ShiVi OS: Bubblegum

What's up my buttercups? 🤗

I know I just joined the Pandya Store Forum but I had to get this OS out asap. I previously wrote this for another couple but I can't help but feel that it applies to ShiVi as well. I really hope that when they do eventually fall in love, they have cute nok jhok scenes such as this. 

Please let me know your thoughts 😳 I'd love to improve. 

Thank you so much for such a warm welcome, I will be replying back to all the lovely souls on my other post asap!

Until then...

Aeee India Forums Ke Pandya Store Forum Ke Log, have an amazing day 🤪

Wow was this steaming and hot! LOVED it! ❤️

Never thought of "neanderthal-ism" as a description for Raavi, but I love it, especially considering the situation.

Considering your username you probably would understand, but growing up, I read a couple of Harry Potter fanfics (never wrote for HP though), and I always loved bubblegum stories. This OS brought me down memory lane 😆

And my god, if this non 18+ story is like this, I can't wait for your 18+ stories! In terms of writing critique, I think your writing totally suits my taste, so nothing to change there!

Awesome update 👌👍 last line cracked me up 😂🤣

Amazing update

Shivi's moment was hot🔥

Loved your writing

That was sizzling hot🔥🔥🔥🔥

Loved it😍😍😍

Keep writing❤

Wowza!! That was awesome!! 

Welcome to the forum!! 

O my O my..... That waaaaas HOT!!

Raavi cant get away with teasing Shiva, loved it.

Totally eager to read your next OS :)

I loveeeedd this...

This was reallly good..

Wow.. That was super hot😍...also loved your writing