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Part 32:-

In car,

Rk hugs madhu close and makes her keep her head on his shoulder.madhu place her head on his shoulder.

Rk drive the car and rubs her shoulders.pia close her eyes.

After some time the car stop.

Rk: madhu,we reached at home.

Madhu:oh..

Rk: sorry i thought to make it especially evening but..

Madhu:rk.. tonight was the most beautiful evening..not tonight.

All the moment i spend with you is special and beautiful..

Your presence make it beautiful..

Rk:i love you Madhu..

Madhu:i love you too..


Madhu place her head kn rk's chest and  

Rk cups her face with both his hands. And made her look at him.

Rk lose self-control which creates a deep affection for madhu.

Rk  tenderly  brush his lips against on her forehead and then both eye lids. He then brings his lips closer to hers.

Both look at each other smiling

Rk come forward to kiss Madhu.

And soon their lips met.


Rk and Madhu come out of the car they see bittuji in lobby with a girl.rk look closely and see the girl's face.

She is none other than pia,his wife.

Bittuji looks at Pia who is standing and looking at rk without blinking an eye.rk walks straight to Pia.

Pia look at rk.


Tumko dekh ke yoon lagta hai

Koi bichda khwab aaya hai

Barson lambi raat se guzre

Subah ka jhonka laut aaya hai

Bahut der jaagi

Bahut door aayi

Khwab ne chhodi na meri kalai


Kab se meri saans ruki thi

Mujhe saans aayi

Mujhe saans aayi

Mujhe saans aayi


Madhu look at them and don't understand.

At hall room,

Rk is standing leaning on wall.

Madhu stand opposite looking all that happening.padmini serve water to pia who is sitting on sofa.

Trishna too sitting on the sofa.

Bittuji standing near pia.

Bittuji: chief,aap dunno mein jo bhi hua uske wajah arnab sir hai....

Aap dunno ke mann mein unhone itni zeher dala hai ke.

Pia ko kuch nahi pata tha.arjun ke health ke bare mein,woh sab arnab sir ne kiya.

He was the one who tells fake stories about both to each other.

Rk is numb can't think anything ...

That time Arjun enter the room,

Arjun:dad, you come..i need your laptop.

Pia look at Arjun and remember  he is the same boy who she met at airport.he is telling Rishabh as dad that mean he is Arjun.

Pia remember First time Arjun come to her arms.

How First time cuddle Arjun said Rishabh da..dad..

Pia have tears in eyes.arjun look at pia.

Arjun: hello ma'am you are here.

Bittuji:you meet her.

Arjun:yes today evening i went to airport na there i meet her.what she is doing here.

Padmini: Arjun she is friend of your mom.she will stay here for few days.

Arjun:oh nice.

Pia touch rk's Arjun smiles and take keys from rk of wardrobe.


Rk is numb so he silently walk away, Madhu see rk walking away.she don't know what just happen.she too don't know what to say.


Rk come to balcony the chill weather.she sit in the swin.

And close his eyes and thinking all that happing in life.

How happy he and Pia were but their happiness get fladed.

Rk in his ego never try to make their life again when ever try he feels pia is not interested.


Main hoon gumsum tu bhi khamosh hai

Sach hai samay ka hi sab dosh hai

Dhadkan dhadkan ik gam rehta hai

Ho.. jaane kyyn phir bhi dil kehta hai


Jee le zara, jee le zara

Kehta hai dil, jee le zara

Aye humsafar, aye humnawaaz

Aa paas aa, jee le zara


Rk close his eyes and relex.


At washroom,

Madhu throw water on her face and all moments with rk and Arjun come to her mind.

Madhu think about the time when rk used to talk about pia and himself.

Madhu:pia..pia she is back she is back to take my rk..

My..how he be my..he is married to someone else..he is someeles husband..

I snatched her husband..


She sprinkle water on her face.


Padmini show pia a room.

Padmini: you stay in the room.you may hungry right.

You washen up.i will bring something to have..

Pia:no aunty.. it's okey..

Padmini:arre i understand...

I should say sorry..

Pia:sorry for but why aunty..

Padmini: being unaware i used to think wrong about you...

And..

Pia: aunty you don't say sorry about that.

Padmini:i pray that you may get your family back.

Padmini place her hand on pia's head.

Pia feels motherly love from padmini and she being with tears in her eyes hug padmini.


At kitchen,

Madhu clean the kitchen.she is washing the dishes which is already cleaned. actually she is making herself busy so that she can Forgot the present problem.

That time,pia enter the kitchen.

Pia give her the coffee mug after having coffee.

