geet: kya hai?


Maan: tumne galthi se lal mirch powder toh nahi lekhe aayi?


Geet: kya? Meinne toh haldhi hi laya tha


Geet looks at her face in the mirror...


Geet ke chehre pe toh haldhi hi hai...


Maan gives a killer look...


Geet aur sharmathi...


Maan: toh tera chehra itna laal kyun ho gaya?


Geet nazar jhugathi...


Maan lifts her chin...


Maneet eyelock...mahi...


Geet pushes him off and tries to run away...


Maan holds her back...


Maan: Geet, aaj toh tum mujhse bach nahi jaasakthi


Geet sharmathiii


Maan: aaj se tum meri ho, tum chahe toh bhi aaise bhaag nahi sakthi, samji tum?


Geet: mein bhaagna bhi nahi chahathi


Maan: achcha?


Geet: koi apnon se kyun bhaagega?


Maan: toh ab mein bhi tera hogaya hoon?


Geet: aap toh hamesha mere hi ho


Geet goes and hugs him...



Maneet passionate hug...mahi...

 

After Haldhi it's baraat time...



Maan godhe mein beitkke aatha...

 

Geet is waiting in the balcony...


She calls Maan...


Geet: toh mera rajkumar aagye?


Maan: haan Geet, tum tayaar raho


Geet: mein toh kab se intrezaar kar rahi hoon


Maan: achcha?


Geet: haan, aur mein kaise deikhthi hoon


Maan: tum rukho Geet, mein yahan se teek se nahi dekh saktha


Geet: nahi dekh sakthe?


Geet comes down running...


Dadi: hare Geet bete, sambalkke


Maan bhi andar aatha...


Geet stops seeing Maan...


Maan signals that she looks perfect...


Geet blushes...



Meera comes and takes her back to her room...

 

Meera: hare Geet, itna bhi kya jaldhi hai? pehle shadhi toh hone do


Geet sharmathi...


Meera: waise Geet, aaj toh sare ladhkiyan tummare Rajkumar ke sapne mein hi rehthe honge


Geet: kya? woh sirf mere Rajkumar hai, sabko apne aakhen band rakhne ko kaho


Meera: itna achcha Rajkumar ko kaun nahi chahega?


Geet: Meera, woh na tummare bhai hai, samjji tum?


Meera: haan haan, Maan sirf tere hai, ab kush?


Meera nakli gussa karthi...


Geet: haan, Maan hamesha Geet ka hai


Dadi comes...


Dadi: Geet bete, aap kahan bhaag rahe the?


Geet: woh...Dadi


Meera: Dadiji Geet toh mujhe dhoondh rahi thi, haina Geet


Meera winks...


Geet: haaan, kahan chali gayi tu?


Meera: ab toh aagayi hoona, ab tumme chodkke tabhi jaoongi jab Maanji ke haath tummare haath saupthe


Dadi: tum donno bi na, jaldhi tayaar ho jayiye, panditji bhulathe hi honge


Meera: teek hai Dadiji


Dadi: Geet, aap toh aaj aasmaan ki pari lagthe hai, kahin nazar na lag jaye


Meera: aur kissi ka nazar nahi toh bhi Maanjii ka nazar jaroor lagega, haina Geet?


Geet: Meera chup kar


Meera: mein toh chup ho jaathi par tum aaise hi kissi ko chup nahi kar sakthi


Dai smiles...


Dadi : toh tum donno batein karo, mein chalthi hoon


Geet ka phone rings...


It's Maan...


Meera: meinne kaha na? ab tum inkko keise chup karoge?


Geet: tum jao abhi


Meera: teek hai teek hai, par jaldhi kar, Dadi phir humme dhoondhkke aayenge


Geet: haan haaan


Geet: Maaan


Maan: toh kya kar rahi hai meri sapnon ki Rajkumari?


Geet: apne Rajkumar ki intrezaar


Maan: fikar mat karo, tera intrezaar abhi katam ho jayega, mein toh mandap mein tera hi intrezaar kar raha hoon


Geet: kya? toh mujhe kissi ne abhi tak bhulaya kyun nahi?


Maan: meinne bhulaya haina? Aajao


Geet: teek hai


Tabhi Pinky aathi...


Pinky: Geet, ye meera kahan hai?


Meera: mein yahi hoon


Geet: kya? tum itne dher yahi chupi thi?


Meera: haan haan, tere Rajkumar ki intrezaar katam


Pinky: hare Geet, jaldhi aao, Panditji tumme bhula rahe hai


Geet: mujhe patha hai, mein toh wahi aanewali thi


Meera: hare, mujhe chodkke akhele kaise jaa sakthi? Rukho Geet


Geet ko toh kuch sunayi nahi detha...



Maan ne bhulaya toh Geet chali gayi...

