Tujhe kitna chahne lage hum|Prayansh ss - Page 5

Posted: 3 years ago

Happy reading!


Episode 10


A few hours later....


Pranati was still unconscious while Rey's tension was increasing with every second.


Rey: Isse hosh kyun nhi aa raha hai yaar?


Maan: bhai aa jayega aap chinta mt kro.


"Oye Reyansh kithe ae tu, niche aa" he heard his Daadi calling him out in the hall. He gave a look to Maan and they both slowly came down.


Rey:kyun bulaya aapne daadi?


Dadi: oh tu janta hai maine kyun bulaya. Vardan jail mein kya kr rha hai? Tune kasam kha rakhi ki mera BP neeche girne hi nhi dena hai


Rey:Dadi aap janti hai bhai ne kya kiya hai?


Dadi: sab janti hoon main. Kuchh nhi kra hai usne. Aur tu kya uski galtiyan ginva raha hai mujhe? Tu uss bahar ki aayi Hui ladki ke liye apne bhai ko jail bhijwayga. Arre maan liya ki usne thoda sa chhed diya toh kya ho gaya? Woh ladki konsa dhudh ki dhuli hai? Dekhe nhi uske karam tune? Bin bihayi maa hai aur fir bhi aashiq leke ghum rhi hai. Kya pta uske kitne najayaz rishte ho. Pta chale woh Jugnu teri beti ho hi na kisi aur ki....


Rey: BAS DADI! 


Rey shouted on top of his voice (add dhum ta nana track 😂). Everyone was shocked as no one ever dared to shout in front of Dadi.


Rey: Galti Vardan bhaiya ki thi. Isse jitna jaldi maan lo utna aapke liye achha rahega kyunki main unhe unki galti ki saza dilwaker rahoonga. Mere hote hue, woh kabhi nhi hoga jo meri maa ke saath hua.


Riya: Pranati didi!


Riya said looking towards the indore balcony. Everyone looked where Riya was looking and saw Pranati standing there. Reyansh ran up the stairs and towards her.


Rey: Tu thhik hai na? 


Pranati: haan reyansh main thhik hoon


Rey: tu bahar kyun aayi? Chal andar chalke aaram kr. 


She nodded her head slightly and went with him inside the room. Everyone in the hall dispersed leaving dadi alone.


Dadi (to herself): kar le Pranati apne Mann ki jitni kr sakti hai. Ek hafte baad court ki date hai. Jugnu ki custody milte hi main tujhe dhakke maar ke ghar se bahar nikalungi. 


Reyansh made Pranati sit down and ordered the servants to bring food for her. They brought fruits and soup for her.


Rey: main toh tujhe yeh bhi nhi keh sakta ki shakal mt bnaio isse dekhke. Pta nhi kaise tujhe yeh beswaad khana pasand ata hai. 


He said feeding her. Pranati kept staring at him in confusion. Jugnu entered the room.


Rey (smiling): yeh lo, shakal bnane wali aa gai.


Jugs:Nai maa ab aap kaise ho?


Pranati:ab main thheek hoon Jugnu.


Jugs: maine na aapko bohot miss kiya, aur toh maine homework bhi kar liya hai toh aaj main poori raat aapke saath rahoongi aur bohot saari baatein karoongi


Rey:Aur school kon jayega? Main ya teri nai maa? Chal khana kha le maine tere liye bhi mangvaya hai.


Jugs:yeh beswaad khana, main nhi kha rhi.


Rey: arre teri maa akele akele torture kyun jhele, saath toh dena chahiye na?


Jugs: haan toh aap bhi do na


Rey: tujhe kya lagta hai, tum dono ko soup pila ke main apne pizza manvaoonga? Meri itni majal! Mere liye bhi yahi hai. Vahan hum dono ka pada hua hai, dhyaan se leke aaja.


Jugnu brought the tray nicely and kept it on the bed. Rey finished feeding Pranati and started eating himself. Both him and his daughter drank the soup at the same time and made disgusted faces. Pranati saw both of them and smiled a bit. She forgot everything that happened seeing one smile of her daughter. She saw her and Reyansh making funny faces but still eating it. 

Reyansh wiped Jugnu's mouth nicely and told the servants to take the tray away. He got up and took Pranati's medicines in hand and offered it with a glass of water. Pranati quietly took it. 


Rey:Achha ninja, main chalta hoon. Apni maa ka dhyan rakhna aur time se so jana. Bye, goodnight.