Pia: Madhu..is that your name!

Madhu: Yeah..

Pia:i don't know what to say.. bittuji told me everything how you act as Arjun's mother.

Madhu:i don't act like Arjun's mother..

Madhubala get offended.

Pia: I'm so sorry..if you get offended.

Actually i don't know what to say you all.

I want to thank you..

What you have done for Arjun..

Pia touch Madhu's hand.

Madhubala look at pia but don't know why she can't face her .. can't look at her.

At rk,

Rk is thinking all about his life.

His heart sigh was in Pia's love.it used to remember her.he wanted her to give a glance and look slightly lovingly.


Then madhubala enter in his life and his heart ,he fought a lot that he can't give Pia's place to anyone.

But Madhu don't take Pia's place,she made her place.Whenever he came near her ,he found peace in her.

He fall in love with her...and as said 2nd love is something else.his heart is obsessed with her.

And now what he come to know..


He fall in sleep on the chair.madhu pass by there and see rk's sleeping on chair.she can feels how stressed it was for him too.

She thought to bring a blanket and cover him over.

She returns with the blanket and the scenario stop her.

Pia place blanket over Rk caringly..she just  stopped in the moment.

Just freezed.


She is seeing pia,a wife..who is trying to win over her husband..she is a wife..

She has every right..

And she ..

What is she.. a outsider or a other women..

Who is engaged with pia's husband.

Is fate want Pia and rk together..what about her love it was just started.

She thinking and her leg backed to her room.

She looked the room as soon as she entered her room and fall on floor with tears and cries.


Precap:rk, Madhu and pia.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice update 

this bittuji brought pia to the house only, 

even though it's pia father who is responsible for the misunderstandings between them but why she never tried to know how her son is, 

poor madhu feeling sad for her n this RK is so lost n confused ,

Continue soon 

Thanks for the update



 

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Poor madhu  feeling bad for her no matter how abgry pia is wy she keft her son he is not at fault her these  sins nt ingorable  she is nt some child nr to see that stuoid idot girl

I feel cringe when  to imagine n rk n pia

Plz throw  hwr out of rishbala life wat the hell she is doing poor madhu stand like a pillar  fr rk n his son now pia y she is back plz dont do his injustice  to madhu gave rk some sense to realize this that wat madhu  is fr him now pia has no place in rk n his son life she must go back to her life

Their is no need her career  is more important  than her son stupid girl

Cant see madhu in pain😢😢

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Hey guys I'm back.i know i was inactive in this story after almost 1.5 month I'm posting my part.hope you guys enjoy And please do comments nowadaya i don't get comments.



Part 33:-

Pia is standing at near the window rain is happening again.she forward her Hand and rain drops falling on her Hand.she touch and feel them.

She remembers her past.


Flashback,

She come out of bathroom.her hair is dreanched as she comes to house after meeting with rk.

Now after changing dress she is shoking her hair.

When she hear rk's voice.


Rk:tumhare yeh kali ghane bal..

Pia get surprised and turn find rk who come to house by window.

Pia: Rishabh.. what are you doing?

Rishabh: tumhare aanke mein Dekha ke tum mera saath nahi chorna chate the.

Toh window se chala aaya.

Pia:rk jao bapas..

Papa chale aayenge..

Rk:in one condition..

Pia:what..

Rk:the kiss which you left yesterday..

Now you have to fill.

Pia: Rishabh..


Rk pull pia close to him.and their faces get close.


Flashback ends.


Pia touch the water and feel it.


Rk is walking in balcony,he is a delema.

Rk:all this is Madhu...

I need to talk to talk madhu.


Rk went to madhu's room.


Rk: Madhu.

Rk find madhu sitting in bed seeing him she get up and Start looking here and there taking clothes.

Act if she is working.

Rk: Madhu..i need to talk to you.

Madhu:rk saab I'm busy.

Rk hold madhu by hand.

Rk: don't call me with this madhu..

Madhu:we will talk later..

Rk following Madhu..

Rk:why are you running away from me.


Madhu enter in the washroom and rk follow her.

Rk: Madhu stop it..

Madhu ..


Rk lost his temper and get Angry.Rk grab Madhu by her shoulder and pins Madhu against wall.

Rk: madhu..i..i..

I love you..i know that.


He hits the shower knob and water start falling on Madhu and Rk. 

They looking at each other.


Rk:in this too,i can see your eyes tears.

I don't want to see tears in your eyes.


he holds her face . He knows she won't open her lips to tell but she have said everything through her eyes.


