Shiva kyu mange Maafi- Shivi OS Two shots

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Ok...so this OS is based on aftermath of yesterday's precap....Dev-shiva fight thing!!!


I really like the actor who is playing Dev....but Dev's character in this serial according to me needs growth....and that to highly!! So in this we will have Dev's bashing....so dev fans read at your own risk!!


Also the thing I like about this serial is that all the characters have some or the other flaws.... including dhara...they all make mistakes...but then they themselves give each other that second chance!!! So this OS will even highlight dhara's mistakes!!!


Ignore the typing errors!!!

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Dev and shiva had fought over what all had happened since past two days!!! Shiva had in the fight clearly blammed dev for all the mess that he had created!!! Dhara had stopped the fight....but the remaining trip went silent for everyone!! None spoke to each other!!! They had reached the palace, except Rishita all were in an off mood....and for Rishita it dint matter as according to her this was her honeymoon and she was here to enjoy and have her time with Dev!!


Rishta:-" Wow....this is such a big palace!! It has so many rooms!!"


Shiva:-" Ja jake phele tu tera pasand karle...taaki baadme tamasha kaam ho!!!"


Dev:-" Shiva tu....!!"


Gautam:-" Dev- shiva firse agr shuru hue tum dono toh mujse bura koi nahi hoga!!!"


Dhara allocates the room to everyone and now everyone were in their room!!!


           After the fight between the brothers the most silent and disturbed was raavi....she dint knew what was happening!! She knew that the shiva she knew can never go against his brother....then why today???


Raavi:-" Ise toh kabhi mere liye stand nahi leta....fir aaj dev se lada kyu??"


Shiva:-" Tere se matlab bhai mera...ladai meri!!!"


Raavi:-" But wajaah me thi!!" She shouts!!


Shiva:-" Ae mami ki behn k beti....me tere liye nahi lada... teri ankho me joh bhabhi k liye gussa hai uske liye lada!!"


Raavi:-" Kya matlab??"


Shiva:-" Kya karegi jaan ke....samjna toh tuje wahi hai jo tuje lagta thik hai!!"


Raavi:-" Ha hai mere andar bhabhi k liye gussa aur ho bhi kyu na....galat kiya hai unhone mere sath!!"


Shiva was now hell angry... He knew raavi was not wrong because she dint knew the reality... but yet whatever it was....she spoke against her bhabhi!!!


He holded her by shoulders forcefully made her look into his eyes!!


Shiva:-" Wahi nahi dekh sakta me!! Tere aur mere beech ek hi cheez comman hai...tu bhi bhabhi se utna hi pyaar karti jitna me...waise toh tere me ek quality bhi nahi hai fir bhi hamesha tune bhabhi jaise baneka sapna dekha hai...aur aaj wahi ankho me wahi bhabhi k liye gussa hai!!"


Raavi:-" Tune kya raato raato meri ankho ko padhne me PhD kar li hai???"


Shiva:-" pagal kutte ne kata hai jo ek chipkali k ankho pe PhD karuga!!! But bhabhi k liye tera gussa padh sakta hu!!"


Raavi:-" Tere hisaab se toh me hi galat rahi hu hamesha se...to ye bhi bata de mera gussa kaise galat hai??"


Shiva:-" Kyuk bhabhi tuje batana chahti thi sab....gayi thi vo uss Janardhan k pass dev ka rishta leke...and uske baad tere pass ane wali thi sab saach batane...but us Janardhan ne insult kiya bhabhi ka...maara unhe...dhaake marke bhar nikala!!!"


Raavi:-" Kya?? Bhabhi ne dev k liye itna sab kiya??"


Shiva:-" Ha...aur teri khushiyon k liye bhi!! But Janardhan k baareme janke...dev gussa hua...usne saara rishta tod diya uss ameer baap ki beti se....aur dil se tere se shaadi k liye tyaar hu...bas end moment palat gaya aur ye raita fail gaya!!"


Raavi:-" Toh muje Kisine ye sab kyu nahi bataya??"


Shiva:-" Tere pass dimag hota toh ye sab hota hi nahi na!! Waise bhi sabko galat samjne ka toh tune theka le rakha hai...phele bhabhi aur ab m.....!!!"


He wanted to say me... referring to her aligations about he leaving her with goons....but he dint complete his sentence....but that unheared word was fully heard by raavi!!!


