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Part 45:-

Rk come to the kitchen and see radha making food

Rk give a hug and sat on the table.

Rk: what's up ma saare khana grandson ke liye,aur apne son ki liye!

Rk try to take a ladoo.

Radha hit on his head.

Radha:rishu..

Rk:ma ek ladoo ke liye tumne sar par hammer 🔨 mara.

Radha:kya mara hatora.ab mera haath tujhe hatora lagta hai.

Rk laugh and said.

Rk: sorry sorry mere cute se maa.

Radha:rishu,today i got call from Amritsar From Krishnaji house.

Rk: Krishna ji..

Dad's best friend yes..

His son used to study with me in school for some time he died in accident with his wife they had a little child na.

Radha: don't know what happened. 

Hope all get well.

Rk:what was the name of their daughter.

Tara...


Arjun is in airport ,he got delay because of security charges.

Arjun get up to take a coffee..he is standing at counter.. Suddenly a girl come to him and hug her tightly.

Arjun: oh hello madam what are you doing.?

Girl: please please save my from my boyfriend.

Arjun:who is he?

Arjun feels a pat on his shoulder.

Arjun turn and fidn a build guy standing.

Guy:ria what are you doing with him.

Ria: can't you see we were romancing?

Guy:what nonsense? you are my girlfriend.

Ria:i was.now im Avinash's girlfriend.

Arjun whisper to ria's ear.

Arjun:arjun..

Ria: yeah arjun.. Avinash is his pet name

Guy:you come with me.

The guy hold her Hand and try to take her but arjun step in and said the girl.

Arjun:she said na she don't want to go.now leave otherwise i may accept the punishment of airport attorcies but maybe not you.

He leaves.

Ria: actually he was my boyfriend but when i saw his violant behaviour i was.

Arjun:you did very good to break yp with him 

Ria:ria.. arjun..

Arjun: yeah nice to meet you.


At home,

Madhu is doing some craft work.

Rk come there.

Rk:oh madam from when you left your social work or police raid your offices.

Madhu:shut up rk,its all work of your daughter.

She said she wants to give arjun a surprise birthday card and was cutting all that paper but when i step in.

She wants to take her bubble bath and struk me here in all this papers.

Rk laugh.

Madhu:now don't laugh, help me in all this cutting.

Rk take the scissor and do think to do some fun with madhu.

Rk: Madhu,see you are hair become so long come lets cut some hair.

Madhu get shocked.

Madhu:no.. never

Rk come after her.madhu get up from sofa and run all around the room,rk is after madhu,rk finally get close to her.but madhu push him and the scissor fall but madhu catch it and give a devilish grin to rk who get widen eyes.

Rk run and madhu after him and Madhu catch him and funny placing it on his hair but mistakenly cut his little amount of hair.

Both get shocked but madhu recover it by laugh.rk is in shock holding his hair.

Madhu laughing like mad.

Rk:what was that.

Madhu:do more pranks with me mr kundra you don't know who I'm.im Madhubala kundra.

She laugh.and rk is seeing his hair with becahra face.

Rk:now you gone biwi.

Madhu run all over the room and rk run after her.

Rk finally get chance to hold her hand and pulls Her back and pushes her almost against the wall.

He get close to her.

Rk: bohat hasi arahe hai na.

Rk kiss on her cheek.

Rk:yeh mere bal cut karne ke liye.

You know what when i saw your this black shine sunsilk shampoo ke ad wale hair.

Madhu hit on his shoulder he laughs little

Rk:i thinks i loves it the most..

Saying that he kissed on her hair.

Rk: but then i see yours beautiful eyes i thinks that i loves it the most.

He comes near her and first kissed her right yes then left eye.

Madhu is now all about in rk

Rk then see madhu's shaking lip.


Rk:but when i see you shaking lips for me o realises that i loves this lip the most.....

He possess to kiss on her lips 

Rk: the mostly he loves is..........Milk!!

Madhu is pluzzed and open her eyes.

Rk:milk is very important i told you to have milk daily morning and before the sleep.

Madhu:what are you..

Rk:sheena se i was telling you mumma that to drink milk.

Madhu turn and find sheena standing at the door and realized rk changed the topic.

Madhu:yes beta..

Rk: today also you throw the milk..

