thank you.ha ha.in this story all characters will be dumb.bcz if they all are intelligent their love story will be very smooth which cannot happen here.😃i will make sure that they will face kasautis😃.but they won't be star crossed lovers😆
Originally posted by: .Piyali..
Nice update jasmine, Aman decorating terrace for Roshni and proposing her and the whole scene was beautiful with the song, I totally enjoyed it but then...Kabir happened 😆...He was already dying to meet Roshni so wasn't shocked when he started liking her...RoshAn didn't even doubt sadly anf things went on, I really disliked Kabir talking about Roshni to Sitara, He should havr really understood how to say and when to stop knowing Sitara likes him...Kabir helped roshni and also indirectly confessed his love but Roshni didn't realize sadly...Now finally after Vanita's words Aman realized and also realized that Kabir has started liking Roshni, What will he do now?I hope he takes rational decision...excited for next part 😃
Originally posted by: jasminerahul
thank you.ha ha.in this story all characters will be dumb.bcz if they all are intelligent their love story will be very smooth which cannot happen here.😃
Oh🤣
i will make sure that they will face kasautis😃
.but they won't be star crossed lovers😆
🤣 Kasautis? Matlab kabir ekloti kasauti nahi hai? Don't tell me Sitara is also villian😆
don't worry.no one is grey here.its a short story.so no never ending kasauti here
Originally posted by: jasminerahul
don't worry.no one is grey here.its a short story.so no never ending kasauti here
Oh ok, Phew 😎
Thank u very much friends
Credit for the collages goes to the real editors who are unknown.
Vanita went to Roshni's room.
Roshni:Aunty....
Vanita:I just came to ask you something.
Roshni:Say aunty.
Vanita:Did you like my son Kabir?
Roshni:Ya..he is a nice.
Vanita:Thank God you liked him.I was tensed whether you will like him and decision to get you married to him will be wrong.
Roshni was stunned.
Roshni:What did you say aunty?
Vanita:I always told you that I wanted you to marry my son.Right?
Roshni:Yes.
Vanita:I always wanted you to marry Kabir.I knew that he would like you as he loves my choice.I was not sure about you.But now I am happy that you also like Kabir.
Roshni was shattered.
She thought:Oh my God!Vanita aunty was talking about Kabir and I thought that she wanted me to marry Aman.
Roshni:Kabir really liked me?
Vanita:Yes,he loves you.
Roshni became very upset.
She thought:Now what will I do?I need to talk to Aman.
Roshni went near Aman.
Roshni:Aman..I want to tell you something.
Aman:Even I want to tell you something.You have a huge misunderstanding Roshni.Mom was not talking about me and you,but you and Kabir bhai.She chose Kabir bhai for you and not me.
Roshni:So you came to know that?Vanita aunty told me about Kabir.I am also shocked Aman.I never expected it. I am really upset Aman.What will we do?
Aman cupped her face in his palms.
Aman:We will tell the truth to everyone.They will understand us.
Roshni looked at him painfully.
Roshni was in a dilemma.She remembered how Vanita saved her from goons and gave her shelter.
Roshni shed tears:Vanita aunty did so much for me.How can I break her heart by going against her wish?
Roshni could not take this stress anymore.She was walking here and there restlessly.Her head started spinning and she fainted.But she was caught by Kabir on the right time.
Kabir:Roshni..what happened?Open your eyes.
Aman who came that way saw Roshni and got shocked.
Aman ran towards them.
Aman:What happened to Roshni?
Kabir:I don't know.She just fainted.Luckily before she fell down I saw her and caught her.
Kabir placed her on the sofa.
Kabir who was tensed seeing Roshni unconscious screamed:Mom...please come.
Aman who was worried for Roshni sat near her.
Aman:Roshni..open your eyes.What happened to you?
Vanita came.
Kabir:Mom..Roshni fainted.
Vanita:Oh no..Roshni...Kabir..bring water.
Kabir brought water.Vanita sprinkled it on her face.Roshni opened her eyes.
Kabir,Aman and Vanita were relieved.
Kabir:Thank God you are alright Roshni.I really got scared.I thought that I lost my life.
Aman was hurt to see Kabir's love for Roshni.