Raavi was silent after Shiva's outburst....she dint understand who was right and who was wrong in all this!!! Was bhabhi right in getting her married to dev when dev wasn't even in love with her??? Or was dev wrong in choosing her even after loving Rishita???  Raavi was very much confused!!! She was just sitting in her room!! Shiva knew she needed a time of her own....and truely speaking even he was disturbed so he left the room!!!

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Shiva had been the most disturbed soul since all this had taken place....his life had completely changed upside down in a flick of second!!! He was hell frustrated...and that's what led him to the fight with Dev!! That fight was stopped by dhara....but frustration was yet there...which he removed on raavi!!!


When he was sitting there Gautam and dhara came to him!!!


Dhara:-" Mera shiva gussa karta hai....but apne bhai pe kabhi nahi!!"


Shiva:-" Bhabhi muje iss baareme baat nahi karni!!"


Gautam:-" Karni padegi shiva!! Sab acha chal raha tha aaj.... tune kyu beechme se ye sab nikala??"


Dhara:-" jo hua so hua....ab chal jake dev ko sorry bolde...haath uthaya hai tune apne bade bhai pe...aur ye mere sanskar nahi hai??"


Out of no where raavi came there!!!


Raavi:-" Kis liye shiva sorry bole dhara di???"


Shiva:-" Ae maami k behn k beti....dimag mat kharab kar tu ja yaha se!!"


Raavi:-" Tu chup reh!! Tujse baat karne nahi ayi!!! Aur muje tere jaise jhail se muh lagneka shock bhi nahi!!"


Shiva:-" jahil kisko boli...teri toh!!!"


Gautam:-" Ekdam chup....kahi pe bhi shuru ho jate jo tum dono!! Tu kehna kya chahti hai raavi???"


Raavi:-"Yahi k kis baat k liye shiva sorry bole??? Jo hua sab shiva ke sath hua....fir bhi yeh sorry bole???"


Dhara:-" Hath uthaya hai usne apne bade bhai pe??"


Raavi:-" To bade bhai ne konsa bade bhai honeka farz nibhaya hai?? Kya galat kaha shiva ne dhara di... Ye saara raita dev ka hi failaya hua hai na??? Di in sab me jitna mera nuksaan hua hai...use toh kahi jyada shiva ka hua hai!!! Mere liye toh ek isa rishta tuta hai mera jo kabhi shayad tha hi nahi....mene dev se pyaar kiya tha....dev ne mujse nahi!!! Mana k mera dil tuta hai...par shiva ka kya dhara di....use toh uska sab kuch chuta hai....aur kis liye sirf dev k ek galat failse k wajah se...aur aap kheti hai k fir bhi maafi shiva mange???"


Shiva:-" aae mami k behn k beti tu jyada bol rahi hai....ja tu yaha se!!!"


Raavi:-"Nahi jaungi....aaj me sab bolke rahugi!!! Dhara di....aapne toh aapke sab baacho se ek jaisa pyaar kiya ..par kya aapke saare baacho ne bhi aapko ek jaisa pyaar kiya???"


Out of no where Krish came:- " Hum sab bhabhi se bhaut pyaar karte hai!!!"


Raavi:-" Toh dhara di ne ghar k izzat...mera swabhiman bachne....dev aur shiva dono se hi ek cheez mangi thi....k mujse shaadi karle....toh kyu fir di k maan saman k liye dev ne ye kadam nahi liya aur shiv ne apna sab kuch dhara di k achal me rakh diya???? Kyu dhara di....aap bataye?? Kyu dev ko mila uska pyaar....aur shiva k naseeb me nafrat???"


Everyone was silent...raavi had placed such a question in front of them...which no one had answers for!!! She was right.... both were asked to do the same thing...marry raavi....then why dint dev do that for her bhabhi n shiva did it without a second thought????


Raavi:-" Kya ye hai justice dhara dii.....me aapse bhaut pyaar karti hu di....aaj bhi karti hu!!! But fir bhi aapse sawaal puchna chahti hu di!!! Shiva ne muje kabhi pasand nahi kiya....voh hamesha kehta raha k muje kabhi Pandya niwas me ane nahi dega... Kya ek baar apne socha bhabhi....jis ladki ko vo Pandya niwas k aas pass bhi nahi dekh sakta tha... Uske ghar me ane k wajah aapne use banaya....fir bhi maafi shiva mange??? Kyu dhara di???"


