This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 51

Posted: 3 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 26)

Winner:  khwaishfan ⭐️

Runner-ups:  ferdouz

SpecialMention:  sanum23

EarlyBirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): Alamelu,sanum23, Umadevi97

 

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Part 27

 

Geet goes to Maan’s house to apologize... & maybe say ki she likes him coz negating things isn't helping her

 

She realizes yahan toh party chal rahi hai

 

She starts looking for Maan

 

After a good search and asking around all half-drunk half high people, she finally gets to Maan

 

She does find Maan, but she finds him snogging a girl in a dimly lit room

 

She freezes. As if the time has stopped for her

 

She wants to shake him, thrash him

 

But doesn't do anything

 

She walks out of the room

 

She thinks if Maan likes this girl then who is she to stop him?

 

Maybe it’s a one-night stand, who is she to interfere in his life?

 

It’s not like the girl is raping him...he also wants it

 

It would have been so much better to smack him and leave grandly. It will be much easier to ignore Maan in her mind then

 

But the thing is, she doesn't want to leave Maan

 

She has other plans

 

She will deal with this head on. But not while Maan is high

 

She goes back seeing the other girl coming out

 

She gets inside the room with Maan and locks the door

 

G- What the hell are you doing huh! You are messing up with your life? Are you a teenager to act so irresponsibly? I know you are better than this, Maan

 

She checks his pulse rate and examines him ki drugs li kaunsi hai...yaa is he only drunk

 

Uss hisaab se jo karna hai karegi

 

She stays locked up with him in the room till he sobers up a little

 

Geet ko samajh nahi aa raha thik se, as uske paas equipments nahi hai abhi...but koi ecstasy inducing drug sa hi lag raha hai

 

Geet ko toh itna gussa aa raha hai ki kya bole

 

Bachcha hai nahi ye. He seemed like a suljha hua banda. Arre pehli baar uske dad ko coldly threaten kiya tha iss hi bande ne. Isse kya ho gaya?

 

But she realizes that he needs help, and he needs help now and there is nobody in his life to help him apart from her

 

And nobody realized what’s going on in his life coz he is so closed of a person

 

She remembers the therapy she went for few weeks back-

 

She had given her blood samples ki uske mein kuch toh locha hai...why so much feels for that jerk

 

Geet ne therapy mein ye ho raha hai wo ho raha hai kaha

 

Doctor ne kaha ki....have you considered it’s just love?

 

Geet is like no...

 

G-My blood sample has abnormal amount of estrogen & pheromones

 

Doc-Yup, as I said love. Totally normal. You guys should date

 

Geet uthke chali gai ki doctor hi pagal hai

 

Abhi room mein baithe Maan ke saath Geet ko lag raha hai ki doctor thik thi.

 

She loves him and can’t see him in pain

 

But Maan ko nahi batana hai, faltu mein mazaak udayega

 

This is bound to end up in a heartbreak, aur karo pheromones ka overflow!

 

Geet thinks- my stupid lymphatic system!

 

She thinks ki batake waise bhi kya fayda hoga Maan ko...as if he feels the same...warna he wouldn’t have been eating up that girl's face today

 

Kaunsa wo mujse pyaar karta hai

 

Geet sochti hai, mujhe toh kabhi aise kiss nahi kia

 

On the other hand, thinks...eww gross ...sloppy

 

++++

 

When Maan sobers up a little and all-party people go, then Geet drags him

 

G-You are moving with me. Yahan bilkul nahi rahoge tum! This wicked company of yours is ruining everything

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

 Geet didn't mu him she love him and want save him from bad company but don't want to confess her love either 

 She thinks maan mazak banay ga if he get to know sbout her feelings 

 She also want to know what wrong happened in his life that he doing like this before he was not like this when he threatened her dad 

 She taking him with her waiting fr maan reaction

Edited by sanum23 - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by taahir004


Congratulations To All Winners 


Of Part 25


Well Done !!!!!


