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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 41

Nice part dear...

They had such a good time but maan had to say this and ruin every thing ....

Thank you for the pm dear loved reading this....will be waiting for the next part dear please update soon....

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 42

Interesting part

Maan's mom is here and geet told her everything....

But was maan just acting and lieing to geet about himself and his life for the revange thing or was everything true...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 41

Wait what.....? She literally just called him to tell him about the hickey......?wow and she's a little late picking up matters... Isn't it nice to talk like normal people without a fight for once... Like they are complimenting each other on their looks and likes... And... The cat is out of the bag Maan nearly confessed his love for Geet not clearly though but he told Geet how he actually felt about her... And to say that someone's jealous would be an understatement cuz Maan really don't like someone snatching his girl...

Hrmmm Geet a fboy... It didn't match actually... 🤗

 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 42

Omg Geet apne pairon per khuladi maar liya.... What is the need to bring Maan's mother there... I think she's in trouble now... They were all in good terms and Geet had to go and mess up with everything... And by the looks of the situation it's clearly evident that Maan is not in good terms with his mother... Really wondering what will happen now.... Nice update Di 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 41

Maan did complement her, so that was nice. He is so concerned about her dates but thinks nothing of his own hookups. He has abandonment issues.

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Posted: 3 years ago

part 42

Geet contacted his mother. What is she really like? Geet is thinking she looks motherly, but is she? Why did she leave him?

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Posted: 3 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 42)

Winner:  Kkiran 

Runner-ups:  Creampuff Taahir 004

Special Mention: neasya

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments):  Kkiran, Creampuff, aparna3011

 

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Part 43

 

Maan’s mom walks in

 

She is in some designer saree, full tip-top dressed with makeup on

 

But she looks motherly and not how Maan described

 

Geet is confused, who is right who is wrong

 

Her book says sometimes addicts lie

 

She is wondering whether she should believe Maan

 

But she knows Maan doesn't lie to her

 

He knows, I won't give him what he wants if he lies or begs or cheats

 

He has no reason to lie to me

 

But my book says otherwise naa

 

What to believe?

 

Geet wonders to herself

 

Mom looks at Maan

 

Mom-Maan

 

M-Mom

 

G-Hello aunty

 

Maan’s mom turns her head towards Geet

 

Mom-Can you please step outside for a while, I want to speak to my son

 

Geet nods and steps outside

 

Maan’s mom shuts the door behind her

 

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Geet wait karti rahi hai bahar anxiously

 

Kaafi der baad door khulta hai

 

Maan’s mom walks out

 

Maan follows with his stuff

 

Maan’s mom stands in front of Geet while Geet notices Maan climbing down the stairs with his stuff

 

Mom-I am taking my son home. Thank you for your service

 

Geet is silent

 

She doesn’t know what to say

 

Dono chale jaate hain

 

Maan who was standing downstairs knows that he didn’t say a final goodbye to Geet, but he is too annoyed at her for calling his mom there

 

This wouldn’t have been the final goodbye if she hadn’t done what she did

 

Geet looks Maan getting into the car and driving off from her roof

 

Geet goes into her empty home

 

Pehle toh kabhi aisa laga nahi

 

She always came back to an empty house

 

She hugs her knees while sitting on the bed looking around the silent empty house

 

Her mobile pings

 

She checks it to see  friends whatsapping her pics from last night

 

Comments aa rahe hain friends ke ki...

 

‘Jo bhi bolo you are the cutest couple’

 

‘look! so made for each other’

 

Geet apni melancholy mein let gai

 

She doesn’t feel like doing anything

 

Geet thode der baad book leke baithti hai

 

Kuch mann nahi ho raha

 

Then tries to exercise

 

No use

 

Tries to exercise with the book

 

Still no use

 

She tries to message him

 

But message jaa nahi rahe

 

Geet ne socha kal phir try karti hoon , aaj shayad mom ke saath busy ho

 

Next day hote hi Geet ne phir message kiya

 

Phir same

 

Message rebound

 

She tried calling him but no use

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 43


Interesting and Surprising 


Maan's mother seemed neutral to the situation 

but she was certainly not grateful to Geet

just a thank you as politeness was given 

while Maan is annoyed okay that is understandable 

but he not even glancing Geet's way is simply wrong 

Geet has no idea what Maan's mother is about 

she only saw her when she was ill 

yes now Geet feels the emptiness of her home , she had gotten

used having Maan in her home 

but why is he not been reachable hope nothing is wrong on his side 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 43

What a shocking update !!! 😲

What transpired maan & his mom behind closed doors ?? 

The suspense is killing me!!!! 😕

So his mom took maan away 

Maan does not even say goodbye b/c he is rightfully pissed at geet for calling his mom 

What did you mean final goodbye??? 

Where is she taking maan ?? 

Geet is so melancholy w/o maan 

Nothing interests her 

Hmmm will she finally realize she has fallen in love with him ?? 

But why is maan not answering his phone ??? 

Di you have me worried with this twist ....,, where is our hunkilicious munda & what did his mom do with him ??? 

Now super geet should come to the rescue 😆

Sooo eagerly awaiting next update !!! 

Thank you so much for the splendid update !!! 


Edited by Creampuff - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Fantastic update 😊👍