Vanita:You are really fine.Right?
Roshni nodded and looked at Aman.They shared an emotional eye lock.
Aman said in his mind:I wish I could hug you and comfort you.But now I am forced to be away from you.
Vanita:We will call the doctor.
Roshni:No need.Actually I was so engrossed in the work that I forgot to eat food.
Vanita:Oh no.Roshni..how can you be so careless?Aman..Kabir...don't make Roshni work too much.She gets stressed fast.
Aman:Sure mom.
Roshni:Nothing like that.I will manage it.
Vanita:We will discuss it later.First you have food.
Vanita brought food and started feeding her with her hand.
Roshni became emotional.
She thought:Vanita aunty loves me like my own mother.I can't hurt her.
Roshni went near Aman.
Aman:Roshni,you are alright?
Roshni nodded silently.
Aman:I am sorry that I could'nt be with you that time.Before mom and Kabir bhai..I could'nt...bhai cares for you.I saw how upset he was when you fainted.I fear whether he has started loving you.So I did'nt have the courage to be with you.I know that you fainted because of the stress given by the marriage alliance and not because of work tensions.But...
Aman tried to caress her face.But she moved backward.Aman was stunned.
Roshni:I think I should not hurt Vanita aunty who saved me from darkness.If she was not there my life would have been spoiled.She gave me a mother's love.These days who else loves a friend's daughter as own daughter?I can't hurt her Aman.
Aman:What do you mean Roshni?
Roshni shed tears:Let us split Aman.
Aman was shocked.
Roshni:Aman..I know you are hurt.But please don't hate me.
Aman looked at her tearfully:No Roshni.I can understand.Even I felt that we should end our relationship seeing how much bhai cares and loves you.He will be shattered if his own brother snatches his love.
They both cried and parted their ways tearfully.
Kabir and Sitara were walking towards each other.Suddenly Sitara slipped and fell over Kabir.Both of them fell down rolling over each other.They were embracing each other and rolling.Kabir had closed his eyes in fear.
Sitara felt nice to be embraced by him.Coming back to senses,both moved away from each other shyly.
Sitara:Kabir..you are great in business.But you were so scared when you fell down.
Kabir:How did you understand that I was scared?
Sitara:Because you had closed your eyes.
Kabir was embarrassed as Sitara teased him.
Kabir:It's your fault.What was the need of wear high heels?That also pointed heals?Because of your shoes only you fell down and made me also fall down.
Sitara:What to do Kabir?I want to look tall.You won't understand my feelings as you are tall.
Kabir started giggling.Sitara pouted cutely.
Kabir:You are so cute Sitara.
She smiled.
At home Sitara was thinking of rolling over Kabir and blushing.Sitara's mother Vrinda noticed it.She came near her.
Vrinda:What are you thinking Sitara?
Sitara came out of her sweet thoughts.
Sitara:Nothing mom.
Vrinda:Why don't you admit that you were thinking of Kabir?
Sitara was silent.
Vrinda:Did you confess your love to Kabir?
Sitara:Yes.But now it's too late mom.Kabir's marriage is fixed.
Vrinda was shocked:What?Whom does he love?
Sitara:He is doing arranged marriage.
Vrinda:Oh..that means Kabir does not love anyone.
Sitara:He seems to be in love with the girl chosen by his mom.Roshni.
Vrinda:He thinks that he loves her as she is chosen by his beloved mother.But what if he actually loves you and does'nt realize it?
Sitara was stunned:Do you think that Kabir loves me?
Vrinda:I did'nt say like that.But it is possible that unknowingly he loves you.So you try to make him realize that he loves you.
Sitara:But mom..his marriage is fixed.
Vrinda:But he is not married yet.I guess he is not even engaged.So in the mean time you try.
Sitara:But what if he does'nt love me at all even after my efforts?
Vrinda:Then forget him and move on.Let him live happily with the girl he loves.But if he loves you,he deserves to be with you.
Sitara was in a dilemma.
Originally posted by: jasminerahul
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Jee le zaraa...Live a little...Part 5
Vanita went to Roshni's room.
Roshni:Aunty....
Vanita:I just came to ask you something.
Roshni:Say aunty.