Dhara was speechless at the questions raavi was asking her!!!!


Raavi:-" Dhara di....10 saal se upar hogaya shiva mujse nafrat karta hai....aapka vishwas hai k mere aur shiva k beech ye nafrat khatam hogi ek din aur pyaar jagega....ho sakta hai apka vishwas sahi ho di....but ek baat bataye di....10 saal... almost ek decade se jyada se nafrat k hai shiva ne mujse....kya vo 10 din me kahtam hogi?? Aur agr apke vishwas ko pura hone me 10 saal lag gaye toh??? 10 saalo tak apka shiva kya kush reh payega???? Aur dhara di....mujse toh apne use bandh diya....but tab kya hoga jab shiva ko saachme kisi aur ladki se pyaar hoga???"


Dhara:-" Nahi raavi....mera shiva loyal hai....voh tere saath cheating nahi karega??"


Raavi:-" Par agr kabhi mujse pyaar bhi hua use.....!!"


Shiva immediately says:-" Ye nahi ho sakta!!"


Raavi:-" Jaanti hu....but me toh sirf wahi keh rahi hu....jiska dhara di ko vishwas hai!! Di....kisi din hua chalo use mujse pyaar....par kya voh kabhi keh payega mujse....kya kabhi izhaar kar payega....kyuk jab jab meri aur dekhega...use hamesha ye baat yaad ayegi....k me toh uske bhai k hone wali biwi thi....me toh uske bhai se pyaar karti thi....me toh is sacch se upar aa gayi di...mere dil me dev k liye ab kuch nahi....par kya shiva ise upar aa payega....kya voh ye baat kabhi bhul payega....kya ye saach accept karna shiva k liye easy hoga??? Fir bhi maafi shiva mange....hai na dhara di????"


Raavi wasn't throwing aligations on anyone....she was just telling all of them the fact...the realities which all were missing out on!!!! 


When all this was going on.... Rishita had heard half of the thing when she came to drink water....she just concluded that again her dev was being blamed for no reason....and Rishita being Rishita she had to interrupt In between!!


Rishita shouted:-" Raavi!!"


This broke Dev's sleep as well and now all were in the living area!!


Raavi:-" Just because dev is not here...tumhe koi haq nahi banta k tum dev ko blame karo....har baat k liye use galat sabit karo....me hu mere dev k liye!!"


Raavi:-" Nahi Rishita...me dev ko galat sabit nahi kar rahi....me sirf uske liye ek decision k consequences bata rahi hu!! And ha Rishita... Dev k sath tum ho...pura pariwar hai....and shiva k sath bhi pura pariwar hai....but mera kya?? Mere sath kon hai???"


Dhara:-" Hum sab hai tere sath raavi???"


Raavi:-" Toh aapne kabhi dev se mujse maafi mange kyu nahi kaha dhara di!! Mere sath shaadi k liye ha kehkar mandap pe dev ne muje choda tha....are pura Somnath mere dev k liye pagal pan ko janta tha..  aur itna samjdaar aur padha likha dev is baat ko samaj nahi paya?? Kiya tha na shiva ne baar baar warn mujse sab clear karne....to kyu nahi kiya dev ne mujse sab kuch clear??? In sabke baad bhi shiva maafi mange....aur dev galti pe galti karta jaye aur maafi tak na mange....kyu dhara di???"


Rishita:-" Mere dev ne koi galti nahi kiya hai....usne sirf mujse pyaar kiya hai!! Itna hi tumhe dev se problem tha....toh kyu ushi gharme shaadi karke ayi jis ghar me dev rehta hai....dekho raavi me ek baat clear kar du....tum dev ko guilty feel karvake mujse nahi cheen sakti....voh sirf mera hai!!!"


Raavi laughs at this:-" saach kahu Rishita....tumhara dev mere layak bhi nahi!!! Mere dil se toh dev tabhi nikal gaya tha jab mene suicide karne k koshish k aur dev aya tak nahi!!! Shiva nafrat karta hai mujse....aur dev ne shayad kabhi pyaar nahi kiya mujse...par dost toh tha!! Shiva ko toh ek ankh nahi bhahti thi me....par fir bhi muje uss din bachane shiva aya... Dev nahi....mere liye us ek second me dev meri nazron me gir gaya tha!!!"


