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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONIA441

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Ekdum Paagal hai yeh Raghav. Doctor ko kaam toh karne do!


BTS ke hisaab se if you're taking the Old Man's route toh sahi varna Naya Maal bhi chalta hai Apun koπŸ˜†... 

Continue jaldi πŸ˜‹


He's just the possessive Raghav Rao. 

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: unicornwriter



I saw that picture and this idea just popped off πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ

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Posted: 3 years ago
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PART 2


Pallavi checked her watch along with her luggage waiting for her so called husband. They were already getting late and even Amma had become impatient for him. Everyone looked at Farhad who just shrugged in response, the flight to Banglore was supposed to leave in 2 hours and Raghav was missing.

"Jaya Amma mujhe nahin lagta ki ab Ragahv ayega. Hum khana kha lete hai, hum dono baad main kabhi chale jayenge." Pallavi tried wiggling out of the situation.

Amma sighed annoyed at her son , maybe Pallavi was right, her son denied his request but suddenly a voice turned the frown to a smile on her face.

"Raghav Rao jo kehta hai woh karta bhi hai." came a voice through the door.

Raghav stood holding a file in his hand and some brown packets. He went ahead towards his family where he could sense Pallavi's piercing gaze as if cursing him to even show up here.

"Veda manus thori der nahin aata toh kaunsa iska 2 litre khoon kamm hojana tha magar nahin isko toh mera khoon peena hai." mumled an annoyed Pallavi.

"Tum kuch bola kya?" Raghav asked Pallavi with a mischiveous smile.

"Nahin toh." Pallav gave a forced smile.

"Sorry Amma woh kya hai na Mr. Mehta ka urgent order tha toh thora der ho gaya. Main abhi Reddy se apna bag mangwata hai. Sab packed hai." he apologized to his mother.

'Koi baat nahin Raghav. Ab tum aa gaya hai na jaldi se jao warna flight miss ho jayega." Amma smiled.

"Han Amma tum apna dhyaan rakhna. Keerti ! Farhad!" He eyes them both as the couple took blessings from the lady.

"Chale Saree- matlab Pallavi." he asked urging her to move forwarded and she did. She went out and sat directly in the car not even waiting for him.

"ఖ఑్స్ (Khadus)" he went and sat beside her in the back seat confusing her.

"Tum idhar kyun baithe ho? Aage baitho?" she spoke in a stern voice.

"Mera gadi mera marzi" he answered looking out while the driver ignited the car. Everyone bid them a bye and Farhad prayed well for his boss this time.


!0 minutes into the ride and a safer distance later Pallavi called out to the driver out of now where.

"Idhar hi rokdo gaadi." she slipped out of the car waiting for her bag to be pulled out from the car.

Raghav franctically ot out confused of her actions as he turned her around.

"Tum idhar kyun utra hai?" he asked looking deep into her eyes.

"Maine kaha tha na ghar se nikalne ke baad tum apne raaste main apne raaste." she stated the fact as if it was nothing.

"Dekho Saree ka dukaan tum Amma ke against nahin jaa sakta hai." he warned her.

"Main Jaya Amma ke against nahin jaa rhi hoon. Bass apne hisaab se sab arrange kar rahi hoon. Hum dono Banglore jayenge toh lekin apne apne raaste se. Mujhe koi shauq nahin hai tumhare kharche par flight se jaane ka. Tum flight se jao aur main bus se aa jaungi." she explained.

"Tum kya bol raha hai tumko khud ko samajh aa raha hai." he spoke in anger. Now she was getting onto his nerves.

"Mujhe laga hi tha ki tumhare paas toh sirf body hi hai idhr yeh jo dimaag hai na woh khali hi hai." she knocked on his forehead making him stumble back a little.

"Dekho Saree ka dukaan-"

"Tum dekho. Hum ek hi jagah jayenge jaise Amma ne plan kara hai lekin alag alag raaste. Maine Keerti ko bol diya hai ki woh Amma ko boldegi ki wahan kuch network issue hai jisse humme unse baat nahin karni padegi." she explained the entire idea.

"Lekin-"

"Jaanti hoon ki ab tum kahoge ki Amma ne photos mangi toh. Uska bhi ek solution hai mere paas. Mujhe aaj hi pata chala ki mere andar na photos edit karne ka ek bahut hi anokha talent hai toh woh kaam main kardungi aur phir woh photos hum Amma ko dikha denge." she mocked him with sad eyes and he felt guilty for ever blaming her for anything. He never knew that one misunderstanding and mistrust from him would lead them to be here.

She held onto her luggage and dragged it towards the auto leaving for the bus stop without looking behind for once at the place where he still stood rooted.

"Anna airport jana hai?" the driver asked him.

"Nahin tum ghar jao main khud chala jaunga." he dismissed the driver getting in the driver's seat himself.

"Jaisa maine socha tha. Tum bada prdictable hai Saree ka dukaan. Main jaanta tha ki tum kuch aisa hi plan karega jiska tayyari main pehle se hi kara tha. Aaj tum Ragahv Rao ko chhodhkar gaya hai na. Ab tumhare saath Raghav Rao nahin koi aur jayega. Happy journey Mrs Rao." he smiled thinking about everything he had planned for her.