Rk:i wants your smiling face in his eyes 

I know destiney is planning games with us.but we will over come.

"Will overcome.." she asked the question with so much confusion and pain.doubt..

The doubt of being fail in this love.

 A song play in background 


Saanson ko jeene ka ishaara mill gaya


Dooba main tujhme to kinara mill gaya



Saanson ko jeene ka ishara mil gaya


Zindagi ka pata dobara mil gaya


Tu mila to Khuda ka sahaara mill gaya


Tu mila to Khuda ka sahaara mill gaya


Ghamzada ghamzada dil ye tha ghamzada


Bin tere, bin tere, dil ye tha ghamzada



rk put his forehead with her together  Madhu takes her hand away from rk's face 

Tears in her eyes and pain in his heart....

They part away madhu and look at each other.rk close shower.

Madhu try to get away but slips and falls in Rk’s arms. they look at each other.

Madhu think to wish to tell rk how much nice she feels when she is in his arms.

Rk make madhu stand at floor.


Madhu walk away fast and open the door and when she see the person who was about to knock at the washroom Door.

She get shocked to see the person who is none other than pia.

Pia:are you okay naa.

Rk hear the voice of pia and he step get away from door.

Madhu: you..

Pia: actually i need pain killers and aunty said to ask from you.

Madhu:i give you.

Pia:are you okey you are so wet.

Madhu:herr you medicine actually i press the shower mistakenly.

Pia:oh acha I take a leave.

Pia leave the room with closing the room.

Rk come out and Stand with madhu.only they know what the feeling and the vibe the were feeling,its look so sinful.. hiding from pia this ..

They behave like they are hiding some sinful.they are feeling like cheater.

They look at each other.madhu see rk who is more wet then her.


She walk to her cupboard and take out the towel to give rk.


Madhu glance at the towel, there possess the sign RM written on the towel.


Madhu is seated on the sofa in balcony, stitching something on.

 Rk come from behind her and look what she is doing.

 Rk move his face close to see and madhu turn her face their face come close with give madhu sacred and shs shout..

Madhu:aah..

Rk:aah..what happened..

Madhu:kya kar Rahe the tum..you sacred me.

Rk:and you to sacred me.

Madhu moan in pain.

Madhu:ouch..aah.

Madhu:now why are sounding like this if i sacred you now.


Madhu show him her finger.she get pierce her first finger with the needle.

Rk:oh I'm sorry, I did not notice..

He get tensed ,he take madhu's finger bin his hand and sucks the blood from Madhu’s finger.

Madhu feels the current in her whole body as rk sucking her finger.

When ever he touched her,her body and soul have been adorned. Her heart is swaying slowly.

Now when does time pass by,she simply just don't come to know

Since she have attained him,she may have lost all her senses.



Rk:so sorry..

madhu:its alright rk, I know you didnt do it intentionally. 

Rk:what were you doing with towel.

He tries to take the towel.

Madhu:arre rehne do.

Rk:arre why are you hiding it.

Madhu: no please..


Rk take the towel from madhu's hand and look at the towel.

Rk:why are you stitching on this towel.

RM.


Madhu: Rishabh madhu..

She feels so shy to face rk.she get up and tries to run away.

But rk hold her Hand and hug her From behind.

Rk:and why you were stiching this.

Madhu: no..

Rk:arre tell naa.

Otherwise I won't leave you.and anytime anyone can come here.


Rk hug her more tightly.

Madhu:the reason is that i can feel you with my at any time

feeling you with me..

Rk laugh at her childish romance..

Madhu:i knew you will make my fun.


She free herself and run Away.


Flashback ends.

Rk take the towel and see the RM Sign on the towel and remember how she written on this.


He looks at madhu she is standing and looking away from her.

A song play in background..



Kya uss gali mein kabhi tera jaana hua

Jahaan se zamaane ko guzre zamaana hua

Mera samay to wahin pe hai thehra hua

Bataaun tumhe kya mere sath kya kya hua


Mm.. Khamoshiyan ek raaz hai

Seene mein dafan hai kahin

Khamoshiyan jo paas hain

Main tumse kahunga kabhi

Baant lunga main, saath mein tere

Milne to aao zara


Khamoshiyan teri meri khamoshiyan

Khamoshiyan lipti hui khamoshiyan



RK lifts his hand to remove the hair from her face but stops. Madhu looks at him. I see the shore in her.his heart sees support in her,he wants to hold his heartbeats for her.It's turning towards her,his breaths are also connecting with her now.Every moment his heartbeats repeat her name.

He walk away from the room.madhu look on at him.

