Star Commentor Award (Part 26)
Winner: khwaishfan ⭐️
Runner-ups: ferdouz
SpecialMention: sanum23
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Part 27
Geet goes to Maan’s house to apologize... & maybe say ki she likes him coz negating things isn't helping her
She realizes yahan toh party chal rahi hai
She starts looking for Maan
After a good search and asking around all half-drunk half high people, she finally gets to Maan
She does find Maan, but she finds him snogging a girl in a dimly lit room
She freezes. As if the time has stopped for her
She wants to shake him, thrash him
But doesn't do anything
She walks out of the room
She thinks if Maan likes this girl then who is she to stop him?
Maybe it’s a one-night stand, who is she to interfere in his life?
It’s not like the girl is raping him...he also wants it
It would have been so much better to smack him and leave grandly. It will be much easier to ignore Maan in her mind then
But the thing is, she doesn't want to leave Maan
She has other plans
She will deal with this head on. But not while Maan is high
She goes back seeing the other girl coming out
She gets inside the room with Maan and locks the door
G- What the hell are you doing huh! You are messing up with your life? Are you a teenager to act so irresponsibly? I know you are better than this, Maan
She checks his pulse rate and examines him ki drugs li kaunsi hai...yaa is he only drunk
Uss hisaab se jo karna hai karegi
She stays locked up with him in the room till he sobers up a little
Geet ko samajh nahi aa raha thik se, as uske paas equipments nahi hai abhi...but koi ecstasy inducing drug sa hi lag raha hai
Geet ko toh itna gussa aa raha hai ki kya bole
Bachcha hai nahi ye. He seemed like a suljha hua banda. Arre pehli baar uske dad ko coldly threaten kiya tha iss hi bande ne. Isse kya ho gaya?
But she realizes that he needs help, and he needs help now and there is nobody in his life to help him apart from her
And nobody realized what’s going on in his life coz he is so closed of a person
She remembers the therapy she went for few weeks back-
She had given her blood samples ki uske mein kuch toh locha hai...why so much feels for that jerk
Geet ne therapy mein ye ho raha hai wo ho raha hai kaha
Doctor ne kaha ki....have you considered it’s just love?
Geet is like no...
G-My blood sample has abnormal amount of estrogen & pheromones
Doc-Yup, as I said love. Totally normal. You guys should date
Geet uthke chali gai ki doctor hi pagal hai
Abhi room mein baithe Maan ke saath Geet ko lag raha hai ki doctor thik thi.
She loves him and can’t see him in pain
But Maan ko nahi batana hai, faltu mein mazaak udayega
This is bound to end up in a heartbreak, aur karo pheromones ka overflow!
Geet thinks- my stupid lymphatic system!
She thinks ki batake waise bhi kya fayda hoga Maan ko...as if he feels the same...warna he wouldn’t have been eating up that girl's face today
Kaunsa wo mujse pyaar karta hai
Geet sochti hai, mujhe toh kabhi aise kiss nahi kia
On the other hand, thinks...eww gross ...sloppy
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When Maan sobers up a little and all-party people go, then Geet drags him
G-You are moving with me. Yahan bilkul nahi rahoge tum! This wicked company of yours is ruining everything
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years agoGeet didn't mu him she love him and want save him from bad company but don't want to confess her love either
She thinks maan mazak banay ga if he get to know sbout her feelings
She also want to know what wrong happened in his life that he doing like this before he was not like this when he threatened her dad
She taking him with her waiting fr maan reaction
Edited by sanum23 - 3 years agoCongratulations To All Winners
Of Part 25
Well Done !!!!!
Part 26
Fascinating and Flamboyant
Maan seems to have a weak persona
it almost seems like he needs someone with him all the time
he needs stability in his life .
but Maan also needs some kind of confidence that he can be without
these friends that drinks and use drugs
for Maan been with a woman is not just passing time but its more
of he wanting to be accepted and liked by someone
Geet's parents want her to have someone in her life and she goes
and meet a doctor too and both have a pleasant evening
however Geet ignored Maan will he seemed jealous and hurt also disappointed too
oh Geet should interrupt Maan's plan of spending his time with this lady
Maan needs someone to pamper and care for him
it almost seem like he is alone but where is his mother
Well...i dont think Maan has weak persona...you will know why I am saying that...but yes he has abandonment issues. You are right that he needs stability in his life and
or Maan been with a woman is not just passing time but its more
of he wanting to be accepted and liked by someone
You are also right that he is alone
But maybe he is alone because of his mother only
Maybe the one person he valued the most has caused him abandonment issues and now he doesnt care what happens to him and he has no directionless
Hi there, thanks for the pm
wow thanks for the award You are welcome
Part 26
Amazing update... greatly written Thanks
of cos Geet's parents want her to settle down
not surprised she agreed...
Gosh she meet's the guy at Maan's hotel
I knew Geet has feelings for Maan...
so she wants to get Maan out of her system...
but is it that easy? well...lets see
so Maan sees her and is angry
she never is like this with him
she is enjoying and smiling
as expected she sees Maan
sad that she ignores Maan and treats him like a stranger
feeling for Maan
its indeed public humiliation
oh no Maan has abandonment issues....
eager to know more about this
Geet's behavior affects Maan and he has reached a low point
at least she felt guilty and decided to apologise to Maan
well why would he message or call her? well...no reason...but she expects him to
so she misses Maan will she admit it?
liked that she went to say she likes him
but there is a party going on in Maan's house
hate that she saw him kissing a girl
hope there will be no mu
will she tell him that she likes him? lets see
update soon
Part 26
Welcome back di .... we missed you !! 🤗
Uh oh , geet’s parents are trying to arrange her marriage 😕 yikes !!!
& of course maan had to see them on their date 😔
But the worst part was that she ignored him ....... I know she is trying to suppress her feelings but that was hurtful 😒
Glad that she realizes & wants to apologize but what she finds is surprising !! 😲
As for the abandonment issues ...., are you referring to his mom???
Curious got more ....
thank you for pm & update
Part 27
Wow back to back updates -thank you 🤗
Superb update !!! 👍🏼👍🏼
Glad that even though geet was suprised & disturbed with maan’s situation she back-tracked & came back 👍🏼
Shocked 😲 that she saw a therapist about her feelings for maan
Delighted that she realizes she is in love with him ...... time for a happy dance !!! 🥳
But our silly gal will not confess her feelings due to fear of ridicule & heartbreak 😕
....,,, she doesn’t realize that this is the cure for maan’s ailments
........ suprised that our lady doctor cannot make the right diagnosis 😉😆😆
I am super happy that geet is taken charge of the situation & forcing maan to live with her ...,. He needs to be steered in the right direction with love & guidance . 💕
Eagerly awaiting next update
Thank you for pm & update
She is taking him to her house,
She doesn't want him to be in bad company,wants to take care of him,he too is lonely, looking forward to further....
Part 27
Woho, yeah now we're talking.... 😳 so Geet is taking the needed steps for Maan and herself... Nice I really don't want them ending up in a heartbreak... Waiting to see more... 🤗
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Omg 🤣 yeh Geet is a specimen only 😄I loved the update.
She does a blood test to see if there is a locha 🤭😋
Finally she realizes she is in love with Maan.
Thank you learnt few new medical terms 😁
Yeh dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta 🤷
They will care for each other but will not confess the truth 🤦🏼♀️
She has already decided to take Maan along with her.
Waiting for Maans reaction.
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great update
geet not able to leave maan in this condition n with those wrong people