Posted: 2 years ago

                            Part - 43


 


 


Dev ko shadhi ke barein mein patha chale jaatha...


Dev Pammi ko lekhe delhi aagaya...


Muhurat ka samay ho gaya...


Maan mandap mein Geet ke liye intrezaar kar raha hai...


Panditji Dulhan ko bhulathe hai...


Dadi: Pinky bete, jaldhi Geet ko lekhe aayiye


Pinky Geet ko neeche lekhe aathi...


Maan looks at his Mishty coming down the stairs like an angel ascending from heaven...


Geet ke aankhen Maan ko doondhthe hai...


She looks at him...


Maan smiles...


Geet sharmathi...


BGM...


"Dulhe ka shehra suhaana lagtha hai...


Dulhan ka toh dil deewana latha hai..."


Everyone looks at Geet...


Dadi Geet ke paas aakke ussko apne saath lekhe jaathi...


Geet dadi ka ashirvaad lethi...


Beeji bhi aashirvaad karthe hai...


Mamaji stops her...


Maan gets angry...


Ye pagal mamaji kya kar rahe hai...


Beeji: hare, kyun rokhthe ho? hatto


Maamji: Geet puthar mera ashirvaad nahi lena


Geet goes and hugs him...


She bows down...


Geet: mujhe aashirvaad kijiye mamaji


Maamji is so happy...


Mamaji: jeethe raho, jeethe raho


Geet then heads towards the mandap...


Just then Dev enters...


Dev: Geet...Geet...kahan ho tum?


Geet is shocked to see Dev...


Maamji: hare andhe ho kya? Geet toh yahi hai, dekho


Mamaji points Geet...


Geet bahut darjaathi...


Maan rushes to his Mishty...


Maan holds her hands...


Geet: Maan


Maan:Geet, tumme darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, koi kuch nahi kar saktha


Geet: Maan, mein aapke chodkke nahi jaoongi


Geet hugs him tight...


Maan: Geet, mein bhi tumme jaane nahi doonga, tum meri ho Geet


Dev: kya?


Maan: Dev, tummari himmat kaise hui yahan aane ki?


Maan punches him...


Brij: Deeev


Brij also punches him ...


Meera: aaise hi, ek aur, ek aur


Pammi: ye kya ho raha hai?


Meera: tere bete ki dhulayi jo bahut pehle hona chahiye thi


Dev has come with the police...


Inspector : Mr.Maan, stop him


Maan: chodo usse


Maan stops Brij...


Geet: Maan, veerji


Geet tries to help Maan...


Pammi: kuch toh sharam karo, chote bhai ke biwi hothe hue bhi usske bahi ke saath dusre shadhi?


Maan: Geet meri biwi hai


Dev: aapki biwi? Toh Geet, kal meri biwi thi, aaj aapki biwi parson kisski biwi banegi?


Maan ab Geet ke barein mein ek aur galat sabd bardhaast nahi kar saktha...



 

Maan: Dev, tameez se baat karo, jaanthe ho ki tum kisske barein mein baat kar rahe ho? Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana ke



 

Dev: Inspector sab, aap hi bathao ki ye kaunsi Khurana ki Mrs hai


Maan: Deeevvv


Maan slaps him...left and right...


Inspector: Mr.Maan, ye shadhi nahi ho sakthi, Mr.Dev has filed a complaint that you have kidnapped his wife


Geet: nahi, ye joot hai, Maan, ye log aapke upar galat inzaam laga rahe hai, inspector mujhe kissi ne kidnap nahi kiya hai, mere Maan ko kuch mat kijiye


Geet bahut pareshaan hojaathi...


Geet ke wajhe se aaj Maan ko kya kya sunna padtha...


Mein aaise kuch nahi hone doongi...


Geet: inspector, inhonne kuch nahi kiya hai, aap chaho toh mujhe lekhe jao, mein aapko sab sach sach bathaoongi


Maan: Geet, tum kyun darthi ho?


Geet: Maan, ye sab mere wajhe se hi horaha hai, aap ko toh mujhe bachana hi nahi chahiye tha


Maan: Geet, aaise mat kaho, ye log humme kuch nahi kar sakthe


Geet: Maan, mein aapko aur takleef nahi dena chahathi


Maan: Geet, pareshaan mat ho jao, mujhe kuch nahi hoga


Geet: Maan, mujhe bahut dar lagtha hai, ab kya hoga?


Maan: kuch nahi hoga, jab tak mein tere saath hoon, tumme kuch nahi hoga


Maan produces all the legal documents including the marriage certificate...


Inspector is convinced...


