Vani TS {current track}-Updated part 2{Completed}

Posted: 3 years ago

One shot: just wrote something for vani which is different from what was telecasted in today's epi..

I hope you guys like it. ๐Ÿ˜ŠPlease ignore spelling mistakes and grammar as I usually do not proof read before posting..๐Ÿ˜Š


Update: Made it as two shorts to cover balwant's part ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



let me know how it was. Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

Story starts when bani jumps from Shakura's house. And land up on trishool.

Bani tries to free herself.suddenly she hears some one walking towards her. It's none other than shakura.

Shakura starts taunting her. 

Shakura:che che sweetheart aasman se giri aur trishool main atki. Ab tumhe mujhse kaun bachayega? 

Bani: Bhole nath bachayenge mujhe aaj bhi unhone hi bachaya hai aur age bhi wohi bachaynege. 

Shakura: Tum ithni ziddi kyun ho bani.Issi zidd pe toh main fida hoon.

Veer is standing near the cave as he is bit weak and trying to understand their connection.

Bani: Agar tumhe zinda rehna hai toh yaha se chale jao. Warna..

Shakura : warna kya ? Mar dalogi mujhe.. mar dalona tumhare haath se maut bhi acchi lagthi hai 

Veer gets irritated and thinks mere patni ke hathon se hi marna hai isko..๐Ÿ˜ Mann kartha hai abhi jaake iska mooh tod dun.. bt controls himself to know what's going on and why bani is in dulhan attire. 

Shakura: chalo na sweetheart shadi karthe hai..aur kithna sathogi mujhe..

Suddenly bani falls down from the trishool as her dupatta can not take her weight anymore. 

Veer gets worried for baani.

Shakura: oops tum toh mere pairon pe gir gayi abhi pathi dev man liya mujhe 

Veer gets irritated. 

Bani tries to leave from there as she wants to search veer. 

Shakura : starts singing "Abhi na jao chod ke ye dil abhi bhara nahi" and holds her hand 

Bani : hits his leg with her legs and escape 

Veer feels happy wah meri sherni.

Shakura again holds her hand and asks 

Shakura : kaha ja rahi ho meri jaan?

Bani : main apne pathi ko dhoondhne ja rahi hoon 

Shakura : tumhara patho toh yaha hai

Bani : maine kaha main apne pathi yani veeranshu singhaniya ko dhoondhne ja rahi hun. 

Shakura : off sweetheart maine kaha na ab thak toh veer he signs that veer might be dead.

Veer gets furious and bani gets worried

Bani : khabardar age kuch bhi bola toh

Shakura: toh kya

Toh main khudko jalalungi.tumse accha toh veer tha jo ladkiyon ki izzath kartha hai.usne mujhse zabardasthi shadi toh ki lekin kabhi mujpe buri nazar nahi dala. Hamesha mere opinion ki respect kartha hai.

Shakura: hogaya main veer nahi hoon main shakura hoon. 

Bani: wahi toh tum veer ho hi nahi sakthe. Tum jaisa lalchi insaan maine aaj thak nahi dekha .

Shakura gets angry and he is about to slap her veer comes and holds his hands. 

Veer: mujhe nahi patha thum kaun ho lekin tumhare wajah se meri sweet heart ko mujhme acchayi dikh gayi and looks at bani..

Bani looks away to avoid his gaze. 

Veer: main tumhe ek akhri chance detha hoon chale jao yaha se. 

Shakura: Veer singhaniya mare nahi abhi thak ๐Ÿ˜ 

Veer: kaise marjaoon mujhe marne ka hak sirf mere sweetheart ke pass hai.. aire gaire rengthe hue keedon ke pass nahi( referring jai) 

Shakura: tum kya sochte ho ki tum mujhe mar sakthe ho.main shakura hoo shakura.Aasman ka raja. 

Veer: abe woh Raja ja apni rani aasman main hi doondh le meri neechewali ko mere pass hi rehne de. 

Shakura: tu kuch zyada hi bol raha hai 

Veer: tu kuch zyada hi time waste kar raha hai.main apne sweetheart se bahuth din bad mila hun kuch romantic bathe karne de..chal nikal 

Shakura gets angry and attacks veer 

Veer holding bani saves bani and himself from the attack and kicks shakura from behind. 

Shakura comes to his real form and hits veer.

Veer don't want to show bani that he is a cheel as he is scared to loose her.

He holds cheels leg and throws it on rock.shakura falls unconsious.veer starts talking to bani 

Bani : tu theektoh ho,kaha the ab thak 

Veer : kyun miss kiya?

Bani : shut up veer.

Veer : waise ye kaunsa naya ashiq hai. Dhabewale ko chod diya kya? And tumhe aise kaise ye sab namoone milthe hai inse acche mujhe pyar karlo. 