Pallavi sat at the bus stop waiting for the bus to Banglore. She could have easily gotten a cab but travelling alone gave her chills after thinking about the last time she sat in the cab and Raghav told her that it blasted. The ride to Banglore was approximately of 10 hours. Her mind wandered to raghav who by now would be at the airport and would probably leave before than her.

The bus halted infront of her and she hopped in getting the last seat at the very end. Placing her luggage in position she sat down at the window seat looking out when she felt the seat beside her dip in. She felt a different feeling, something she felt whenever that Ghamandi Rao was around.

"yeh veda manus idhar bhi aa gaya kya." she murmured under her breath ready to curse her Ghamandi Rao but as she turned around her face turned from frustration to calm and regretful when she saw an old man siting beside her wearing a shawl over him.

"Kuch hua kya beta?" the old man asked with a cough.

"Nahin baba i mean uncle. Mujhe laga ki aap koi aur hain." she apologized looking back out through the window.

"Tu bhi na Pallavi kya sochti hai. Woh veda manus ko kya farq padhta hai woh thori ayega mere peeche." she scolded herself unaware of the person smiling beside her with mischief.

"Maine tumko promise kiya tha na Saree ka dukaan aur Raghav Rao kabhi apna wada nahin todta. Have a safe journey Saree ka Dukaan. Iss journey main toh flight se zyada maza ayega." he made himself comfortable beside her happy that he was beside her , keeping her safe and sound. 


To be continued....


Part 3- page 3

Edited by unicornwriter - 2 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Getting creative with the buddha bts haan πŸ˜† Kaha hum soch rahe the ki ye mystery investigate karne ko buddha bana, par tumne to ye bechare ka honeymoon look hi bana diya πŸ€£ Accha hai accha hai, please continue smiley36

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Raghav what more tricks does he have on his sleeves.

That man is unpredictable with his thinking n moves.

Amazing chap πŸ‘πŸ»

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part 3

Pallavi side glanced the aged man sitting beside her for the hundredth time in the past times. She had started to have these super wierd feelings since he made himself confortable beside her. Everytime his shoulder brushed with hers the tingling sensation would arrive back but she had no idea why. Technically this man was around the age of her father, then why so wierd. She shrugged the thought trying to not think about wither of this man or the man she left behind on the road, her husbans, Raghav. After the entire revelation of what lead to this deal wedding broke her so bad because somewhere closer to her heart she had started to beleive in him and then he just flipped. She got the idea of his anger, hell even she would be angry if her sister and mother were in line of mistreatment but she atleast expected a little trust from him. A little confrontation where they could have just talked this indifference and misunderstanding between them. She would have helped him out too but alas he just chose the jerk Ragahv Rao style over sanity.


Ragahv was enjoying the looks on his wife's face as if she was trying to decipher something at one moment and then anger in next moment as if she was cursing someone. Well he knew the curses were surely for him and he understood her point of view too. It was stupid of him to never have trusted his gutt and heart when it shouted him to trust her. And he knew that somewhere these small doings he had been doing to get her forgiveness were not enough but it was just so new to him. All these feelings when she was closer to him. The feeling which always encouranged him to grab her hand whenever she was beside him and never let go. He had made himself aware of the fact that it was all because she was now his priority or was it just this?


Pallavi was tired as hell from before and it was just 7 in the evening. The bus was mostly empty as expected so she thought maybe a small nap wouldn't affect her , also this nap might keep her awake at night just so she could keep herself and her luggage secure like a watchman. In no time her eyes gave up and her head too slipped to the man beside her as she made herself comfortable.

"Isko kya hua?" Raghav's heart jumped with concern. Had she fainted again but the light breathing from her confirmed that she was just asleep.

'Lagta hai so gaya hai. Ab merese 24*7 aise ladega toh thakega hi." he chuckled putting her head more comfortably on his shoulder.

The light touch broke her sleep as Pallavi was super conscious of her environment even in her sleep.

'Oh sorry uncle pata hi nahin chala kab aankh lag gayi. Aapko koi pareshani toh nahi hui na." she asked being apologetically.

Raghav smirked as an idea popped in his head but he missed her closeness beside her and now she sat a little far from him.

"Lagta hai beta tum kaafi thak gayi ho?" he asked playing his first card.

'Han shayad thora sa." she chuckled in reply.

"Lagta hai tumhara pati tumse bada kaam karwata hai?" he asked trying not to sound suspicious.

"apko kaise pata main shaadi-. Oh sindoor aur mangalsutra." she slapped her head lightly. It was knew to her that people understood her as a bride as she never got this chance previously.

"Apko koi idea nahin hai ki woh kaisa hai." she felt at ease talking to this man maybe because she missed talking to her aai and baba sharing her misery. Maybe?

"Itna bura hai kya?" Raghav asked suspiciously very interested in knowing her thoughts about him.

