ShaKhi OS || Strings & Knots || 16+ - Page 4

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Awesome☺️So beautifully written

Loved their convo part😆Both were feeling shy still shown courage nd messaged wht had in their heart

He came to her room to answer her ques😆Loved that part☺️❤️

Do write more!!!

Thanks 😳❤️

Yes.. at times message me people are less hesitant 😉 🤪

Usse raha nahi gaya 🤣 he wanted to give practical demonstration 👍🏼 Professor hai na 😳🤣

Thanks for reading 🤗

Originally posted by: AK_2010

My eyes! My not-so-innocent eyes 🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈

Akshu ☺️ innocence toh hum dono me hai hi nahi 🤣

Rimi yeh tune kya kiya..?! Baby you are an arsonist 🔥🔥🔥🔥 Forum ko aag laga di tune Rimiya 🤭🤭🤭

Achha fire brigade bulvaau? ☺️🤪🤣

RUNNING HIS FINGERS ON THE STRINGS AND BARE SKIN! 

SHOVING HER AGAINST THE WALL!! 

AND NA JANE KYA KYA!!! 

Oh God don't pin point mujhe sharam aane lagti hai 🤣🤣

I'm gone! I'm never gonna see this pair as an innocent couple in love 🤣 Khatam kar diya tune innocence sara..! This OS is like a mating call for all tharkis on the forum 🤣🤣

Arre re ☺️🤣 bas karo jitna Anokhi nahi sharmayi utna mai sharma rahi hu 🤣☺️

Yaar abb when I'm here toh tharkiness badhaana toh banta hai na 😎🤪🤣

I'm gonna go read it again just to make sure this is exactly what you have written... Bcz I really feel like holding Shaurya against the screen of my laptop and show him this. I wanna go an tell him "Yeh!! Yeh kar ke dikha Shaurya Sabherwal! Show your passion!!!" 

Shaurya ye padhke isko as a challenge hi lega 😳 I wish isse bhi passionate kuchh karke dikhaaye 😎☺️🤪

Okay... Before I lose control over my tharak, I'm gonna go and read it again and sleep. And next time you better leave a warning note for me... 😈😈😈 This was a surprise 😬😬😬

Achha next time se I'll give a warning 😳ki akele me kona pakad ke padho 🤣🤣

Aur baaki PM me jo tareef ki uske liye bhi Thanks again 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: mahiaana

😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 mymymymymymymymyyyy 😳😳😳😳🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤 Allah kya masterpiece hein yeh! Aise stories aur chahiye mujhe

Thanks 😆

And wait did you say boring? You have doubts that It got boring? Bro nooooo! Agar koyi isse boring bole mujhe bulana mai ladne laag jayungi uske saath. Tbh i love long OS build up jeyada milta hein. And yeha to aag lag gayi thi!

Thanks a lot 🤗😆 actually khud likhte likhte samajh nahi aata if it's getting boring or what 🤪 but thanks a ton..  means a lot to me ❤️

F##k from the beginning to last 🤤🤤🤤🤤🤤🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 

That texting part! Dude now you gave me idea of them texting more like these and things getting more heat up! 🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚 they will deff do it...

That where part...anokhi putter 🌚🌚🌚 kaha kaha kiss karwana chahti hei aap? 🌚😳🤣  waise ek where par hi lips, forehead, back , neck par mil gayi kisses 🌚 next time where par kaha kaha lagega kiss 🙈🌚

Next time if she ask this "where" I'm sure shaurya would say ask me "where not" if you know what i meam you know 🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚 

Yes i know what you mean 🤣

Achccha next messenging session mein kya hoga? Iss bar to kiss tha! Next time...i would have licked... 🌚 aur nahi bolungi forum members marenge mujhe

Yes sab pakad ke maarenge 😆

Professor literally came to kiss her and give her the ans but bhaav kha raha tha..coat lene aya hein! Jhutta! Raat ko coat se kya chatti banayega 😏 but i liked it more that even though anokhi is naive and inexperienced but she took the step and asked him that! And made him finally lose his mind...😌

Yes she was dealing with first time urges.. they r always stronger 😳

Dude making out  against wall 🌚😌🤤 meri kaha jake knock kiya hein re tune...meri to dil dimag sharir mei lallalallalala ho raha hein! This against wall thing is just 🔥🔥🔥 every time i read something like this...my knees go weaks. I have this huge fetish of this wall thing. (Shower walls mein to aur hotmess romance hojata hein 😌 giving you ideas so we get more like these 🥺😭) 

Thanks for the idea 😉

Shaurya beta! Ruk gaye??? Jis tarah se strings khole mujhe to laga raat aaj issi room meim katne wala hein 🌚 maan na pare ga professor sakht launda hein...itna control over his desires woh bhi jab samne wali itna cute bomb ho ! 

