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Posted: 3 years ago

OK fine

I have no calls tonight, so why not

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Posted: 3 years ago

There will be others!

 

He just sat quietly as she worked, 20 minutes into it, shelooked up to realize he was there, she crinkled her eyes to make sense of it

“Uff” she mumbled realizing she was supposed to ask Bua

“Are you here to see Bua? She is sick”

“No actually” he leaned back and crossed one leg overanother

“Oh Harsha Piyush?”

“Umm No”

“OK Let me check on Bua” she went back out

And returned 15 minutes later with a mug of chai forherself and him

“I made chai” she said politely

He didn’t drink much chai, she set it in front of him

“It’s the day off for the help”

“OK”

“Bua said Harsha is at the GK store,  Piyush is at the Pitampura store, Fa is inBelgium”

“I know” he said

“Oh so you knew they were not at home?”

“Yeah Piyush is on his way”

“OK fine… sorry” she shrugged and rubbed her foreheaddistractedly

As if she had better things to do than banter with him

She went back to working… her laptop played someundetectable instrumental music

She frequently looked out the window he noticed

“how is your sister?” he goaded

“She is great” “she is at work” she nodded

“Is she?” he mocked

“Unless you know better and she is with Inder” she smiledaccepting Naina’s stupidity

“Umm.. I don’t know… she was.. there I am going to say theday before”

“OK” she nodded

She just kept working, unaffected by him

“Did she say Inder is serious?”

“I haven’t asked”

“You don’t have any curiosity?”

“Not as much as you” she smiled and then pulled out her  TI 80 calculator and punched in something

“Inder is leaving BTW”

“Great… safe travels” she nodded

“U should tell your sister”

“I am sure she knows” she smiled

“Good” he nodded “there will be others I am sure” he couldn’tstop himself from taking the dig, that middle class vultures manage to findsome prey sooner or later

Bua texted since the room was far far away

She got up and left

Bua told her Piyush was on his way and he had texted shetold him “the man already knew”

“Piyush ko kehna…”

Bua gave her a bunch of instructions as she tied a dupattaon her forehead

“U should go to the Doc Bua”

“Jeejee aa rahin hain chali jaaoongi”

“Main khichri bana doon?”

“Naa beta… tu padh le” she grabbed her chin fondly andsmiled

“Usne to chun liya apne liye, tub hi chun leti”

Viveka realized Bua was talking about Naina

She cringed

This is exactly what her mother feared

“Friend hai Bua”

“haan haan jo bhi hai”

“Mujhe apni applications prep karni hai Bua”

“Kyon ja rahi hai Kharagpur Bhayya ka dil tootega… baaqisab se pyaar hai par tujhse to” Savita beamed

“Highly selective hai bua, program”

“Jo bhi hoo… mere palle kuch nahi pada”

She heard voices outside

Piyush had returned

“Kaisi hain Ma?” he asked

 

“She is going to take a nap”

Piyush playfully pulled the pencil out of her hair

“DON’T DO THAT” Viveka ordered

“Banaya kar baal”

“OK aunty”

They had a slapping match  as he pulled the pencil out each time shetucked it in her joora… they annoyed each other 5 times and he went in

She tied her hair and her phone rang,

It was Abhishek

“OK sorry sorry sorry… I had to wait for my cousin to comehome” she giggled

She wandered the room and chatted by the glass slidingdoors

Piyush and Raanav were deep in conversation with some open manilafolders

“Arey yeh forms 10 baar bhej chuke hain Dad”

Viveka chuckled

Her mother hated the “Dad” word

She mocked it saying it was from a “special wealth category”

“Bua’s kids belonged in that” her mind voice confirmed

“See you in  2 hours”she promised Abhishek, go home change and drive back

She packed up noisily

“Ja kidhar rahi hai”

“My friend’s house”

“Kiske ghar?” “Mansi ya Rhea?” he asked proprietorially

“Oh wow!” she laughed at his  prying

“Bhai hoon poochhoonga nahi?” Piyush flexed

“It’s a friend… he is leaving for the states for his commencement…Bye bolne ja rahi hoon”

“IN kapdon mein?” he demanded

“Shut up” Viveka shook her head dismissively

“Tayar hokar ja BF se milne ja rahi hai” he mocked

“I am GOING TO” she promised

Raanav watched her leave with all her things

She didn’t say goodbye

 

 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Back to back updates !! Great start to a day !

And she didn’t even say goodbye....oh ohh ! That’s going to work on his mind for a while. Besides the tantalising bit of info that she is going to meet a special person ....Raanav might land up polishing his stalking skills to keep up to date with Veev’s life 😀😀


And all this while he is literally jogging to keep pace with her professorial head....great times ahead ....for us 😊😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

I don't think veev went out of her way to demean raan by not wishing him bye ..he's just insignificant for her now or she's slightly absent minded.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Two things. 

I'm wondering if Raanav must have felt as if he sat there like a piffy on a rock bun , waiting or hanging around uselessly , around a person who has neither use for him nor interest in him . The way she went about her business unmindful of his presence, If I were him I would have felt sat like a piffy 😆


The second thing is he realizing that not only for Naina, 'THERE WILL BE OTHERS ' for viveka too! 


OUCCHHHH!

Edited by Errrantnomad - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

I don't think veev went out of her way to demean raan by not wishing him bye ..he's just insignificant for her now or she's slightly absent minded.


Even if she did intentionally demean him, I would think he deserves that treatment 😃. He does not own a sole proprietorship on the factory of insult. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

@Anju & Kalpana

He deserves everything thats coming his way. She really doesnt care for him. His insults are not landing and even if they are they are not causing any damage...

He is conflicted too, he finds her extremely attractive but is too much of a snob to ever accept her as a partner


She is not a snob, nor is she wealthy, she is nerdy and unassuming, he has never met someone like her in his superficial circle

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow ! I am so in love with this Viveka character.  Hats of to the writer too.🥰🥰🥰. 

I am really looking forward to see how things will proceed among these two !. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Spiders

This way out of his league realization is very different from the usual one for him. This one has Viveka leading. He can not beat her in an argument about economics.

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Posted: 3 years ago

There will be others!

Piyush seems to be fairly comfortable with Viveka, joking around and teasing. Did Raanav hear about her going to meet a BF?