Vanita:Did you like my son Kabir?
Roshni:Ya..he is a nice.
🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️
Vanita:Thank God you liked him.I was tensed whether you will like him and decision to get you married to him will be wrong.
🔵Hush finally
Roshni was stunned.
Roshni:What did you say aunty?
Vanita:I always told you that I wanted you to marry my son.Right?
🔵 Why is she clarifiying like this?
Roshni:Yes.
Vanita:I always wanted you to marry Kabir.I knew that he would like you as he loves my choice.I was not sure about you.But now I am happy that you also like Kabir.
🔵You are wrong aunt
Roshni was shattered.
She thought:Oh my God!Vanita aunty was talking about Kabir and I thought that she wanted me to marry Aman.
Roshni:Kabir really liked me?
🔵Sacrifice mode on na?
Vanita:Yes,he loves you.
🔵Mujhe woh insaan bilkul pasand nahi aaraha honestly kahun toh
Roshni became very upset.
She thought:Now what will I do?I need to talk to Aman.
🔵Oh, Siddha aunty ko bol do na🤦♀️
Roshni went near Aman.
Roshni:Aman..I want to tell you something.
Aman:Even I want to tell you something.You have a huge misunderstanding Roshni.Mom was not talking about me and you,but you and Kabir bhai.She chose Kabir bhai for you and not me.
🔵Toh? You marry Bhai? 😑
Roshni:So you came to know that?Vanita aunty told me about Kabir.I am also shocked Aman.I never expected it. I am really upset Aman.What will we do?
🙄
Aman cupped her face in his palms.
Aman:We will tell the truth to everyone.They will understand us.
🔵Hush , Thats like Aman
🔵Beautiful Edit
Roshni looked at him painfully.
😤
Roshni was in a dilemma.She remembered how Vanita saved her from goons and gave her shelter.
🤦♀️
Roshni shed tears:Vanita aunty did so much for me.How can I break her hurt by going against her wish?
🤦♀️Abb mein kya hi bolun
Roshni could not take this stress anymore.She was walking here and there restlessly.Her head started spinning and she fainted.But she was caught by Kabir on the right time.
🔵 Hain? Abb kya hoga?
Kabir:Roshni..what happened?Open your eyes.
Aman who came that way saw Roshni and got shocked.
Aman ran towards them.
Aman:What happened to Roshni?
Kabir:I don't know.She just fainted.Luckily before she fell down I saw her and caught her.
Kabir placed her on the sofa.
Kabir who was tensed seeing Roshni unconscious screamed:Mom...please come.
Aman who was worried for Roshni sat near her.
Aman:Roshni..open your eyes.What happened to you?
🔵Awww, apt pics
Vanita came.
Kabir:Mom..Roshni fainted.
Vanita:Oh no..Roshni...Kabir..bring water.
Kabir brought water.Vanita sprinkled it on her face.Roshni opened her eyes.
Kabir,Aman and Vanita were relieved.
Kabir:Thank God you are alright Roshni.I really got scared.I thought that I lost my life.
😡😡😡😡😡😵 He is crazy man
Aman was hurt to see Kabir's love for Roshni.
Vanita:You are really fine.Right?
Roshni nodded and looked at Aman.They shared an emotional eye lock.
⭕Awwwww
Aman said in his mind:I wish I could hug you and comfort you.But now I am forced to be away from you.
⭕Annn, You are confusing me jasmine
Vanita:We will call the doctor.
Roshni:No need.Actually I was so engrossed in the work that I forgot to eat food.
⭕You mean tension?
Vanita:Oh no.Roshni..how can you be so careless?Aman..Kabir...don't make Roshni work too much.She gets stressed fast.
Aman:Sure mom.
Roshni:Nothing like that.I will manage it.
Vanita:We will discuss it later.First you have food.
Vanita brought food and started feeding her with her hand.
Roshni became emotional.
She thought:Vanita aunty loves me like my own mother.I can't hurt her.
Roshni went near Aman.
Aman:Roshni,you are alright?
Roshni nodded silently.