Sheena:papa i saw you were kissing to mumma and seeing me you changed th topic.

I'm not that much kid.

Saying that she run away from the room.

Rk and madhu shock to see their daughter.today's kid.


They hear the phone ringing.madhu take the call.

And smile hearing the voice and turn to inform rk.

Madhu: it's pia..

Hello pia.how are you.

Pia: I'm good.i can feels you Voice that how much you happy.when is arjun coming.

Madhu: before the lunch.acha listen today you are having lunch with us.

Pia:i will also have dinner with you all.acha i get call for shot i leave..

See you soon and please make my favourite potato salad

You make it best.

Madhu:i already work on it.

Pia: you are the darling.acha bye.

Pia cut the call.





Rk:what pia was saying?

Madhu:when arjun was coming..

She will come at lunch.

Madhu:did we right with pia.we can let her stay with ours.

Rk:yeah even you suggest her.but i genuinely feels she take right decision not to stay here.

It's make we trio very odd situation and she when she stay away from all those Shadow she do better.if she stay here she must be can't take the decision to become a actress.

Today she is very mature actress and we trio become so good friends.

And who said pia i far from us is stay in same locality. You go to any time to meet her.

Rk make her understand.and hug her.

They feels the bell ring.

Madhu: arjun...

Rk:now we are going to see kabhi kushi kabhi gham in Madhu Arjun's version.





Aa aa aa aa aa aa, kabhi khushi gham

Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham

Aa aa aa, aa aa aa, aa aa aa aa


Madhu do Aarti of arjun very emotionally arjun too smiling all smiling except the head of family rk:what drama.he roll his eyes.

Madhu touch Arjun's Face.

Madhu: after one year later I'm seeing my son.

Rk:what one year.

Parso hi tob video chat pe dekha tha tumne.

Madhu give a glace.

Arjun hug madhu then sheena Radha padmini..

He comes to Rk to hug him

Rk:nahi nahi tu jaa abhi jaake mil aaya Watchman se,paros ki aunty se.

Arjun:dad..

Arjun hug his father.they share a hug.

Rk:kuch lamba jaada nahi ho gaya hai tu..

Yeh ka hai..

Arjun:what..

Rk:yeh kaan main , earring..

Arjun:dad it's style.

Rk:its style..gunde pehente hai yeh sab..

Arjun:oh dad come on i saw your pictures in highschool you too used to wear it.

Rk:what you are comparing with me.

I'm your father..

Arjun:Then I'm your son


They look at each other.then laugh...


All kundras are laughing and talking with each other.arjun is disturbing gifts. 

Rk gets a call and leave from there.

Rk: hello...


After attending the call,he leaves the house.

He was sitting on his car when pia's car enter.

Pia come out of her car.

Pia:is arjun come.

Rk:yeah he is inside he was asking about you.

Pia:yeah..i just go where are you going.look tensed.

Everything is okey.

Rk: yeah i will tell everything after i come.

Bye.

Pia:bye..

Pia smiles .


Pia and arjun gossiping about the aboard styles.

Madhu is calling Rk but he don't take the call.

Madhu:did he say anything else.

Pia:no yaar and yes why are you tensed.

Madhu: I'm feeling not good.

Pia: don't worry everything will good.

Think positive feedback will be positive.

Madhu: Don't Start your yoga class now..

Pia roll her eyes.

Pia:acha we tell me when you are going to free let take a girls tour let's go to Goa.

This week..

Madhu:you always make plans and you are the last one who back off.

Last time you give me so many dreams to go LA and what happened you end up having fever.

Pia:oh good don't know how rk handle you.

Arjun show me the new Valentino Rossi collection.you know i was about to plan to visit newyork.

Radha come to Madhu.

Radha:i talk to rishu..

He is coming home he was in Ambala.

Madhu: Ambala ..what was he doing there.

Radha: actually they are one family friend of us Krishna ji he died few months ago and his grand daughter was about to force fully marrying another guy.

Rishu fought there for that girl and now she is coming here with rishu.

Her name is tara.

Madhu: how is she now?did she get toture them.

Hope rk bring her back well.

The door open rk enter guiding the girl tara.

Who look the house.

Tara:itna badaa ghar,ithe toh mera adha pind aapne ghai bhas ke Saath reh sakta hai.

