Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Star Commentor Award (Part 43)

Winner:  Alamelu, Kkiran

Runner-ups: , Taahir 004, Khwaishfan

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Part 44

 

Next day hote hi Geet ne phir message kiya

 

Phir same

 

Message rebound

 

She tried calling him but no use

 

Geet ne decidd kia ki Maan ke ghar jaake hi dekhte hain

 

Waise bhi faaltu ki chinta ho hi rahi thi

 

Ek baar Maan ko theek dekh legi toh usko bhi tasalli ho jayegi

 

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She reaches Maan’s home

 

Maan’s staff knew her so lets her enter easily

 

Maan ke drawing room ke couch pe his mom and a man are sitting sipping tea as Geet enters

 

G- Good Morning

 

Mom-Oh! Good morning Dr Handa

 

G- You can call me Geet...Mrs...emm...mam

 

(Awkward silence)

 

Geet ne socha Maan ki mom baithne ko offer karegi

 

Ab nahi kia toh she continued

 

G- I came to meet Maan. Can I please…?

 

Mom- He is in the guest bedroom

 

Geet is standing blanking waiting for directions

 

Is his mom assuming that I would know every nook n corner of Maan’s house?

 

Geet wonders

 

The man sitting on the couch realizes Geet’s position and gives her directions

 

Geet goes towards the room

 

She never realized ki Maan ka ghar itna bada hai

 

Aur wo Maan ko apne chotte se shoebox sized room sula rahi thi

 

Zarur interior decorator se sajwaya hoga, she thinks

 

Warna Maan ko kahan itna sajaana aata hai

 

She reaches the room

 

The room is locked from inside

 

She knocks

 

G- Maan. Its Geet. Are you there?

 

The door opens

 

Maan is in his vest & track pant.

 

Hair disheveled

 

Her eyes widen seeing him in his hot avatar

 

He moves so she can walk in

 

He locks the door again after she walks in

 

The room is in a mess

 

Furniture is all upside down

 

While Geet is noticing his room, Maan notices that she is wearing a pink salwar kameez.

 

Geet ne socha tha ki Maan ki mom ghar pe hogi toh ache kapde pehen leti hoon

 

Baal banake thoda makeup karke bhi aayi hai

 

G-Hi. How are you?

 

G-Maan?

 

She asks again as he doesn’t respond

 

He is looking at her with accusing gaze

 

M-Thank you for calling my mom. Now she will drag me into a rehab

 

G-No, why do you think so?

 

She goes near him and cups his face between her hands

 

His 5 O’clock shadow is touching her palms

 

M-I don’t think so. I know so. We are going to London today and there they will chuck me into a rehab

 

G-What???

 

Her heart sinks

 

G-I will speak to your mom. She will surely listen to me.She knows me, trusts me as a doctor

 

M-She hates you

 

He says blankly

 

G-What??? Why????

 

M-She thinks you are reason for everything. You are the wrong influence. That after I met you, things went downhill for her son and that you are a gold digger

 

G-What????? I am not!

 

She is just shocked by all this

 

She is finding it hard to find words

 

G-I am a bad influence??? You had a gun!

 

Maan wanted to say, ‘well you had a chainsaw’ but doesn’t say anything

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 41 

Omg what a brilliant update !!! 👏👏👏

Their conversations were out of this world !!! Loved them 💗

I like how you described the scene where they are walking to geet’s place . You created a very vivid image . 

They are totally enjoying the tranquility of spending time together while they are leisurely walking & actually having a pleasant conversation 

It was the calm before the storm but this conversation was long overdue 

I am so proud of maan for pouring out his emotions............ 

geet is totally clueless about his emotions or anyone else’s for that matter 😆

Maan’s last comment was funny 

Hoping now the fog  will clear out of geet’s head 😆

Thank you soooooo much for updating the story , you could write a comedy sitcom for these two 👍🏼--This was the best compliment ever❤️smiley27smiley27smiley27smiley27smiley27smiley27smiley27smiley27smiley27

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Kkiran

Agg lag jaye iski book ko. I swear she sucks at reading people everything is a damn manual for her.  No Maan dont apologize to her she needs to hear it. She barely has an appropriate diagnosis for him and here she jumping to conclusions. She should have atleast  found out more about his mom and then think about is it appropriate for her to reach out but ding dong here doesnt think like that because the book didnt say. Someone get her a new book please LMAO


This was sooo good!!! believe me...I thoroughly enjoyed it! Super best comment!! I must have read this comment 100 times at least❤️smiley27smiley27smiley27smiley27 This cracked me so much🤣smiley37smiley37smiley37smiley37smiley37smiley37

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 42 

Electrifying update !!!! smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32

Sparks are flying with their intense argument/convo 

They both lose their cool smiley7

But it is so cute how they make up & apologize to each other smiley20

& they share the bed smiley2

They are sounding more like a married couple each day smiley36smiley36

But geet surprising maan with his mom has exploded in her face , maan is upset 

& geet is confused what to do smiley5

Her heart was in the right place b/c she cares about maan but I think she should of stuck to ironing out their relationship 1st. 

Now what is the whole deal with maan’s mom .?.,,,, how did she abandon him?? Is it his real mom or stepmom?? Or did his real mom remarry ?? If she finds out maan is doing drugs will she disinherit him ?? Geet treated her before but I am assuming she did not talk to her ?? I am really confused with his mom’s scenario . And I don’t think maan is really an Addict b/c he would not have lasted this long w/o his vices & he has been coherent & functioning normally not like an addicted agitated junkie who cannot think clearly ...... in fact maan is thinking clearer than geet smiley36smiley36--Agree with this 10000%🤣

Maybe things will get cleared up soon ?? 

Can’t wait for next update smiley42

Thank you smiley31


Sabr rakho beta...sab jawaab milenge

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 42 


Fabulous and Surprising


Maan is annoyed with Geet , and he is also right 

she can live with him , help him through his addiction 

yet she finds fault in dating him all because he is rich 

oh I just enjoy when Geet has to decide whether to sleep on the couch 

its Maan that tells her to sleep , like they already a serious couple  as if

she should know her place is on the bed by his side --THis line stole my heart❤️

Geet had contacted Maan's mother thinking it would be a surprise 

yet she is aware that his mother abandoned him then why without 

thinking this decision through she just went ahead and contacted Maan's mother

Maan feels that everything is over and now I'm looking forward to seeing why

he feels if his mother knows about his habits that everything will be over 

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Originally posted by: neasya

Congratulations on your new story dear 😊 

Sorry couldn't read it till now but will surely read and comment....

What a start dear maan and  geet are in full form....

Geet is in full tashan tried to dhamkao maan and he signed the papers...

Thank u for the pm dear 😚


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Posted: 3 years ago

Mom does not seem to care that much for her son. She may have an ulterior motive behind the rehab. On what basis did she make all those assumptions about Geet?

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update

Maan mom is bad she is talking maan to London then rehab and blaming geet why she helped maan 


Now what geet will do waiting to see update soon

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Wonderful update superb 💕

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Thank you for the award glad you enjoying my comments and frustration lol Gun, chainsaw, bomb you know some casual cheeze to save your ass when in trouble.  We went from interior designer to interior disaster LMAO. Love how she so casually shows up like its will be fine but nope she knows how to walk into fire. Geet clearly your book didn't tell you his mom doesnt like you well glad Maan did now I hope you help him escape because you landed him in the mess to begin with.