Aman:I am sorry that I could'nt be with you that time.Before mom and Kabir bhai..I could'nt...bhai cares for you.I saw how upset he was when you fainted.I fear whether he has started loving you.So I did'nt have the courage to be with you.I know that you fainted because of the stress given by the marriage alliance and not because of work tensions.But...
Aman tried to caress her face.But she moved backward.Aman was stunned.
Roshni:I think I should not hurt Vanita aunty who saved me from darkness.If she was not there my life would have been spoiled.She gave me a mother's love.These days who else loves a friend's daughter as own daughter?I can't hurt her Aman.
Aman:What do you mean Roshni?
Roshni shed tears:Let us split Aman.
Aman was shocked.
Roshni:Aman..I know you are hurt.But please don't hate me.
Aman looked at her tearfully:No Roshni.I can understand.Even I felt that we should end our relationship seeing how much bhai cares and loves you.He will be shattered if his own brother snatches his love.
They both cried and parted their ways tearfully.
Kabir and Sitara were walking towards each other.Suddenly Sitara slipped and fell over Kabir.Both of them fell down rolling over each other.They were embracing each other and rolling.Kabir had closed his eyes in fear.
Sitara felt nice to be embraced by him.Coming back to senses,both moved away from each other shyly.
Sitara:Kabir..you are great in business.But you were so scared when you fell down.
Kabir:How did you understand that I was scared?
Sitara:Because you had closed your eyes.
Kabir was embarrassed as Sitara teased him.
Kabir:It's your fault.What was the need of wear high heels?That also pointed heals?Because of your shoes only you fell down and made me also fall down.
Sitara:What to do Kabir?I want to look tall.You won't understand my feelings as you are tall.
Kabir started giggling.Sitara pouted cutely.
Kabir:You are so cute Sitara.
She smiled.
At home Sitara was thinking of rolling over Kabir and blushing.Sitara's mother Vrinda noticed it.She came near her.
Vrinda:What are you thinking Sitara?
Sitara came out of her sweet thoughts.
Sitara:Nothing mom.
Vrinda:Why don't you admit that you were thinking of Kabir?
Sitara was silent.
Vrinda:Did you confess your love to Kabir?
Sitara:Yes.But now it's too late mom.Kabir's marriage is fixed.
Vrinda was shocked:What?Whom does he love?
Sitara:He is doing arranged marriage.
Vrinda:Oh..that means Kabir does not love anyone.
Sitara:He seems to be in love with the girl chosen by his mom.Roshni.
Vrinda:He thinks that he loves her as she is chosen by his beloved mother.But what if he actually loves you and does'nt realize it?
Sitara was stunned:Do you think that Kabir loves me?
Vrinda:I did'nt say like that.But it is possible that unknowingly he loves you.So you try to make him realize that he loves you.
Sitara:But mom..his marriage is fixed.
Vrinda:But he is not married yet.I guess he is not even engaged.So in the mean time you try.
Sitara:But what if he does'nt love me at all even after my efforts?
Vrinda:Then forget him and move on.Let him live happily with the girl he loves.But if he loves you,he deserves to be with you.
Sitara was in a dilemma.
Vanita:Oh no.Roshni..how can you be so careless?Aman..Kabir...don't make Roshni work too much.She gets stressed fast.
⭕Awwww, She is such a sweet lady, Why can't they just understand that she will understand and of course, if Aman can sacrifice only for Kabir then Kabir sure can for both Roshni and aman
⭕Cutie Pic
Aman:Sure mom.
Roshni:Nothing like that.I will manage it.
Vanita:We will discuss it later.First you have food.
Vanita brought food and started feeding her with her hand.
Roshni became emotional.
She thought:Vanita aunty loves me like my own mother.I can't hurt her.
⭕🤦♀️
Roshni went near Aman.
Aman:Roshni,you are alright?
Roshni nodded silently.
Aman:I am sorry that I could'nt be with you that time.Before mom and Kabir bhai..I could'nt...bhai cares for you.I saw how upset he was when you fainted.I fear whether he has started loving you.So I did'nt have the courage to be with you.I know that you fainted because of the stress given by the marriage alliance and not because of work tensions.But...
🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️
Aman tried to caress her face.But she moved backward.Aman was stunned.
