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That was so amazing it’s exactly what I had in mind with that prompt. Love the flashback and poor Shiva hiding his feelings 💔 Can’t wait to read more!! Please update soon! This was such a great start
That was so amazing it’s exactly what I had in mind with that prompt. Love the flashback and poor Shiva hiding his feelings 💔 Can’t wait to read more!! Please update soon! This was such a great start
This is so beautiful! Loved the way Shiva is trying to mask his inner turmoil and jealousy with hatred towards his Maami ki behen ki beti! Waiting to see Raavi’s side of jealousy now and yes how she reacts to her half naked devar!! Cannot wait for the next part❤️
Loved this take on Shivi.❤️
My heart is reaching out to Shiva.
And yeah, you did really left us in a cliffhanger. 😆
Update soon.
Originally posted by: milkcakejamun
Love the set up of the story already! Love the idea of a pining/slightly angry Shiva and an oblivious Raavi! Also the ending... 🤣 Starting off strong I see... can't wait to see how Raavi shamelessly looks over at her Devar. Literally while reading those last two lines, I had an idea of Raavi seeing Dev shirtless during some rasam and her feeling somewhat disappointed, especially after seeing Shiva's hot bod! Can't wait to read the next part!
You’re giving me ideas now 🤣❤️
Originally posted by: ananya269
You’re so evil!!!
Raavi toh besharam hoke taaregi apne devar ko 🤣I’m waiting to see how Raavi will react to hear that Sharma ji ki beti likes her Shiva. She’ll go crazy 🤣🤣🤣
Oh wait! Shilpa is Sharma ji ki beti 🤣
Wow I didn’t think of it that way when I named them 🤣
Oh no... I got shock when Dhara talked about Shiva with some other girl 💔 My little heart could not accept anyone next to Shiva other than Raavi 😢
Awwww! ♥️ She’ll always be Shiva’s
My sadist mind actually liked the cliffhanger😆☺️
You're off to a good start.👏👍🏼
Waiting for the nest part.❤️
Interesting!! Let's see whether ravi sees him crying and her over active brain catches what she is loosing.I want to see her pampering shiva like a baby. Your over imaginative and over demanding reader😁😉
Originally posted by: hedwig_potter
My sadist mind actually liked the cliffhanger😆☺️
You're off to a good start.👏👍🏼
Waiting for the nest part.❤️
Hahaha 😂 thank you! Will update soon ♥️
Originally posted by: lourel24
Interesting!! Let's see whether ravi sees him crying and her over active brain catches what she is loosing.I want to see her pampering shiva like a baby. Your over imaginative and over demanding reader😁😉
Yesss! Shiva does deserve a lot of pampering! Both in fictions and in the show ♥️
Will update soon!
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