Yahan kitne sou log rehte 500 ke toh neche nahi na.

Whole family see ani heard her talk.

Then i laughter happen by arjun and then pia too join.

Madhu shoo them.

Tara:namaste ji.

Madhu:main Madhu.. Madhubala kundra.

Tara:acha to aap ho sirji ke voti..

Madhu:voti??

Tara:wife.

Madhu:oh acha..

Arre arre yeh ka kar rahe ho.

Tara:aapke pair chu rahe the.

Madhu smiles and cares her face.

Tara turn her face to pia.

Tara:pia ji ...aap.i just can't believe.aap mere samne ho by god

Pechle hafte he Maine aapke film dekhe court case ka acting ki Hain.main toh aap pe puri fida ho gaye ho.

Rk and madhu look at the new girl.


Its raining outside pia stand at the window.rk come to her.

Rk:rain.you used to love rain.

Pia:i sitll do.

Rk:pia I want to talk with you about..

Pia: about raj..

Rk:he loves you.

Pia:but I don't, and right now I can't take any other relationship.

Rk: am i the reason of your rejecting raj?

Pia:you really understanding me well but need little too know.

Even if you not the reason I don't want it.

He is a very good director and very good friend but I don't want to destroy this relationship with that.

They become silent then pia speak.

pia:Are you feeling guilty? And wanting me to settle down so that you gulit get less.

Rk:no it's.

Poa: don't lie, you are..

I'm happy being your and Madhu's best friend..even I'm the best friend of arjun and gossip partner of padminijo and Radha ji,and don't forget I'm the stylish expert of your dear daughter.

They laugh little.

Pia:she is going to give you lot pain.

Rk and pia talks.


Arjun is tied up Sheena's hair.

Sheena: bhaiya you still know how would like my style be.

When you used to be here,you used to tied up my hair.

Arjun: thank you my little princess.btw did ma don't tied your hair.

Sheena: she do well but i love yours most.

Arjun kissed Sheena.

Sheena: acha did the girl tara will lives with us.

Arjun:dad said so.

Sheena: what should i call her.

Arjun:hmm..didi.

Sheena: you will also call her didi.

Arjun laugh hard.


Rk in room.he is laughing.

Madhu: don't laugh at her like this.

Rk: I'm not laughing at her.im laughing at my mother in law.

Poor she had to hear the nonstop talks.

Madhu:she is so cute na.

You done right.

You bring her here.

"Ma..mumma..madhu come first here"

Madhu:its sounds of arjun sheena and maa what happened why they are scarming..

Rk: main kya antarami hu jo har baar chiz pata hoge mujhe.

Madhu:chalo..

Madhu come out to hall with rk and see all is dark.

Madhu:why there is all dark.

Rk:there must be something.

Madhu:haa?

A spotlight fall on them.

Rk hold her hand and make her twril.

Rk:Happy Birthday to You

Happy Birthday to You

Happy Birthday Dear Madhu ..

Happy Birthday to You.


Lights on all are presenting with cake.

Madhu: birthday..

I forgot that today is my birthday.

Rk:yes and yesterday you are telling me that i forgot everything now.

Madhu:yes you are

Arjun:cut it cut it cut.

Cut your daily husband wife goody qurrel and cut the cake.

I and sheena make it for you and thank to you ms tara you almost about to rain my cake by think butter as dosa butter.

And adding salt.

Tara roll her eyes.

Arjun:acha I want to raise a toast for you and dad.


Arjun: First start with dad through ladies but true that

I love dad most.sorry maa.

So My Dad only words can express how much I love you. It's tough from one man to fully express to another man how much I respect your heart and how much you gave to me.

We were inseparable. That's because we loved each other unconditionally. I didn't know that until know. I just want to say that I truly recognize that and I appreciate the full spectrum of your love. You were an amazing father!

I appreciate you for allowing me to be me. You will never know how much I enjoyed and wish I could have that childhood back with you. I cherish those memories to this day.I can only aspire to be like the true gentleman you are. You are a constant in my world of emotional distress.You have solid emotions when I am weak. I only hope to embody the physical and emotional strength you have. I want to give my children and your grandchildren the exact characteristics because it's that I admire the most.Dad, Your heart astounds me. My heart is full, too. I cannot describe how my childhood was. It was the best ever. You gave to me more than I can ever give back. I can only say I appreciate your time, effort and commitment. You are the most wonderful mentor and best friend a guy could ever have. I appreciate you more than words can ever say. Thank you Dad!

