Arakshi - YOU & I Have that connection (NEW UPDATE ON PAGE 11) - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice concept. 

I like how Arjun is akdu without having a past. Waiting for more.... Update soon. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome start

Thanks dor posting here

And also thank you to the onw qho is writing the story 

Thanks for the pm butterfly ๐Ÿ˜ƒ as i don't know your name i will stick to that name 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey Buddies.

Thank you very much for loveโค๏ธ

Writer ji is very happy seeing your lovely comments.๐Ÿค—

here is the next part of story. 


PART : 2


(On the way)


Sakshi:- array guys...Yeh aaj aaya hua case kuch Different lag raha hey...


Ayesha:- mujhe bhi aisa hi laga....


Shree:- guys ab discussion kar ke kuch faida nahi hey... humhare sir DIG sir se information leke aayenge tabhi kuch bol sakte hein...


Chotu:- woh tho hey.....Per guys kya tum logon ko bhook nahi lag rahi 
hey?? Maine tho subah ke breakfast ke baad kuch nahi khaya....


Sakshi:- haan guys....chotu sahi bol raha hey...mujhe bhi bohot bhook lagi hey...


Lisa:- Hey Shree sab ko bhook lagi hey please kisi restaurant yaa hotel ke pass gaadi roko...


Shree:- ok...Per humhare sir ne bhi tho kuch nahi khaya....


Ayesha:- unke liye parcel le lenge


Sakshi:- par parcel dega kon??woh dono tho DIG sir ko milke seedhe Sameer sir ke ghar jayenge.... Parcel wahi jaake Dena padega....


Shree:- mey dekar aunga....chotu tum logon ko ghar chod dega...


Chotu:- haan guys...Ab chalo jaldi hum kuch kha lete hein....


(they stepped down and about to walk towards hotel then shreeโ€™s phone starts ringing)


Shree:- arjun sir ka phone...??!!! (he pick the call) hello arjun sir...kya ....(arjun continues cutting shreeโ€™s words)


Arjun:- kahan ho tum sab?


Shree:- hotel pe khana khaane aaye the kyun kya huva sir????


Arjun:- poori team ke saath abhi ETF pohcho shree....


Shree:- kya huva sir... is everything ok?


Arjun:- donโ€™t waste time shree... do what I said...


(he disconnect the call)


Ayesha:- kya huva shree kya kaha sir ne??


Shree:- guys sab ko ETF bulaya hey....


Sakshi:- abhi????


Shree:- abhi...letโ€™s move guys....


Chotu:- per khana???


Shree:- agar hum abhi nahi pohche tho woh khadoos sab ko bharpet khana khila dega....ab chal....


Sakshi:- guys you know what....humne pichle janam mey kuch tho achha kaam kiya hoga....


Ayesha:- what?? aisa kyun bol rahi ho!!


Sakshi:- array aur nahi tho kya.... Second in command hokar itna jaan khata hey agar chief rehta tho hum sab ab tak coffin ke andar so rahe hote...

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Shree:- Sakshi Arjun sir ki tareef karna bandh kar...aur jaldi se gaadi mey baito.... jaldi office pohchte hein....


(30 min later)


(At ETF headquarters)


(in conference room)


Arjun:- dekho team hum kal Jo case solve karne jaa rahe hein....Itโ€™s very sensitive and confidential....So....


Ayesha:- so what sir???


Sam:- so we need to go in disguise....Undercover jana padega


Lisa:- what!! Undercover???? but sir...


Arjun:- haan pata hey ki humne undercover jaane ke liye koi planning and preparation nahi kiya hey....


Sam:- issi liye... humne aapko iss waqt yahan bulaya hey...Sorry guys aap logon ko Jo bhi takleef huva uske liye...


Ayesha:- sir sorry kehne ki zaroorath nahi hey...hume koi takleef nahi huyi.....

(she said with smile and both sakshi chotu looked at each other)


Chotu:- Ye ayesha tho hava kha ke bhi jee leti hey...lekin mera kya hoga??? 

(he thought looking at the ceiling)


Arjun:- ooper kya dekh raha hey chotu??? - (he barked)


Chotu:- vo...vo...so...Sorry sir....

(he said and sakshi smiled at chotu)


Sam:- so humne ek plan banaya hey.... jinka case hum solve karne jaa rahe hein....woh bohot hi Orthodox family hey....So we need to go as a family....


Ayesha:- matlab....?? kon kya banega???


Sam:- ayesha hum dono couple aur arjun and Lisa couple


(Lisaโ€™s eyes popped out hearing this but she composed herself)


Sakshi:- aur hum teen kya banege??


Sam:- chotu tum aur sakshi bhai behen....aur shree tum sakshi ke boyfriend banoge....

(he said and shree looked at him with shock and then looked at sakshi who is smiling at him giving teasing look)


Ayesha:- but sir humhe costume ki bhi tho zaroorath padegi Na....


Arjun:- costume?? Seriously??? Ayesha hum ek married couple banke jaa rahe hein koi mythological story ka character banke Nahi...

(he said sarcastically)


Sakshi:- Ayesha ka matlab hey....mangalsootra, saree, sindoor and all...


Arjun:- saree tho hogi tum logon ke paas baaki mangalsootra aur sindoor ka arrangement hum raaste mey kar lenge...


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Ok Guys 

That's it for now.

hope you all like it.

Keep loving guys.

AND (If any๐Ÿ˜ƒ) GUYS WAITING FOR MY STORY UPDATES, YOU WILL GET UPDATE BY THIS WEEKEND... I PROMISE!!!!

take care

bye.

Edited by Butterfly09 - 3 years ago


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Posted: 3 years ago

Super update ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Its interesting story 

ETF is on  mission ๐Ÿ˜Ž

Thanks for the pm 

Continue soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hi dear ๐Ÿ’•

Sam and ayesha  as a couple is good

But Lisa and Arjun as a couple

What is this? Something like New!

Bachare Sakshi and Shree

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved it dear 

Awesome part๐Ÿ™‚

Poor team khane bhi nahi dete boss ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚  ulte paav lautna pada 

So it's a new case undercover & all are given good roles to play 

Ye dhamaakedaar hone wala hai ๐Ÿ˜‚ maza aayega

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon ๐Ÿ™‚

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Posted: 3 years ago

superb update

cont soon

Thankx for pm

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Posted: 3 years ago

Super update

Continue soon

Thanks for pm & update

Edited by Tukey123 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

OMG! 

Poor Liza ๐Ÿ˜†

I was initialy disappointed to read Shree and Sakshi but the plus side is that they will be hilarious as GF-BF ๐Ÿคช

You got me excited here!!! 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Super story

Different from other one

Pls some how make Arjun Sakshi as a pair

It will be very funny to see them as a couple