Rishta:-" Aur shiva mahaan ban gaya??? Agr itni hi shiva ko tumhari parvah thi...to kyu in gundo k pass tumhe akela chod aya tha??"


Raavi:-" Shayad is liye kyuk ab biwi thi me uski... Voh bhi zabardasti wali!! Phele me sirf mami k behn k beti thi....jisse voh us Dushmani k rishte hi sahi bachana chahta tha.....but ab toh mujse peecha chudwana chatata tha....shayad isliye chod aya muje waha!!"


Shiva looked into her eyes directly after her this big aligation....shiva was hurt....did she think so low of him??? Even raavi was looking into Shiva's eyes...she cudnt read his eyes....but there was something else today in his eyes!!!! Shiva understood that one step of his for saving her has broken her down more than Dev's betrayl!!!


Rishita:-" Iss gharme sabko bas hamesha hamari hi galti lagti hai....kyu kyuk humne pyaar kiya?? Kisiko hamari parwah hi nahi hai??"


Raavi:-" Isliye pure gharne tumhe maa se bachaya!!!"


Rishita was shocked...she dint understand what was she saying....whereas the whole family looked down in disappointment!! They knew raavi was about to bring another thing which was right!!


Raavi:-" Pura ghar janta hai k tumhare papa ne kidnap kiya tha hamara...bas sabne nahi bataya maa ko k tum maa k nazron me Hamesha k liye na gir jau....tumhari har baat mani gayi....tumhare har nakhre uthaye gaye....sirf tumhe is pariwar ka hissa banane k liye....n saach kahu Rishita....yahi ek wajah thi k muje hamesha iss pariwar ka hissa banana tha...dhara di seriously apke iss decision pe I am really very proud!!! But dhara di.. is ek kidnapping ne mere aur shiva k life puri upside down kar di!!! Phele toh bhi me aur shiva thoda nok jhok kar liya karte the....par ab....shiva muje panoti smajta hai aur me muje ye pata hai k me mar bhi rahi rahugi toh shiva kabhi nahi ayega....ye panoti aur itni nafrat phele nahi thi hamare beech di....kidnap dev aur Rishita ko hona tha ...isa kidnap jo unknowingly inko aur kareeb lata...but hua mera aur shiva ka....jisne hume aur dur kar diya ek dusre se....fir bhi maafi shiva mange...hai na dhara di????"


Everyone was speechless.... whatever raavi said was on the point.....she was absolutely correct!! But shiva was hurt...more than anyone could thing!! Shiva is been like a cocunut rough from outside but soft from inside.....raavi's words were affecting him the most!!! But his question was were they even true??? He was loving the fact that she was able to say all that was in his mind...it was as if she could read his mind....but then he dint hate her so much how much she thinks....or did he????


Raavi:-" Itna sab hua dhara di....mera dil tuta...dev ne toda....mera aur shiva ka nafrat ka rishta start hua...kyuk dev ne mandap pe muje choda....aapki Janardhan ne insult ki...kyuki appne dev k khushi chahi... Maasima...masupa aur maa k beech saalo baad sab thik hone wala tha...jo aaj fir bikhar Gaya dev k ek decision pe....shiva aur dev do bhaiyo k beech jhagda hua dev k shiva k advice na manene pe....aur in sabse upar di....mene duniya sabse jyada aapse pyaar kiya.. me aapse kabhi nafrat nahi kar sakti di...me aaj bhi aapse utna hi pyaar karti hu jitna phele karti thi...me aaj bhi aap jaisi banana. Chahati hu....but iss dil me apke liye gussa paida kiya dev ke ek galat decision.... jise shiva ne khatam kiya....sahi galat ka matlab samjaya muje.... Fir bhi maafi mange shiva??? Kyu dhara di..... apne Rishita k sath k rishte ko sabse jyada priority jis insaan ne di....jiski wajah se baki har rishta bikhra.... kya usne aap sabme se including me....kisi se ek baar bhi maafi mangi.... kya use apni galti realise bhu hui???? Fir bhi maafi mange shiva??  Hai na di????"


