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Posted: 4 years ago

Congratulations on to all the Winners


of Part 26


Well Done

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Posted: 4 years ago

Congratulations To All The Winners


Of Part 26


Well Done

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 27


Fabulous and Worrisome Update


Geet now comes to Maan but seeing him

smooching a girl , Geet feels maybe he likes the girl

so she leaves but thankfully she than realizes that

Maan needs help

he could be under the influence of drugs and she

locks herself in the room with Maan

this is called care and love

Geet wanting to help him

and its true it seems his family has no idea on which path Maan is walking on

he will soon destroy his life if not stopped

so here I totally admire Geet for staying and wanting to help Maan

did Geet really get her blood teated to know why she cannot rid of

Maan's thoughts , okay she is crazy

she has fallen for him and I think Maan will surely be serious with her

because all he wants is a girl to love and care for him

someone that will take him home to her parents


will be waiting to see Maan's reactions the next morning

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Posted: 4 years ago

She will have him move in with her? She used to be worried about people seeing him coming over to her place.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great part

Geet realizes her love for maan wow

But will her parents agree

Also maan is hiding his pain and he needs to talk

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

I am late to this story but better late then never. These 2 have had a nice long journey of taking its at each other, but the attraction they have had is amazing. I know Maan has felt it for a while as he enjoys Geets company, but Geet thinking he is a rich brat and she is protecting herself from heartbreak. There was so much they can protect but Maan has his feelings and is very much hurt with Geets ignorance and I hope now Geets sees how he is drowning himself in bad company she is there to pull him out and heal him. Hope through healing they can expressive themselves.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very interesting part

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Posted: 4 years ago

So so glad geet tookThis step. Was hoping she would slap him and make him see the company he is keeping how destructive it is

She realizes he has no one To turn to. Her feelings are also new to her now

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 27)

Winner: Taahir004⭐️ khwaishfan⭐️

Runner-ups: ferdouz, Creampuff

SpecialMention: Alamelu

EarlyBirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): sanum23, Creampuff, NeenaDd

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Part 28

When Maan sobers up a little and all-party people go, then Geet drags him

G-You are moving with me. Yahan bilkul nahi rahoge tum! This wicked company of yours is ruining everything

Maan is still buzzed ki kya bol rahi hai

She drives him to her home

G-You can even take the bed

Geet thinks ki isse meri badnaami hogi, par hone do....Maan is more important

Waise bhi she plans to move out of the city after he gets better coz it will be too painful for her to remain in the same city with all those unrequited emotions

She knows this will end up with a heartbreak

Geet ne consider kia ki kya Maan ko rehab bhejun?

Par she thinks ki what motivation will he have to stay in the rehab?

None. Kam se kam yahan meri daant sunta toh hai, mere nazro ke saamne toh rehta hai

Geet ne Maan ke liye1-2 hafta chutti li hai, so she doesn’t have to leave him alone

She wants Maan to start working from home so that uska mann thoda behela rahe, she knows ye sab awarepann wajah se Maan ka kaam bohot hamper hua hoga

It’s like they are quarantined together in her tiny roof-top studio apartment

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Kuch der baad Maan sober hota hai

Dekhta hai ki Geet yahan leke aa gai hai..uske ghar

M-Why am I here?

G- You will be here. Coz you need to clean up. Away from all your party friends, booze and drugs and people who just want your money

He looks at her

She looks back little unsure as she is wary of how drug addicts react

M-Ah but isn't it better to give away those things than giveaway one’s heart?

Geet replies

G-What do you mean?

Geet simply puts it in…’he is still high…talking non-sense’ self-explanation of hers

G-See Maan, you helped me, gave me hope when I needed it most...I also want to be with you when you are in need...I know you are in pain

M-You want to be with me coz I helped you with your stupid s*x problem?

G-No, coz I love you & care for you

Geet says thinking kaunsa isko yaad rehna hai

She is teary eyed due to influx of so many emotions waiting to rage out

M-You what?

She looks away, getting up from where she was sitting

Her back faces Maan

He is following her with his eyes

She is looking away from Maan, showing emotions is difficult for her too

She thinks this is awkward, she shouldn’t have said that

Dono ke beech complete silence rehta hai for more than 15min

Geet breaks the silence saying

G-I will get some food. Would you like.....food?

He nods

Geet goes and starts fidgeting in the kitchen

Geet jaake chai banake laati hai with some snacks

Kitchen se nikli toh...Maan room mein nahi hai aur main door khula hua hai

She is anxious

Jaldi se bahar jaati hai toh dekha ki terrace/rooftop pe khada hai

Maan ko dekh ke she is relieved

Goes near him

G- Maan. Tea

He looks over his shoulder and accepts the cup

Geet kuch snacks bhi rakh deti hai

G- Have this too

He nods

Both are sipping their tea while gazing at the non- existent city view

Maan breaks the silence and speaks up

M- Why are you dating other men then?

He asks staring at her directly

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 26

Welcome back di .... we missed you !! 🤗 🤗Aww missed you too

Uh oh , geet’s parents are trying to arrange her marriage 😕 yikes !!!

& of course maan had to see them on their date 😔

But the worst part was that she ignored him ....... I know she is trying to suppress her feelings but that was hurtful 😒

Glad that she realizes & wants to apologize but what she finds is surprising !! 😲

As for the abandonment issues ...., are you referring to his mom??? Yup....sahi pakde hain

Curious got more ....

thank you for pm & update

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