Originally posted by: bratbitt
Fantastic I just loved it. Continue the story. Pls
Thank u so much
😃
Will surely try to continue😳
Originally posted by: bratbitt
Fantastic I just loved it. Continue the story. Pls
Thank u so much
😃
Will surely try to continue😳
Thank u so much Richie
🤗
will try to continue😳
Great work Heytz
Your write so so so much better than the show's script writers.😆
I hope you will continue it soon👍🏼
Thank u so much Amekha for the appreciation yaara
🤗
I promised u people that I will write one .... I had to keep my promise😳
I tried to incorporate what most of us want to see in show
will surely try to continue😳
Originally posted by: Isha_201
This one is so beautiful 😍
So Riddhima faked her pregnancy and Vansh knows this.
Sab apna apna game khel rhe hai😆
Mastermind to ek hi hai
Great work.
Thank u so much Isha
glad u liked it yaara
😃
Yes all r playing n mastermind is watching😎
Thank u so much Mariya
glad u liked ityaara
🤗
Will try to continue😳
Originally posted by: coolpd93
This is really nice...Yeh Riddhima ka dimaag ...🤣
I am glad u addressed Riddhu n Ishani’s issue..they shud be friends..
Thank u so much
😃
Ya I'm incorporating all scenes that we wish to see in show but haven't yet got them😳
Now 2 pregnant women huh..Riddhima’s fake pregnancy wud get her in trouble..joot or joot...hubby dearest is really poor..
Hubby dearest got to know that Patni is faking
he will find a way to settle scores😎
When Riddhu gets really pregnant, she shud be taken out of India..apart from KaAp chacha chachi aryan also see her pregnancy as her threat..I wish these two live a normal life ❤️❤️
God or Makers know what they have planned or planning in the show
creating so much mess
now finally some good track to look forward to😊
Originally posted by Heytz Maneet
Haha Heytal, loved it; was laughingly as I read your OS; there is a lot of detail in each character esp RiAnsh and I like the wsy you have a good dialogue and pov of each group, its quite comical at times, cant believe this vision your first OS! Keep writing more!!
Thank u so much Wynn
I'm glad u liked it n it was amusing for u
🤗
I tried to incorporate what most us wish to see in the show
😊
Its my 1st RIANSH story here in this forum
I have n am writing FFs , SSs n OS in GEET Forum on MAANEET still😳
Thank u so much Arya
Glad to know u liked it yaara
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