Raavi had just shown the mirror to all including dev.....she was hurt badly hurt by everyone....but today she stood up for shiva!!! Dhara realised her mistake....she has always asked everything from shiva only....and shiva without a word has given her everything!!!! Amongst all this Gautam was happy.... Ofcourse he was upset at what all happened....but he knew that dhara's words were going to come true....raavi and shiva will be one such couple in Somnath whose examples whould be given for the love they would share!!! He now was fully sure that Shiva and raavi are made for each other!!!! He ordered everyone to go back to their rooms.... everyone needed to clear their minds out!!!


I have typed too much for first part ....this was suppose to be an os....but it will have two parts...next part coming up in some time!!!

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Part II


After raavi's outburst all of them went to their rooms.... thinking about what just raavi said!!!!


When Gautam and dhara reached their room....they already found raavi there!!!


Dhara:- Raavi tum yaha???"


She first made Gautam and dhara sit!!!


Raavi:-" Dhara di....me aapse ye sab nahi kehna chahti thi....but pata nahi muje kya hua jab apne shiva se maafi mangne kaha....voh gadha hai...jahil hai....but aaj voh galat nahi tha di!!!"


Gautam and dhara smiled at her!!!


Raavi:-" I am sorry di....mene apko hurt kiya!! Apne jab meri shaadi shiva se karvayi thi na...me bhaut gussa thi apse di....shayad aaj bhi hu....par ab voh baat apke liye itni nahi chubhti is dil ko!!! Me aapse bhaut pyaar karti hu di.....aur hamesha se aap jaisi hi banana chahti thi!!! Me aaj yaha apse sorry kehne ayi hu....me apse phele gussa thi isliye....toh karoge na aap apni raavi ko maaf??"


Dhara:-" Bhala me apni raavi se naraaz hi kab thi k me maaf karu use....galti toh hui mujse mene shayad bhuat galat kiya tere sath!!"


Raavi:-" Par aap dono ko...mausapa ko vishwas hai k yeh faisla sahi hai....toh muje bhi aap logo k failse pe vishwas hai di!!"


Dhara:-" Saachme???"


Raavi:-" Ha di!!"


Gautam:-" Matlab tu iss shaadi ko ek chance dengi??"


Raavi:-" Voh toh me nahi janti.... nafrat toh me aur shiva ek dusre se aaj bhi utni hi karte hai....par hai....biwi ka toh pata nahi...par Pandya pariwar k bahu banenke liye me chance zarur dungi...donge ne aap dono mera sath???"


Dhara and Gautam both smiled at her!!! Blessed her and she left!!!


Gautam:-" Chal dhara ek baat k bet lagi???"


Dhara:-" Kis baat ki??"


Gautam:-" Ye bahu se phele biwi banegi??"


Dhara:-" Lagi bet....par muje tumse haarna bhaut pasand hai!!!"


Gautam:-" Waise baat bhi sahi hai....ek me hi toh hu jo tumhe hara sakta hu!!!"


They both laugh a bit....Ravi by just her apology had changed dhara and Gautam's mood....but this all was noticed by shiva....and he was somewhere proud of his mami k behn k beti!!!


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      After that raavi's outburst....it took almost a day for everyone to come to normal!!! Gautam had a word with Dev....but he dint ask him to apologise.... because this time he wanted all this to end for once and all...he wanted dev to himself take the initiative!! Dhara had assured him....that it will take time for dev to understand all this....but with time he will come over and himself apologize!!!


Other side raavi and shiva were off....after her outburst....they both dint have a word for almost 24hrs....not even fight!!! Actually they both dint knew what to say....though shiva was very proud of what raavi did....but he was simultaneously hurt by her words as well!! She had some strong allegations for him as well...which were base less!!!! And raavi she was confused....after her own outburst she analysed things....and she realised that it was always shiva who has come to rescue when she was in trouble so it confused her that how did he leave her all alone that day????


Next day pooja was over.... Rishita as usual was unaffected by the drama and was clicking pictures and enjoying herself....she couldn't even see that her dev was highly disturbed!!!!


Next day at night after dinner shiva came to his room late...he had avoided raavi the most he could!!!


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As soon as shiva entered....he was welcomed by a pillow!!!


Raavi:- "Ye koi time hai room me aneka??"


Shiva:-" pagal hoagyi hai kya??? Aur tuje kya me room me au na au!! Tuje toh kush hona chaiye na...me nahi tha....sukoon se thodi der rehne mila hoga!!!"


