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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Wowwwww diii 

First congo for ur new story ๐Ÿฅณ๐ŸŽ‰

Comming to the first part it is really awesome 

Totally love with this story from the first 

Let's see how jalal will clear the misunderstanding with her and how their love story takes place 

Continue it soon โ˜บ๏ธ

Thank you so much, ๐ŸŒน 

It's just a three shot story though ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I'm so glad you enjoy reading it, โ˜บ๏ธ

It's not to big misunderstanding hopefully it will be clear soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I will try to make next soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thank you so much for lovely comment๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Congo for a new story

superb update

soo nice

update soon next part

Thank you ๐ŸŒน 

I'm glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thanks โ˜บ๏ธ

I will try to make next part soon โค๏ธ

Thanks for sweet comment ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Soso70

Awww Avi, congrats for your new story  ๐Ÿ˜๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰

Modern one, Jodha as teacher and hot tenant 

Jalal saved her from rowdies but she's carefully and felt uncomfortable because she don't know him

Jalal's disappointed about her reaction and is enjoyable surprised about her note and the kheer. But it seems that Jodha isnยดt interested in him

beautiful beginning. loved it ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Letยดs see whatยดs fate will play with the both 

Thank you for tagging ๐Ÿ’–

Thank you so much Sonja ๐Ÿค— it's just a three shot story โ˜บ๏ธ

Absolutely but here both leads are Tennant ๐Ÿ˜†

Of-course she isn't interested In him yet, he's absolutely a stranger to her, ๐Ÿ˜Š beside though not very acquainted they are sharing bond of tenant mate โ˜บ๏ธ

Yeah it will be interesting to see what happens next ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Hopefully the three shot come out succeful like my rest of work โ˜บ๏ธ

Thank you so much for heart warming beautiful Comment ๐Ÿค— truly a mood lifter โค๏ธ

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Loved it dear 

Awesome update ๐Ÿค—

Jodha & Jalal meet was really interesting  & I loved it 

Shipra is really a darling ๐Ÿ™‚ 

Loo besabr Jalal ne propose bhi kar diya hai  ... Good๐Ÿ‘

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon๐Ÿ™‚


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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Lovely chapter dii 

Woww jalal's parents were really nice they accepted jodha 

Finally the misunderstanding is resolved 

But jalal's proprosal was really funny I mean aise kon propose karta hai๐Ÿคฃ

Lo ek misunderstanding dur hua ki nhi dura aa gya 

Now jodha is believing him as an insolent guy who keeps on stalking her 

Woah so jalal is the ACP 

Let's see how the things will come to a happy note with love between jodha and Jalal 

Continue it soon

Thx for pm โ˜บ๏ธ

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Shipra is nice and symphatetic. Loved her banter. And his conversation with his mom, lovely, as she asked about Jodha. his parents accepted her and they don't mind about he don't met the other girl

Knight in shining armour to help damsel in distress!

Great line of Shweta, girl's talk ๐Ÿ˜†

Jalals love confession went completely wrong. Poor boy, out of sheer zeal, he blurted out his feelings and completely ran over Jodha with it ๐Ÿ˜†. he makes things worse than he doesn't want to leave. Jodha's really angry. 

Jo's playing football. Cool ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

she is shocked when Jalal sits across from her as ACP. I'm curious what Jo is doing now. The two get off to a bad start. 

I'm thrilling for last part how he will manage it to win her heart 

loved it Avi ๐Ÿ˜. Thx for pm 

Take care ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it dear 

Awesome update ๐Ÿค—

Jodha & Jalal meet was really interesting  & I loved it 

Shipra is really a darling ๐Ÿ™‚ 

Loo besabr Jalal ne propose bhi kar diya hai  ... Good๐Ÿ‘

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon๐Ÿ™‚


Thank you di ๐ŸŒน I'm so pleased to know you enjoyedโ˜บ๏ธ

Glad to you like Jo Ja meet โค๏ธ

Right, Shipra is sweet sister ๐Ÿ˜† like any other give us relatable act ๐Ÿ˜ณ

"Yes he was way to fast and straightforward ๐Ÿ˜† direct third meet confess ๐Ÿ˜†

Your welcome ๐Ÿ˜ณ I will try to make next soon โ˜บ๏ธ

Thank you so much for sweet comment ๐Ÿ˜Š take care ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Lovely chapter dii 