But ufff shaurya abhi abhi bechari ne enjoy karna shuru kiya tha....thora aur jane dete...usko thora aur tumhe explore karne dete!🌚 bas abhu to chest par ayi this kiss karte karte thora aur niche jane dete...at least v line taak 🌚🤤🌚🤤🌚 (Hume bhi aur read karne ko milta 🙈) 

Ruko zara... sabr karo 🤣 zyada jaldi karega toh she will get scared 😉🤪

My god i can write an 3000 words assignment on this...bhai yeh best tha 🌚🔥 hotmess tha...thanks for writing this 😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘 abhi yeh aur bhi 1235678919176567 times read karungi mein. 

Aww thank you so much dear 🤗❤️

Itne khubsurti se likha hein ki lag rahey the scenes akho ke samne play horaha hein 😍😭 haayeee please write more like these...tumhari mind ko meri salam jo aise cheeze ghumati rehti hein and tumhe mazboor karti hein pen down karne mein. Rimi's Brain mata please keep bringing this kinda thoughts 🥺😭 to hume aur aise aise milenge. 

I'm glad you liked it so much ❤️ aise encouraging reviews padhke definitely aur likhungi 😎😆 

Ok now please someone tell me to shut up otherwise i will keep ranting 😭😩 ruk hi nahi rahey meri fingers ...itne tarif karne ko maan kar raha hein...😭😭😭 saab lelo meri...dil kalija kidney...but please keep writing on them more 😭😭😭

Thanks a lot 🤗 you are hilarious i must say 😆 what's your name?😳

Originally posted by: Siddiquie

Mere gaal itne laal hue☺️Ki dard kar rahe hain☺️🤪Rimi tu mujhe phasa di😡my mom caught me smiling sheepishly while reading this🤣🤣waise kamaal ka likha hai😳☺️

Tadpole 🤗

Tune dekha ki maine likha hai...MAINE aur fir bhi tune carefully nai padha ki pakdi na jaaye?😳 🤣 

Abb aunty se maar khaao mujhe kya 🤣 

Thanks Btw ☺️🤪

Originally posted by: Siddiquie

bina bataye daal diOpen karke dekha aur padha toh mummy pakadli 🤣At least warning note hota toh kona pakad leti main🤪🥺🤣Mummy ka shaqq gehra hota ja raha hai,all thanks to Rimi ke OH SO HOT OS🤣🤪

Isra 🤣 kisi din aunty ne tera phone check kar liya toh she'll be actually disappointed ki tu ladke ke saath nahi, mere writeups ke saath relationship me hai 🤣🤪

Originally posted by: Abhipyaarhua

Omggggggg. Yaaar this was so hot. ❤️❤️❤️ And the buildup was so well written. I can't deal onlyyy. I have to read it another 20 times now. Uff ufff. 

🙈🙈🙈😍

Oh thank you so much 🤗

When writing romance, built up is everything 😉😆 glad u liked it 🤗

Originally posted by: minamma

Ufff 

Such insane thoughts has entered our gutter minds

Ye dil maange more

Haaye hotness alert 🚨

Do write more

Ohh and please add a love bite and embarrassment in your next work too🙈

Hey... thanks a lot 🤗❤️

Insane thoughts toh abhi aur ayenge 😳🤪

Thanks for the suggestion 👍🏼 I'll surely try to include this next 👍🏼

Wow...that was just wow🤩...nope i wasnt bored at all...was so worried it was going to end so thnx for keeping it looooong😉...truly awesome...captured their feelings so well...awww....really loved it💖💖💖

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

I read this after 7 - 8 mins within posting but had to re-read few parts agn because that's how much interesting this OS was 👏

Ohh really?  Thanks a lot.. i'm overwhelmed 

 & yes, I'm late to comment too 🤣

And I'm super late to reply 🤪

Everything was on point. Shaurya's hesitation, Anokhi's shyness were nicely written. Especially the messages made me giggle & I could picturize the scenes, so this kinda 'typical fluff' is what we would love reading 😆😆

Thanks a lot 😳😆 their messages part was something which happens with every new couple 🤣🤣  sometimes when I write, I feel oh God thats so typical 🤪 but i enjoy yahi sab ☺️ glad you liked it 🤗

If you had ended the story with the kiss, I wouldn't have mind coz that was enough but you had decided to continue & with the lil nuances from Shaurya & Anokhi too, I was literally on the edge of the seat. Hayee, hayee sounds were going inside my brain 😂🤣

Romance is best when it comes a surprise 😉🤪 

Amazing plot & I didn't even find any errors even if there were because didn't matter 🤣 Aur likho aisi great stories & yes, great one once again!

Thanks a lot 🤗❤️