Raavi:-" Baat karni hai muje tumse!!!"


Shiva:-" Muje nahi karni!!! Jab bhi baat karte hai....kuch ulta hi hota hai...so maaf karna muje nahi karni!!"


Raavi:-" Kyuki tu seedhe muh kabhi jawaab nahi deta!!"


Shiva:-"kya karu muje chipkali se baato ka experience nahi na!!!"


Raavi:-" Muje konsa gadho se baat karne ka experience hai....fir bhi kar rahi hu na!!!"


Shiva:-" Isliye better hai hum na kare baat!!"


Before he could move out.. raavi questioned him!!


Raavi:-" Kyu chod aya tha muje unn gundo k pass!! Kyu bhag gaya tha tu muje chodke waha se???" She had bit id tears in her eyes....her voice cracked!!!


Shiva understood she was crying....but he was hurt by her this continues aligation....he dint turn back just answered!!!


Shiva:-" Kya farak padta hai.... Dev ne bacha liya na tuje ..sahi salamat hai na tu!!! Khush reh!!!"


Raavi turned him towards her and made him face her!!


Raavi:-" Padta hai farak...kyu mera ye dil nahi manene ko tyaar k tu muje ise chodke ja sakta hai?? Kyu kyu kyu???"


Shiva:-" Kal tak toh tera yeh dil bada maan raha tha??? Aaj chipkali k jagah insaano k aatma aa gayi isme???"


Raavi seriously said:-" Nafrat karta hai shiva tu mujse....mami k behn k beti honeki sazaa tune Bachpan se di hai muje.....dhara di k kehne pe zabardasti shaadi bhi kar li mujse....jis ladki to tu Pandya pariwar se mileo dur rakhna chahta tha....usko hi biwi banke laya hai....aur kal chod bhi diya in gundo k sath....kaise maan lu k tu bachata muje??? Kasie Vishwas kar lu???"


Shiva:- "Tuje vishwas dilane me kuch nahi karne wala??"


Raavi:-"Sirf itna. Bata de...kyu nahi kholi meri Raasi tune....kyu shiva kyu???"


She had started crying by now!!!!


Shiva couldn't control anymore:-" kyuki tu musibat hai!!! Khol deta tuje tabhi toh fir voh tuje pakad leta!!! Aur muje fir wapas tuje bachane pe focus karna padta!!! Laila kaha tha usne tuje....hath lagaya tha usne tuje....kaise khol deta tuje taki voh fir hath lagye tuje??? Kaise sazza nahi deta use tujse k gayi batamizi ka!! Socha phele un gundo se nipat lu....voh musibat khatam karu....fir tuje kholu....kamse kam fir yeh ek hi musibat hoti mere pass....aur voh jisse sambhalna ata hai muje!!!"


Raavi immediately goes and hugs shiva!!! Shiva was taken aback!!!


Raavi:-" maaf kar de shiva!!! Galti hogayi mujse....please maaf kar de!!"


Shiva:-" Me toh nafrat karta hu tujse....chutkara pana chahta tha na tujse isliye chod aya tuje un gundo k pass....fir maafi kyu maang rahi hai???"


Shiva told the exact words raavi had said in her yesterday's outburst and it dint take a second for raavi to realise that he was hurt and that to beyond extent!!!


Raavi was yet hugging him.... but he hadn't reciprocated the hug!!!


Raavi:-" Daar gayi thi shiva!!! Sab chut raha tha mere hatho se...jisse bachpan se pyaar kiya....usne mandap pe choda....bachpan ka sapna chuta tha....dhara di se rishta chuta tha....daar gayi thi kahi tu bhi na chut jaye....jab tu muje bina khole chala gaya muje laga tu bhi chut gaya....nok jhok hi sahi nafrat hi sahi....but tu hamesha se tha meri zindagi me....aur utna hi jitna dev tha....dev se jitni baat nahi karti thi...use jyada tujse ladai karti thi.....maaf kar de shiva....daar k samne kuch dikha hi nahi!!!"


Listening to raavi's words shiva was stunned!!! She was hurt because she felt that he was letting her go....like others did!!! He this time just dint understand her pain but also felt it!!! He finally took her in his arms and hugged her tight!!