Part 26


Fascinating and Flamboyant 


Maan seems to have a weak persona 

it almost seems like he needs someone with him all the time 

he needs stability in his life .

but Maan also needs some kind of confidence that he can be without

these friends that drinks and use drugs 

for Maan been with a woman is not just passing time but its more 

of he wanting to be accepted and liked by someone 

Geet's parents want her to have someone in her life and she goes 

and meet a doctor too and both have a pleasant evening 

however Geet ignored Maan will he seemed jealous and hurt also disappointed too

oh Geet should interrupt Maan's plan of spending his time with this lady 

Maan needs someone to pamper and care for him 

it almost seem like he is alone but where is his mother 


Well...i dont think Maan has weak persona...you will know why I am saying that...but yes he has abandonment issues. You are right that he needs stability in his life  and  

or Maan been with a woman is not just passing time but its more 

of he wanting to be accepted and liked by someone 

You are also right that he is alone

But maybe he is alone because of his mother only

Maybe the one person he valued the most has caused him abandonment issues and now he doesnt care what happens to him and he has no directionless

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by khwaishfan


Hi there, thanks for the pm

wow thanks for the award  You are welcome


Part 26

Amazing update... greatly written Thanks

of cos Geet's parents want her to settle down

not surprised she agreed...

Gosh she meet's the guy at Maan's hotel

I knew Geet has feelings for Maan... 

so she wants to get Maan out of her system... 

but is it that easy? well...lets see

so Maan sees her and is angry

she never is like this with him

she is enjoying and smiling

as expected she sees Maan

sad that she ignores Maan and treats him like a stranger

feeling for Maan

its indeed public humiliation

oh no Maan has abandonment issues....

eager to know more about this

Geet's behavior affects Maan and he has reached a low point

at least she felt guilty and decided to apologise to Maan

well why would he message or call her? well...no reason...but she expects him to

so she misses Maan will she admit it?

liked that she went to say she likes him

but there is a party going on in Maan's house

hate that she saw him kissing a girl

hope there will be no mu

will she tell him that she likes him? lets see

update soon

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 26 

Welcome back di .... we missed you !! 🤗

Uh oh , geet’s parents are trying to arrange her marriage 😕 yikes !!! 

& of course maan had to see them on their date 😔

But the worst part was that she ignored him ....... I know she is trying to suppress her feelings but that was hurtful 😒

Glad that she realizes & wants to apologize but what she finds is surprising !! 😲

As for the abandonment issues ...., are you  referring to his mom??? 

Curious got more .... 

thank you for pm & update 

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 27 

Wow back to back updates -thank you 🤗

Superb update !!! 👍🏼👍🏼

Glad that even though geet was suprised & disturbed with maan’s situation she back-tracked & came back 👍🏼

Shocked 😲 that she saw a therapist about her feelings for maan 

Delighted that she realizes she is in love with him ...... time for a happy dance !!! 🥳

But our silly gal will not confess her feelings due to fear of ridicule & heartbreak 😕

....,,, she doesn’t realize that this is the cure for maan’s ailments 

........ suprised that our lady doctor cannot make the right diagnosis 😉😆😆

I am super happy that geet is taken charge of the situation & forcing maan to live with her ...,. He needs to be steered in the right direction with love & guidance . 💕

Eagerly awaiting next update 

Thank you for pm & update 

Posted: 3 years ago

She is taking him to her house,

She doesn't want him to be in bad company,wants to take care of him,he too is lonely, looking forward to further....

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 27

Woho, yeah now we're talking.... 😳 so Geet is taking the needed steps for Maan and herself... Nice I really don't want them ending up in a heartbreak... Waiting to see more... 🤗

Posted: 3 years ago

Omg 🤣 yeh Geet is a specimen only 😄I loved the update. 

She does a blood test to see if there is a locha 🤭😋

Finally she realizes she is in love with Maan. 

Thank you learnt few new medical terms 😁

Yeh dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta 🤷

They will care for each other but will not confess the truth 🤦🏼‍♀️

She has already decided to take Maan along with her. 

Waiting for Maans reaction. 

Posted: 3 years ago

27

great update

geet not able to leave maan in this condition n with those wrong people



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