Precap: interesting comes up you guys give me some ideas yaar.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice update

Rk made it clear to madhu that he loves only her n wants her only,

Continue soon

Thanks for the update

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Hi,Plz edit the characters name into Rishbala Its getting difficult to read

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Originally posted by: harini06

Hi,Plz edit the characters name into Rishbala Its getting difficult to read

Sorry i posted wrong part

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Part 34:-

Rk is walking at his room with tense.he open the drawer and take out stress pill.

He was going to have it when he stop.and remember his past.

Flashback,

Rk is quite stressed about her work and taking stress pill.

When Madhu stop him by holding her hand.

Madhu: I'm sorry but I don't think you should take these pills much.

Rk: Madhu, I'm in stress now.

Madhu:then i can stress free you that's too with my magically medicine.

Rk:and what's that?


Madhu is doing champi on his head and rk feels relax.

Flashback ends.


Rk is standing at the window looking at the moon.

Dad...

Rk turn and find Arjun standing Infront of him.

Rk: arjun what happened dear you didn't sleep.

Arjun:just like that I feel that you need me.so i come to you are looking upset.

Rk place his Hand on Arjun's shoulder.

Rk: I'm not upset dear.

Arjun:liar..liar..

Rk: I'm not understanding what should i do.

Arjun: remember papa you used to tell some time we should go with flow.

Rk smiles with some tears in his eyes.

Arjun see the tears on his eyes and touch them

Arjun: these tears are because of me na papa.

Rk:not really these tears are from happiness seeing my son so mature na.

Arjun: today i will sleep with you.

Rk smiles .

Rk lie down on bed and adjust lie over him and sleep while hugging him.

Arjun:dad.i want to tell you something.. actually what to confess something.

Dad actually..

Dad...

Arjun look at rk who fall in sleep.


At morning,

Madhu is doing all work first.

Madhu:this cream its look not so good i have to beat it again.

Oh no I'm late.


What are you doing in this dawn .sun Also not up,but you are..


Its not unfamiliar voice to her and she knows the owner as soon the voice hit on madhu's ear. Reality comes to her mind she was lost in her dream world since she wake up and  forgot now a new member is staying at their house.


Pia:hey where you lost?

I'm sorry if i said anything wrong.

Madhu: no actually its for Rk.. rishbala sir..

Pia:for Rishabh..its for his birthday.

Madhu :yes i thought to surprise him with all in morning to him.

So i..


Madhu feel nervous. 

Pia:why are you feeling nervous.

Oh acha now i understand.

Madhu get shocked.

Pia laugh.

Pia:you are embarrassed as your decoration cream.

Madhubala understand pia was meaning another thing.

Pia:shall i help you.

Madhu:you know cooking.

Pia:yeah little beat.

Actually baking..i loved baking.

You know one day you will make you have my special strawberry shortcake.you will love it.

Pia decore the cake and talking with madhu.madhu too forgot all and talk to her with being a person.

They talk and laugh.


Madhu come to the room of rk see him getting ready.

Madhu: Woh Aarti..

Happy birthday..


Rk look at her And remember yes today is his birthday.

Madhu:can i..

Rk nods.

Madhu do Aarti and and do Tilak silently.she was about to leave when rk stop her holding her hand.

And bring her close.

He lifts his head to madhu ,she turns to him going closer looking at him.

Abhay clasp her face with his fist

He gently brush his lips against on her temple and then her eyes.madhu is feeling lucky to be touched by rk.and carried by his  He then brings his lips closer to hers with their noses are nuzzling.

Suddenly they hear a sound and hear padmini and Trishna, padmini is scolding trishna for breaking the things.

Madhu and rk move away from each other,they stealing glances at each other yet turning the face when the other person looks.

Rk looks at madhu.

Rk in mind:i will tell pia the truth, hiding the truth is looking like I'm betraying her.i will confess to her after that what punishment she will give me,i will accept.buti can't see you in this position where you are sacred about your love and my love.


Madhu looks at him and rk spin his face. When she rotate her face

Rk looks at her again and see Madhu  looking at him and this time

does not turn,rk keeps his hand on her hair and both moves their faces closer for a lip to lip kiss. 


Arjun is searching for his clothes.Pia come to his room.

Pia:hey..

Arjun:hi..

Pia:why condition you have done to your room.

Pia remember flashback,

Rk:pia ...pia..

Pia come from kitchen and see the room.

Rk: Yaar I'm not getting my tie.

Pia:rk what you have done to your room.

Rk:you clean it up later..

Pia:huh..

Flashback ends.


Precap:rk's birthday party.