Rk get emotional, madhu side hug him rk hug arjun too.

They share a family hug.Arjun broke the hug.

Arjun:now its turn to maa.

First Happy birthday to the woman whose love, care and kindness played such a wonderful role in transforming me into the person that I have become today.I am one of the few lucky kids who have had the chance of tasting the love of two mothers. Thank you for loving me. Happy birthday to the world's most loving mother.

Today is a special day because I get to celebrate a wonderful mom who is my heroine, mentor and a true friend. Happy birthday. May you be blessed with everything that puts happiness in your heart.

All claps for arjun.madhu hug him.

Rk:did you k3g end? please do it soon the candles are on cake.

Pia:can we cut the cake.

Madhu:i will wish First.

Rk: what you want.

New saree or jewelry set.

Madhu:i pray that my this family always stay happy like this.











Madhu blow the candles and cut the cake.he feeds everyone with love.

Arjun had cream on his face tara show it and say it wipe it he mistakenly burt it more tara come forward and wipe it they look at each other and they are the new love story bringing.

Madhu feed padmini and look here and there.

Madhu: where did rk go.

Sheena:mumma i saw him going to pool side.

Madhu:i just come.

Madhu come and look for Rk .

Rk: looking for me.when I'm in your heart.

Madhu:why did you leave from there.

Rk: because i want to say you something which i may not say properly Infront of one.

Rk:i love you madhu..

One universe, nine planets, 204 countries, 809 islands, 7 seas, and I had the privilege of meeting you. On your birthday, I want you to know how much you mean to me.

It seems that everyone knows you turned a year older except me. In my eyes, you are exactly the way that you were when I met you for the first time...stunning and gorgeous. As you blown the candles on your birthday cake, I want to tell you what a wonderful wife you make. Without you in my life, my heart would have bled. With you, I look forward to a wonderful life ahead.No words can express my feelings for you, madhu

I wake up every morning and thank the good Lord for bringing you into my life. 

My goal is to keep a smile on your face. And when it starts to fade away, I'll do whatever it takes to brighten your day. Happy birthday madhu.

Madhu get emotional and hug rk.

Madhu:You came into my life when I was searching for my soul-mate and have shown me what true love really is every day since. I never thought I would meet someone as loving and thoughtful as you.would like to thank you for being there for me right from the first day we met. We have shared so many beautiful moments together. 

I have enjoyed every moment we've spent together. Thank you so much for all the little things you do to make my life easier. The fact that you're always willing to share in those tasks is one of the many wonderful things about you that always makes me count myself as lucky and blessed for having you in my life. I love you!


They embrace eachother then return to party spending time with their own.

With this the story ends.

I just can't believe I ended this story its been totally a one year.im writing this and I'm writing this part from 11 days i really don't have the heart to end the story even through to keep running the story with arjun and tara ..

But reject that idea because with this the story main essence with vanish.

The story start with arjun a son having medical problems.he means world to his father rk.and to make arjun happy his father rk went extant to bring a fake mother Madhu to him.and the fake mother ended up having such unbroken relationship with them.

All the characters very especially to me.

Many have problems with pia.i want to present her in such a way that she is not negative.many did not like her as she ended up her relationship with husband and son and then ended up being victim of her father's plan.

Actually i myself loved pia s character very much.and i have many plans which brings test of rk and madhu's love.but seeing many didn't like pia and not simpathy by all actually they are many who just vote and give simple comments.they don't share with their views so i can't while understand what to do with pia's track.

Because Pia returned was very preplan with the story started.but not getting readers view i don't present it not that great way.

But now the story is end oh how i forgot it i present some extramarital affair way of rk and madhu.as rk now matter how he was in married with pia i was really sacred to usedImage the extramarital affair angle as it may look vulgar and i know my writing is not that good to make EMA relationship with deep way.

But all said and done by me .thank you bring with me from 1 years with the story thank you so much and will try to write a new story.

You guys can share your complaints about the story with me also.


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Posted: 2 years ago

Beautiful update n lovely ending

Loved it

Thanks for this awesome story, will gonna miss this one