😶
Roshni:I think I should not hurt Vanita aunty who saved me from darkness.If she was not there my life would have been spoiled.She gave me a mother's love.These days who else loves a friend's daughter as own daughter?I can't hurt her Aman.
Aman:What do you mean Roshni?
Roshni shed tears:Let us split Aman.
Aman was shocked.
Roshni:Aman..I know you are hurt.But please don't hate me.
⭕Woh karega, Usse karna chahiye
Aman looked at her tearfully:No Roshni.I can understand.Even I felt that we should end our relationship seeing how much bhai cares and loves you.He will be shattered if his own brother snatches his love.
🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️
They both cried and parted their ways tearfully.
😢
Kabir and Sitara were walking towards each other.Suddenly Sitara slipped and fell over Kabir.Both of them fell down rolling over each other.They were embracing each other and rolling.Kabir had closed his eyes in fear.
Sitara felt nice to be embraced by him.Coming back to senses,both moved away from each other shyly.
⭕She is also crazy
Sitara:Kabir..you are great in business.But you were so scared when you fell down.
Kabir:How did you understand that I was scared?
Sitara:Because you had closed your eyes.
Kabir was embarrassed as Sitara teased him.
Kabir:It's your fault.What was the need of wear high heels?That also pointed heals?Because of your shoes only you fell down and made me also fall down.
Sitara:What to do Kabir?I want to look tall.You won't understand my feelings as you are tall.
😛 Mein bhi shorty hun but mujhse toh heels bhi nhi pehni jaati😔
Kabir started giggling.Sitara pouted cutely.
Kabir:You are so cute Sitara.
⭕Haan, De Lo Isko bhi hopes, de lo
She smiled.
At home Sitara was thinking of rolling over Kabir and blushing.Sitara's mother Vrinda noticed it.She came near her.
⭕Can I be honest and say I like neither now
Vrinda:What are you thinking Sitara?
Sitara came out of her sweet thoughts.
Sitara:Nothing mom.
Vrinda:Why don't you admit that you were thinking of Kabir?
⭕Inhe bhi pata hai? Toh samjhao isse please
Sitara was silent.
Vrinda:Did you confess your love to Kabir?
Sitara:Yes.But now it's too late mom.Kabir's marriage is fixed.
Vrinda was shocked:What?Whom does he love?
Sitara:He is doing arranged marriage.
Vrinda:Oh..that means Kabir does not love anyone.
Sitara:He seems to be in love with the girl chosen by his mom.Roshni.
Vrinda:He thinks that he loves her as she is chosen by his beloved mother.But what if he actually loves you and does'nt realize it?
⭕Then I wanna kill him already, tell me the weapon you want jasmine
Sitara was stunned:Do you think that Kabir loves me?
⭕inki hopes alag aarahi hai
Vrinda:I did'nt say like that.But it is possible that unknowingly he loves you.So you try to make him realize that he loves you.
⭕Seriously? Yehi advice mili?
Sitara:But mom..his marriage is fixed.
Vrinda:But he is not married yet.I guess he is not even engaged.So in the mean time you try.
🤦♀️
Sitara:But what if he does'nt love me at all even after my efforts?
Vrinda:Then forget him and move on.Let him live happily with the girl he loves.But if he loves you,he deserves to be with you.
⭕Second advice theek hai, first one is crazy
Sitara was in a dilemma.
⭕Please don't listen, please no
Great update jasmine, I expected RoshAn to be all sacrficing honestly as you know so wasn't shocked but liked the build up to scene and How RoshAn even though initially thinking to say the truth, finally couldn't...all Thanks to Kabir...Matlab, sirf faint hui thi woh, Itna toh Aman bhi na bole, he is aivenye going crazy ( Saying since i know he doesn't love her 😛) Sitara Kabir scene was cute and funny but didn't like Sitara still crazy about him and yeah, won't deny...I have a weird dislike for Kabir right now, Vrinda's advice is something I didn't like since no matter what, Kabir is already promised to Roshni in her eyes right now but guess Sitara will follow it which will eventually help RoshAn?
RoshAn scenes were beautiful and emotional so didn't like them being all sacrificing but could understand their way of thinking, nicely done...would be waiting for next part to see how the story proceeds
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