Before bani could say anything she sees shakura attacking from behind and while saving veer she again falls on veer. 

Veer: uff sweetheart ye bhi koi romantic hone ki jagah hai..kambre mein toh tum dhabewale ko jap thi rehthi ho aaj ithna romantic..agar patha hotha ki mere 3 din gayab hojane se tum ithne romantic ho jaogi toh agar main 1 mahine gaya hua toh.. 

Bani: toh kya 

Veer: toh.. before he could say anything he saw shakura attacking again 

He uses his power without letting bani know that

As bani is focused into the conversation 

Bani : toh kya veer

Veer: toh hamare bacche 

Bani : bacche what rubbish 

Veer again hits shakura with his magic and shakura cries in pain.and bani hears it and when she turns back she sees shakura falling down from the cliff and he is unconsious

Bani : isko kya hua?

Veer: acts innocent shayad tumhe mere sath ithna close dekh ke suicide kar liya hoga..dil jo tod diya tumne uska and he smirks 

Bani : thinks is it true or veer killed him with his powers. 

Bani gets up and veers signs her to give her hand .

Bani thinks since veer is weak let's help 

When bani gives her hand veer again pulls it and he hugs her and tells her that he missed her...๐Ÿ˜Š And he is glad that he got one more chance to live with her.

Somewhere bani felt solace in that hug and she did not broke it either.

Edited by fire_wings - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

This is such a great update. Gave me warm and fuzzy feelings ๏ฟผ. I loved Veer's dialogues. 

Keep writing more. 

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Cinnamon_Kisses


This is such a great update. Gave me warm and fuzzy feelings ๏ฟผ. I loved Veer's dialogues. 

Keep writing more. 

Thank you ๐Ÿ˜„

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by fire_wings


One shot: just wrote something for vani which is different from what was telecasted in today's epi..

I hope you guys like it. ๐Ÿ˜ŠPlease ignore spelling mistakes and grammar as I usually do not proof read before posting..๐Ÿ˜Šlet me know how it was. Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

Story starts when bani jumps from Shakura's house. And land up on trishool.

Bani tries to free herself.suddenly she hears some one walking towards her. It's none other than shakura.

Shakura starts taunting her. 

Shakura:che che sweetheart aasman se giri aur trishool main atki. Ab tumhe mujhse kaun bachayega? 

Bani: Bhole nath bachayenge mujhe aaj bhi unhone hi bachaya hai aur age bhi wohi bachaynege. 

Shakura: Tum ithni ziddi kyun ho bani.Issi zidd pe toh main fida hoon.

Veer is standing near the cave as he is bit weak and trying to understand their connection.

Bani: Agar tumhe zinda rehna hai toh yaha se chale jao. Warna..

Shakura : warna kya ? Mar dalogi mujhe.. mar dalona tumhare haath se maut bhi acchi lagthi hai 

Veer gets irritated and thinks mere patni ke hathon se hi marna hai isko..๐Ÿ˜ Mann kartha hai abhi jaake iska mooh tod dun.. bt controls himself to know what's going on and why bani is in dulhan attire. 

Shakura: chalo na sweetheart shadi karthe hai..aur kithna sathogi mujhe..

Suddenly bani falls down from the trishool as her dupatta can not take her weight anymore. 

Veer gets worried for baani.

Shakura: oops tum toh mere pairon pe gir gayi abhi pathi dev man liya mujhe 

Veer gets irritated. 

Bani tries to leave from there as she wants to search veer. 

Shakura : starts singing "Abhi na jao chod ke ye dil abhi bhara nahi" and holds her hand 

Bani : hits his leg with her legs and escape 

Veer feels happy wah meri sherni.

Shakura again holds her hand and asks 

Shakura : kaha ja rahi ho meri jaan?

Bani : main apne pathi ko dhoondhne ja rahi hoon 

Shakura : tumhara patho toh yaha hai

Bani : maine kaha main apne pathi yani veeranshu singhaniya ko dhoondhne ja rahi hun. 

Shakura : off sweetheart maine kaha na ab thak toh veer he signs that veer might be dead.

Veer gets furious and bani gets worried

Bani : khabardar age kuch bhi bola toh

Shakura: toh kya

Toh main khudko jalalungi.tumse accha toh veer tha jo ladkiyon ki izzath kartha hai.usne mujhse zabardasthi shadi toh ki lekin kabhi mujpe buri nazar nahi dala. Hamesha mere opinion ki respect kartha hai.

Shakura: hogaya main veer nahi hoon main shakura hoon. 

Bani: wahi toh tum veer ho hi nahi sakthe. Tum jaisa lalchi insaan maine aaj thak nahi dekha .

Shakura gets angry and he is about to slap her veer comes and holds his hands. 

Veer: mujhe nahi patha thum kaun ho lekin tumhare wajah se meri sweet heart ko mujhme acchayi dikh gayi and looks at bani..