Reyansh smiled and went out. Jugnu started telling Pranati all kinds of stories of what all happened in last few days when she was not there with her. While she was in deep thinking


Pranati (in mind): main shayd tumhe kabhi nhi samajh paungi Reyansh. Kya sochte ho kya krte ho kuchh samajh nhi ata. Main kis Reyansh per vishwas kroon, woh jo har waqt mujhe neecha dikhata hai ya woh jo meri bohot parwah krta hai? Jo mere liye aaj apni Dadi se.....


Pranati talked with Jugnu for sometime and asked her to sleep. 


Next morning she heard someone whispering. 


Rey(whispering): Jugnu chal uthh school jana hai, jaldi kr. 


He saw Pranati slightly opening her eyes.


Rey(to pranati): tu aram se so ja, main isse taiyaar krke school bhej doonga. 


He carried jugnu in his arms and took her out. Pranati got up from the bed and peaked through the door to see what were they both upto. She saw Reyansh tickling Jugnu to wake her up. 


Rey(to Jugnu): achha Aaj mere room mein ready ho ja, teri nai maa ko thoda rest krne dete hai. Teri uniform aur tera bag main dheere se le aaunga. Chal bhag. 


He ruffled her hair and she walked lazily to Reyansh's room. While Reyansh turned around to go back to Pranati's room but he saw her standing there. 


Rey: Yaar maine tujhe kaha tha na aram kr. Tu Jugnu ki tension mt le main usse thhik se pahoncha dunga. Tu abhi bhi thodi weak hai. Doctor ne proper bed rest krne ko kaha hai.


He helped her to the bed and made her lie down. He covered her with the sheet.


Rey: ek baar tu thheek ho gayi na toh tu hi uthhke iss shaitan ko taiyar krio. Main apni neend nhi kharab kroonga.


He smiled and took the necessary things for Jugnu and left. For the first time Pranati slept peacefully in this house as for the first time she didn't have anything to worry about....

Edited by sanakhan240201 - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Rey against Dadi, I can only imagine 😆


Sweet one ❤️

Posted: 3 years ago

Happy reading!


Episode 11


Pranati got up and went to washroom to freshen up. She came out to see Anisha with a tray in her hand. 


Anisha: Kaisi tabyat hai ab tumhari?


Pranati: ab main better feel kr rhi hoon bhabhi.


Anisha: aao baithho, hum saath mein breakfast krte hai.


Pranati was really confused. She just got the person arrested that happened to be the husband of the lady that was offering her food. Nonetheless she sat down with her on bed and started having the breakfast that she brought for her.


Anisha: I'm sorry Pranati. Jo kuchh bhi tumhare saath hua woh kabhi nhi hota agar main darr kr nhi rehti


Pranati: Bhabhi aap kya keh rhi hain. Mujhe kuchh samajh nhi aa raha.


Anisha started explaining the whole story about how she was the victim of domestic violence. What all Vardan did and how Reyansh found out and helped her. Pranati was really surprised listening to it. Whatever respect she had for Reyansh just got double in a matter of few minutes. 


Anisha: Main Vardan se pyaar krti thi isliye maine usse shadi kri. Mere papa bohot ameer bhi the toh dadi ne bhi haan kr di. Khayalon main yeh baat mujhe bohot achhi lag rhi thi per zindagi tumhe asliyat dikha hi deti hai. Tum mere jaisi galti mt Krna Pranati. Rishta ussi se bnana Jo tumse bhi pyaar krta ho. 


Pranati: Mujhe kisi rishte ki zarurat nhi hai bhabhi, agar meri bachi khush hai toh main khush hoon. 


Anisha: Jugnu bohot lucky hai pranati. Kabhi time mile toh call zaroor Krna mujhe.


Pranati: kyun bhabhi aap kahan jaa rhe ho?


Anisha: pehle main Papa ki beti thi, fir Vardan ki wife. Toh soch rhi hoon ek baar sirf Anisha bnke bhi dekh loon. Main chalti hoon, tum apna khayal rakhna. 


Pranati hugged her tightly. She was the only friend she had in  this big house but she knew that her moving out is also important. Anisha left her room and saw Reyansh standing there. He smiled at her and hugged her.


Rey:Main aapko bohot miss karoonga bhabhi


Anisha: main bhi. Suno Reyansh, usse bta do. Tum dono khushiyaan deserve krte ho. Apni beti ki khushiyon ke liye itna ladde ho, thoda apne liye bhi ladd lo. 


