Star Commentor Award (Part 43)
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Part 44
Next day hote hi Geet ne phir message kiya
Phir same
Message rebound
She tried calling him but no use
Geet ne decidd kia ki Maan ke ghar jaake hi dekhte hain
Waise bhi faaltu ki chinta ho hi rahi thi
Ek baar Maan ko theek dekh legi toh usko bhi tasalli ho jayegi
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She reaches Maan’s home
Maan’s staff knew her so lets her enter easily
Maan ke drawing room ke couch pe his mom and a man are sitting sipping tea as Geet enters
G- Good Morning
Mom-Oh! Good morning Dr Handa
G- You can call me Geet...Mrs...emm...mam
(Awkward silence)
Geet ne socha Maan ki mom baithne ko offer karegi
Ab nahi kia toh she continued
G- I came to meet Maan. Can I please…?
Mom- He is in the guest bedroom
Geet is standing blanking waiting for directions
Is his mom assuming that I would know every nook n corner of Maan’s house?
Geet wonders
The man sitting on the couch realizes Geet’s position and gives her directions
Geet goes towards the room
She never realized ki Maan ka ghar itna bada hai
Aur wo Maan ko apne chotte se shoebox sized room sula rahi thi
Zarur interior decorator se sajwaya hoga, she thinks
Warna Maan ko kahan itna sajaana aata hai
She reaches the room
The room is locked from inside
She knocks
G- Maan. Its Geet. Are you there?
The door opens
Maan is in his vest & track pant.
Hair disheveled
Her eyes widen seeing him in his hot avatar
He moves so she can walk in
He locks the door again after she walks in
The room is in a mess
Furniture is all upside down
While Geet is noticing his room, Maan notices that she is wearing a pink salwar kameez.
Geet ne socha tha ki Maan ki mom ghar pe hogi toh ache kapde pehen leti hoon
Baal banake thoda makeup karke bhi aayi hai
G-Hi. How are you?
G-Maan?
She asks again as he doesn’t respond
He is looking at her with accusing gaze
M-Thank you for calling my mom. Now she will drag me into a rehab
G-No, why do you think so?
She goes near him and cups his face between her hands
His 5 O’clock shadow is touching her palms
M-I don’t think so. I know so. We are going to London today and there they will chuck me into a rehab
G-What???
Her heart sinks
G-I will speak to your mom. She will surely listen to me.She knows me, trusts me as a doctor
M-She hates you
He says blankly
G-What??? Why????
M-She thinks you are reason for everything. You are the wrong influence. That after I met you, things went downhill for her son and that you are a gold digger
G-What????? I am not!
She is just shocked by all this
She is finding it hard to find words
G-I am a bad influence??? You had a gun!
Maan wanted to say, ‘well you had a chainsaw’ but doesn’t say anything
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