Bani looks away to avoid his gaze. 

Veer: main tumhe ek akhri chance detha hoon chale jao yaha se. 

Shakura: Veer singhaniya mare nahi abhi thak ๐Ÿ˜ 

Veer: kaise marjaoon mujhe marne ka hak sirf mere sweetheart ke pass hai.. aire gaire rengthe hue keedon ke pass nahi( referring jai) 

Shakura: tum kya sochte ho ki tum mujhe mar sakthe ho.main shakura hoo shakura.Aasman ka raja. 

Veer: abe woh Raja ja apni rani aasman main hi doondh le meri neechewali ko mere pass hi rehne de. 

Shakura: tu kuch zyada hi bol raha hai 

Veer: tu kuch zyada hi time waste kar raha hai.main apne sweetheart se bahuth din bad mila hun kuch romantic bathe karne de..chal nikal 

Shakura gets angry and attacks veer 

Veer holding bani saves bani and himself from the attack and kicks shakura from behind. 

Shakura comes to his real form and hits veer.

Veer don't want to show bani that he is a cheel as he is scared to loose her.

He holds cheels leg and throws it on rock.shakura falls unconsious.veer starts talking to bani 

Bani : tu theektoh ho,kaha the ab thak 

Veer : kyun miss kiya?

Bani : shut up veer.

Veer : waise ye kaunsa naya ashiq hai. Dhabewale ko chod diya kya? And tumhe aise kaise ye sab namoone milthe hai inse acche mujhe pyar karlo. 

Before bani could say anything she sees shakura attacking from behind and while saving veer she again falls on veer. 

Veer: uff sweetheart ye bhi koi romantic hone ki jagah hai..kambre mein toh tum dhabewale ko jap thi rehthi ho aaj ithna romantic..agar patha hotha ki mere 3 din gayab hojane se tum ithne romantic ho jaogi toh agar main 1 mahine gaya hua toh.. 

Bani: toh kya 

Veer: toh.. before he could say anything he saw shakura attacking again 

He uses his power without letting bani know that

As bani is focused into the conversation 

Bani : toh kya veer

Veer: toh hamare bacche 

Bani : bacche what rubbish 

Veer again hits shakura with his magic and shakura cries in pain.and bani hears it and when she turns back she sees shakura falling down from the cliff and he is unconsious

Bani : isko kya hua?

Veer: acts innocent shayad tumhe mere sath ithna close dekh ke suicide kar liya hoga..dil jo tod diya tumne uska and he smirks 

Bani : thinks is it true or veer killed him with his powers. 

Bani gets up and veers signs her to give her hand .

Bani thinks since veer is weak let's help 

When bani gives her hand veer again pulls it and he hugs her and tells her that he missed her...๐Ÿ˜Š And he is glad that he got one more chance to live with her.

Somewhere bani felt solace in that hug and she did not broke it either.


Its awesome.Make another OS on VANI soon.

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by masked



Its awesome.Make another OS on VANI soon.

Thank you โ˜บ๏ธ

Posted: 3 years ago

Bani breaks the hug after realizing that it's almost morning and now they should probably go home. 

Veer also wakes up and adores her beauty. 

Veer: waise ek bath batho kal thum uthi kyun nahi 

Bani: main behosh ho gayi thi shayad ithna thak gayi thi ye sab hone ke baad hosh hi nahi raha kal rath. 

Veer: Tum behoshi ke haalath main bhi hasthi ho ?? Ajeeb hai log behoshi ke halath main behosh hothe hai tum hilthi ho dulthi ho aur apne aap muskurati ho..

Bani : tries to divert the topic to avoid getting more awkward hogaya tumhara.. kya ab hum ghar ja sakte hai mr veer singhania. 

Veer: ithna gussa chalo chalthe hai Mrs veeranshu singhania..

Bani:Gets the goosebump when she hears mrs veeranshu Singhania and to avoid getting awkward more she starts walking aimlessly.

Veer: Are woh ms. Bani Sharma kaha ja rahi ho..hame iss taraf jana hai..

Bani: curses her self for being so shy. And follows veer.

 

Veer thinks ye agar ab behosh hothi toh uthake le jatha isse..Beta veer pyar ke chakkar main tu apne paro ko chod ke pairon ka istemaal kar raha hai..

Bani: realizes that it's morning probably her naagin Shakthi must be back but she can't test it infront of veer. 

Somehow they reach main road and take lift from their.

Vani reaches home.Balwant gets shocked. Veer tune phirse apna chehra badhal diya. 

Veer: What do you mean by chehra badhal diya dad? Ye chehra toh hamesha se hi tha.. Dad ye toh nahi ki aap mere iss chehre se bore ho gaye ho..issiliye chahthe ho ki main isse badhal du.