Inspector: sorry to disturb you Mr.Khurana...you carry on, chaliye Mr.Dev ab aapko yahan koi kaam nahi hai


Dev: lekhin inspector, issne mere saath shadhi kiya hai, ye dekho photo


Inspector: ye shadhi illegal hai, Mr.Khurana ke paas sabot hai ki ye shadhi zabardasthi apne kiya hai, inkke marzi ke khilaaf


Pammi: hare ye meri bahu hai, ussko hummare saath bhejdho


Inspector: Mr.Dev, aapke maa ko lekhe jayiye, warna mujhe action lena padega


Dev: kya?


Inspector: yes, I'ill have to arrest you


Dev and Pammi leave...


Maan hugs his Mishty...Maneet pationate hug...mahi...


Maan: Geet, ro mat, woh log ab tumme tang nahi karenge, mere hothe hue meri biwi ke ankhon pe kushi ke aasoo bhi mana hai, samji?


Panditji bhulathe hai...


Maan Geet ko haath pakadke mandap tak lekhe jaatha...


Maan ke hothe hue Geet ko bride's maid ka bhi zaroorat nahi haina?


Maamji: jaldhi karo panditji, ab police wapas aajayega


Mamaji toh police ko dekhthe hi parde ke peeche chup gaye...abhi bahar aaye hai...


Lucky: hare mamu, itna vada jasoos ho, aur police se darthe ho?


Maamji: sshhh, ye andar ki baat hai, bahar nahi kehthe


Sab hasthe hai...Geet bhi zor zor se hasthi hai...


Maan Geet ko aaise hi dekhna chchatha...


Chalo aaj maamji ne ek achche kaam kardhi...


Unkki sare galthiyan maaf...


Dadi ke aashirvaad ke saath Maneet ki shadhi ho jaathi...


That night...



Maneet ki SR...

 

Maan is waiting for Geet...


Geet comes...


Maan: Geet, itne dher kya kar rahi thi?


Geet: kya?


Geet ko patha hai ki Maan se toh itna hi umeed kar sakthi...


Jab dekho naakh ke upar gussa beittha, haina babaji?


Maan: mein kab se interzaar kar raha hoon


Geet: aap ladhke ho, do minute noodles ki tarah jat se tayaar hojaathe ho, lekhin humme dekho? Kitna sajna padtha?


Maan: Geet, meinne pehle hi kaha hai ki tumme usski koi zaroorat nahi hai, agar uss raat tum behosh nahi hothi toh ye hummara first night nahi second night hotha


Geet: kya?


Maan: hare kitne sawaal karogi?


Geet: mein sawaal karthi hoon?


Maan: Geet, hum iss ladayi ko kal continue karthe hai, ab toh tummare saath ladne ke liye mere paas waqt nahi hai


Maan catches hold of her hand and takes her with him...


Geet is puzzled...


Geet: Maan, ye aap kya kar rahe ho?


Maan: tummare sapne ko pura kar raha hoon


Geet: kya?


Maan: haan, jaldhi karo Geet, warna godha so jayega


Geet: kya?


Maan takes her out...


Horse is waiting for them...


Geet: Maan?


Maan: hare, tum hi chahathi haina ki mein tumme iss goahde mein utakke lekhe jaaon


Geet: par Maan


Maan helps her get on the horse...


They start their ride...


Geet: Maan, hum ab kahan jaa rahe hai?


Maan: mujhe kya patha? Ye tera sapna haina? Tum hi kahao ki uss Rajkumar apne Rajkumari ko kahan lekeh jaatha?


Geet: aasmaan mein ek ghar banakke wahan lekhe jaatha


Maan: par ye Rajkumar aaisa kuch nahi kar saktha, mein bas pane Rajkumari ke liye yahi ghar bana saktha


Maan stops at an open space...


There stands a small tent...


It's decorated with flowers...


Ye Maan Singh Khurana ka Shhhtyle hai...


Maan Geet ko apne bahon mein lekhe jaatha...


There lies a flower bed just made for his flower like Mishty...


Maan lays her on it...


Maan starts removing her clothes...ye kaam toh Maan ka favourite haina...


He covers her with the flowers...


Geet sharam se apne aankhen band karthi...


Ab toh yahi Geet ka kapda banega...


Geet: aaplog kya dekhthe ho? picture katam ho gayi, aap abhi jao, hum agle kahaani mein milthe hai...


Tab tak ke liye mahiii...

Posted: 2 years ago

Kicking it up so I can find it again easily.

Posted: 2 years ago

Another round of bringing the stories up for reading.

Posted: 2 years ago

part 1

Dadi and Maan are coming into town to attend Dev's wedding.

Posted: 2 years ago

Dadi is compromising but Maan can not stand Pammi.

Edited by coderlady - 2 years ago
Posted: 2 years ago

Maan could have stopped this wedding? How?

Posted: 2 years ago

part 2

Geet is on her way. Good thing she is not the bride.



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