Shiva:-" Mami k behn k beti hai tu....ise kaise chod deta tuje....chahe jo ho kuch toh rishta tha hamara!!! Soch bhi kaise liya tune k me chod dunga tuje??"


Raavi:-" Kaise na sochti...voh kanta aunty k waha function tha...toh tune beech raaste me muje bike se utar diya tha!!!"


Shiva:-" abe chipkali....vo 4 kadam door tha hall se!!! Aur janta tha waha tu akeli aa sakti hai....but yaha mere kadmo k zarurat hogi tuje!!"


Raavi just hugged him more tightly....and he reciprocated!!!


When they were yet hugging each other....Krish knocked there door!!


Krish came in with a tray and was looking in the whole room!!!


Shiva:-" Kya dekh raha hai??"


Krish:-" Yaar dekho.... dev-rishita ka kamra band ho toh voh toh khanda ka chirag deni k apni responsibility puri kar rahe....ab tumhara kamra band ho matlab tum to hamare ansestors k property ko khatam karne ka kaam kar rahe ho...world war 3 jo start hua hoga!!!! Bas check kar raha tha kya kya tuta hai ab tak!!!"


Shiva:-" Sabse phele tera sar!!"


Krish:-" Are chodo yaar....me toh bas yaha dhara bhabhi ne diya hua ice cream dene aya tha!!"


Raavi gets all excited by seeing ice cream.....and she takes both the bowls!!!


Shiva:-" Oh hello voh ek mere liya hai!!!"


Raavi:-" Pagal hai kya.....bina bath kiye ice cream ko hath nahi lagate....ice cream bura maan jayega!!!"


Shiva:-" Chipkali ko toh ice cream kahana hi nahi chaiye!!!"


He tried taking his bowl!! And get a slap on hi hand from raavi!!!


Raavi:- "Sorry ice cream baby ha...next time ye jahil bina bath kiye aapko. Hath nahi lagayega!!!" She was pampering the ice cream cup!!! 


Krish was just njoying their this nok jhok!!!


Krish:-" Toh ek kaam karo na.. apne tidy hath se iss untidy insaan ko thoda khila do....Varna apke ice cream ko iski nazar lag jayegi!!!!"


Shiva:-" Tu ja yaha se Varna tuje hi ice cream banake kha jaunga!!!"


Krish moved out....but shiva saw raavi fully njoying her both the ice creams!!! But this time he wasn't annoyed..... somewhere he was happy seeing her happy!!!


Raavi:-" Chal ab itna ghur mat...aa khila deti hu tuje!!!"


Raavi fed shiva and then placed the bowl on the table!!! Shiva was moving out after they finished their ice cream....he though let her sleep then he would come and sleep.... otherwise it would have been akward for both of them!!!


Raavi:-" Kaha ja raha hai!!"


Shiva:-" Thoda bhar ghum k ata hu!!! Tu soja!!"


Raavi:-" Shiva....jitni raato se me chain se nahi soyi....use jyada raate shayad tu nahi soya chain se!!! Aja shiva aaj nahi ladte....waise bhi thak gaye hum dono ladta ladte....chal sojate hai!!!"


He understood she framed his yesterday's words in her own sentence....he felt happy!!!


They both of them slept on their sides....not knowing what's stored in next!!! May be they dint have a smile while sleeping....or may be they dint even sleep peacefully....but one thing was for sure....they definitely had a good night!!!




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So guyz finally done....how was it???

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Posted: 3 years ago

It was just awesome. I really hope something like this happens in the show. Hope to read more of your stories on ShiVi in future.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Aww so sweet!! Loved it. Any time ShiVi understand each other has my heart. On screen or in writing. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

This Raavi is 👏

Loved how she asked the right questions

Want to read more of your writings and yes ShiVi

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awwww this is so sweet! 😍

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Posted: 3 years ago

I wish the writers read this and utilise the freaking valid points you made. Such depth in the words spoken ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Send this to the writers, I want this to happen in the show.


Raavis speech was the Best!


nok jhok hi sahi nafrat hi sahi....but tu hamesha se tha meri zindagi me....aur utna hi jitna dev tha....dev se jitni baat nahi karti thi...use jyada tujse ladai karti thi.“


This is soo true and something Raavi has to realize in the Show.


Please write more :)

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow a new story ll read soonish

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Posted: 3 years ago

lovely! enjoyed reading it