Dad: kya bol rahe ho veer. Kaha the tum ab thak. Ek aur insaan aya tha jisne ye bola ki woh veer hai aur usne chehra badhal liya hai.

Veer: Dad main jantha tha ki aap log mere jithne intelligent nahi ho lekin aap aise koi aira gaira aake bewakoof banayega ye nahi socha tha. 

Balwant feels insulted but he realises that he did a mistake by trusting on shakura.

Other cheels feels happy that veer is back. And hugs him. 

Balwant thanks bani for bringing veer back. And asks them to take rest.

Vani goes to there room 

Veer: Vaise agar woh veer banke aya tha toh tumhare sath isi kambre main rehtha tha?

Bani: yes she thinks that veer is raising fingers at her character. toh tum mere character pe shak karo ge kyun ki main uske sath ek kambre main rahi? 

Veer: uff sweetheart main tumhare character pe shak nahi kar raha hu.. main ye soch raha hun tum ithne dino se uske saath thi phir bhi woh mara kyun nahi..

Bani: Mathlab 

Veer: Tum ithni theeki bolthi ho..bath bath par gussa karthi ho usko heart attack nahi aya ??

Bani: remembers how they fought as naag and cheel.. Bani thinks tumne mera gussa dekha hi kaha hai veer? 

Veer : kaha kho gayi?

Bani : ha..kuch nahi waise tum the kaha ithne dino thak?

Veer : Agar main sach bhi bolu toh tum mera yakeen nahi karogi toh ek kaam karo khud hi patha lagalo...

Bani : thinks veer is the only person who can tell her the truth.

Bani holds his hand 

Bani: mujhe jaan na hai ki hua kya tha?

Veer: aur tumhe kyun lagtha hai main tumhe sab bataunga?

Bani : Kyunki main tumhari biwi yani in your words tumhari ardhangini hun. In short main mrs Veeranshu Singhania hun.. woh chahe kuch hi dino ke liye(in her thoughts)

Veer : gets glad that she accepted this

Veer looks at her in shock.and thinks ithna badhlav kaise agaya isme..

Veer : Still tries to avoid disclosing the name as he knows it will hurt bani

Bani: Veer abhi bhi tum nahi bologe ki tumhare sath hua kya tha? Tumhi ne toh kaha tha ki shadi do tarfa hotha hai..Aur maine apne part story boldi hai ab tumhari baari.

Veer tries to avoid conversation and sees her wounds and gets first aid box to apply medicine..

Veer: ab chup chap baitho aur dawai laga lo..he applies medicine on her hands he asks permission to touch her stomach as there is a wound on her stomach as well.but before bani says yes and no he just applies it and says ithni der lagaogi toh infection phail jayega..

Bani : Veer tumhe mujhe batha na hi hoga ki hua kya tha and she holds his face up so that she can directly look into his eyes. 

Dil ibadat plays in bg..

He completes his first aid and he is about to leave bani holds his hand and tells him that she will apply medicine.

Veer gets shocked she never cared about him till now.

She applies medicine gently and asks veer to remove his shirt as there could be internal wounds..veer gets amazed and tries to avoid as he thinks she must be doing it for formality..

Bani : ab tum uthoroge..ya main utharoon 

Veer: Ithni jaldi kyun hai sweetheart and he removes his shirt.. 

Bani : sees that his back has completely turned red as veer tries really hard to escape from the cage and bani feels bad to veer.

Bani applies medicine all over his back

 and veer does not realised that when it was done as he was so amazed about her current gesture. 

Bani tells veer that she wants to know the truth. 

Veer gets irritated as this dhabewala is getting on all the romantic moments 

Veer: Ok fine tum jaan na chahthi ho toh suno..mujhe uss dhabewale ne kidnap kiya tha..isse aage main kuch nahi bolunga..aur mujhe nahi lagta iske baad tum kuch jaan na bhi nahi chahogi as you blindly trust dhabewala...tum agar isse sach manthi ho toh khud hi patha lagalo..and he goes and sleeps on his side of the bed.

He thinks that I know bani ki tum mujhpe trust nahi karogi and I also know ki tum ye sochogi ki main jealousy ki wajah se ye sab keh raha hun but main nahi chahta ki woh dhabewala tumhe kuch kare..Ab iss dhabewale pe nazar rakhni padhegi..

Bani gets shocked but she does not want to trust veer blindly nor ignore his words as she knows that some one from nagclan is betraying her.. it could be jai or some other nag who took Jai's face to kidnap veer..she decides to be careful with jai and investigate more on this... 

Bani looks at veer and realises that how safe it is to be with him after what happend with shakura and she sleeps on her side of the bed facing towards the wall..( she has accepted veer's proposal of sharing the same bed and this time without curtains as she knows that veer will never cross his limits)๐Ÿ˜Š

Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you ๐Ÿ˜„



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