Thank you ๐Ÿค—

Woww jalal's parents were really nice they accepted jodha 

"Absolutely they're ok with their son choice ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Finally the misunderstanding is resolved 

"Yes ๐Ÿฅณ as it's three shot so no point in stretching ๐Ÿ˜†

But jalal's proprosal was really funny I mean aise kon propose karta hai๐Ÿคฃ

Answer of Underlined "Jalal does ๐Ÿคฃ  he's always straightforward in such case ๐Ÿ˜† 

Lo ek misunderstanding dur hua ki nhi dura aa gya 

"Every couple story ๐Ÿคฃ

Now jodha is believing him as an insolent guy who keeps on stalking her 

"Yes before he didn't get time to court her, but after confession he get lot of time to run around her ๐Ÿคฃ

Woah so jalal is the ACP 

"Doesn't sound to unexpected ๐Ÿ˜†

Let's see how the things will come to a happy note with love between jodha and Jalal 

"Sure soon you will see the end of lovely story๐Ÿ˜ณ

Continue it soon

I will try ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thx for pm โ˜บ๏ธ

Welcome ๐Ÿค—

Thank you so much Sweet sis, for the beautiful adorable comment ๐Ÿ˜Š thank you take care ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Soso70

Shipra is nice and symphatetic. Loved her banter. And his conversation with his mom, lovely, as she asked about Jodha. his parents accepted her and they don't mind about he don't met the other girl

Thank you Sonja I'm so glad you enjoy , ๐Ÿค—Shipra is like any other Sister โ˜บ๏ธ"Yes his family is very open and cool, they don't mind when he out forth his emotions about having interest in other!.๐Ÿ˜ณ

Knight in shining armour to help damsel in distress!

Great line of Shweta, girl's talk ๐Ÿ˜†

It was funny like you said girl talk ๐Ÿ˜†

Jalals love confession went completely wrong. Poor boy, out of sheer zeal, he blurted out his feelings and completely ran over Jodha with it ๐Ÿ˜†. he makes things worse than he doesn't want to leave. Jodha's really angry. 

"Angry Jo is fun, but Ja is no less he's always step ahead of her, but messed up in case of handling his own emotion or else one can expect a decent well organized planned Confession a proposal ๐Ÿ˜ณ but he bitten by insect of jealousy went straight to confess ๐Ÿคฃ and his stubbornness make it more complex๐Ÿ˜†

Jo's playing football. Cool ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Yeah teacher and pro player in past 

she is shocked when Jalal sits across from her as ACP. I'm curious what Jo is doing now. The two get off to a bad start. 

"Yes two got of on bad start, Ja get misunderstood by her lot ๐Ÿ˜† but his job come out truly surprising for her and his stubbornness unnerved her more ๐Ÿ˜†

I'm thrilling for last part how he will manage it to win her heart 

"I hope it didn't turn out disappointing as it raise expectation though let's see how last part play out โ˜บ๏ธ 

loved it Avi ๐Ÿ˜. Thx for pm 

Thank you so much ๐ŸŒน Sonja for the wonderfully heart winning Comment ๐Ÿค—

Take care ๐Ÿค—

"I will , โ˜บ๏ธ you to take care ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Loved it dear 

Awesome and beautiful part๐Ÿค—

I was really laughing hard after reading all this ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ wonderfulโœจ๐Ÿ˜

๐Ÿคฃ๐ŸคฃLOL beta ACP behen ne takkar maari & papa IG poor Jo kaha fas gayi

Cherry on the cake was mom too good 

So the tenant finally met lo Jodha got him transferred to 

But a wonderful start of a beautiful relationship ๐Ÿ˜‰ 

Thanks for the PM 

Keep writingโœ๏ธ