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Posted: 4 years ago
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Update soon.... Please

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Happy reading!


Episode 11


Pranati got up and went to washroom to freshen up. She came out to see Anisha with a tray in her hand.


Anisha: Kaisi tabyat hai ab tumhari?


Pranati: ab main better feel kr rhi hoon bhabhi.


Anisha: aao baithho, hum saath mein breakfast krte hai.


Pranati was really confused. She just got the person arrested that happened to be the husband of the lady that was offering her food. Nonetheless she sat down with her on bed and started having the breakfast that she brought for her.


Anisha: I'm sorry Pranati. Jo kuchh bhi tumhare saath hua woh kabhi nhi hota agar main darr kr nhi rehti


Pranati: Bhabhi aap kya keh rhi hain. Mujhe kuchh samajh nhi aa raha.


Anisha started explaining the whole story about how she was the victim of domestic violence. What all Vardan did and how Reyansh found out and helped her. Pranati was really surprised listening to it. Whatever respect she had for Reyansh just got double in a matter of few minutes.


Anisha: Main Vardan se pyaar krti thi isliye maine usse shadi kri. Mere papa bohot ameer bhi the toh dadi ne bhi haan kr di. Khayalon main yeh baat mujhe bohot achhi lag rhi thi per zindagi tumhe asliyat dikha hi deti hai. Tum mere jaisi galti mt Krna Pranati. Rishta ussi se bnana Jo tumse bhi pyaar krta ho.


Pranati: Mujhe kisi rishte ki zarurat nhi hai bhabhi, agar meri bachi khush hai toh main khush hoon.


Anisha: Jugnu bohot lucky hai pranati. Kabhi time mile toh call zaroor Krna mujhe.


Pranati: kyun bhabhi aap kahan jaa rhe ho?


Anisha: pehle main Papa ki beti thi, fir Vardan ki wife. Toh soch rhi hoon ek baar sirf Anisha bnke bhi dekh loon. Main chalti hoon, tum apna khayal rakhna.


Pranati hugged her tightly. She was the only friend she had in this big house but she knew that her moving out is also important. Anisha left her room and saw Reyansh standing there. He smiled at her and hugged her.


Rey:Main aapko bohot miss karoonga bhabhi


Anisha: main bhi. Suno Reyansh, usse bta do. Tum dono khushiyaan deserve krte ho. Apni beti ki khushiyon ke liye itna ladde ho, thoda apne liye bhi ladd lo.


She patted his cheeks and left. Reyansh saw her going, rethinking on what she just said. He brushed off all the thoughts and went inside Pranati's room.


Rey: Dawai li tune?


Pranati: main bas woh...


Rey: nhi li na, pta tha mujhe.


He picked up the medicines and gave her with water


Rey: Main tere liye juice mangvata hoon, thodi energy milegi. Aur tu yeh kishore kumar ke sad songs sunne bnd kr. Thode party sharty type gaane sunna kr. Jitna khush rahegi utna jaldi thhik hogi. Aur haan gaane sunte sunte uthhke nachne mt lag jaio, bed se hilne ki permission nhi hai tujhe....


Pranati held his wrist so he could stop talking for a minute.


Pranati: Do minute baithho mere saath.


He stared into her eyes and sat down in front of her.


Pranati: mera khyal rakhne mein tum apna guilt kam kr rahe ho ya apna dard chhupa rahe ho?


She asked looking in his eyes with same intensity.


Rey: k-kya kya? Kuchh bhi toh nhi


Pranati: jo mere aur bhabhi ke uper guzri, woh sabne dekha. Per tum jis dard se guzar rahe ho uske baare mein toh koi nhi soch raha. Vardan tumhara bhai tha Reyansh, main soch bhi nhi sakti ki tumhe unhe aisa krte hue dekhke kaisa lag raha hoga. Dadi ne bhi tumhara saath chhod diya. Please batao mujhe tum kya soch rahe ho.


His eyes became little watery so he looked away from her.


Rey: tujhe toh pta hi hai na ki main....


Pranati: ki tum apni feelings share nhi kr paate ho. Per Reyansh tum mujhse har baat share krte the. Aaj ek aur baar try krke dekho, main tumhe disappoint nhi krungi. Dekho meri taraf (she turned his face towards her). Bohot madad kri hai tumne meri, mujhe bhi ek mauka do.


Rey: Kya btaun yaar? 8 saal ka tha jab maa mujhe chhod kr chali gayi thi. Aur papa toh mujhe pehle se hi pasand nhi krte the toh woh mujhe dadi ke pas chhodke chale gaye. Bhaiya ne mere liye woh sab kiya jo ek baap apne bete ke liye krta hai. Sports day mein mere first aane per seetiyan bajana, school ke bachhe jab mujhe bully krte the unse mujhe bachana. Jab bhi koi problem hoti thi na toh Vardan bhaiya usse itni aasani se suljha dete the. Cycle se leke gaadi tak sab kuchh unhone mujhe sikhaya. Jab pehli baar maine koi deal final kri thi toh woh akele the jinhone meri peeth thap thapayi thi aur kaha tha 'good job'. Main hamesha se unke Jaise bnna chahta tha Pranati. Per...


Pranati: per tumhe kisi ke jaise bnne ki zarurat nhi hai. Tum woh kro jo tumhe sahi lagta hai. Vardan bhaiya ne jo bhi kra usse tumhe kabhi koi fark nhi padna chahie. Tum bas unki achhi seekh yaad rakho. Aur yaad rakhna Reyansh, apne aap ko kabhi akela my samajhna, koi na koi hamesha tumhare saath hoga jo tumhari har baat sunne ke liye taiyar ho hoga.


Reyansh smiled through his tears which brought a smile on her face too.


Rey: Thankyou Pranati and sorry....for everything


Pranati: Agar tumhari galti hoti toh hazar baar sorry bulvati per aaj tumhari galti nhi hai.


Reyansh smiled again


Rey: Ab main juice mangvaoon?


Pranati: Haan aur woh party music bhi..


They both giggled and Reyansh went out shaking his head.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Beautiful update. But it seems like,Reyansh will go against daadi only in our imaginations.😵

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

Absolutely loving this story!! Sorry I don't comment after every chapter update but I will keep liking the chapters whenever I read them. You took me through all the emotions and everytime I read, it feels like I am actually watching the show.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: aquaHP

Absolutely loving this story!! Sorry I don't comment after every chapter update but I will keep liking the chapters whenever I read them. You took me through all the emotions and everytime I read, it feels like I am actually watching the show.


Completely agree with you.......each update makes you curious about the next part....

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Posted: 4 years ago
#46

Well written ❤ Cant wait to se their equation changing to love😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#47

Update next part soon....

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Posted: 4 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: parboni

Beautiful update. But it seems like,Reyansh will go against daadi only in our imaginations.😵

Hopefully it does happen in the show!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: aquaHP

Absolutely loving this story!! Sorry I don't comment after every chapter update but I will keep liking the chapters whenever I read them. You took me through all the emotions and everytime I read, it feels like I am actually watching the show.

It's completely fine, I'm just glad people are reading it!

And you just have me the best compliment ever!!!!!!

Thankyou 😊😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: vswarup


Completely agree with you.......each update makes you curious about the next part....

Thankyou so much😊😊

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