Part 35:-

Rk and Madhu about to kiss when they hears padmini's voice.

Madhu where are you.

They are taken aback.

Madhu: coming maa.

Madhu leave the room.


Rk get a call from doctor of Arjun.

Rk: hello doctor..


Rk come out of the room in hall.

Happy birthday rk..

Happy birthday rk..

Happy birthday dad..

Happy birthday..


Rk:all this..

The hall is decorated by little balloon and flowers.

Arjun: happy birthday dad..

Arjun hug his father.rk hug him too.all adore this father son duo.

Trishna:all this done by Arjun mostly and this cake made by pia..

Rk look at pia.

Pia:no not me.i just decoration.. done by me and otherwise all done by madhu.

Pia said all by modesty.

Bittuji: wishing you a very happy birthday chief,now let's cut the cake.


Rk cut the cake And take a piece and feed arjun.

Rk want to have cake to Madhu all are around how could he feed he thought maybe arjun persist him to make Madhu have the cake.

He placed the cake on plates.

Padmini:i Will cut the cake and give piece to all trishna And Madhu help me.

Padmini Leave in kitchen taking cake trishna and Madhu fall them.

Arjun leave with bittuji.


Now only rk and pia are standing.

Pia come Infront of her.

Pia: happy birthday Rishabh.

Rk: thanks.

Pia:there is.. cream laga hai .

Rk place his hand on face.

Pia: right mein lip ke close

Rk try but can't come to the correct place

Pia come and bring her hand close to His face and wipe the cream with smiles.rk look at pia and feels uncomfortable.

Rk:pia..main tumse Kuch.


Bittuji come there with pia's phone.

Bittuji:pia you had a call from America.

Pia take the call and leave from them bittuji follow her.

Rk turn and find Madhu standing there with little puzzle maybe she seen him with pia in that close moment.

Padmini: why are you standing at the door give this to arjun and pia and bittuji..

Rk you may  have the cake after breakfast.

Rk nods.

Padmini Leave from there with Trishna.as soon they leaves Madhu went to the kitchen rk is after her.

Rk: Madhu Madhu...mere baat toh suno 


Madhu take out things from freezer.

Rk take madhu's hand and face her to him.

Rk:its my birthday won't you feed me a piece of Cake.

Madhu smiles little with tears in her eyes.

Madhu take the piece of cake and bring it close to rk's mouth.rk smiles and take the cake.

Rk: didn't you bring any gift for me.

Madhu :yes its in your room.


At Madhu's room,

Madhu make Rk's wear the tie.it was Arjun's idea to gift rk a tie.

Rk:ache hai..

Madhu:mere Pasand Nahi hai Arjun ki hai.

Rk:tum bhi ache hoon.

She smiles and hug rk back.


Rk finds himself lost on Madhu’s face and they are staring at each other  

Rk comes  closer to leave a kiss on her cheek…..Madhu with her closed eyes is while she is feeling shying.looking other side.

He looks at her h have not got her yet But he am afraid to lose her silently without getting caught he is  reading her face.



Rk place the button of the lift.he get a call from doctor.

Rk take it.


At ground floor,

He is walking to his car When he see arjun and pia playing tennis.

Rk looks at pia who is her looking at him.

He comes to them And take the racket from arjun and give look at pia.

Rk give his service pia to play with him.its shown rk is throwing his frustration in the game with pia.then he hit hard and it's hit on pia's shoulder.

Pia: ouch...

Rk stop and look at pia.he have hurt her.


He dont say anything just leave this place.

Arjun: ma'am is it hurt i will bring ice for you.

Pia:no I'm okey.

Arjun:but..

Arjun see rk come there with ice bag.

Rk place it on Pia's shoulder.

Arjun: you will feel relieved with this.

Pia: that's fine.

Rk: I'm sorry..

Pia:no I'm sorry..

I'm sorry.


Rk understand what she means it.


At America,

abhimanyu is calling pia's number.its ringing and ringing.

Abhimanyu:pia you can't do this to me.

I'm not like your husband Rk that you will do anything and i keep silent.

Lets call that arnab..


Madhu is in kitchen,she saw what happened In garden between rk and pia she find her living in rk's breath

She is getting influenced by him.her heart only beats for him


She does not light the stove after switching on the knob. Rk comes home and smells LPG. 

He goes to see in the kitchen and just then Madhu is about to light the stove. Rk holds Madhu and pulls her out. 


Rk: Madhu are you Okey are you out of your mind,you would have burnt. 

Madhu: even now I m burning and dying every moment, 

Precap:guys suggestions me some tracks.