"Bura nahin hai bass high maintenance hai." she giggled, "Bahut ladta hai mujhse." she replied.

"Ladta hai toh isme bura kya hai. Ladte toh sab hai." he side ganced her making sure he wasn't crossing any boundaries.

"Problem uski ladai se nahin usme toh mujhe bhi maza aata hai.Lekin uski harkaten itni zyada irritating hai ki kya bataun. Jab dekho main The Ragahv Rao. Mujhse dangerous koi nahin. Main don hai. Yahi bolta rehta hai aur ab dekho shaadi ke baad bhigi billi bana hua hai."she explained in mischif remembering how she irritated him for the keys after their wedding.

"Tum Raghav Rao ka biwi hai?" he asked since he was liking the talks between them. He hated when she felt silent with him ignoring him. He loved their rants and fights too.

"Badkismati se haan. Agar woh mujhpe thora sa bharosa karta na toh shayad na hoti. Shayad hum apni life main khush hote. Alag Alag apni sahi jagah par." she smiled sadly, "Main bhi kya faltu ki baaton se aapko pareshaan kar rahi hoon. Aap kuch khayenge?" she asked like an obedient school girl.

"Nahin mereko-" he started to refuse but as soon as the smell of food from the container hit his nostrils his stomach growled. This was her smeel. the smell of food she cooked when he was at the orphanage as Ramaswami. He never got to taste her cooked food after that since the scenarios in their life went bizarre but he wasn't gonna miss the opportunity now.

She handed him a box of poha while she kept the other one for herself.

"Tumko pehle se bata tha ki tum merese milega?" Raghav asked.

"Ji?"

"Woh tum 2 dabba laya hai." he pointed at the big 2 containers.

"Achcha yeh woh-' Pallavi didn't wanted to accept that she got another conatiner packed for Ragahv but forgot to leave it in the car for him but this was a stranger who wouldn't go and tell ragahv and boost his ego right?

"Yeh woh bass kisi aur ke liye tha. Socha tha usko dedungi par bhool gayi." she replied smiling while eating her own looking at the scenery outside.

Raghav understood who she meant this for and smiled at his wife's concern. He was sure that she was gonna forgive him one day soon, all he had to do was try harder to make this relationship that he formed in hatred to work like a normal one.

Since the previous nap never lasted Pallavi felt her eyes give up as she slept peacefully after consuming her medicines. Raghav kept her head on his shoulder careful enough to not wake her up this time as he too kept his head on hers drifting off to sleep keeping her closer to him under the shawl just the way he likes it.


A few hours of deep sleep later Pallavi woke up to something soft. Looking around she felt unfamiliar with the enviroment. It felt like a hotel room where she layed on a soft bed. A state of panic strucked her mind as she felt scared of what might have happened. She remembered being on the bus beside an old man and then sleeping after the medicines. The old man? She thought. Didi he kidnapped her? But she kept an alarm on her phone to wake her up before the stop. it never rang. She heard the bathroom door open and came out the same old man but walking a little different this time. The white color had also faded away from his head and it felt so young.

"Dekhiye kaun hai aap?Aur mujhe kahan lekar aaye hai?" she shouted commanding for answers. her aai had once taught that in such situations if she portrayed herself as confident and not a scared person the person opposite to her might loose their command a bit.

Raghav moved a hand through his hair. His saree ka dukaan, always so naive.

"Kya hua koi problem hai?" he played along finding her worried expression amusing. She was trying so hard to fake confidence and it was evident to him.

'Dekhiya aap jaante nahin hai mujhe aur na hi mere pati ko. Ek baari Raghav ko pata chala na toh-" she halted in her way as she felt the man's beard hanging a bit from the other side of his cheek. And things made a little sense to her.

"Kya karlega woh?" Raghav raised his brows coming closer to her.

"Kuch Nahin.Kamzor hai woh aur ek idiot bhi par main nahin." she replied coming more closer to him.

Raghav looked at her in confusion and in a second his stucked beard was ripped off which left a tingling pain behind on his skin.

"Ouch. Saree ka dukaan pagal hai kya. Koi aise kheechta hai daadhi." he cried in pain.

"Han toh koi aise apni biwi ka peecha karta hai. Usse kidnap karta hai batao?" she snapped back keeping her hands on her waist. Ragahv smiled at his doings as he came ahaed grabbing her waist, pulling her closer to him. He looked what the proximity did to them and her shocked face.

"Main toh apna promise nibha raha tha saree ka dukaan. Bola tha na ki tumko akela nahin chodega." he whispered into her ear sending shiver down her spine. He meant very word of what he said and maybe something had already been initiated here.


THE END.

Hope you liked it.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Read all chaps in a go and enjoyed it thoroughly. Creative use of BTS, I must say. πŸ€—

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Posted: 2 years ago
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aww so loved it

can see this happening and raghav behaving like this

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This was wonderful. 

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#20

Mastt tha yeh!🀣


Kaafi creative ho aap. Made good use of the BTS. 

Sahi baat hai, koi Bus mein aise akele kaise jaane dede😲


End Scene was niceβ™₯️