Wow! So beautiful. Loved Sayi's concern for Virat. And, the way she looked after him.
awesome update shri
loved it
bada maza agaya padke
donom moya biwi pagal cute wala pagal
virat ka last line 🤣
thanks for tagging me dear
Yeh kya hua, kaise hua
Kab hua
Mei ek din baahar kya thi itna kuch ho gaya in dinon ke beech 😲. Kya baat hai, control Viru 😉.
Waise, tumne toh khud ke armaanon ko khud hi poora kar liya, lo ab kya karein, Ghum log toglh dene se rahe 🤦♀️.
Nice one, Pakhi ko itna bada dhokha diya pure Chavan parivaar ne Sai ka saath deke 😲 😉?
Well apne khoon ko koi khoon deta hai toh apne toh pigal hi jaayenge . Aisa bhi hosakta hai? Lo, tumne toh dikha di, accha hua, wahaan Sai ke khoon ko hi Kaku boldegi ki yeh Shahanukuli khaandan ki khoon nahi hai aur mere bete pe chad nahi saktha hai 🤣🤣.
You know the most loved part of your OS? I loved Sai's and doctor's interaction and the part where it was mentioned that the doctor also became happy when Virat was getting discharged 🤣🤣.
Ho sakta hai, ho sakta hai, bilkul ho sakta hai 🤣🤣. Sai ne doctor ko chodke rakha hai wahi badi baat hai 😉.
I also loved their confrontation scene in the hospital, bina khulke kahe hi bahut kuch keh diya donon ne. Viru ne mooh khol diya aur Sai ne bhi. Hmm, it only made sense for Sai to say that she is still hurt. Hoga hi, show mein yeh sab dikhayenge ya nahi pata nahi, makes sense to show these and tumne poora kar diya, no gaps ❤.
Sai ne toh aaram se shirt pehena diya, Viru ka haalat bina jaane, bechara tadap raha tha, aur aakhir mein itne paas aakar, sirf cheeks pe 😒? Mujhe yeh umeed nahi thi Aashiqui 2 scene ke baad 😭 😭.
Waise, realistic hai kyunki Ghum mein bas itna hi milega, sach kahoon toh yeh bhi nahi milega, kabhi nahi 🤣🤣.
Nice one dear, very cute. I wanted to write one on this, scenes after hospital return or hospital scene itself, since I am bored with the current track, but I hardly write stories these days. I am just not able to write one 😒. I couldn't even read ffs or os, read one last week and a couple of them last night. Good that yours came today, if it had come a few weeks back not sure if I would have enjoyed it, wasn't reading anything 😒.
Agar kuch likthi hoon toglh tag karoongi 😉. Aise hi mast mast OS dete rehna ❤, waise bhi mein kuch likh nahi rahi hoon aur FF nahi pad paa rahi hoon.
So cute.....loved it a lot...
Thank god.... pakhi did not create much nuisance....
Finally they had a good talk...
In the end it became romantic.... loved it.... the way he kissed her.....
Sai is seriously concentrated on doing her work and did not realise how close he is to virat.... Virat tho gaya kaam se...how can he control when she is that close....finally gave in and kissed oh her on her cheek if not somewhere......😆
Keep writing such awesome stories more......
Hey ....update your that mystery story one...eagerly waiting for that....
Its so beautiful
and i loved it so much ❤️
So read it 4 times all ready...😳
Keep writing more.....
haha!! Amazing!❤️ You know, you feel emotionally content, kind of happy na, abhi mujhe waisa hi lagra hai!🤗
the kiss chalo, abhi cheek par toh kiss kar paaya, bappaaa iss Virat ko aage badne ki himmat dena!!🙏
How I wish ki show mei bhi Sai Virat ko blood donate karti😒
PS: Thank you for including Pakhi's beizzati!!(was it beizzati? aaj kal uske baare mei sab kuch beizzati hi lagta hai mujhe🤣)
Shristhiiii meriii jaaaannnnn...... yaar this is so amazing ❤️ please write more stories na!!!!
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