She patted his cheeks and left. Reyansh saw her going, rethinking on what she just said. He brushed off all the thoughts and went inside Pranati's room. 


Rey: Dawai li tune?


Pranati: main bas woh...


Rey: nhi li na, pta tha mujhe. 


He picked up the medicines and gave her with water


Rey: Main tere liye juice mangvata hoon, thodi energy milegi. Aur tu yeh kishore kumar ke sad songs sunne bnd kr. Thode party sharty type gaane sunna kr. Jitna khush rahegi utna jaldi thhik hogi. Aur haan gaane sunte sunte uthhke nachne mt lag jaio, bed se hilne ki permission nhi hai tujhe.... 


Pranati held his wrist so he could stop talking for a minute.


Pranati: Do minute baithho mere saath. 


He stared into her eyes and sat down in front of her.


Pranati: mera khyal rakhne mein tum apna guilt kam kr rahe ho ya apna dard chhupa rahe ho?


She asked looking in his eyes with same intensity. 


Rey: k-kya kya? Kuchh bhi toh nhi


Pranati: jo mere aur bhabhi ke uper guzri, woh sabne dekha. Per tum jis dard se guzar rahe ho uske baare mein toh koi nhi soch raha. Vardan tumhara bhai tha Reyansh, main soch bhi nhi sakti ki tumhe unhe aisa krte hue dekhke kaisa lag raha hoga. Dadi ne bhi tumhara saath chhod diya. Please batao mujhe tum kya soch rahe ho.


His eyes became little watery so he looked away from her.


Rey: tujhe toh pta hi hai na ki main....


Pranati: ki tum apni feelings share nhi kr paate ho. Per Reyansh tum mujhse har baat share krte the. Aaj ek aur baar try krke dekho, main tumhe disappoint nhi krungi. Dekho meri taraf (she turned his face towards her). Bohot madad kri hai tumne meri, mujhe bhi ek mauka do.


Rey: Kya btaun yaar? 8 saal ka tha jab maa mujhe chhod kr chali gayi thi. Aur papa toh mujhe pehle se hi pasand nhi krte the toh woh mujhe dadi ke pas chhodke chale gaye. Bhaiya ne mere liye woh sab kiya jo ek baap apne bete ke liye krta hai. Sports day mein mere first aane per seetiyan bajana, school ke bachhe jab mujhe bully krte the unse mujhe bachana. Jab bhi koi problem hoti thi na toh Vardan bhaiya usse itni aasani se suljha dete the. Cycle se leke gaadi tak sab kuchh unhone mujhe sikhaya. Jab pehli baar maine koi deal final kri thi toh woh akele the jinhone meri peeth thap thapayi thi aur kaha tha 'good job'. Main hamesha se unke Jaise bnna chahta tha Pranati. Per...


Pranati: per tumhe kisi ke jaise bnne ki zarurat nhi hai. Tum woh kro jo tumhe sahi lagta hai. Vardan bhaiya ne jo bhi kra usse tumhe kabhi koi fark nhi padna chahie. Tum bas unki achhi seekh yaad rakho. Aur yaad rakhna Reyansh, apne aap ko kabhi akela my samajhna, koi na koi hamesha tumhare saath hoga jo tumhari har baat sunne ke liye taiyar ho hoga.


Reyansh smiled through his tears which brought a smile on her face too.


Rey: Thankyou Pranati and sorry....for everything


Pranati: Agar tumhari galti hoti toh hazar baar sorry bulvati per aaj tumhari galti nhi hai.


Reyansh smiled again


Rey: Ab main juice mangvaoon? 


Pranati: Haan aur woh party music bhi..


They both giggled and Reyansh went out shaking his head. 

Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful update. But it seems like,Reyansh will go against daadi only in our imaginations.😵

Posted: 3 years ago

Absolutely loving this story!! Sorry I don't comment after every chapter update but I will keep liking the chapters whenever I read them. You took me through all the emotions and everytime I read, it feels like I am actually watching the show. 

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by aquaHP


Absolutely loving this story!! Sorry I don't comment after every chapter update but I will keep liking the chapters whenever I read them. You took me through all the emotions and everytime I read, it feels like I am actually watching the show. 


Completely agree with you.......each update makes you curious about the next part....

Posted: 3 years ago

Well written ❤ Cant wait to se their equation changing to love😊

Posted: 3 years ago

Update next part soon.... 

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by parboni


Beautiful update. But it seems like,Reyansh will go against daadi only in our imaginations.😵

Hopefully it does happen in the show!!!



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